Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby cswolf. » Wed Mar 09, 2011 12:01 pm

Write it soon plz
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:36 pm

~*Blackspawn*~ wrote:You must really like leaving people hanging huh? :lol: :)

Yeah...I guess xD
Unless I'm bored.
I think I'll write more because I'm very bored right now :3

Dear Bob,

So me and mom got to school, and I went to my locker, put away my backpack and everything else I didn't need, and went to class early. My first class is math, and Tyler was already there with his dad.
"Good morning Carmen." I heard Mr. Ardson say, and I answered with a 'good morning' of my own. He smiled at me and stood up. "?I'll be right back, I have to go speak with your mother."
I smiled back and pulled out my notebook, starting to doodle in it as I waited for the buses full of kids to get there.
I didn't notice Tyler standing above me, watching me draw, untill he spoke.
"That's a cute...What is that exactly?" He asked lamely.
"I dunno yet. A kitten? Puppy? Pony? Psshh, I'm just drawing."
"Huh."
"I know it's not really my business, but do you know that Rella snuck her way into our private lunch room to ask Nick to the dance?"
"No way, what did he say?" He looked kinda worried.
"Does it matter?..."
Silence.
I looked up at Tyler, "Sorry, he said no."
"Ah, no you're right, it doesn't matter, just that she asked him is enough." He snorted, "I never really liked her much anyways, she's just all about herself..."
"Tyler?"
"Yeah?"
"You're rambling about your girlfriend."
"Ex-girlfriend, and sorry. I think I'm gonna go to the gym untill class starts. C'ya."
"Bye." I went back to my drawing for the next half hour untill class started.

At lunch, Nick and Cody were very quiet. I acctualy forgot they were there at one point.
Whenever Clair, Emmie, or I tried talking to them, they'd just ignore us.
Wierdooos.

Then, after school, I was grabbing my stuff from my locker, getting ready to go to mom's office and help her finnish up the day. Most the kids were already gone, on the buses, getting ready to go home.
Someone tapped my shoulder, and I turned around to see Nick smiling at me.
"Hey, sorry, I called, but I don't think Cody wanted to give the phone away."
His smiled faltered for a second as he spoke. "Yeah, we kinda...faught. I dunno...He's mad at me."
"Why?"
"Well, you know that dance coming up? I was gonna ask...well, the girl that he wanted to go with him...I guess. So will--"
Tyler walked up behind him, "Sup guys?"
Nick looked a little ticked off, but he smiled at Tyler. "What'cha doing here?"
"Uh, my dad is the math teacher. Annnd, I'm going home with Carmen to practice...school work."
I smiled, and turned to Nick, whispering loudly so Tyler could hear. "Irony, he needs help with his math." I giggled, and Tyler rubbed his head, probably in embarrasment.
I had a wierd sudden urge to hug him, to let him know that it was no big deal. So I did.
"It's no biggie Ty." I said with a small hug. But my words came out between more giggles.
"Oh, sorry, what were you gonna say Nick?" I asked, stifling my giggles, but he just shook his head.
"Nothin. I have to go before Cody get's his mom to drive away without me. Bye."
"Bye."
Tyler and I hung out with mom while we waited for her to be ready to leave.
"Y'know something I just realized?" Tyler asked me as we battled on out DS's.
"'Cha, what?"
"You and your mom get along really well." He glanced up at me for a second, and I hid my face behind my little game consol.
"Y-yeah, so?"
"So why were you crying in the janitor's closet?"
"Ooooh. Well. Can we leave it at, 'I was really bored?'...or 'working on my acting?'"
"Well--"
"Drop the subject." I demanded.
"Yez ma'am. So who you going to the dance with?"
"Dunno yet."
"Oh."
Mom walked in.
"Hey kiddos, ready to go?"
"Yeah" Tyler answered.
"Mom, don't say kiddos. It sounds totaly lame." That was Moi.

So mom drove us home.
And we practiced math.
Tyler was getting packing up, getting ready to go home when the phone rang.
"Hey, Carmen? Is that you? It's Nick, I wanted to know--"
"Give me that darn phone!" I heard Cody in the background.
"Leave me alone doofus!" That was Nick.
"Nick? What is it, just spit it out already?"
"Will you go--"
Then Cody in the background again. "Carmen, say no to the dork! Go with me!"
"What? Go where?"
Tyler came in to the kitchen, "Hey Carmen, if you're not to busy, could I ask you something before I go?"
"Yeah hold on, Nick, Cody, please tell me what's going on. I'm kinda busy, just spit. It. Out." I growled the last words.
Cody must have taken the phone, because it was his voice I heard after a loud bang "To the dance slowpoke. Keep up. You're gonna go with me right?"
"WHAT?! That's what this is about? Gosh guys, I don't think I'm going at all."
Another big crash, and Nick's voice. "What do you mean, not going?"
"Bye." And I hung up. "What'd you need Tyler?"
"Well, that dance is coming up, and since Rella's out of the picture, I was wondering if you wanted to go with me. Not like boyfriend girlfriend, just, well, yeah..."
"Not going." I said. "Ack, I'm gonna go...rest. Mom can take you home. Bye." I walked away then, ran upstairs grabbed my journal...you.
And now I'm in that big huge oak tree.
Wow. I must be going insane. Did I just turn down Tyler?
Gosh...

Whoa. I'm going to stop writing now Bob, it's getting late.

bye.

~CAR.



Wow...I write a lot. X]
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby christine-marie » Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:53 pm

!!!! I luff this! *stalks* lol, it's really cool. :D You should make a stamp. I'll put in in my siggy. :D
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:57 pm

Thanks ^^

A stamp? Hmm..I'll have to think about that, fist of all, I'd have to figure out how. Then I'd have to get time to do so.
I dunno.
You can make on if you know how, and want to. :3
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby cswolf. » Thu Mar 10, 2011 12:10 am

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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ~Night and Darkness~ » Thu Mar 10, 2011 2:01 am

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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:24 am

Ooh, very cool ~Black Wolf Spirit~!
I'll put it up on the first page ^^
If anyone alse wants to make anything, feel free, I don't care ^^

Dear Bob,

I think I fell asleep in my oak tree.
And no one found me, so I'm late for school. I think I'll just stay out here instead of going to that dorky place with my best friend, his half bother, and my crush.
Yikes...
So I figured out that Cody doesn't want to go to the dance because he like likes me, but because we're best friends and we alwasys go to dances together.
I will not even think of the other possiblity:
That maybe Cody...like likes me.
DARNIT.
I more than thought of it...
I wrote it...
Gah...

My back hurts. I will give you a word of advise.
Very, very good advise.
Never. EVER. Sleep in a tree.
It huuurts.
So I'm going to sleep on the ground, and wait for the day to end.
Ahhh, clim!%&#$
Sorry my pencil slipped while climb@^%&$
I'm gonna wait untill I'm done climb%$*$@
Okay. On the ground now.
Done climbing down the tree.
Aaaoowww. That sky is brigghht.
^^
That's better.
Good nigh--morning Bob.
I'm tired...

~Ca-@^3$_&2&(^@
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby booklover789 » Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:27 am

LOL, that was funny. Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:43 am

Aaah, thanks.
I'm going to write a bit more because I'm bored...Lol
^^

Dear Bob,

Ooooh my BACK.
So, a very, very good word of advise.
NEVER EVER sleep on the forest floor. Espesialy after sleeping in a tree.
Wow.
I just realized, I'm really dumb.
I should bring a matress out here. Then it wouldn't be too bad.
But where would I get the matress?
Hmm...
I'll have to think about that.
Ooh, hey look at me watch!! It's been three hours...that's...one, two, three...hours more to go!!
Okay, good nightmorning again Bob.

~Car

Ps. Yes. I'm sleeping on the ground again. I'm going to need some serious pain killers after I wake up.
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

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