Create A Clan Fanclub - V2 -

[Dinolil1]

Oh boy. Swanfoot's main reason of becoming leader is due to hubris. She think she can do better than everyone else! She's a sufferer of Schizoid personality disorder which means she can't easily relate to the feelings of others + the fact that Greynose instantly distrusted her upon her joining of Tumbleclan, which left her wondering why she was deemed untrustworthy for moons + the fact she is a narcissist. And as such Swanfoot doesn't realize the things she's doing are bad, because she doesn't care! As for the reason of her becoming leader, it's because she thinks she can do better than both Greynose and Sagestar! Her goal is to make Tumbleclan even bigger & better than the other clans, as Sagestar's goal was simply for Tumbleclan to live. She doesn't want Tumbleclan to just 'live'. (If you've got a better reason please tell me!)

As for those that'll die during Swanstar's reign:


Foxtail - She'll try to fight back, as she knew Greynose didn't trust Swanstar and she finds it suspicious how Sagestar just disappeared like that. She confronts Swanstar and tries to get her to step down due to the fact she never visited the moonpool and because Foxtail believes Sage's still alive. She is lead out of camp by Swanstar, and after a long time of talking, Foxtail gets angry when Swan reveals that she did indeed kill Greynose. At this point Foxtail is quite close to a river and all Swanstar does is push Foxtail. - She drowns

*Bleakpelt - He technically dies after Swan dies, but his death is caused by her reign. When he and his half-brothers are exiled, Bleakpelt takes them to a twoleg place due to the fact they've not yet learned how to fight or hunt and tries to get them to safety with a nice twoleg. Cranekit (then Cranepaw) gets annoyed and runs away, he runs onto a thunderpath, the idiot! Bleakpelt runs out to save Cranepaw and thus gets run over. He does live long enough to tell Cranepaw and Cuckoopaw to just get to safety.

Smokefur - She is appointed deputy during Swanfoot's reign and is insanely proud of it. She however one day tries to execute Sedgetail, their prisoner, but she didn't ask for Swanfoot's permission and thus gets killed for trying to kill Sedgetail as a punishment. She is thrown off the 'bluff', the same bluff she was trying to kill Sedgetail on. Ashstripe becomes the deputy after her.

Ashstripe - Towards the end of her reign, he is really depressed. His mother died and poor little Rosefur is extremely traumatized. When Eagleclaw returns with the loners, Ashstripe eager to please the one cat that's always been by his side, tries to kill Eagleclaw. Eagleclaw being all noble and calm merely throws him to the side. One of the more eager loners wounds him badly and Ashstripe dies from an infected wound.

Palepaw - Shush...just shush. After making Dustclaw pregnant, Palepaw is vetoed as a 'predator' of some sorts and Swanstar has him thrown off the bluff. The clan believes he was killed due to the fact he did take a mate before he became a warrior but the main reason is because Palepaw overheard Swanstar making plans to kill off the elders.

Brightwhisker and Stonestorm - The two are basically like the grandparents of Sagestar, they care for him even though I don't tend to show that and so when they inquire where Sagestar is, Swanfoot leads them away and into a trap. Stonestorm sinks like a stone in the river and Brightwhisker only barely lives. She suffers from memory loss due to smacking her head on a rock.



Cats that die but not during Swan's reign:

*Bleakpelt naturally.

Russetleaf - She dies from a rogue attack, this death is off-scene so I'm not going into tremendous detail.

Other bits 'o' drama:

Sagestar - Swanfoot cleverly leads him through a twoleg place, claiming to have spotted Russetleaf there. He gets caught by a gaggle of kids and begs for Swanfoot to help. She doesn't & leaves him behind. Later however the battered and bruised Sagestar finds his way to a clan and lives there for the rest of his life, fearing what his clan would think. (I can't quite remember the clan, but I think it was Sunny's!)



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And that's the specifics! If you wanna know more, please tell me!
And If you've got ideas, tell me please!

[hazilnut]

@sol

Course it does- your clan is an absolute soap opera and it's the best! <3

@ember

Yusss gimme dem Abyssinian babiess (also I really want more Tangleknot but Barkknot gone and got herself P.O.Weded what to do, what to do. I want her pregnant in Soulclan)

@dino

Ahaha that plan is magnificent! I love your reasoning for Swanfoot's rise, it feels so really and a perfect fit! She's definitely prideful and arrogant! I'm surprised Firefang manages to survive- happy surprised though. Poor Palepaw!! I hope some of his kits act like him though so we can still have those flirty mischievous children running around

[Dinolil1]

@Hazil

Glad you like my plot! I was worried that there'd be far too many holes in it but thank you!

Firefang lives, yes! But she does run away, in fact she's the cat that tells Eagleclaw to come and help!
Palepaw's dead, but he'll be reincarnated. He begged Starclan XD

[tauriel.]

@dino
Oh wow!! That plan is amazing!!! I might come to you for help later when I start developing an evil plan for Caveclan xd. The part about Smokefur's death is especially interesting. Poor Sedgetail's going to be a prisoner for a long time xd.

[kaden]

Ashstripe - Towards the end of her reign, he is really depressed. His mother died and poor little Rosefur is extremely traumatized. When Eagleclaw returns with the loners, Ashstripe eager to please the one cat that's always been by his side, tries to kill Eagleclaw. Eagleclaw being all noble and calm merely throws him to the side. One of the more eager loners wounds him badly and Ashstripe dies from an infected wound.

Noo not Ashstripe!!!! He would've made a perfect leader someday :(( and that would leave poor Rosefur with nobody left that's so sad!

But I actually love TumbleClan's plot and I can't wait to see it all unfold!! I'm actually so excited omg!

[Simonpet]

@Dino: That's an awesome plan! Although I think that you should make it more clear how Swanfoot gains support (maybe others think that Sagestar and Graynose are ineffective) and be careful when killing off cats, because they'll have to be super careful to cover up their scent and cause of death (maybe pin some deaths on the med. cats).

@evil plots: Man, all these plots are making me jealous! I don't have nearly as many cats (only 6 so far) so my clan is pretty happy. But eventually, I'll probably have to make cats dissatisfied, although I'm not yet sure about what.

[Katrione]

Does everybody think my most recent Echoclan post was Good? Or should I have gone into more detail? I think I should've killed more cats but I don't know who else to kill. I almost killed several of the kits

[killer romance.]

@Katrione
I loved reading it! I think it was very good. I think it had enough detail in it and the death toll was a good number. :3

[Katrione]

@raven

Thank you!! I was really worried that it wouldn't be good. Do you think Withered killing Bloody would be a good enough reason for her to start becoming evil? Her future mate, Hemlock, is going to start integrating into the evil group anyway

[killer romance.]

@Kat

Yeah, I think it would be. I mean, feeling proud whilst blood drips from your jaws like that seems a little psychotic. It could be that she realises she enjoyed killing him and gets a gradual bloodlust the more she thinks about it. Especially if her future mate starts integrating.

I love evil characters! They're so interesting to read and play out.