Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:21 am

Agh, demanding! x]

Dear Bob,

At lunch the weirdest thing happened, Rella came over and started talking to Nick.
Y'know. Fangirls were not aloud near our special table, or else the whole school would be at that one table.
Somehow, Rella had gotton into our room, and asked to talk to Nick.
I overheard some of the conversation from where they stood way at the front of the room, it went a bit like this:

Rella: "Hey Nick, I was wonder'in..."
Nick shooting a quick glance back at our table: "Eh huh?"
Rella: "Well, that dance is coming up, and I was wondering if ya wanted to go with me..." *Fluttery eyelashes*

Oh shoot...I forgot all about that dance coming up in a couple days...Oops. Well, I'd find somebody, or just not go.

Nick: "Oh, well...actualy I...can't."
Rella grumpy faced: "Uh. Why?"
Nick: *mutters something I can't hear*
Rella: Huge eyed "What!?"
Nick: "Well...Yeah. Sorry." *Pushes her out the door*
Nick: *Comes back to the table*

"What the heck was that about?" Cody asked his 1/2 brother irritadely.
"And how'd she get in here?" Clair added.
"Pssh, yeah." Said Moi.
"Fangirls." Nick said it sarcasticly, like it was the worst insult he could think of. "She wants me to go to the dance with her."
"Doesn't she have a boyfriend...Tyler?" Emmie asked.
"Umhm."
"What'd you tell her?" I asked innocently.
"To get the heck away from me. In a nicer way of course. Told her that I liked someone else." He shot a meaning look at Cody, which had absolutely no meaning for me. Cody just pretended not to notice.
"You like someone? Like...who out there isn't a fangirl? " Clair made googly eyes and fluttered her eyelashes, mimicking a really high voice, "Oooh, mai gowd, Nick Ceasar just asked me out!" And faked a faint.
We all laughed at that, me almost falling out of my chair.
After that, the conversation was mostly forgotton.

So Tyler came over after school. It was only me and him there because my siblings were at their friends houses and mom and dad were both at work.
"So you carry the four..."
"Carmen..."
"Umhm?"
"I know how to do that."
"Oh, okay, then what don't you know?"
"Well this, and this. They confuse me."
We were sitting on the couch in the living room, and he was kinda close. He reached over and pointed out the things that he needed help learning.
"Okay, so..."
It went on like that, me telling him how to work out the problems and giving him practice ones, for about an hour when the phone rang.
"Oh, sorry, I'll be right back, keep practicing." I hurredly ran into the kitchen and picked up the phone. "Hello?"
A voice came from the other line, "Hi, Carmen? It's Nick."
Then my mom was opening the door. "Car, can you help me with the groceries?"
And Tyler, "Carmen? I've finnished, what's taking so long." Gosh I was only on the phone for like...two seconds.
"Nick, I'll have to call you back, is that okay?"
"Yea--" I hung up the phone.
"Coming mom! Tyler, I'll be right there."
I went to the car and grabbed as many bags as I could carry. I went back and fished out the rest. then I went and practiced math with Tyler s'more.

Now I'm lying in my bed, exaughsted. It's like...11:30. And while writing this I realize that I forgot to call Nick back. Whoooooops.
I'll call him tommorow.

Night Bob,

~CAR.
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby cswolf. » Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:25 am

yay
I wonder what nick is probubly going to tell her???
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:30 am

Ooooh, you'll have to keep wondering sorry. ^^
Suspense!!! (I think I spelled that wrong...)
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby cswolf. » Tue Mar 08, 2011 9:41 am

awwwww!!!!!
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ~Night and Darkness~ » Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:00 am

Darnit it was getting so awesome.....CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!! :D
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:48 am

I guess I can write more right now. x]
Although I should be getting back to my art requests...I just don't feel like it at the moment.
^^

Dear Bob,

First thing I did when I got up in the morning was call Nick back.
It rang thrice before Cody picked it up. "Hello?"
"Hey Cody, this is Carmen, can I talk to Nick please?"
I waited, and waited, and waited.
"Cody? Can I talk to nick please."
I heard a sigh, then I heard Nick in the background, "Hey, is that Carmen?"
"No," I heard Cody say.
"Cody? Why are you lieing? Just giv Nick the phone, I don't have all day."
"Shut up. I don't either, bye."
Wow Cody. S'up with that?
Maybe he and Nick had gotten in a fight (definately what it sounded like...) But why wasn't Cody letting me talk to Nick? Gosh, I'd never heard Cody sound so..soooo angry.
It just didn't really make sence.
OMG there's that word again...
Ssssenssssse.

Anyways, I'm currently in the car, driving to school early with Mom.
We're almost there, so I'll write more later Bob.
Think I'll investigate this whole Nick/Cody thing...

-CAR.
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby theo, » Wed Mar 09, 2011 9:10 am

Love~Me~Forever wrote:I guess I can write more right now. x]
Although I should be getting back to my art requests...I just don't feel like it at the moment.
^^

Dear Bob,

First thing I did when I got up in the morning was call Nick back.
It rang thrice before Cody picked it up. "Hello?"
"Hey Cody, this is Carmen, can I talk to Nick please?"
I waited, and waited, and waited.
"Cody? Can I talk to nick please."
I heard a sigh, then I heard Nick in the background, "Hey, is that Carmen?"
"No," I heard Cody say.
"Cody? Why are you lieing? Just giv Nick the phone, I don't have all day."
"Shut up. I don't either, bye."
Wow Cody. S'up with that?
Maybe he and Nick had gotten in a fight (definately what it sounded like...) But why wasn't Cody letting me talk to Nick? Gosh, I'd never heard Cody sound so..soooo angry.
It just didn't really make sence.
OMG there's that word again...
Ssssenssssse.

Anyways, I'm currently in the car, driving to school early with Mom.
We're almost there, so I'll write more later Bob.
Think I'll investigate this whole Nick/Cody thing...

-CAR.

YAY!!Next entry.NOW!!
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ZombiePoodle » Wed Mar 09, 2011 9:14 am

What!? Are you crazy? NOW!? LOL I would, but I like keeping people hanging, it's fun.

Oh...and I guess I have to go to...
I'll try to write the next one later... ^^
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby theo, » Wed Mar 09, 2011 9:16 am

Love~Me~Forever wrote:What!? Are you crazy? NOW!? LOL I would, but I like keeping people hanging, it's fun.

Oh...and I guess I have to go to...
I'll try to write the next one later... ^^

YES NOW!!Ohhhhh..bye!
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Re: Dear Journal (The Diary Of An (Almost) Normal Dog.)

Postby ~Night and Darkness~ » Wed Mar 09, 2011 10:27 am

You must really like leaving people hanging huh? :lol: :)
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    What I just finished: Yona of the Dawn
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    What I want to do: Edit my short story, Watch Stranger Things, Eat chocolate, and finish some puzzles.
    What I am doing: Watching Disney Movies, Crying, and eating chocolate.
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