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Postby Guest » Tue Apr 04, 2017 12:23 pm

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Postby Guest » Tue Apr 04, 2017 1:15 pm

      reserving this space for further ideas
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Postby Guest » Tue Apr 04, 2017 1:17 pm

      day 2 | saverio sake - renaux

      rio chokes on words now. he's lost feelings.
        avoiding feelings like they're raindrops hitting an open umbrella ;
        words invite him to the righteous council.

        the boy's heart would constantly fall for someone, while painfully sensitive - threatening to shatter at touch.
        when he'd show his mothers the remains, they'd tell him that feelings are difficult, but without feelings
        you'd eventually lose yourself.

        so rio took it to heart.
          what a lie he truly lived by.
          -- his heart could not be fixed without the removal of feelings.

          he believes in the writing & words in books, & in songs, & in those heartfelt conversations
          [ but with who ? he can't remember ] now.

            vaguely now, he's forgotten them

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Postby Guest » Fri Apr 07, 2017 3:09 am

      workshop 1 prompts | yasu kitao

      maybe you'd find her by the beach - there's warm rain & the quiet kalon doesn't wear anything to really stay out of it. maybe she's watching her breath [ while you have to catch yours ], formed by the coldness in the air. when you pass her, she keeps her voice a distance like before.

      if you speak to her, she'll listen intently ;; but likely not say anything.
      it's hard to realize, with her reality lifted air that seems to know perfectly what solitude is like, yasu is shy. she often pulls on her sleeve or hoodie strings when talking to someone new & at times might stutter.

      she enjoys parties, gatherings with many people, but surrounds herself with few concerning her job.
        [ a director, & sometimes actor, that writes out more odd & speculative - based projects ]
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Postby Guest » Fri Apr 07, 2017 4:26 pm

      day six | wine [ prince emery d'eau II ]

      where do they live and what is the geography like ?
      emery lives [ lived, as he now lives on earth ] on an unnamed planet
      not much is known about it, or recorded on it
      most things are vague there. ( geography ;;
      // clear skies, flatland & flower fields. the planet is surrounded by close stars that act as streetlights
      // seasons don't differ - & the constant one could be compared to a warm summer night
      // there is no such thing as daytime here, with the absence of a sun
      // weather also never seems to change
      // it would be easy to get lost here, since everything looks nearly the same
      // different parts of the planet are divided by mazes
      // most citizens know how to get through the mazes pretty easy tho, unless they've never been through before
      // there are tunnels underground & other things that aren't too well known with the planet's citizens
      what is the society like there, is there a hierarchy ?
      // quiet. society tends to stay inside, lights on in their houses but the muted atmosphere continues
      // you might come across someone walking though the mazes or flower fields, but interaction is usually lowkey
      // there is a hierarchy, a castle with some residents
      // the castle is relatively distanced from the rest of the planet, & darker, with a lack of stars in it's area
      // this " peaceful " planet's hierarchy likely plans the domination of other planets
      what kind of technology does the world possess: modern, medieval, fantasy, etc ?
      there is little to no technology where everyone lives on the planet, but underground there is actually a lot -
      it could be compared to fantasy, since most of it is sort of hard to wrap your head around
      do many or only a few people live here ?
      the population is low, counting only a few hundred kalons, but the way everything is spread out so vastly
      & oddly, separating things, it might seem like even less than that
      is the history the same as our world, or is it different ? If different, how ?
      it's different for sure. not a lot of events happened [ or were recorded ] in the past of this planet, so it's
      generally assumed that most things in the history of this planet were pretty peaceful
      is your kalon considered lower, middle, or upper class ?
      // higher class, considering he's a prince on this planet
      // emery doesn't really see himself higher class though
      // he often stays away from the castle & sleeps in the flower fields
      what sort of language is commonly spoken here ?
      // it's not often words are spoken here
      // there is no recorded language
      // sometimes they speak in sounds or movements, portraying emotions, but never in real sentences
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Postby Guest » Sun Apr 09, 2017 4:17 am

      day seven | wine [ prince emery d'eau II ]

      well, wine isn't actually his real name.
      it was one he chose for himself once he came to earth, because he wanted nothing to do with his past.
      it's sort of ironic, because wine doesn't actually like the drink wine ;; he just thought it sounded nice

      his real full name is " prince emery d'eau II "
      he was the second prince of his planet, there isn't much talk of the first one

        [ it's not important right now, anyways ].
      d'eau [ water ] may be a reference to the water hidden underground in his planet - a sort of controversial subject.
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Postby Guest » Mon Apr 10, 2017 5:40 am

      day eight | margaret erin

      how many different places have they lived ?
      // comes from california
      // lived with this airport gang for around a year [ @ an airport ]
      // then finally, got out of there & started living in a small, but still pretty busy, city by the water
      // eventually moved to the beachside town she lives at now - in a house that she shares with her
      roommate midna. also got involved with gang again stuff again, & often lives with them too
      why did they settle down where they are currently ?
      her past was pretty overwhelming. flashing lights & loud voices & ...
      she prefers the outlook of the sea & seagulls & soft company of the old grocery stores.
      is there an ideal place they want to live, or are they already there ?
      she's already there. man, you couldn't ask more than to watch the sky that turns everything a dark blue when
      daytime starts to fall asleep. you're still the same but somethings feels different now.
      what are the biggest moments that have defined their life ?
      one of mag's biggest moments was when she joined that airport gang, she could have kept going with her original
      plans, but somehow let herself get caught up in it. it's done positive & negative things for her, but mainly defines who
      she is now.
      does their future have a bright or darker outlook, and can they change it ?
      really, most things for maggie are pretty neutral. the same things keep happening all the time & you can't know
      for sure if it's good or not [ it's all like déjà vu & maybe life is a fever dream ]. she doesn't think about it much.
      it's probably darker, but she could change it all ( pretty easy ;; but doesn't want to.
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