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Little Liar - NB #734

Postby rem sleep » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:06 am

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      This is my tryout form
      for NB #734
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      who I would name Belial! I wanted to try using this for
      matting because it's been awhile, and I find it pretty r
      efreshing, honestly... It's easier for me to break up long
      forms when I can divide them into posts. Regardless, I
      hope you don't find reading my form to me too painful
      of an experience. u v u

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Basic Information

Postby rem sleep » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:07 am

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Belial keeps to himself a good portion of the time. Amongst his peers, Bel feels like he doesn't
quite belong. It's rare to see him opening up to anyone outside of his immediate family, and he
's only truly himself around them as well. Belial has a bad habit of telling little white lies to m
ake himself seem cooler around others, and while he talks a big game, Bel is quite a timid kit.
He doesn't have any desire to start trouble, he just wants others to like him-- and he thinks the
one-way ticket to doing so is to make himself out to be a hardcore rebel who gets attention for
all the wrong reasons. Now, he doesn't really cause a ruckus-- he just likes telling tall tales of a
ll the remarkable things he's done behind the backs of adults around him. Bel gives off a cool air
in public, but at home he's always been known as a polite and respectful young man. He easily in
timidates kits who try and mess with him, using his cool, trouble-maker facade and his piercing g
aze to startle others into leaving him and periodically his siblings be. He's always worried about
how the public will interpret something, but he would never let that get in the way of him hangi
ng out with his siblings. He's fiercely loyal to his family and would be completely lost without them.

He pretends he's a hugely independent kid but he really relies on his family a lot for help, be it w
ith mundane chores or emotional issues-- Bel is also a shoulder to cry on for any of his siblings and
despite being a modest kid, there's certainly a reason he comes across terrifying when he's mad. B
el is fairly strong and is not afraid to stand up for his siblings or himself. Internally he may be swe
ating bullets, but he'll give his strongest attempt at scaring others off to protect his friends and fa
mily. He loves all the aspects of nature and likes spending time with both his fathers in their elem
ental regards.

Belial loves flowers but... he has a terrible knack for killing them. It's honestly impressive how bad
at gardening Bel is. He tends to overlook or forget little things like watering times, which leads to...
well a lot of sad looking flowers. Bel finds he's just better at swimming than other things, however
his wings get in the way often-- resulting it... clumsy wing flailing and desperately trying to stay ab
ove the water. He's trying his best though, and even though he often does a bang-up job he won't giv
e up. This persistent little kit is sure he'll get it right one day. He collects a lot of random items, som
e are things he thinks make him cooler somehow while others are various nature things like rocks an
d leaves.

Overall Belial tries too hard to be cool when his family know he's really a huge dork, more or less.
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eunkI. TROLLISH ─'─ II. BELIAL ─'─ III. MALE ─'─ IV. "LORD OF LIES"
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Playlist

Postby rem sleep » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:07 am

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Playlist ;; ( ref: 1 )
Monday Loop by Tomppabeats I'm Sorry by Tomppabeats Eternal Youth by
RUDE

Bel loves soft, simple music because it puts him at ease when he's feeling stresse
d out. He likes listening to background music and just letting his mind escape him.
Bel enjoys taking brief time for himself, and he feels like his little music breaks h
elp him manage everything.

You're Gonna Go Far Kid by The Offspring Heroes by Måns Zelmerlöw
Bel pushes himself to protect those around him, he has a strong moral compass and
he's not about to let someone innocent get hurt if he can help it. He's a protective
guy, even in youth.

On My Own by Troyboi Stardust - Dread Pitt Mix Shape of You by Ed Sheeran
Doubt by Twenty-One Pilots
He's not immune from modern trends however-- Bel also likes a mix of dubstep and
pop music. He finds that songs with good beats are the ones he an relax into, even
if the words aren't relatable to him, he's a sucker for a smooth background. He's on
e of the people who falls in love with how something sounds versus what it actually
means, but he'll space out and imagine the meaning all the same. [ 159 / 200 ][ 9 / 20 ]















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Childhood

Postby rem sleep » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:07 am

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Throughout his youth Belial has been seen as the 'cool kid', and he has worked really hard for the
title. He struggled on late nights studying and practicing all his witty catch phrases and comebac
ks, planned the best outfits and organizing his busy day plans, which involve mostly chatting with
other kids and playing it cool. He did pretty well academically and while he was no prodigy, his s
ure-fire determination served him well in the world of academia. He participated in a lot of vario
us sports at school and he was a P.E. star despite his nasty habit of tripping up with his wings, and
he was pretty well respected for being a great athlete. He was the guy all the kids wanna hang ou
t with, the king of the playgound.

Despite his title Bel still enjoyed his time at home more than when he was out at school. He liked
having a lot of friends and being able to feel welcomed amongst his school-mates, but he really en
joyed coming home to his family, who were so caring and accepting of him. They were the ones he
was most genuine with and... well it was always relaxing to him on so many levels to be able to sa
y everything on his mind-- because he knew his family won't really judge him for it. He could ask a
ny question he didn't have the guts to ask in class or on the playground, and his fathers would answ
er to the best of their abilties. He wasn't too sheltered but he did spend a lot of time with his fami
ly, however he also spent a lot of time hanging out with other kits outside of school. Being fairly p
opular, and participating in sports, Bel had a lot to do.

The athletic kit is somewhat accident prone and has gotten in a few altercations throughout his m
odest childhood. He broke a couple bones in his left leg and wing during a playground football incid
ent where things got a bit too rough. Bel joked about how he wasn't really doing a great job with h
is wing before, but now that it was broken he was going to be even worse at flying. He was pretty u
pset about it, but he ended up recovering just fine. He got some stitches here and there, and past
a certain point it seemed his family was prepared to always have bandages on hand in case Bel man
aged to collide with anything dangerous.

He didn't exactly grow up fast, and while the other kids were learning valuable life skills Bel would
still rely on others to do a lot for him. He did mature past it, but he was scared to cook or clean b
ecause he was convinced that somehow he'd get it wrong and ruin everything or burn down the hou
se.

After some persuasion he was coaxed into helping with the family chores, but periodically the fami
ly jokes about Belial burning down the house-- much to his dismay.
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Future Plans

Postby rem sleep » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:08 am

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Belial believes he's going to grow up to be just like Hiro-- which is to say, he thinks he's going to be
a super cool siren, more or less. To some degree Bel knows this isn't possible, as when taking a job
questionnaire he hasn't scored 'siren' not even once-- so he figures it isn't a job position, but he still
thinks that he'll be as close as he can be. He wants to grow up to be as cool as he pretends to be--
someone people can really admire, someone strong like his dads and fearsome like them too. Some
part of him dreams of being super tall and imposing, which would be a challenge with his stubby m
unchkin legs. Bel is a bit of a bizarre kid in his future goals, albeit-- a would-be siren who wants to
become a super hero, more or less-- it's a pretty out-there goal, needless to say.

Now, what actually happens is... slightly different, needless to say. Belial grows up and somehow l
ands himself a position as a police officer. Perhaps it's not really a 'superhero' title, but it's as close
as Bel could get. After years of being shot down, he was finally accepted on and here he is-- on the
force, saving people like he always wanted to. In many ways Belial is a typical cop trope right out o
f the movie-- always eating donuts and coffee, remarking nonchalantly about some old experience
with witty quips as if he were starring on an episode of Miami Cops. Belial still acts cool to this very
day, wearing shades and a goofy grin 24/7-- he doesn't find it odd at all to be social in the office and
he likes talking with everyone there, from forensics to documents-- and offering them donuts when
he goes out to get them. Bel keeps his uniform and work space near impeccable and always tidy.

At home he also keeps things almost suspiciously organized, however this is because when it all boi
ls down to it Bel is hiding something. What, you may ask? Well, in retrospect you may note it a bit ob
vious. Belial took to the cannibalistic tendencies of his father Hiro, and he doesn't find it bizarre-- h
owever he knows others would, and while he has very specific dining standards, he also has incredib
le morals which prevent him from killing anyone innocent, or anyone he believes to be relatively pur
e. He's caring, despite his crimes, but he doesn't exactly see it as something wrong-- to him it makes
sense, in a weird sort of way.

He still keeps close contact with his siblings and he enjoys talking to them about their daily lives, se
eing what they're up to now-- and periodically stopping in to catch coffee with them whenever he ca
n. Bel is incredibly involved with his co-workers in the same way, and he's still the king of the playgro
und-- though here of course it's an office building, rather than a gymnasium. Bel is the protective, bi
g guy who's always looking out for the under dogs and the new guys-- the senior officer people respec
t. Bel is incredibly proud of himself for what he's accomplished and what he continues to accomplish
when he pursues criminals and either enforces justice upon them, or... well you know. [ 552/750 ]
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Family Relationships

Postby rem sleep » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:08 am

    Family Relationships ;; HIRO - When Hiro first emerged Bel was honestly terrified, but he grew to like his dad pretty quickly-- almost suspiciously so. Perhaps it was childish naivety, perhaps it was the fact of Bel's bizarre tendency towards having things die around him, whether it be plants or other such life. When it comes to being left in the water, Belial doesn't mind that either-- except for his incredibly clumsy tendencies with his wings, Bel is a pretty good swimmer! He enjoys playing around in the water and trying to showboat new swimming techniques to his siblings, so he really doesn't mind chilling in the water while Hiro goes off to do heaven knows what. He's never really seen a problem with this-- and being a pretty trusting kid when it comes to his folks, he also doesn't mind the cannibalistic tendencies either. Belial lowkey believes that his dad is a wendigo-- considering his understanding of mythology is pretty skewed-- and that because he's a wendigo, he must be incredibly fast and strong. While he's not far off on the strength/speed bit, Hiro certainly isn't a wendigo. Belial thinks both of his dads are the coolest guys around and often daydreams about the two being some sort of superhero or crime-fighting duo before they settled down, or perhaps they were secret agents. He thinks the two definitely have the strength to take down any bad thing to ever exist-- and because of this he feels incredibly safe with them-- though Hiro especially, in this sense. He wants to be just like Hiro when he grows up-- though he obviously doesn't fully grasp what this entails, he believes he does. [ 277/500 ]

    ICO - The only thing Bel and his dad Ico really have in common is their bizarre knack for killing things. Ico isn't really great with living things, and Bel really isn't either-- they have an almost creepy mutual understanding based on their uncanny habit of accidentally killing off plants and the like. Belial doesn't mind that Ico is distant because when he's really in danger, his dad is there for him-- and in his book that's what counts. Bel can't claim he really understands Ico, because honestly he doesn't, but he doesn't really need to. His dad is a huge figure of mystery to him, and he figures it'll just stay that way. He respects his father's privacy, and admires him from afar. He has fun making up theories about what his dad does when he's off on his own-- varying from being a super cool secret agent to writing best-selling novels-- the childish wonder surrounding Ico is undeniable. Belial likes spending time with his dad, even if it is kinda scarce, simply because he feels like Ico is one of the only other people who gets it, when it comes to the bizarre happenstance of things dying around them. Secretly Belial wonders if it's a kind of curse he got from his dad-- but he has no idea if that's true. [ 221/500 ]

    EREBOS - Erebos and Bel have a couple things in common-- one of which being accidentally murdering plants. Belial doesn't mind Erebos, though, and he's always reassuring Ere when the guy's feeling down. Bel gets that Erebos isn't the smartest, but because of that he's always willing to give input and try to assist, granted he probably doesn't know the right answer either, he's pretty convinced that if they work together they have a higher chance of being right overall. Belial doesn't understand why his older brother is so flighty and skittish, but he'd quickly take an offensive to anyone trying to take advantage of that quality-- being a protective person, he'd never let anyone walk all over his family. Belial loves going out swimming with Erebos and showing off whatever bizarre new tactic he invented or stumbled upon, and he also loves chatting while they float on the water's surface. He's very honest with his older brother, and while it seems Erebos relies more on Belial for protection, Bel trusts his brother's insight greatly and often asks him for advice. He likes having a second opinion, and while they're floating out on the water's surface-- Belial feels his most at peace, which makes it a lot easier for him to open up. [ 211 / 500 ]

    ALVAREZ - Alva is at least partially convinced that his brother Belial is cursed with a legitimate affliciton which causes flowers around him to die. This is just a misconception, of course, but Bel loves the flowers his brother grows in their yard-- but due to this belief, Alvarez absolutely freaks out whenever Belial tries to get too close to his precious flowers. Periodically Alvarez can be persuaded to let Belial look as long as he absolutely doesn't touch anything. Despite this, the two have a bond like a shadow an its host-- Alvarez clings to Belial in public, and Bel stands up for him if trouble arises. He loves his shy brother and Belial would rather take a bullet then let Alva get made fun of for anything, especially his sexuality or feminine nature-- that sort of judgement makes Bel absolutely furious. Alvarez does love Belial, and Bel loves him too-- the two siblings spend a lot of time playing together, attempting to cook and wrestling, all activities the two of them enjoy! Neither of them are particularly good chefs however, so for the most part Alva is playing the role of the main chef while Bel chops vegetables and scrambles to organize all the ingredients. They fail together in this regard, but they also triumph and celebrate whenever they miraculous don't forget steps of the recipe or set anything on fire. Alva is pretty fragile but he likes wrestling anyway, and Bel would be lying if he said he didn't let his bro win sometimes. Belial is undeniably the stronger of the two, but he always plays fair-- and he lets Alvarez get away with his periodic cheating. Belial is always goofing around and trying to make Alva smile, and while he doesn't always suceed he's not ever going to give up. He'd do just about anything for his meek little brother.
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    CYGNET - Belial and Cygnet are the official defense duo for their shy younger siblings-- because it's completely true that they'd beat you up if you even so much as looked the wrong way at their siblings. When Cygnet is at risk for taking things beyond where they should be, however, Bel is the one to hold her back and try to set things straight. He's someone who admires her strength and he appreciates her as his combative equal-- periodically the two spar or wrestle to stay in touch. Bel makes a game out of trying to catch Cygnet off guard, and in turn she does the same to him. It results in some pretty hysterical impromptu fight scenes in public places, such as the school bus, super market and the park. It's completely friendly competition, but to an outsider it looks like the two absolutely hate eachother-- really it's just tough love, and the two have an understanding that lies in their competitive rivalry. Bel will go watch clouds with her but it seems like whatever she thinks the cloud looks like, he thinks the absolute opposite or doesn't see it at all. Cygnet insists he doesn't have a lick of creativity in his body, to which Belial puffs out his chest and gives a "so what?" Cygnet has tried several times to get Belial to take a closer look at the clouds so he might understand what she's talking about, but alas, Belial simply isn't very creatively inclined and they all look like clouds to him. [ 265 / 500 ]
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Postby rem sleep » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:11 am

    Coral? ;; Bel doesn't really mind his coral growths, as they don't particularly hurt him, though he does think they're pretty weird looking. They tend to get caught on fabric, much to Bel's dismay, and cutting holes in his blankets and clothing to cater to his growths is a bit odd-- but it's something Bel has grown accustomed to. He's not overly bothered by his situation, in fact his coral goes right into the belief that he is indeed a siren.

    Siren? ;; This is a very strange misconception to have deep-rooted in someone-- but Belial is sure he's somehow a siren just like Hiro. How, you may ask? With his sharp teeth and coral growths-- he believes himself to be his father's spitting image-- obviously not a normal kalon, Bel isn't sure what else he could be. As he matures he lets go of this fantasy, but he still behaves at least vaguely as he used to-- developing strange tendencies in line with his old beliefs. Perhaps there is a bit of siren blood in him after all-- not enough for a tail, but enough for a bizarre attitude and taste palette...

    Police? ;; Later on in life Bel works with the police force! One would generally think he'd be the antagonist, what with his eating habits, but he actually has suspiciously strict morals on his food. He only does away with the guilty-- and he has strong obligation to help those in need. Later on in life Belial developed the courage he always wanted-- the courage he faked as a kit. He wanted to become strong and protect others from evil-- no matter the cost. It took a lot of repeated applying and praying for the best, but when Bel got accepted to the force his life just started to make sense to him again-- he knew where he was going, and that this would be his way to enforce justice-- to protect the weak. He knew all along that he wanted to help people somehow, it was always just a matter of which position accepted him-- what he was most suited for. He grew to be a strong-willed and well-built man, a sturdy and reliable guy suited for the force.


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