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I think it is broken...➴➴

Postby floki, » Thu Dec 15, 2016 1:35 pm

Three.

"Horses are not meant for such conditions," I spoke softly to the Northerner as we rode besides the
sand hills of my so familiar desert. "Camels are better suited for this condition." It had only been a
few hours of riding, but i could already tell the weariness of the creature beneath me. Within in my village,
we raised Camel's, and occasionally a horse for it's hide and meat. Horses were useless when it came to the
deserts sandy hills of hell.

"You have no idea of the power of the Northern Horses..." droned the cloaked man. The air wasn't cool
outside, nor had the sun risen yet. It began puzzling me as to why he was wearing the cloak at all. My mind
shifted to questions as to what he could be hiding underneath his cloak. An extra appendage? A hideous scar?
What could possibly be under it?

"Are you even listening to me? the man grumbled, as he turned in his saddle to face me. Still, there
was nothing much to see, besides the tip of his pale nose.

"I'm sorry," I shook my head, "What was it you were saying?"

Scoffing, he let out a low growl. "I can't believe I have found myself married to a wandering eyed idiot."

"Wandering eye - well if maybe you took off that cloak of yours, there would be no wandering eyes."

"Not a chance, love,"his words were laced with sarcasm, which vexed me so. "There will be no removing of clothing tonight."

I could feel my face heat up. Quickly I turned away, hoping he wouldn't see my blushing face. It was here did
I remember that is was still dark out, and he couldn't possibly see my reddening face, when I could barely see
the sand dunes in front of me. Taking in a deep, I straightened in my saddle. Turning back to the man, I braved
for one more question.

"When can we stop to rest?"

"We aren't," he said promptly.

"What?" I was shocked. We weren't resting, after all the hours that had gone by. I needed to rest here soon.
"Please, maybe just for a few minutes?"

"We have to keep moving. If we stop we will not make it by dawn."

"Make it where? The North?! There is no way that in one night, two people can make it up there... can we?!"

"Of course we can't stupid girl. I am not taking you to the North. Not stopping your tedious questions." he growled.

I wasn't going to the North. That quickly put me more at ease. But if I wasn't going to the North, where in the hell
was I going to? Maybe some other village in the desert? But I had not heard of any other village among our sandy
dunes. For granted, I didn't hear much outside my village. Only the few rumors of the North, and some about the East
Coastlines. Both impossible to reach in one night, or so one of the traders had mentioned to my father.

We rode on a few more hours. It was beginning to dawn, and my legs and lower back ached. I sat hunched over in
my saddle, trying my best to cradle myself. The pain was dull, but throbbing. I could feel the tears springing to my
eyes. Whimpering lightly, I sat like this for what felt like an eternity, hoping that sometime soon we would stop.

Seconds, minutes, I don't know how much time went by when I felt the stinging sand collide with my face. Closing
my eyes, I let out a low groan. I turned from my side, to my back, but not without an immense amount of pain shooting
up from my left leg. Doing my best to sit up, I realized I had some sort of creature upon me. Its smooth brown mane
now dispersed among the sand. Two wooden twigs, with feathers at the end stuck out from its neck. My horse had been
shot down. Wide eyed and terrified, I quickly sunk back down into the ground.

The shouts of men began ringing out above me. Two, four, twenty? I didn't know how many there were. One in particular,
was the deep voiced man that I was stuck with. Closing my eyes, I waited for my death. There had to be too many
screaming men to overcome. I was going to die, right here among the sands of my home. As the sun peeked over the
edge of the dunes, I could see the shadows moving through my lids. A darker shadow approached, and I knew... knew
that it was after me. This shadow was going to finish me. As his hands touch my arms, I began punching the air,
screaming, hoping to scare whatever this shadow was.

"Ow! What the hell?!" the deep voice came out, which immediately relaxed me.

Opening my eyes, I saw my husband above me. I let out a sigh of relief, before twitching again.

"The horse... What happened?!" I was so confused by what had just occurred.

"We were ambushed," He growled as he began taking off his cloak, revealing me himself for the first time.

His hair was fine, red and curly. It brushed off the side of his face, barely hiding his brilliant green eyes. He was
broad, and had defined muscles on his arms. Strange markings as well, rippled all over his muscles. A few scratches
and cuts were here and there, but there was one major bruise upon his cheek. It was bright red, and already turning
a grotesque purple.

"I am going to lift the horse, you need to pull yourself out from under," Gripping the underside of the horse,
he readied himself.

Nodding softly, I braised myself. As soon as he lifted, I began shifting out of the way. With every move, came a
jolt of sharp pain, causing me to wince and groan. Soon, it was over. I laid on the ground, in immense pain.

"It isn't broken," my husband said softly as he lightly touched my leg.

"How would you know?!" I shrieked.

"Cause I know! Trust me on this, I have seen many broken bones before!"

Shrinking away from him, I just shook him off. "Whatever..."

Sighing, softly, the man grabbed my body and lifted me up.

"Hey! What are you doing?!"

"I am getting us out of here before anymore of them come back." Nodding over to the bodies that
laid sprawled out on the sand, I gasped.

There were five of them. Two very thin men, with dark complexion like me, and the other with much
fairer skin tone. All of them had the same markings up and down their arms. It was similar to my
husbands... How strange.

My husband lifted me up onto his horse, before getting on himself. Kicking the flanks of the horse, we jolted off.

"What did those guys want?" I said some time later.

"All will be explained when we get back..."

"Back where? Where are you taking me?"

"Enough questions. I don't want any more talking for the rest of the trip," he snapped.

"Fine... but at least answer one question." I said gruffly.

"What?"

"What is your name?" My voice was soft, and half embarrassed. I was married to a stranger.

"Salem. My name is Salem."


{{ wow that took forever to get up. literally smacking myself. XD hope you enjoyed.
now we know this handsome devils name. ^o^
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby Pyjaks » Mon Jan 16, 2017 11:12 am

I've only read the first chapter so far but I'm so pumped to read more!! You gave your characters so much depth in such a short piece. I love your writing style and I also love pirates...so I'm sure I'll love this story, lol.

Great job :D
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby floki, » Mon Jan 16, 2017 11:38 am

    oh my goodness thank you! c; i truly hope you like the rest of the story as well. thank you so much dear!

    update: so i am working on chapter four, and it should be up before the end of this month. yaay! i can not wait for you guys to see what is in store for the next chapter! let me tell you, it is going to be an exciting one! (yay!)
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too many questions ➴➴

Postby floki, » Tue Feb 21, 2017 7:27 am

Four.

"The river!" I exclaimed as my eyes set sight on the dark blue, rippling water ahead of us.

"Yes, a river. What a great observation there-" he stopped suddenly, waving his hands about as he was trying
to think.

"Diana."

"That's right, Diana,"

"Why are we going to the river? There is nothing there..." crossing my arms, I glared at the back of his head.

"You will see when you get there," he replied gruffly before sighing gently.

"Why can't you tell me now? After all, aren't married couples supposed to tell their spouses everything?"

Turning violently in the saddle, he glared at me. "Okay listen here, Diana. This is how things are going to work.
you keep your mouth shut for the rest of the trip, like I have already asked of you. One more question, and I will
cover that hole with rope, do you hear me?!"
Salem's face turned bright red, almost as red as his hair.

Sucking in a quick breath I nodded. Salem was terrifying, and I had no doubt that he would in fact do as he said.

"Good, I am glad we got that settled.

The sun slowly rose above the sandy peeks of the dunes beside us. I could feel its gentle warmth, kissing my skin.
Its rays casted long shadows that seemed to dance as we rode toward the winding river. I could see the river's waves
lapping against the its muddy banks. Green reeds grew on the banks. It was these reeds that my father would go out
and fetch. Each reed cost a pretty gold coin for. These reeds were strong, and sturdy, perfect for weaving baskets
and other needed items. I watched them wave and bow as we drew closer.

In the middle of the river, was a boat, a rather large boat. Clouds attached to giant looking trees in the center of the
boat, seemed to help it move across the water. It was unique, and nothing I had ever seen.

Once we finally reached the water's edge, I could fully see the massiveness of the boat, bobbing out on the water. One
smaller boat rowed out from the larger boat. The boat carried about three people on it. Two of them rowed on either
side of the boat, while one sat in the center. As the boat drew closer, I could make out the features of the person in the
center. She was a young woman, possibly my age, with long flowing hair. Her face was constructed into scowling expression.
With her hands crossed over her chest, she glared over at us, no, at me.

"Here they come," Salem gruffed as he got off his horse. He snatched at the horse's reins, and led us over to a
better spot to wait for the people to come ashore.

"Meara, I am so glad to see your smiling face!" he called out over the water, towards the girl, I assumed.

The girl's face began to redden at his comment. Gritting her teeth, she let out a low growl that seemed to rumble
across the water. "Salem, do not test me today."

Chuckling to himself, Salem turned back to me. "Okay, time for you to get down." Clasping onto my hips,
he lifted me from the saddle and down onto the ground.

"Salem... who are they?"

"What did I say about any more question?!" His smile faded as he glared right at me. Biting his lower lip
he gave a sigh. "You are very irritating."

"I'm sorry Salem, but why-" I was quickly cut off by a sharp blow, another sickening pop, and blackening
world.
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby The Worst Username » Fri Feb 24, 2017 2:07 pm

Hello! I just found this, and the plot is really interesting. Props to you for consistent updates despite your lack of a large following!
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby floki, » Mon Feb 27, 2017 11:24 am

      thanks friend, i hope you enjoy the story! c;
      i need to update that plot though, cause that was such a sucky way to put that. XD
      i have so much in store for this story, i am so excited to share it with people.
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escape ➴➴

Postby floki, » Fri Mar 03, 2017 4:53 pm

Five

"Salem... why did you bring her here?" a female voice growled.

"She is the one..." responded a man's.

"What do you mean she is the one?! We have bee searching for the one for years, this is not it."

"I know she is! Her father is just as much as a fool as his own. There is no mistaking, she is the one,"
the man gave a sigh.

"You can not just assume she is the one from her foolish father!"

"Trust me on this one! She is the one!"

"I have trusted you for the past three years and that has gotten us nowhere!"

"Watch your tongue Me-" the man stopped in mid-sentence to shift positions.

"She is waking, we will continue this later."


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My head was pounding when I awoke. It was a pounding like someone was beating your skull
with sticks, and would not stop. Whimpering lightly, I reached up to touch the aching area, to
find an egg shape lump. How the hell did this get here? Letting out a soft groan, I began racking
my brain, trying to figure out what happened. It was a few minutes later, did the memory come to me.

"He hit me..." I moaned.

"Yes, I did, but I told you, no more questions."

My head snapped over towards the voice, before I cracked my eyes open. I was in a dimly lit room,
laying in a swinging bed. Two figures were in front of me. One leaning against a wall, and the other
sitting in a near chair. Both of them stared right back at me with unfriendly eyes.

"Salem..."

"Yes, I am here," he sighed softly.

"You... you little b-"

"Hey," he cut me off. "No need to get nasty, now."

"You hit me!"

"Yes, we have already established this," he retorted.

"That was quite a nasty thing to do," I was fuming now. He had struck me... struck me for nothing.

"Well it shut you up, did it not," He smirked before standing up. "Now, stay here, I will send for
someone to clean you up and check on that pretty face of yours here soon."


Salem turned on his heel, and quit the room, leaving me and the other person in the room. She stood in
the corner with unwelcoming eyes. Her face contorted into a scowl upon looking at my own face. Pushing off
from the wall, she crossed the room over towards me. The long, blonde locks of hers bounced with every step.
Bending down, she pushed her face close to mine. I could almost touch the sharp point of her nose.

"Let's cut all the formalities. I don't like you, and I never will. Do not talk to me, look at me, or even breathe
in my direction or I will gut you like a fish. Do I make myself clear?"


Leting out a small whimper, I nodded.

"Good," she growled before whipping around, her hair smacking me across the face. "I wouldn't ask too
many more questions either honey, or there won't be just one bump on that precious face of yours."


She stomped out of the room, making me wonder whatever I did to anger her. Shifting in my swinging cot, I tried to
push out of it, but only slipped back in. This thing was difficult to leave. There was nothing to there to grasp to escape
from it. Grunting, I tried once more to swing out of it. Finally the cot's grasp of me faltered, causing me to clatter to
the floor. A sharp pain raced through my leg as my head began banging again, and my vision to falter.

"It is time to leave," I told myself as I laid on the cold wooden floor. "You need to get up and escape."

I forced myself off the ground. With my bad leg off the ground, I hopped over a wall, grasping out for its firmness.

"Good job Diana, almost out of the room."

I managed to make it through the archway of the room, and down what seemed to be a hall. Once I reached the
end of the strange hall, my stomach dropped. There before me was a ladder, a swinging rope ladder that lead
straight up to a hole in the ceiling. Blinding lights poured through the hole and trickled around the area below.

"Damn it," I cursed as my eyes shifted down to my bad leg. The ankle was swollen, and already was beginning
to blacken. "If you want to leave, you have to get up this ladder. This is the only way out... you have to escape
this place."


I reached out and grabbed the prong at my eye. Sucking in a deep breath, I lifted myself from the ground and placed
both feet upon the lowest prong. Then I lifted my bad foot and set it on the one above it. With my right hand, I reached
up and began my slow, painful ascend. My leg burned, and ached. It took everything I had not to scream. I managed to
get half way up the ladder, when I heard voices above me.

"Terrence, I need you to go below deck. Our guest needs a little patch up," Salem's voice sent a spark of disgust
shooting down through my spine, causing my flesh to rise and crawl.

"Aye, cap, but what about you? You have a nasty bugger growing on your face." A deep voice responded. His voice
was deeper than any voice I had heard before.

"Don't worry about me, just do as I say!" Salem barked. "By Gods, has everyone lost their mind?! I am your
captain, have all of you forgotten? You will do exactly as I say without questioning me, I have had enough of
questioning. Now get going!"


"My apologies captain."

The floorboards above began to creak. Someone was coming my way. I panicking, I glanced about. There was nothing
around me, nothing to get out of the way or escape to. If i finished climbing up, I would surely be caught by Salem
and the man he was talking to, but if I climbed down, I would lose the chance for an escape. With time running out,
and the sound of the mans footsteps drawing closer to me, I finally made my decision. Unlatching the tight hold upon
the ladder, I fell back, plummeting down towards the ground. I braced myself mid way for the hard, fall that came
upon me quick. As my back connected with the ground, a gust of air flew pushed right out of my mouth. I lost all
breath, and began to fear that I would never regain the ability to again. Sprawled out on the floor, I tried to catch
my breath again. I just need a few moments, but they were not given to me, for I could see the light that once came
out of the hole above had now disappeared.

"Well, you must be the little lass the captain has been talking about!" exclaimed the deep voice man.

My eyes widened, as I scrambled to get up.

"Oh, whoa there lassy! You are going to end up hurting yourself by spazzing out like that!" The man then turned
around and proceed to come down the ladder. Halfway down, he too let go, but instead of landing on his back
side, he landed promptly upon his feet, causing the area around him to shake. The man before me now, was a big
one. He was tall and large in all aspects of the word. But what caught my eye more than his protruding stomach, was
his skin. It was the same color as mine. He was like me.

"Now, lassy, time to get ya up. There will be no more of that sneaking around, can't have you walking on a bad
leg."
he clucked before his big arms reached down and plucked me off the floor.

"Please don't hurt me! Let me go, please!" I cried as my breath finally came back to me.

"I ain't gonna hurt you now. Calm down. I am just gonna take you back to your quarter and get ya cleaned up
a bit."


The man strode down the hall with me in his arms. I felt like a small babe being cradled against the chest of his
mother. He had a tight, but gentle grip of me, like he feared I would just slip right out of his arms.

"I bet you have a lot of questions," he said softly as his dark brown eyes gazed down at me.

Nodding slowly, I looked away.

"Well after we get you fixed up, I can do my best in answering them, does that sound good?"

I couldn't help be smile. Maybe finally I could figure out why in the hell I was here, and why Salem married
me, of all people. Why was I so special.

"Thank you... uh..."

"Terrence," he responded quickly.

"Terrence, thank you."

"Anytime, lass," he smiled. "Ah, here we are, now I want no more escaping, you hear me? There
will be no walking on that bad leg of yours for quite some time, so you better get comfortable down here."


He placed me down into the swinging cot he had called a hammock, before glancing over my face.

"Oooh, you got one big one growing by your eye there, but it should heal up nicely. And no blood! What
an added bonus!"
He chuckled as he patted his stomach. "There shall be no ruining of my nice white shirt
today! Ever tried getting blood out of white shirt lass? Total nightmare, that is what it is."


The smile broke across my face, sending a string of giggles to spring from my lips.

"Ah, glad to see you smile, now, for that leg of yours."
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Mar 05, 2017 2:25 pm

I think I like Terrence

But what the heck is going on?? o.o
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Re: Vengeance ➴➴

Postby eclectic, » Tue Mar 07, 2017 2:48 am

      this is so great!
      i'm loving the plot so far!
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Postby floki, » Fri Mar 17, 2017 3:59 am

    @ranger, all will be explained in chapter six my friend. i promise.

    @weeping willow, i am glad! c;
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