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by blackbird. » Wed Feb 22, 2017 5:29 pm
@badwolf
yay good job for posting! baby steps yeah cx
@inc. & lumi
omg friends i'm not the only one who's new here
wouldn't have thought that it was the first for you guys bc you're both super experienced at writing already unlike me lel
and yes @inc i feel you so hard i was super nervous to post on this thread at first
i was like "what if everyone judges my writing and thinks i suck??"
but everyone's been so welcoming at nice
(s/o @everyone - thank you for not hating on my sucky writing haha)
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by Aα΄Κα΄s » Thu Feb 23, 2017 6:52 am
Ranger of the North wrote:Too many of the Lazy Writers joined smh
This is actually sadly true, I think that they don't realize in order to actually get things done you must put forth at least some effort. It's not just a slap on and go process. That is unless, you're actually wanting to make it sloppy. Personally, I think about a lot of thing before I go to write, if I can't think of anything to add on or lose my muse, I find it helpful to describe an emotion said character is feeling, or the terrains around them. I'll even go as far as describing their movements.
With that being said, I made a few tweaks to Number 20 - "What do you mean he's dead?!" and I'd really love some feedback on it <3
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by Pyjaks » Thu Feb 23, 2017 6:58 am
Aα΄Κα΄s wrote:Ranger of the North wrote:Too many of the Lazy Writers joined smh
This is actually sadly true, I think that they don't realize in order to actually get things done you must put forth at least some effort. It's not just a slap on and go process. That is unless, you're actually wanting to make it sloppy. Personally, I think about a lot of thing before I go to write, if I can't think of anything to add on or lose my muse, I find it helpful to describe an emotion said character is feeling, or the terrains around them. I'll even go as far as describing their movements.
With that being said, I made a few tweaks to Number 20 - "What do you mean he's dead?!" and I'd really love some feedback on it <3
Hey! Just wanna let you know I read it last night and loved it! I'll reread the revised copy when I'm home later this afternoon and I'll drop some feedback :D
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by sammmy » Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:15 pm
luminescence; wrote:this is my forst time ever attempting to do a writing challenge, and i do not regret it, not one bit cx
i am a bit of a noob i have to admit
i personally feel this one (#42) is the better of the seven i've written,i don't even know why but i'm proud of myself for making something that doesn't have screaming or anger in it
It's my first time doing a writing challenge as well, though I've been posting stories on wattpad for a few months now c:
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by rogan » Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:55 pm
@samo,
i'm TRYINg to write stuff on wattpad, and yet i fail to eve publish anything soooo cx
@blackbird,
i wouldn't call myself super experience, let alone experienced cx
but thank yooouuuu! i also love your writing style, it's beautiful cx and your variety of characters is aaaah
@atlas,
wow i need to pay attention more i called you wisps oops my bad...sorry
and i love the way it's written it's so beautiful aaaaaah
i can't wait for more from you
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