The Tap [ideas run freely]

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Who's your favourite so far? cx

Day
4
27%
Young Svern
1
7%
Svern
6
40%
Svern's superior
0
No votes
The guard
0
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Digan
2
13%
Sergeant Hamit
0
No votes
Lady Philipana
2
13%
 
Total votes : 15

Re: The Tap [ideas run freely]

Postby Captain Plucky » Sun Feb 05, 2017 9:49 am

This is a wonderful story, Ranger! I love how you describe your characters, and how much impact and diversity is given between them. Not to mention the creativity with the names, ranks, and guns are really fascinating as well! It gives it a nice, original twist. All in all, you're a great writer, Ranger, and I'm excited to see you improve even more! <3
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Re: The Tap [ideas run freely]

Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Feb 05, 2017 9:51 am

Captain Plucky wrote:This is a wonderful story, Ranger! I love how you describe your characters, and how much impact and diversity is given between them. Not to mention the creativity with the names, ranks, and guns are really fascinating as well! It gives it a nice, original twist. All in all, you're a great writer, Ranger, and I'm excited to see you improve even more! <3

Ah, thank you so much!! I'm glad all my guns and 'random words' (lol) are interesting :D <3
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Postby Guest » Sun Feb 05, 2017 10:51 am


    i'm gonna casually mark this for later
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Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Feb 05, 2017 11:07 am

hakuna matata; wrote:

    i'm gonna casually mark this for later

Thankyew :D :3
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Re: The Tap [ideas run freely]

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Mon Mar 06, 2017 2:49 am

I said I'd read this sometime, honestly I wish I'd read it earlier now! I'm fascinated by this totalitarian government and it's habit of wiping people's memories.
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Re: The Tap [ideas run freely]

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri May 26, 2017 7:11 pm

TheSongOfTheStars wrote:I said I'd read this sometime, honestly I wish I'd read it earlier now! I'm fascinated by this totalitarian government and it's habit of wiping people's memories.

Thanks so much! :D I'm glad it caught your attention cx <3


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