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Postby WhiteWater ; » Sun Jan 22, 2017 1:08 pm

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CONNIE "EX-CON" | FEMALE | TROUBLE MAKER | PARKOUR | TRESSPASSING
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we all love a good thrill, right? some more than others... and connie just so happens to be one of those extremes. an energetic
girl who is more often than not out getting into some sort of trouble, connie longs for that rush of adrenaline when you hear yo
ur name being shouted out angrily as you're caught causing havoc. from abandoned houses, barns and stores she discovers on h
er travels, to waterparks and even abandoned military bases... connie has seen it all - and plans to see more. being the danger
loving kalon she is, this female travels to almost every place imaginable in search of her next adventure. what does she do in t
hese places? well, lots of things! she photographs these forgotten treasures, shows off her extreme talent at parkour, and just
enjoys being in places she shouldn't be. big into urban-exploration, she never takes anything from these places except photos,
nor does she leave anything but pawprints... and occasionally some blood from some nasty falls that she'll admit happens. no
matter how much you practice, perfection is an ever-evolving perception based on where you currently are. there's no such th
ing as perfect and connie knows that. occasionally thought that she thinks that she's better than others, that's an assumption t
hat derives from her actions... and one that us often wrong. it's not that she thinks the rules don't apply to her, instead it's the
exact opposite. she knows that they do and that's a part of why she continues to do what she does. there's just something abou
t being in a place that you're not supposed to be - doing something that you're not supposed to. when they get mad, when they
find her? she's out of there in a flash. if they catch her, she tells them the truth. honest and a little too bluntly. she takes noth
ing. she leaves nothing. these abandoned buildings would otherwise be lost in time if it wasn't for her photography. connie is a
kalon who fits outside the box. are some of her habits potentially hazardous? of course, and she'll never forget to mention that
point, almost using it to brag about her bravery, but you dare tell her to change her ways and this girl's confidence is a weapon.








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well I was walking for some time, when I came across this sign, saying "who are you and where are you from?" we don't like whe
n visitors come. "no trespassing" that's what it said. at least that's what I could read. no trespassers? yeah, my ---! wait till ya g
et a load of me! one day I was tripping and that's when I could see. that the ether that I tapped into could be reality. it was gr
eat, that's when I climbed that optimistic vine, but once I hit that mountain peak I began to lose my mind. i don't need no sym
pathy. i won't cry and whine. life's my light and liberty and I shine when I wanna shine. make their faces crack. there's no turn
ing back. let's go! well I was walking for some time, when I came across this sign, saying "who are you and where are you from?"
we don't like when visitors come. "no trespassing" that's what it said, at least that's what I could read. no trespassers? yeah, m
y ---! wait till ya get a load of me! i ain't got crap in my bag, that's the one thing you can believe. my heart is gold, my body is g
lass. come on baby, can't you see? i don't need no GPS, to show me where to go, but I can turn into the north pole and show y
ou what is cold. i don't need no sympathy. i won't cry and whine. life's my light and liberty, and I shine when I wanna shine. m
ake their faces crack. there's no turning back. let's go! well I was walking for some time, when I came across this sign, saying
"who are you and where are you from?" we don't like when visitors come. "no trespassers" that's what it said, at least that's wh
at I could read. no trespassers? yeah, my ---! wait till ya get a load of me! wait till ya get a load of me!i said wait till ya get a
load of me! i ain't staying at home, i got places to roll. i ain't staying at home, no. i don't need no sympathy, i won't cry and w
hine. life's my light and liberty, and I shine when I wanna shine. well I was walking for some time, when I came across this sig
n, saying "who are you and where are you from?" we don't like when visitors come. "no trespassers" that's what it said, at least
that's what I could read. no trespassers? yeah, my ---! wait till ya get a load of me! ____________________________________







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you can't feel the heat until you hold your hand over the flame. you have to cross the line just to remember where it lays. yo
u won't know your worth now, son, until you take a hit. and you won't find the beat until you lose yourself in it. that's why we
won't back down we won't run and hide, 'cause these are the things we can't deny. I'm passing over you like a satellite so catch
me if I fall. that's why you stick to your game plans and party lives, but at night we're perspiring by candlelight. we are the or
phans of the American dream. oh shine your light on me. you can't fill your cup until you empty all it has. you can't understand
d what lays ahead, if you don't understand the past. you'll never learn to fly now, till you're standing at the cliff. and you can't
truly love until you've given up on it. that's why we won't back down we won't run and hide, 'cause these are the things we can
't deny. I'm passing over you like a satellite so catch me if I fall. that's why you stick to your game plans and party lives, but at
night we're conspiring by candlelight. we are the orphans of the American dream, so shine your light on me. she told me that
she never would face the world again, so I offered up a plan. we'll sneak out while they sleep and sail off in the night. we'll c
ome clean and start over the rest of our lives. when we're gone we'll stay gone, out of sight, out of mind. It's not too late, we
have the rest of our lives. we'll sneak out while they sleep, and sail off in the night. we'll come clean and start over the rest o
f our lives. when we're gone, we'll stay gone. out of sight, out of mind. it's not too late, we have the rest of our lives. the rest
of our lives. the rest of our lives. because we won't back down, we won't run and hide. yeah 'cause these are the things we ca
n't deny. i'm passing over you like a satellite, so catch me if I fall. that's why you stick to your game plans and party lines, but
at night we're perspiring by candlelight. we are the orphans of the American dreams, so shine your light on me... because we
won't back down, we won't run and hide, yeah 'cause these are the things that we can't deny. i'm passing over you like a satel
lite, 'cause these are the things that we can't deny now. this is the life that you can't deny us. now. ______________________







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Lonely girl you lost the only thing you loved. nothing that you have is ever good enough, and I won't be the one to keep you saf
e and I won't be the one who stays the same. you got a lot of nerve and looks like the tables turning. and now you're wishing m
e well like you miss me. you got a dirty tongue and, looks like the damage done is forever. and it's a long time to miss me. and
it's a long time to miss me. lonely girl it looks like you are out of luck. tell me how it feels to watch your friends give up. I was
on your side. I stood by you. so go ahead and cry it's just like you. you got a lot of nerve and looks like the tables turning. and
now you're wishing me well like you miss me. you got a dirty tongue and, looks like the damage done is forever, and it's a long
time to miss me, and it's a long time to miss me. and I don't feel sorry for you, sorry for you. 'cause now the tables turning and
now the bridge is burning. It's coming crashing down, crashing down. over you, over you, over you, over you. you got a lot of n
erve and, looks like the tables turning, and now you're wishing me well like you miss me. you've got a dirty tongue and, looks l
ike the damage done is forever, and it's a long time to miss me. and it's a long time to miss me. _________________________




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I'm not loving you, way I wanted to. what I had to do, had to run from you. i'm in love with you, but the vibe is wrong, and tha
t haunted me, all the way home. so you never know, never, never know. never know enough, 'til it's over love. 'til we lose con
trol, system overload. screaming, "No, no, no, n-nooo!". i'm not loving you, way I wanted to. see I wanna move, but can't esca
pe from you. so I keep it low, keep a secret code. so everybody else don't have to know. so keep your love lock-down, your lo
ve lock-down. keeping your love lock-down, your love lock-down. now keep your love lock-down, your love lock-down. now ke
ep your love lock-down, you lose.I'm not loving you, way I wanted to. i can't keep my cool, so I keep it true. i got something to
lose, so I gotta move. i can't keep myself, and still keep you too. so I keep in mind, when I'm on my own, somewhere far from
home, in the danger zone. how many times did I tell you 'fore it finally got through? you lose, you lose. I'm not loving you, the
way I wanted to. see I had to go, see I had to move, no more wasting time, you can't wait for life. we're just wasting time, wh
ere's the finish line? so keep your love lock-down, your love lock-down. keeping your love lock-down, your love lock-down. no
w keep your love lock-down, your love lock-down. now keep your love lock-down, you lose. so keep your love lock-down, your
love lock-down. keeping your love lock-down, your love lock-down. now keep your love lock-down, your love lock-down. now
keep your love lock-down, you lose. you lose. you lose. you lose. ___________________________________________________





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who are these people? i just woke up in my underwear. no liquor left on the shelf. i should probably introduce myself. you shou
lda seen what I wore. i had a cane and a party hat. i was the king of this hologram. where there's no such thing as getting out o
f hand. memories tend to just pop up, drunk pre-meds and some rubber gloves. five-thousand people with designer drugs. don't
think I'll ever get enough, don't think I'll ever get enough! champagne, cocaine, gasoline, and most things in between. i roam th
e city in a shopping cart. a pack of camels and a smoke alarm. this night is heating up, raise hell and turn it up, saying, "If you
go on you might pass out in a drain pipe." oh yeah, don't threaten me with a good time. it's a helluva feeling though. it's a hellu
va feeling though. alright, alright, it's a helluva feeling though. it's a helluva feeling though. What are these footprints? they do
n't look very human-like. now I wish that I could find my clothes. bed sheets and a morning rose. i wanna wake up. can't even t
ell if this is a dream. how did we end up in my neighbor's pool, upside down with a perfect view? bar to bar at the speed of sou
nd. fancy feet dancing through this town. lost my mind in a wedding gown. don't think I'll ever get it now. don't think I'll ever g
et it now. champagne, cocaine, gasoline, and most things in between. i roam the city in a shopping cart. a pack of camels and
a smoke alarm. This night is heating up. raise hell and turn it up, saying, "if you go on you might pass out in a drain pipe." oh y
eah, don't threaten me with a good time. i'm a scholar and a gentleman and I usually don't fall when I try to stand. i lost a bet
to a guy in a chiffon skirt, but I make these high heels work. i've told you time and time again. i'm not as think as you drunk I
am, and we all fell down when the sun came up. i think we've had enough. alright, alright, it's a helluva feeling though, It's a
helluva feeling though. alright, alright, it's a helluva feeling though, it's a helluva feeling though. champagne, cocaine, gasoiln
e, and most things in between. i roam the city in a shopping cart. a pack of camels and a smoke alarm. this night is heating up.
raise hell and turn it up. saying, "If you go on you might pass out in a drain pipe." don't threaten me with a good time! _______







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i was so desperate. couldn't catch a breath. every day was a mess. i couldn't rest. i felt it in my chest, an emptiness. i was lov
ing myself less. in my mind, I tried to convince myself, i didn't need anyone's help. but you stole my locked and guarded heart
and I said to myself... it's about to get crazy, crazy, crazy in a good way. crazy, crazy, crazy in a good way. oh, I love the way
you wrecked my life. look into these eyes. i'm crazy, crazy, crazy in a good way. i can hardly believe. there's no way that I'm
asleep. feels like I'm a dreamer holding wonderland's key. this reality, it's insanity, that you could love someone like me. your
love is a labyrinth where I dwell. i'll never know anyone else, who could find me in the darkest part of my garden's heart and
somehow love me still. it's about to get crazy, crazy, crazy in a good way. crazy, crazy, crazy in a good way. oh, I love the wa
y you wrecked my life. look into these eyes. i'm crazy, crazy, crazy in a good way. stranger, stranger. i'm a stranger here. stra
nger, stranger. i'm a stranger here. it's about to get crazy, crazy, crazy in a good way. crazy, crazy, crazy in a good way. oh, i
love the way you wrecked my life. look into these eyes - i'm crazy, crazy, crazy in a good way. __________________________




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(( I really, really hope I didn't fix this too late! I absolutely love this kal, and had a blast making this form and developing her
just this little bit! it's hard to explain how the songs fit her with words, it's easier to just allow you to listen to them and have
your own impression on what they mean - to let the songs and lyrics speak for themselves! I was thinking about having some s
ort of military background too - but I didn't include that as I wasn't sure.... if I somehow manage to win it would be something
that might be added to her! the art is mine, and although it's not the best I worked pretty hard on it and quite like it! the mu
gshot theme of it isn't true - she's never actually gone to jail.... at least not that she's ever told anybody! c: ________



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