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Re: The RP School-Tutors Needed-Learn beyond the basics of R

Postby The Barn Owl » Fri Feb 25, 2011 1:40 pm


Are you still accepting?
Username: The Barn Owl
How long have you been role-playing?: None on here, but I go on some other sites to Role-play.
Favourite type of RP: :D I don't care, really.
Timezone: Eastern
Do you agree to not take the criticism personally and do as your mentor says?: Yes.
What level of role-playing do you consider yourself?: Maybe a five. Not bad but not that good either.
Are there any certain times you cannot be on?: Mostly I can only be on an hour a day. I usually get on around six o' clock.

Do you need a sample? {I've seen some others do some.}
If so, here's one!

Her heart raced as blood pounded through her veins. She ran swiftly over the damp ground, barely feeling her paws touch the ground before lifting up another. She could't think......Her mind held only one thought: Have to escape..... Her tail was bushed out with fear, fear of those snapping jaws behind her. She had to keep running, she knew it. But she didn't know if her paws could carry her any further. She'd been running since dawn, and with every new movement she tensed with pain. Grinding her teeth, she picked her way through a forest of thorns. Salty tears stung at her pale eyes. Her muscles were sore and as she ran onward her legs trembled beneath her.

All of a sudden she skidded to a halt, jerking her head upward. Her fur was streaked with blood and her eyes stretched wide with fear. A stone wall stretched upward before her. They had run her straight into the gorge! Terror made her spin around, ready to face them. Her fur was on end and her claws were unsheathed. Her claws worked impatiently in the gritty soil, as she pricked her ears, every muscle strained with terror. She listened hard. Silence. Was that all? She looked in the blurred distance, straining her ears. Tentatively, she picked her way forward, all her senses alert. All of a sudden she spun around, wildly slashing with her blunt claws, worn by her many hours of running. A set of thorn-sharp teeth lunged at her throat......

"Karma?" Opening her eyes, she let out a sigh of relief. Dawn light was filtering in through the small opening at the entrance of the cave she and her sister had sheltered in last night. Struggling to her paws, she jumped out of their shared nest, smoothing her sleep-ruffled fur with quick strokes of her tongue. "Karma, are you all right?" Her sister, Kami, looked at her anxiously, eyes wide.

"I"m fine," she reassured her, before crossing their small den. She needed some fresh air. Wriggling through the small opening, she squeezed through, before curling her white-tipped tail over her paws. Her ears were laid flat against her head. It was raining but she didn't care. The air was filled with the smell of a wet forest, though she could tell it hand't been raining for long. But already a small puddle was forming before her.

She stared into it. Her lithe form was reflected back at her, her pretty tabby fur starred with beads of rain. She was glad Kami had woken her, but she still remembered the real-life terror she and Kami had felt the night before. She was awake, but in a real-life nightmare.

Hope you guys like it!
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Re: The RP School-Tutors Needed-Learn beyond the basics of R

Postby ƒєαтнєя » Fri Feb 25, 2011 1:42 pm

Hope you guys are still accepting!

Username: FeatherfoomJinx
How long have you been role-playing?: for 4 years
Favourite type of RP: animal, wolf
Timezone: eastern standard time
Do you agree to not take the criticism personally and do as your mentor says?:Of course
What level of role-playing do you consider yourself?: Hmm... 3 and a half out of 5.
Are there any certain times you cannot be on?: 9:00 - 3:30 on Monday-Friday most of the time.
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Re: The RP School-Tutors Needed-Learn beyond the basics of R

Postby riddlestyx » Fri Feb 25, 2011 1:45 pm

The Barn Owl wrote:

Are you still accepting?
Username: The Barn Owl
How long have you been role-playing?: None on here, but I go on some other sites to Role-play.
Favourite type of RP: :D I don't care, really.
Timezone: Eastern
Do you agree to not take the criticism personally and do as your mentor says?: Yes.
What level of role-playing do you consider yourself?: Maybe a five. Not bad but not that good either.
Are there any certain times you cannot be on?: Mostly I can only be on an hour a day. I usually get on around six o' clock.

Do you need a sample? {I've seen some others do some.}
If so, here's one!

Her heart raced as blood pounded through her veins. She ran swiftly over the damp ground, barely feeling her paws touch the ground before lifting up another. She could't think......Her mind held only one thought: Have to escape..... Her tail was bushed out with fear, fear of those snapping jaws behind her. She had to keep running, she knew it. But she didn't know if her paws could carry her any further. She'd been running since dawn, and with every new movement she tensed with pain. Grinding her teeth, she picked her way through a forest of thorns. Salty tears stung at her pale eyes. Her muscles were sore and as she ran onward her legs trembled beneath her.

All of a sudden she skidded to a halt, jerking her head upward. Her fur was streaked with blood and her eyes stretched wide with fear. A stone wall stretched upward before her. They had run her straight into the gorge! Terror made her spin around, ready to face them. Her fur was on end and her claws were unsheathed. Her claws worked impatiently in the gritty soil, as she pricked her ears, every muscle strained with terror. She listened hard. Silence. Was that all? She looked in the blurred distance, straining her ears. Tentatively, she picked her way forward, all her senses alert. All of a sudden she spun around, wildly slashing with her blunt claws, worn by her many hours of running. A set of thorn-sharp teeth lunged at her throat......

"Karma?" Opening her eyes, she let out a sigh of relief. Dawn light was filtering in through the small opening at the entrance of the cave she and her sister had sheltered in last night. Struggling to her paws, she jumped out of their shared nest, smoothing her sleep-ruffled fur with quick strokes of her tongue. "Karma, are you all right?" Her sister, Kami, looked at her anxiously, eyes wide.

"I"m fine," she reassured her, before crossing their small den. She needed some fresh air. Wriggling through the small opening, she squeezed through, before curling her white-tipped tail over her paws. Her ears were laid flat against her head. It was raining but she didn't care. The air was filled with the smell of a wet forest, though she could tell it hand't been raining for long. But already a small puddle was forming before her.

She stared into it. Her lithe form was reflected back at her, her pretty tabby fur starred with beads of rain. She was glad Kami had woken her, but she still remembered the real-life terror she and Kami had felt the night before. She was awake, but in a real-life nightmare.

Hope you guys like it!


You aren't required to put a sample for a student. ^^
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Re: The RP School-3 Classes Open-Learn past the basics of RP

Postby .:OboeLove:. » Fri Feb 25, 2011 1:45 pm

Both accepted! I love how well the school is getting along. You can find your tutor and classmates on the front page.
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Re: The RP School-3 Classes Open-Learn past the basics of RP

Postby riddlestyx » Fri Feb 25, 2011 1:47 pm

Same here, Oboe. I'm glad how it flourished. ^^
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Re: The RP School-2 Classes Open-Learn past the basics of RP

Postby Teacup-old » Fri Feb 25, 2011 1:49 pm

Yeah, it's great we're getting such a rush today. I'm also having trouble keeping up with replying to roleplays. xD
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Re: The RP School-2 Classes Open-Learn past the basics of RP

Postby Caesol » Fri Feb 25, 2011 1:49 pm

C: Thanks for accepting! And a quick question, we will be pm'ed the thread right?
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Re: The RP School-2 Classes Open-Learn past the basics of RP

Postby Teacup-old » Fri Feb 25, 2011 1:51 pm

Or the link will be posted here, Zodiac. :)
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Re: The RP School-2 Classes Open-Learn past the basics of RP

Postby Caesol » Fri Feb 25, 2011 2:01 pm

Great~ Thanks, Teacup. ^^
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Re: The RP School-Tutors Needed-Learn beyond the basics of R

Postby The Barn Owl » Fri Feb 25, 2011 2:04 pm

Cynder- wrote:
The Barn Owl wrote:

Are you still accepting?
Username: The Barn Owl
How long have you been role-playing?: None on here, but I go on some other sites to Role-play.
Favourite type of RP: :D I don't care, really.
Timezone: Eastern
Do you agree to not take the criticism personally and do as your mentor says?: Yes.
What level of role-playing do you consider yourself?: Maybe a five. Not bad but not that good either.
Are there any certain times you cannot be on?: Mostly I can only be on an hour a day. I usually get on around six o' clock.

Do you need a sample? {I've seen some others do some.}
If so, here's one!

Her heart raced as blood pounded through her veins. She ran swiftly over the damp ground, barely feeling her paws touch the ground before lifting up another. She could't think......Her mind held only one thought: Have to escape..... Her tail was bushed out with fear, fear of those snapping jaws behind her. She had to keep running, she knew it. But she didn't know if her paws could carry her any further. She'd been running since dawn, and with every new movement she tensed with pain. Grinding her teeth, she picked her way through a forest of thorns. Salty tears stung at her pale eyes. Her muscles were sore and as she ran onward her legs trembled beneath her.

All of a sudden she skidded to a halt, jerking her head upward. Her fur was streaked with blood and her eyes stretched wide with fear. A stone wall stretched upward before her. They had run her straight into the gorge! Terror made her spin around, ready to face them. Her fur was on end and her claws were unsheathed. Her claws worked impatiently in the gritty soil, as she pricked her ears, every muscle strained with terror. She listened hard. Silence. Was that all? She looked in the blurred distance, straining her ears. Tentatively, she picked her way forward, all her senses alert. All of a sudden she spun around, wildly slashing with her blunt claws, worn by her many hours of running. A set of thorn-sharp teeth lunged at her throat......

"Karma?" Opening her eyes, she let out a sigh of relief. Dawn light was filtering in through the small opening at the entrance of the cave she and her sister had sheltered in last night. Struggling to her paws, she jumped out of their shared nest, smoothing her sleep-ruffled fur with quick strokes of her tongue. "Karma, are you all right?" Her sister, Kami, looked at her anxiously, eyes wide.

"I"m fine," she reassured her, before crossing their small den. She needed some fresh air. Wriggling through the small opening, she squeezed through, before curling her white-tipped tail over her paws. Her ears were laid flat against her head. It was raining but she didn't care. The air was filled with the smell of a wet forest, though she could tell it hand't been raining for long. But already a small puddle was forming before her.

She stared into it. Her lithe form was reflected back at her, her pretty tabby fur starred with beads of rain. She was glad Kami had woken her, but she still remembered the real-life terror she and Kami had felt the night before. She was awake, but in a real-life nightmare.

Hope you guys like it!


You aren't required to put a sample for a student. ^^

Sorry ^^ And, yay! I'm accepted! Thanks!
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