Pinnacle -Lock please-

[DRdoctorlady]

*tosses Madam Sharpy to Ser*
Why thank a you Angel.
And I'll probably write more today or tomorrow or somewhere in the very near future.

[Ser'reth]

*teleports to the near future*

[DRdoctorlady]

Oh sorry I didn't post >.< I was working on a super secret project that I've been developing. I'm going to release it later (as in maybe an hour or so?) today :D
Its my secret weapon in my fight against my friend. Her username is AlexandriaGateau (not her real name by the way, she asked me to help her make up a penname and I gave her that on a whimsy), and we're having a story war. You see, we are both authors and friends, sometimes enemies, and have this semi-friendly rivalry between our two stories, Pinnacle [:D] and Sidewalk Chalk [D:]. We are counting our fans, which I suppose is a bit unfair since my stories been up for longer than hers, but thats not the point. We're counting them by page/chapter/how steady the fans are (We have four main groups: Rabid fans, the obsessed ones that are there to seize every new output (if yer offended, don't be cuz you know I lubs you), Onceinawhile fans, those that come in every once in a while to check on the story, One timers, those that post once then never return, then spammers, who come to advertise their own stories and spam about other things on the story posts).
So far I'm winning (I recently had been having a heated argument with Alex about our fans and she hung up on me) as I have around two chapters (which are, admittedly, longer than hers), four if you count Chapter 0 and Chapter .5, and more fans, and also, in the first four pages (she only has four pages of story and comments so far) had two rabid fans. PLUS, I have a fan from foreign places so I got more points (which is weird since we're not scoring by points) and mine have a sense of humor, seeing as one of hers got offended really easily.
Hmm...
What was I saying?
Oh yes, and if your still paying attention at this point, I'm going to release one of those "choose your own adventure games" based upon meh story. If you don't know already, the choose your own story things are where I post some pieces on whats happening, give you some options to choose from, wait for the first person to choose, write more based on the answer, give more options, so on and so forth.
Wharrglarglbleh.
I'm going to finish touching up the beginning and post it, with a link, for your guys's amusement. I rather enjoy the CYOA stories and hope you guys will like it too though it is a shameless attempt at garnering more peoplees.
*cough and it would help if you duct taped your other chicken smoothie friends to the computer chairs and made them read mah story and comment lovingly COUGH HACK COUGH*

[AngelInWaiting]

Ooh, ooh, can I be a rabid fan? 8D Pleeeeeeease? (I promise I won't go around biting people)

Oh, have you read the CYOA story posted by Solfeggio? It's really aweomse : P If you do one it'll be awesome as well, I know for sure.

[DRdoctorlady]

Actually, I counted you, ser, and abi as mah rabid fans.
(I love you guys :P Your just epic in every sense of the word)

Is that teh wolf love war thingehdoo? Why yes, I did. It was entrancing even if I didn't get to participate :D
And thank you for the confidence.

Now to find some duct tape....
(giggles insanely)

[AngelInWaiting]

Why yes, yes we are : P

And yup that's the one I was talking about. I got to participate a bit so I was happy. ^_^

*hides duct tape* NO. You will win this competition between you and your friend without the use of duct tape. xD

[DRdoctorlady]

NOOO...
Ah...
well.
We made a deal. It involved me delaying my secret weapon release (by about either 30 minute sor an hour) and then making her a button.
IF SHE COMES HERE, SCARE HER OFF

[Trick;]

Honestly, it's a very good plot line, and a very good writing style, but your sentence structure is horrible. (i would know, you write kinda like me. Sorta) And it's not very catching in the beggining, I got rather bored and had to force myself to keep reading. Constructive Critiscm, anyone?

[Trick;]

Oh sorry I didn't post >.< I was working on a super secret project that I've been developing. I'm going to release it later (as in maybe an hour or so?) today
Its my secret weapon in my fight against my friend. Her username is AlexandriaGateau (not her real name by the way, she asked me to help her make up a penname and I gave her that on a whimsy), and we're having a story war. You see, we are both authors and friends, sometimes enemies, and have this semi-friendly rivalry between our two stories, Pinnacle [:D] and Sidewalk Chalk [D:]. We are counting our fans, which I suppose is a bit unfair since my stories been up for longer than hers, but thats not the point. We're counting them by page/chapter/how steady the fans are (We have four main groups: Rabid fans, the obsessed ones that are there to seize every new output (if yer offended, don't be cuz you know I lubs you), Onceinawhile fans, those that come in every once in a while to check on the story, One timers, those that post once then never return, then spammers, who come to advertise their own stories and spam about other things on the story posts).
So far I'm winning (I recently had been having a heated argument with Alex about our fans and she hung up on me) as I have around two chapters (which are, admittedly, longer than hers), four if you count Chapter 0 and Chapter .5, and more fans, and also, in the first four pages (she only has four pages of story and comments so far) had two rabid fans. PLUS, I have a fan from foreign places so I got more points (which is weird since we're not scoring by points) and mine have a sense of humor, seeing as one of hers got offended really easily.
Hmm...
What was I saying?
Oh yes, and if your still paying attention at this point, I'm going to release one of those "choose your own adventure games" based upon meh story. If you don't know already, the choose your own story things are where I post some pieces on whats happening, give you some options to choose from, wait for the first person to choose, write more based on the answer, give more options, so on and so forth.
Wharrglarglbleh.
I'm going to finish touching up the beginning and post it, with a link, for your guys's amusement. I rather enjoy the CYOA stories and hope you guys will like it too though it is a shameless attempt at garnering more peoplees.
*cough and it would help if you duct taped your other chicken smoothie friends to the computer chairs and made them read mah story and comment lovingly COUGH HACK COUGH*

I. Am. Going. To. kill. You. CHALK SHALL PREVAIL!

[DRdoctorlady]

Nah. And if you do a CYOA too I will personally rent your story apart.
TAKE THIS ELSEWHERE MISSY.
And I was going to review your story, but decided against it. Your just delaying the invebitable with this.
BWAHAHAHA