☆αℓρнαƒιяєωⓞℓƒ☆ wrote:I HAVE A QUESTION!
TYPE OF QUESTION:English
YOUR QUESTION:Can someone give me some tips about what to write in a conclusion? I have this essay due in a few hours but I have no idea how to start on my conclusion. Is there anything you could do except for summarizing and rephrasing your stuff? because I am terrible at these D:
"All right, I'm nearing the end of your essay. So what's your point? Why are you telling me all of this? What's the point of reading this?"
With those questions in mind (and imagining that someone other than the teacher is going to read the essay, even though it never happens), I usually add one or two non-summary sentences to my conclusion, and these sentences are intended to give the reader something to think about. They often end up being connections to real life or to any earlier course material that I did not mention in the essay.
You may do something similar in your introduction and then have your conclusion be almost like a continuation of your introduction.
Intro: Here's some background about x (maybe draw on outside knowledge)
Body: I'm going to argue something about x
Conclusion: Here's why my argument about x matters
For example:
In a
Hamlet essay that I wrote, I argued that Hamlet is a dynamic character.
In my intro, I mentioned how children are usually introduced to "dynamic characters" and briefly compared and contrasted that with what I was about to argue. When I grew up, Hamlet usually wasn't given as an example of a dynamic character. Maybe that has changed. It was actually arguable either way haha one of our essay options was to argue that Hamlet was a dynamic or a static character, and I chose dynamic.
In my conclusion, I referred to my body paragraphs and then my thesis again and gave them as reasons why Hamlet usually wasn't given as an example of a dynamic character, despite being a well-known character who (as I argued) was dynamic. Then I commented on change IRL and how change can be good and bad and I... don't know how to explain what I put in my conclusion without actually typing out the ideas/pasting the words lol but I'd like to think that I answered the question of "okay, you told me that Hamlet is a dynamic character. So what?"