The RP School-Tutors Needed-Learn past the basics of RPing

[.:OboeLove:.]

She-Hound and koolkat, you are accepted.

[longlive]

Username:
++hott.cold
Favourite type of role-play:
Semi-lit
How long have you been role-paying?:
About like four years 0.0
Timezone:
ESTRN Standard Timezone
Literacy Example:

Devon looked up into the sky. It was cloudless. The blue was alone. His eyes narrowed to the waterfall. Being on an island, stranded, without knowing how to survive was hard enough. The water fell rhythmically down into the small stream. Devon closed his eyes and sighed. He was the kind of boy who was clueless, clumsy and kinda stupid in the head. He hadn't met anyone else yet on the island, but he hoped he would. He would never survive alone on an island.

Do you agree to be fair and kind, only to help your classes?:
Of course <3
Are there any certain times or days you cannot be on?:
Well when I have a swim meet, sleepover, to busy I won't be on :]

I'm sorry but you are not literate enough to be a tutor.

How come? I'm sorry, I'm just curious.
Did I not write enough?
I could write more.

[riddlestyx]

Possibly the Sample Paragraph wasn't Literate enough? I'm not saying it was bad, just perhaps more descriptive with some more lines. So... Yes.

[.:OboeLove:.]

Possibly the Sample Paragraph wasn't Literate enough? I'm not saying it was bad, just perhaps more descriptive with some more lines. So... Yes.

Yupp. Pretty much. But now I have to get back to real school so yea... I'll post ASAP on the roleplays, Cynder.

[riddlestyx]

M'kay. I have about an hour or so before I go to school. =3

[Verdana]

Woot, excitingness! Can't wait to get my first class (unless I'm confused, and I'm not actually accepted... That'd be embarrassing). Anyway, I'm away this weekend, back Monday.

[koolkatkoolkat123]

Thanks Oboe i'll try my best but i'm often plagued with writers block

[longlive]

Username:
++hott.cold
How long have you been role-playing?:
About four years :]
Favourite type of RP:
Fantasy
Timezone:
ESTRN Time zone
Do you agree to not take the criticism personally and do as your mentor says?:
Yes
What level of role-playing do you consider yourself?:
About a six or seven..maybe a five
Are there any certain times you cannot be on?:
Well when I have a swim meet, sleepover, to busy I won't be on.


I've decided i should have more practice..

[Wifflebee]

YAY!!thanks!

[riddlestyx]

Oboe, could I tutor She-Hound, Koolkat, and Hott.cold? ^^ (If they are accepted.)