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swan by *QUIT*

Artist *QUIT* [gallery]
Time spent 40 minutes
Drawing sessions 2
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swan

Postby *QUIT* » Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:51 pm

this is a W.I.P. because i dont feel comfortable with it yet, there is too much open space, any crit? i REALLy wat helpful/constructive crit!! i feel that this is definatley not ready for intermeidiatat, anyone can tell this. so, please, iwant to be better, i need constructive critism!

P.S. - this is a fail....
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Re: swan

Postby wickedpup » Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:52 pm

No it's great!
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Re: swan

Postby doubleArrows » Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:54 pm

OOUUUU! this is great, definetly ready for intermediate! You're alot better than me, and all you have to do is fill the white space with green, and maybe a few lily pads? anyway, great job, and keep going!
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Re: swan

Postby *QUIT* » Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:55 pm

thank you
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Re: swan

Postby *QUIT* » Thu Feb 24, 2011 3:01 pm

edited, may add a fish or frog later, i need shading on the lilies...
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Re: swan

Postby Chasing Dreams » Sun Mar 20, 2011 10:14 am

I love it!! :D
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Re: swan

Postby BlazingMoon » Sun Mar 20, 2011 10:20 am

Maybe add some swans in the back ground? Any way, Irs looking awsome so far
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Re: swan

Postby *QUIT* » Sun Mar 20, 2011 2:06 pm

thank yoou, i will take your advice to mind
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