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★║ Korvus & Archer Readopt - Collab with DollyDo ║No Posting

Postby Aeryn » Tue Dec 20, 2016 4:22 am

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Introduction; Hello! Welcome to our collab form!
Hooray! So DollyDo will be writing Archer
part and i'll be writing Korvus part, early
congrats to the winners.
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Re: ★║ Korvus & Archer Readopt - Collab with DollyDo ║No Pos

Postby dolly » Sat Dec 24, 2016 4:35 am

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Short Story;
Recommended Song: Take a Break - Hamilton (musical)
"You work to hard! Come on, take a break, dad", I would try and sooth my father
as he begins another shift as his job. It had been hard recently seeing mom had
left dad and me. He had to work more than ever to keep us alive and it was
showing on his face. He looked horrible, I have tried and tried to get him to take
a break but it never worked.
"Archer, you will never understand this but I need to work to keep us going!",
my father would always reply storming out to work. This time would be
different though, I had gained contact with an old school friend, Cora,
who said she would let us stay over for a break. I would have to drive him
there without him knowing though. I would tell him i'm taking him shopping across
town and once we're far enough he couldn't turn us back!
He fell asleep quickly after I started driving which was good and I started
on my root there. He woke up as we entered the development and
began looking around thinking this wasn't the store.
"Where are we!", he yelled out to me almost pushing me over
with a look.
"We're only on a little trip to an old friends place.", I lied
pulling up to her driveway. I got out and got a few things
she asked for and helped my dad get out. I heard what
sounded to be them as I approached the door with
Korvus right behind me, also with gifts in hand.

Archer
Cora
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How does next week sound?
Just fine!
Quick brb dad coming
Okay back, i'll try and get there around 10 am on Monday
Sounds good i'll tell them now
The kids like people fyi so watch out
Okay can't wait to see the new place
See you soon
You too, bye


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★║ Continuation

Postby Aeryn » Sat Dec 24, 2016 4:42 am

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That family is probrably one of the most weird family that Korvus have seen but Archer didn't mind at all, the whole family was together that day and the first kalon to "introduce" ther selfs was! The kids.. They runned into their direction and running in circles around them, Cora was right behind them and she said:
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Cora
Archer
Korvu
Summer
Nevra

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KILLIAN! Stop climbing our guest!
When Cora said that Archer noticed that killian one of the kids was climbing on he's leg. He got Killian and hugged him Killian seems to enjoy he's hug while Korvu doesn't seem a little bit happy.
Sorry everyone it seems that you've already met our little "angels"
I woudn't use the word "angels" for this occasion..
Archer looked angry at he's father.
They're adorable Cora! What's they're name?
Summer came out of the kitchen.
The ones about the kill eachother is Killian and Neal.
While she said that Killian jumped into Neal pretending to fight.
And there's Nimue...
Summer looked around but didn't found Nimue, Cora also noticed that.
You didn't let the back door open did you?
Summer immediatly went check.
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Cora was helping them with the bags but Nevra approachs them holding Nimue that was extremily dirty.
Don't tell me that she did it again..
Yes... it's the 4th time that she brings dirt to my room.
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Cora went to give Nimue a bath while Korvu and Archer were setting theyr stuff on the room. Archer noticed a girl on the next room so he decided to tal to her while Korvu was laying on he's bed with the same grumpy face.
The girl was Ykhar a kalon around the age of Archer they end up talking to eachother and Archer found out that Ykhar and her mother Vivzie had a simular story about parents leaving eachother, Ykhar also told him that in a weeks she would make 1 year staying on the house she said that she was going to make a party to celebrate.
On the next days Ykhar and Archer were plannying to brought Vivzie and Korvu together since they shared so much in common, ih the end it worked! Vivzie and Korvu turned really close on those days.


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★║ Korvus & Archer Readopt - Collab with DollyDo ║No Pos

Postby dolly » Wed Dec 28, 2016 4:55 am

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The sun was warm today. I was out having a picnic with my dad, Vivzie and her daughter, Ykhar. Vivzie suggested at as something to do on the day we all had nothing to do. My father, though hesitantly, accept and here we are. On a hill side. Alone, the middle of no where. Either way if we died by bear attack or not we were having fun and that's what matters.
"How's it going?", I ask not really directed at anyone but Vivzie is the only one that replied.
"Oh well good, thanks you guys for tagging along.", she spoke in her special way eating some grapes we brought along in our basket.
Ykhar stood up and took my paw. She didn't say anything but lead me down a hard to see path leading to somewhere in the, probably bear infested, forest. She took me through leading me to what seemed to be an abandoned home.
I tug at her shoulder pointing to the movement in the trees behind it. She glanced over and saw it.
"Their has never been anyone over here", she whispered standing up to run away. We run as the thing looks at us, frozen trying to run but the, probably bear, thing just stared and stared sending shivers down our spines.

"What's the matter with them?", laughed Vivzie but Korvu was still quiet. "Any ways Ykhar is having her birthday soon as you know, but.... I still haven't found her a proper cake".
"Oh thats nice...", he replied trailing off in his thoughts. She gave him a tell me poke but he didn't respond. She poked again but she didn't want to poke the bear to much. Korvu wasn't much of the friendly talking type but either way they are friends and friends talk to each other.
"So i'm leaving tomorrow.", he stated looking off into nothing most likely thinking of his next sentence.
"Please don't go but if you must you're always welcome here.", Vivzie replied trying to sound strong but Korvu and Archer understood her and Ykhar unlike anyone else in the house. They could talk to each other.
"I have to I don't belong here.", he replied sadly sounding the same way. Though he was a hard egg and wanted to be strong he wanted to stay but he just couldn't. He tried to fight back his emotions and it worked... barley.
"Please stay.", replied Vivzie grabbing his paw staring him right in the eye.

"Kids get out of my yard!", yelled a very vibrantly colored kalon. I took a breath that it wasn't a bear, thank goodness! I slowly stood up and walked over Ykhar following me slowly.
"Who are you?", I ask her extending my paw. She swatted it away looking extremely mad at us for snooping around her home.
"I should be asking you that! What are you doing here!?", she yelled back almost shaking the trees with her voice. I jumped back almost falling onto Ykhar who wasn't pleased either.
"I am Archer and this is my friend Ykhar.", I tell her pointing to us and slowly approaching again. She swats me away again but gentler this time. She took a long breath to calm down.
"I am Iridiana and I am very iridated. See what I did there.", she said in a calmer, softer voice with a little giggle at the end.
"Nice to meet you and glad to see you're not a bear.", I laughed back shaking her hand. "You wanna hear a stor-" I start.
"You don't, trust me.", she blurted out only half joking.
"Honestly that's true.", I laugh back starting to head back home. She shot us a look as if to come back. I turn around to ask her whats was wrong but she didn't seem like the person to put it in words.
"Can I come home with you. It is lonely here.", she said in almost a whisper. I look at Ykhar. She said no way with her eyes but Iridiana just seemed so lonely. We couldn't leave her out here with the bears. I nod and she goes to grab her things. A few minutes pass and she comes out with a few things, nothing much just a few things she cared about. I give her a smile and we head back to where we set up the blanket and basket.

I wake up from the sun shining in my face. He loved large windows but it always woke him up to early but he always fell back asleep. He let out a yawn and rolled back in his position but not before Vivzie came in to check on him.
"Hey Viz.", I tell her in a yawn rolling back into a deep sleep. I wake up much later the house up and busy. I hear Nevra yelling at the kids to leave his basement and Iridiana talking to Summer and Cora. Vivzie was watching TV with Chev and Ykhar was snoring in other room. The one voice he didn't hear was his fathers. Where was he? Must be down stairs or out.
I walk down the stairs to join the crowd and everyone wished me good morning, more or less from Nevra. I walk over to Vivzie seeing she is quite often in touch with him.
"Do you know where my dad is?", I ask her. She knows the answer but doesn't give me a reply. She mumbles something under her breath and keeps looking away. She probably was to distracted right now and I might as well give her some space to reply later.

Ykhars friends pilled around the house filling the dinning room. Her birthday party started about 30 minutes ago and still no cake or cupcakes. Dad hadn't been home all day and it was becoming strikingly clear he had left for home. I thought he had enjoyed his stay but must have not. I still miss him greatly but I can't control him and what he wants. I just wish he could have stayed for her birthday party. The rest of the night is filled with fun and party. As we are cleaning up I hear the door bell ring. It was probably the pizza we ordered for a late night snack. What greeted us at the door was shocking. Korvu holding a large cake with writing on it greeted us.
"I heard you were missing a cake.", he laughed.

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About Korvus --

Postby Aeryn » Wed Jan 18, 2017 12:17 pm

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Hobbies; Korvus usually only works,
but some rare times Archer makes him do other stuff,
including cooking, yea Korvus really likes cooking, when
Archer was little Korvus always made great lunches for
him, Korvus also really likes writing, writing theories,
Koruvs really likes science, so he's always writing
theories about the universe and the stars, at night time
he used to sit and watch the starts with Archer.
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Places; Korvus favorite place to visit is a
small park close to he's house, on the park there's big
trees that touch the sky, there's a small part of the park
that has a great view to the sky and that's where he likes
to watch the stars at night, other then that Korvu doesn't
really leave he's homes with Archer, he just likes feeling
cozy at home.
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Archer; Korvu always loves and will always
have a unconditional love for Archer, he always took
care of him so well, every night he used to tell him a
fairy tale, and every morning he would always do the
breakfeast that Archer asked on the last day, Korvus
would be lost without Archer.

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Likes; Korvus really
the summer, he just likes feeling
warm, and on summer is the
perfect season for long walks, it
doesn't need to be a park, he just
likes walking, Korvus also really
likes pies, especially the cherry pies
he doesn't really care what flavor
it is but he likes any type of pies.

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Dislkes; Korvu simply
hates loud places, especially parties
he's usually very calm and patient
but loud places just get on hes
nervs, it took a time for him to get
used to the loud kids, also Korvus
isn't much of a talker, he doesn't
hates talking but really try to
avoid it, but it depends with who
hes talking.
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About Archer --

Postby dolly » Wed Jan 18, 2017 12:44 pm

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Hobbies; One of Archer's favorite
hobbies is to swin, usually he's fluffy fur doesn't help
him to swin and when he gets out of the water he's
looks like a sponge full of water, Archer is very
friendly so he's always looking to make some friends
whenever he goes, he's also really talkative, he use to
talk to Korvus for hours and hours.. and hours..
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Places; Archer was just like he's father but
a little bit more lazy, he would wake up a few hours late
for everything, so he always ended up staying at home
at he's room there was a big window where he could watch
the big river from the park, it was just so calm and peaceful
that he would just stay there watching the river go by and
the leaves falling in the ground.
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Korvus; Korvus never really did told Archer
qhy he's mother leave but when he grown up he started
to understand and no matter what he woudn't leave
he's father alone, even tho Korvus keeps moving away
from people, Archer always tried to understand him
so he never would feel alone by he's side.

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Likes; Has i said
before Archer likes to watches
the river, he really likes any rivers
in general, Archer really appreciatte
almost every nature things, but he
loves birds, especially the jaybirds
he even has an anatomy sketch book
of birds only, tho he just hates
drawing wings, Archer usually likes
to draw any type of stuff when he's
bored.







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Dislkes; Archer can get
spooked very easily but he biggest
fears is Bears, "they have such
big and weird claws", that's why
he avoids forests, Archer also hates
sweatters, he just says that he
looks ridiculous on any type of
sweatters, Archer is usually very
scared of shadows, sometimes
he even get spooked by he's own
shadow.







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Extra -- you don't have to read tho ;v; --

Postby Aeryn » Wed Jan 18, 2017 12:47 pm

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Why did we choose eachother?

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The hamilton potter trash is here working together again!!
Lol jk anyway, heya how are you? We hope you're having a good day, I'm Aeryn and i'll be doing this silly extra agreed by both of us, well why did we choose eachother? first we're very lonely, lol jk, me and Dolly we met eachother here on cs and our friendship has being growing since then, we talk to eachother every day and when we saw this readopt we were like heck yes let's do this, 2 hours later we were to lazy to actually write something. You can notice that all the kalons on the story are related somehow cuz yes all of our kalons are related, they're a big happy family and were always looking to imrpove this kalon family ^^
Thanks alot for the opportunity <3

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