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Nitro Indigo wrote:You should capitalise your "I"s. (Uppercase i, not lowercase L.)


Ranger of the North wrote:Oo I like it!![]()
Since you don't want the word 'infested', maybe something like 'coated', 'dotted', or 'splattered'? Or something...


inspiration. wrote:Ranger of the North wrote:Oo I like it!![]()
Since you don't want the word 'infested', maybe something like 'coated', 'dotted', or 'splattered'? Or something...
Hello again my writing friend ^^ OH just incase your like 'what?' then i used to be Luminosity. ^^*
I like 'coated' , thank you for your comment!
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