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Queen Louhi| Goddess of Chaos, Darkness, and Evil| Temptuous |Powerful |Royal |Radiant |Cruel |Sinner
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I am Queen Louhi. Louhi is pronounced Loo-hee. My subjects say that I am kind, caring and an amazing Queen. How hilarious. What
idiots they are, aha. I am chaotic. My subjects' minds are all corrupted, dark and simply wrong. But who's fault is that? Well, not
mine of course. They were the ones who stepped foot on my cursed land. It's not my fault not many know I cast a chaos spell
on my lands. But how I love being the Queen of such a power. If I wanted too, I could overthrow all of Furtopia, but I won't do
that. I'll spare them... for now. Many say I'm insane. They aren't wrong. I did start off as a lunatic before I became this monster.
I don't like talking about who I used to be, but she was kind and caring, and never as corrupt or broken as I am now. But you'll
hear more of that later. For now, let's focus on what really matters in life. Current Me! My life is filled with premonition, dark-
ness and chaos. I am anything but nice and caring, so don't expect anything like that from me. I am power hungry, and you might
call me a fool, but do I care? Not one bit! I'm a crazed, power-hungry lunatic and you know it! Well... it's not me... it's... this...
thing inside of me...! Ah no~ Please! No more of these images, Vox!
Suddenly, I am calm, and I feel like I used to when I was a Princess. But this sanity won't last long. Vox will return, and who I
really am will dissipate. No-- Vox please! I'm sorry I couldn't tell you more~!
It's good to be me again. Sometimes that shell of who I used to be really gets on my nerves. I wish I could get rid of her
completely, but I can't. If I did that, her body would die, and I can't have that, now can I? How quaint it would be to lose
such a beautiful host. I only wish she wouldn't cause me such tyranny in keeping me as her vessel. She's gotten everything
she's ever wanted, but is she thankful? No, she isn't. She became queen of her pitiful kingdom because of me. She got the
magic she dreamed of one day learning to use. She got the darkness, chaos, and utter despair she wanted.
And what do I get in return? Nothing. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx[428/500]
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by sillies » Sun Dec 11, 2016 12:27 pm
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Oh, you want to know more about that pathetic princess do you? It pains me to have to tell you. She was quite the run down of a
princess. All she did was sit around, do what few royal duties she had, and dreamt about being queen. Her parents loved her so.
She was highly educated, and grew up in a hands-on environment. When she was little, this boring little princess played with
dolls and had a rather boring history into her middle years. Then drama with suitors and others who loved her began. She hated
the idea of marriage, especially at such a young age. She would often times find herself in what she called her "secret fairy
garden to get away from all her suitor troubles, and often times she wouldn't be found their until she decided to come out of
her disgruntled hiding spot.
Almost every day she would go and hide, talking to who she called "Fairy friends" and they would listen to all her problems and
let her complain to them. They would always listen. She felt that her parent, the King and Queen, didn't. She slowly began to
change, and became more and more needy, despite the riches she was born unto.
Her parents saw this, and sent her to live, for a month, with a peasant child. Their she was taught the value of family, friends,
and what you do have. She learned a lot, and made a few friends, who she began to turn to, and eventually, her secret garden
was left, her only reason for returning was to tend to it. The peasant girl she met was named Odessa Loraine Larue, and they
kept in touch for a while, but then sorrow befell Princess Louhi's weak family. Her brother, only age twelve, was killed, his
chimera attributes being mistaken for a monster.
Even though she mourned, she knew the rule would soon fall to her, and she grew power hungry. But that, at first, never came
to be. Her distant uncle was called in, and he became king. She was enraged, and began thinking of a way to make the thrown
her own. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx [363/500] ║
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Louhi's power isn't her own. She might have been born with the ability to fly, and infect others with venom, but it's me, Vox, who
gave her everything she has. Because of me, she is The Godess of Darkness. Her kingdom is, in the end, mine. But allow me to
explain our power. With my dark magic, she controls her subjects, their dreams, their personalities, their minds. With the
shadows I give her, she creates chaos, turning her subjects minds into mush. With my evil she creates sinners, especially
at the hands of an angry god. A few angry gods and goddesses might I add ;). It's hilarious to see what she does with my magic,
even though it's really me controlling her. But that was her own fault. Enough on that. Her relationships with the Gods and other
higher beings in this land are quite comical, if I do say so myself. xxxxxxxxxxxxx[152/200]
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Cerridwen:
Cerridwen saw purity in Louhi's heart, and said that when Louhi became Queen, she would bestow upon her a power that could re-
shape furtopia into an even better place. She would give Louhi the gift of the Earth, and the ability to reshape it. But then, her little
brother passed, and her Uncle was brought on as the next King, and she became power crazed. The purity in her heart was gone,
and thus, she lost her way and drove herself to insanity. Cerridwen saw this and the newfound darkness in her heart, and didn't
give Louhi the powers she was to be granted. [105/200]
King Beaumont:
The avian ruler respected this chimeric princess for who she was, and smiled upon her when she was requested to meet with
other kingdoms. He held so much sympathy for her when her brother died, but when her Uncle came to power, he too saw
a darkness in her heart. He then no longer wished to even see her, and his respect for her dissipated. [65/200]
Cerise and Onyx:
Although one body, the two loved and cared for Louhi. The three were good friends, and enjoyed going on late night flies
through the skies together. They would talk and enjoy each other's company. The comforted her when her brother died, but
fled when she grew power crazed and nearly insane. Like Cerridwen and King Beaumont, they saw darkness in her heart, and
wished to flee from her wrath, leaving her. [71/200]
Dimitri:
Dimitri, at first, didn't care for the Princess. Though he meant no harm, he would always brush her off like she was nothing,
as he had his own duties to attend to. One day, when asked to tell Louhi's fortune, all he told her was that they would be
closer after much misfortune came upon her. With her brother's death and her Uncle's rise to power, Dimitri showed her a
new light, thinking that, out of his kindness, it would help her. That is where I, Vox, come in. [89/200]
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by sillies » Mon Dec 12, 2016 7:04 am
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The death of my brother coudln't have hurt me or my parents anymore. My parents' stability began to erode, and I was the only one
left to take over. Their broken hearts began to cause them to detiorate mentally, and within months, my parents were no longer
fit for the throne. I knew it was now my responsibility to rule our fair and small land, and I was willing to take it upon myself
in my parent's wake. But before I knew it, tyranny had stepped foot in the castle doors and taken over, stepping in my way. My uncle
is not fit to rule, but he was instated as king anyway.
This pushed me over the edge. I began to grow power hungry, and tried anything I could to knock my uncle from what should have
been my throne. But nothing worked, and so, I ended up driving myself insane. I was locked away in the dungeon, my arms chained
up, my head hung low, body slumped against the wall. All my insanity allowed me to do at the time was giggle maniacally, and
heed to my unstable breath.
In an unknown amount of time, a portal opened before me, and from it emerged Dimitri, the god of [mis]fortune. "Do you want the
throne, Louhi?" he asked, approaching me. My giggling ceased. I drew in my breath and looked up at Dimitri. "I... can help you.
I want to help you. I was never good to you, even if I didn't mean to hurt you. I can make you Queen... It's the least I can do."
I was so power hungry that I agreed, without even hearing what had to be done. After a moment's preperations, Dimitri struck me
with his fire magic, and I cried out. The heat was unbearable. "Quick like a fox, I call upon Vox, give this Princess you power,
and save her from this tower!" Dimitri chanted. Withing a moment of his chant, a dark spirit appeared behind him, looking as
though it were to attack. Through my now teared eyes, I looked to the spirit that stood before me.
"I shall make you Queen," he said grinning wildly. He then entered my body, and my world faded to black.
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I opened my eyes to find myself sitting on the throne, a crown upon my head. "Queen Louhi, your kingdom awaits you," said a
servant. I stood from my throne, the dress I wore falling beyond my ankles. I stepped onto the balcony neareast the throne room,
and looked to see my subjects smiling and cheering. I smiled and waved, but a thought corrupted my mind. "Brainwash them."
Vox said, his voice echoing in my head. "What?" I muttered quietly. "I gave you what you wanted. You can do a few things for
me, can't you?" Vox said, an evil chuckle bouncing around my head. "I gave you powers of a god. You can easily learn to use them."
Vox said.
I nodded and did as I was told. I closed my eyes and focused, and when I opened them, my kingdom had changed. My mindset was
different. I was no longer who I was. I was one with Vox. This kingdom is mine and it always will be! The darkness that had
momentarily left my heart has returned, but this time, it feels amazing to have it their.
"My reign of darkness will never, ever end! You will all obey me, and live with the chaos I wreak on my kingdom and live in days
of fear!" I shouted, flapping my powerful wings as I rose off the ground, my maniacal laughter ringing out.
The kingdom was finally mine, and I would never let it go.
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