@ ᴅ ᴇ s ᴛ ɪ ᴇ ʟ ;; love the art!! <3
@_Alex_ ;; gl!
Now, keep in mind I'm no pro of any kind (and in fact I give major props to adopt artists 'cause I gave it a shot for larks and holy heck, not only is designing difficult but coming up with cool, unique ideas in the first place is @__@) so take anything I say with a grain of salt, and for what it is... a simple opinion, or musing on my part haha:
-it strikes me as sorta odd that the inside of the ear would cut off so abruptly as to mesh perfectly with the colouring outside the ear. Not impossible, just odd!
-the tail shine is an interesting concept, though I'm not sure how I feel about the positioning of the topmost shine. The other ones are nestled nicely - they could almost be interpreted as connecting the different 'layers' of the tail, in a way, whereas the topmost one is sorta just. there? if ya get what I mean~ I'm not sure what the tail would look like concerning balance and negative space etc. with the shine removed but for the time being I'm 'eh' about it O: It's hard to picture in a functional sense, too. (as in, 'huh, how would I go about drawing this if someone commissioned me to draw this kal??') idk [size=85]/throws arms in the air[/size]
-loves the green swirls pattern. Very pretty!! Gives off a classy vibe.
-the gold starry pattern is cool too (I'm biased and an ABSOLUTE sucker for things with space-ish or star-ish designs on em =w=') but I'm not sold on its use in the belly area. I'm rather curious to see how the kal would look if that were a solid green like the paws, or the same base colour as the body /shrug
-love the floofy cloud-y look of the hair & tail.
Anyway, overall it looks like a pretty kal to me! -thumbs up-
@Mintiature Goodluck with the YCH!
Axel is very quiet, he tends to always keep to himself. Growing up in a small town, he was always with his father working on the dock in the near by harbor. So as a kit he had a soft spot for the smell of the sea, the breeze in his soft silky fur, and the constant buzz of the town's fish market. As he aged, he took over his already elderly father's place at the port. Working every day, he was in charge of loading the ships with trade materials. He enjoys the sea, ships and sailing as he always spent his time around ships he had always wanted to sail far away. He tends to enjoy reading history books, and also curl up in plush blankets. He never really made many friends let alone romantic relationships because he always doubted himself and thought he would never be good enough for anyone. He always got himself busy with work around the harbor and with the loading of ships just to keep his mind of off dwelling on the constant doubting.
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