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Cant take no more by valerie123

Artist valerie123 [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 10 minutes
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Cant take no more

Postby valerie123 » Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:05 pm

I cant take no more.
Not knowing where to go,
What to do.
All I loved was you.

I cant take no more.
I watch from afar,
As you run in the grass,
As you play with your friends,
And i think,
That we will never be.

The day finally comes,
Where I can speak the truth,
Say what I feel,
Show you my love.
But as the day goes on,
Fate finds a way of changing that
And i am left alone.

I go home sad,
Not knowing what would have being,
If I did tell you.
How I feel,
Who I am,
What I love.

Would things have being different?
Would I be happier?
Or would my heart be more depressed than now?
So many questions,
That I cant take no more.

By: me :roll:
ya i kinda got into the mood after i drew this..... i had a pretty bad valentines day today so i thought drawing would make me feel better.. and it actually did :) but i didnt think the drawing really explained much so i did a poem to go with it..... so ya the poem is about me kinda and wat i kinda go through sometimes :P please comments are allowed for the drawing or the poem 2 if u liked it :D
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Re: Cant take no more

Postby BlueKestrel » Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:09 pm

i love the drawin and the poem is AMAZING!!!!!!! thats pretty much how i feel (the poem i mean...)
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Re: Cant take no more

Postby valerie123 » Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:11 pm

-owl- wrote:i love the drawin and the poem is AMAZING!!!!!!! thats pretty much how i feel (the poem i mean...)

thank u :)
and ya i dont like the feeling either :(
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Re: Cant take no more

Postby Val Knits! » Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:01 pm

love the poem and the pic.... my valentines day sucks too so hey! ur not alone...... seriously. :cry:
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Re: Cant take no more

Postby julie36962 » Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:13 pm

This is amazing! The poem speaks the truth and the picture adds more emotion!! I love this. You did great! :clap: :clap: :clap: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup:
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Re: Cant take no more

Postby valerie123 » Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:17 pm

Drama_Queen wrote:love the poem and the pic.... my valentines day sucks too so hey! ur not alone...... seriously. :cry:

i hear ya.... but hey some days are better than others right :)


julie36962 wrote:This is amazing! The poem speaks the truth and the picture adds more emotion!! I love this. You did great! :clap: :clap: :clap: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup:

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Re: Cant take no more

Postby Ankylo. » Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:30 pm

great drawing!
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Re: Cant take no more

Postby valerie123 » Wed Feb 16, 2011 11:00 am

kai long wrote:wonderful picture! i luv it! i had a bad v-day too. i mean, today was the day that i planned to tell the the guy that i like<3 (nick(not the admin)) that i like him and i think he likes me too. but he walked home so i didn't get to tell him........ :( :cry: :( .....


SAME THING HAPPENED 2 ME!!! :what: i wanted to find out if this kid that i like likes me back but i got really sick and left home early :(
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Re: Cant take no more

Postby Ankylo. » Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:54 am

i hope everyone has a great V-Day next year! :D
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Re: Cant take no more

Postby valerie123 » Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:11 pm

kai long wrote:really! oh! im so sorry! whats your crushes name mine's is nick!

Danny. i have 2 nicks in my class :lol:
theres also like 5 Dannys :lol: but i only like 1 :P
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