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by if found » Tue Oct 25, 2016 6:02 am
rip
never completed a fanfic.
found | she/her | gay | pisces | artist-------------------------------------just your friendly person over here and
there's not much else to it. i write som
e as well as pretend to be a food conno
isseur, devouring ramen passionately. h
uge homestuck fan, obviously, but i'm i
nto stranger things, doctor who, camp
camp, and rwby. feel free to pm me. :3-------------------------------------playlist | eridan | buddy | soll | link | link
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by sparrow; » Tue Oct 25, 2016 6:22 am
Well, I was wrong. Do you want any prompts or anything?

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by DeMaizu » Tue Oct 25, 2016 6:57 am
I . . . don't know how to describe it. >_< In Cards, I want to get to the end of the chapter (with Lyn and Pax in their new dorm room) so I can switch the perspective and have Kaolin write a letter, but I introduced this new character, and I don't know how to end the chapter with her showing up.
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by katomorakwarrior » Tue Oct 25, 2016 7:03 am
Hm. Could you imagine the situation without this new character? I'm not sure if it would help or not, but I might as well mention it.
If you could picture the chapter ending without her, maybe you could find a more subtle way to introduce her. (I don't know how important she is or whether you've already planned an entrance for her, so maybe this won't work at all.)
Otherwise, I'd probably just write alternate endings until one turned up that I liked and/or I ran out of muse...-_-
At any rate, good luck.
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