❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

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What should "C"'s name be? Check second post for who "C" is.

Winnow
11
31%
Nazareth
6
17%
Aaron
10
28%
Adir
7
19%
Achilles
1
3%
Soter
1
3%
 
Total votes : 36

Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Oct 13, 2016 12:47 pm

Shanks wrote:I think that Person A should be female and she is rescuing her little brother, aka Person B. I feel like Person C and D should both be male and had personal relationships in the past as in they used to be friends or something and grew up differently because of some kind of event or something.

I also feel like the names should not be too simple or too complicated.

I like that idea~!
Persons C and D could even be brothers, maybe?
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby sparrow; » Thu Oct 13, 2016 12:50 pm

I feel like D should be female and C should be male, personally. It means that the MCs have balanced genders.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Thu Oct 13, 2016 1:58 pm

I like the idea of C and D being siblings. Maybe even twins? Or is that too much? I also agree with A 'rescuing' her younger brother, B."
As for personality, I feel five people trying to figure it out could be kinda tricky. Maybe everyone can suggest something they like, dislike, and an important event in their past and the results of that, and we work on it from there.
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A
Likes: the feel of rain on her hair.
Dislikes: hot, dry weather.
Important event: she nearly drowned when she was a kid, and is afraid of large bodies of water.

B.
Likes: running.
Dislikes: the dark.
Important event: His pet dog died? Idk. XD

Not sure for C and D, but we can work on that.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Oct 13, 2016 3:25 pm

I think C and D being twins might be a bit much XD But I don't care if they are; what does everyone else think?

I think we all know by now that A is determined if nothing else cx
B sounds innocent and young, to me~

That seems like a cool idea, though; but I can't think of anything to add on XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby avianaelizabeth » Thu Oct 13, 2016 5:28 pm

I agree that C and D being twins would be a bit much. So have you guys decided on the MCs genders? Sorry that I'm no help at all.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Oct 13, 2016 5:46 pm

avianaelizabeth wrote:I agree that C and D being twins would be a bit much. So have you guys decided on the MCs genders? Sorry that I'm no help at all.

I think A is a girl, B is her little brother, and C and D are still undetermined c:
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby avianaelizabeth » Thu Oct 13, 2016 6:18 pm

Ranger of the North wrote:
avianaelizabeth wrote:I agree that C and D being twins would be a bit much. So have you guys decided on the MCs genders? Sorry that I'm no help at all.

I think A is a girl, B is her little brother, and C and D are still undetermined c:


Okay, got it. i think C and D should be male and female, personally.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby gankwizard » Fri Oct 14, 2016 2:32 pm

I know people want it balanced but I feel it would be a better option for C and D to be both male because I feel like that could make a good addition to the story.

For example, C and D are both male and one is a man who boasts, and the other, a man who uses guerilla tactics. Ya know? I just feel like it would work out more. Idk
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Oct 16, 2016 9:08 am

Guys! I was waking up this morning and a title idea popped into my head! :D What do you guys think of it?
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby sparrow; » Sun Oct 16, 2016 9:15 am

Ooh, I like it! Also, I agree with pretty much all of these personality things so far. Shall I add everything to the front page?
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