❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

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What should "C"'s name be? Check second post for who "C" is.

Winnow
11
31%
Nazareth
6
17%
Aaron
10
28%
Adir
7
19%
Achilles
1
3%
Soter
1
3%
 
Total votes : 36

Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby sparrow; » Wed Oct 12, 2016 6:12 am

Yep, we're going with this idea. Should we write from the perspective of both kids, just so we understand that the "bad" guys are good, or keep that a secret for a while?
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Wed Oct 12, 2016 7:23 am

I think we should keep it a secret for a while. It's more fun that way. :D
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Oct 12, 2016 11:35 am

*shakes in head confusion*
*laughs* Okay, so let me get this straight:

There's a city where people are being held captive. They think they're being kept safe. The villains, who the citizens think are their rescuers, are keeping them locked in the city, right? And the good guys, who the citizens think are villains, are outside and breaking the citizens out a few at a time, right? And the MC(s) are a few kids who have just recently been kidnapped/rescued by the goodies, who they think are bad... Right?

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby sparrow; » Wed Oct 12, 2016 12:03 pm

Yep, pretty much. Except one of the kids was kidnapped, and the other is trying to rescue their sibling (who was kidnapped)
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Oct 12, 2016 12:17 pm

sparrow ♫ wrote:Yep, pretty much. Except one of the kids was kidnapped, and the other is trying to rescue their sibling (who was kidnapped)

Cool
*sigh of relief*
I get it now XD

So PoV01 has been kidnapped, and PoV02 is trying to rescue PoV01 'cause they're siblings?
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby sparrow; » Wed Oct 12, 2016 7:18 pm

Yep! But there's also a "hero" who's coming to "save" them.

Edit; Poll Question:
Should the person who's trying to take the kids back and pretending to save them be traveling with the second kid? Sorry if that sentence was confusing! We really need to come up with names...
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Wed Oct 12, 2016 8:09 pm

For now, let's say MC = A, MC's sibling = B, Guy taking them back = C, Guy helping them escape = D
So the MC is a female right? I'm gonna chuck some names out there.

Amber
Brooke
Aqua
Emerald

If everyone suggest a few names and then we have a poll to see which one is the most popular or something
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Oct 13, 2016 12:01 pm

Conleth (means 'chaste fire' in Gaelic)
Keahi (means 'the fire' in Hawaiian)
Azar (means 'fire' in Persian)
Ignis? (means 'fire' in Latin)
Fortem (means 'brave' in Latin)
Ari (means 'brave' in Armenian)
Basil (means 'brave', 'valiant', in Arabic)

sorry, I like coming up with names for things XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby Aliria » Thu Oct 13, 2016 12:31 pm

before naming the characters, we should probably figure out their genders. I assume one of the MC's will be male and one will be female, but we should decide which. And decide what they look like, and get at least a vague idea of their personalities.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ Collab Story Planning

Postby gankwizard » Thu Oct 13, 2016 12:35 pm

I think that Person A should be female and she is rescuing her little brother, aka Person B. I feel like Person C and D should both be male and had personal relationships in the past as in they used to be friends or something and grew up differently because of some kind of event or something.

I also feel like the names should not be too simple or too complicated.
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