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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Erille » Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:23 pm

Fricsini Annemaria Johansen came from England, where stories of the supernatural abound.

She moved to New York with her mother in the summer of 1871 and was enrolled instantly into the only Catholic school in town. She had all her classes with the same girl who's name, Fricsini learned, was Jordan Smith. Her and Jordan became great friends and within a few weeks, Jordan had brought her to her favorite spot behind the school in the woods. Jordan said wolves and demons and even witches still roamed the woods and Fricsini has gasped.

The next day at school, Jordan wasn't there. Their religion teacher was talking about the Devil and was getting deep into her lecture. "The Devil is the only cause of evil. God would never hurt His own children like you all. The Devil sends his evil out into the world as demons, werewolves, vampires and witches. God hates these creatures since the Devil, not God, created them. If you ever wish to become a vampire, werewolf or witch, you shall surely go to Hell." She made the kids write what she was saying down in their notebooks.
Once she was down copying the words down, she shuddered and wandered if the Devil had gotten Jordan sick.

The next day, Fricsini skipped school without her mother's permission to go to the forest and went to the spot her and Jordan always went to. It was eerily quiet and the normal wolf howls were gone. Fricsini laid against a rock and out of habit, recited a prayer like they would be doing right now in school. Then for fun, she said it backwards, liking the way it sounded.
She got excited and said it three more times. She clicked her heels but stopped suddenly.

She had heard a noise. She sat up, and locked around the clearing. Leaves in the background rustled. There was no wind. She stood up. "Who's there?" She asked the air. She then yelled it. Something giggled in the trees. a shadow emerged in the shape of a wolf and Fricsini screamed. She slowly backed up, screaming, trying to get away quietly, but something in her brain not letting her do it. The wolf let out a humanoid laugh and then charged.

Fricsini felt the cold, hardness of claws then nothing. She saw herself being turn to shreds without pain. She watched and listened until her brain listened to her. The wolf backed off and Fricsini's shell-like body finally let go. The teacher and kids ran out of the school too late. Jordan ran to her friend and looked off into the forest, but saw nothing. She cried and when the kids and teachers realized what had happened, they left Jordan with the body.
She stopped crying abruptly when she realized they left and smiled. "Fricsini Annemaria Johansen, silly girl. Didn't they teach you don't make friends with the nice ones. They're always devils later on." As she said the words, the wolf returned and nodded.
Jordan smiled and walked toward the wolf, going down until she was at it's level and pet it's hard, fur. "Good boy."
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Devilena123 » Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:12 pm

OK everyone this is a true story so yea,
Leave Or Die
There was this family that lived in Oklahoma and they wanted to buy a new house,
So they looked around for one,
They found this little old white house,
So they went around to look at the backyard,
And on the wall it was in red paint or liquid,
And it said Leave Or Die,
So the parents decided to buy it,
Because they thought that it was just a prank,
So they bought the house,
And when the woman was unpacking some boxes in the kitchen,
She heard footsteps upstairs,
And she didn't want to go look because it could have sneaked in so she ignored it,
It kept going up and down the stairs,
And their pet dog Pingo he was only a toy chihuahua,
He went off when he heard something was coming closer,
And the family felt a cold wind come through,
They still thought nothing was going on... until...
Their precious dog Pingo dropped to the floor,
He looked up at his owners and had his last breath,
So the family couldn't bare it so they called a vet and some paranormal workers,
They came in with all their gear,
And they used their sound detector,
Everyone sat in silence in the living room,
They heard something from the detector,
"Sarah" the voice whispered,
"Sarah"
So the family knew this was no joke anymore,
The family let the workers do there job,
And the last thing they saw of the ghost was the writing on her dress,
Leave Or Die.

True story O.O
If you want to see more of these stories,
If you have Foxtel,
On animal planet there is a show called The Haunted,
It's really sad though cause some animals get killed,
So make sure you don't do anything to harm or distress ghosts,
Cause they are real....
And also the story in front of mine,
:O Yea i'm not going to make friends with the nice ones now O.O
I solemnly swear that I am up to no good.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby starfighter123 » Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:48 pm

devilena123 wrote:OK everyone this is a true story so yea,
Leave Or Die
There was this family that lived in Oklahoma and they wanted to buy a new house,
So they looked around for one,
They found this little old white house,
So they went around to look at the backyard,
And on the wall it was in red paint or liquid,
And it said Leave Or Die,
So the parents decided to buy it,
Because they thought that it was just a prank,
So they bought the house,
And when the woman was unpacking some boxes in the kitchen,
She heard footsteps upstairs,
And she didn't want to go look because it could have sneaked in so she ignored it,
It kept going up and down the stairs,
And their pet dog Pingo he was only a toy chihuahua,
He went off when he heard something was coming closer,
And the family felt a cold wind come through,
They still thought nothing was going on... until...
Their precious dog Pingo dropped to the floor,
He looked up at his owners and had his last breath,
So the family couldn't bare it so they called a vet and some paranormal workers,
They came in with all their gear,
And they used their sound detector,
Everyone sat in silence in the living room,
They heard something from the detector,
"Sarah" the voice whispered,
"Sarah"
So the family knew this was no joke anymore,
The family let the workers do there job,
And the last thing they saw of the ghost was the writing on her dress,
Leave Or Die.

True story O.O
If you want to see more of these stories,
If you have Foxtel,
On animal planet there is a show called The Haunted,
It's really sad though cause some animals get killed,
So make sure you don't do anything to harm or distress ghosts,
Cause they are real....
And also the story in front of mine,
:O Yea i'm not going to make friends with the nice ones now O.O


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Devilena123 » Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:16 pm

starfighter123 wrote:
devilena123 wrote:OK everyone this is a true story so yea,
Leave Or Die
There was this family that lived in Oklahoma and they wanted to buy a new house,
So they looked around for one,
They found this little old white house,
So they went around to look at the backyard,
And on the wall it was in red paint or liquid,
And it said Leave Or Die,
So the parents decided to buy it,
Because they thought that it was just a prank,
So they bought the house,
And when the woman was unpacking some boxes in the kitchen,
She heard footsteps upstairs,
And she didn't want to go look because it could have sneaked in so she ignored it,
It kept going up and down the stairs,
And their pet dog Pingo he was only a toy chihuahua,
He went off when he heard something was coming closer,
And the family felt a cold wind come through,
They still thought nothing was going on... until...
Their precious dog Pingo dropped to the floor,
He looked up at his owners and had his last breath,
So the family couldn't bare it so they called a vet and some paranormal workers,
They came in with all their gear,
And they used their sound detector,
Everyone sat in silence in the living room,
They heard something from the detector,
"Sarah" the voice whispered,
"Sarah"
So the family knew this was no joke anymore,
The family let the workers do there job,
And the last thing they saw of the ghost was the writing on her dress,
Leave Or Die.

True story O.O
If you want to see more of these stories,
If you have Foxtel,
On animal planet there is a show called The Haunted,
It's really sad though cause some animals get killed,
So make sure you don't do anything to harm or distress ghosts,
Cause they are real....
And also the story in front of mine,
:O Yea i'm not going to make friends with the nice ones now O.O


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Thanks
Sadly it's real ;( poor Pingo
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby starfighter123 » Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:30 pm

I know poor pingo

I thought I saw a ghost but I was tired

I was in my bed and I saw a big black shadow going past and a outline but it was eyes cuz I was tired
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Devilena123 » Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:33 pm

:O :O :O :O
When ghosts are around who you gonna call?
TOAST BUSTERS!
No, No, NO!
IT'S GHOST BUSTERS
Ugh, everybody take five :D
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Mon Feb 14, 2011 1:01 am

((Sorry I havent posted in a while))
A Haunting
I turned to my grandmother. "Who?" I asked looking at the.....Argoth as grandma Emma calls it. She just turned to us and grabbed our arms to lead us out of the museum. We dropped Jared off and then me at my house. I walked down our long driveway and into our little log cabin. My parents greeted me and then I went to play PS3. But when I started to play I heard something breathing on my neck. I turned fast around and saw no one. I just shrugged and kept playing, until I swore I saw something move on the kitchen table. I paused the game and went to look at what might have caused it to move...nothing. Until I examined the floor, blood. My eyes widened and I noticed the blood was forming a path into...lets see...my parents room. I followed it and looked into my parents room, I didnt notice however the knife on the bed. I flipped up the covers and both of their heads were turned backwards and blood was piercing out of their eyes, nose, etc. I screamed (like a boy of course) and backed away from the horrific scene. Until when I got out something was grabbing my shoulder, I turned and saw some.....man standing there. We stared at eachother for a few seconds and then he pulled out a knife, pulled his arm ready and...... The man watched me fall, knife in my face. And spoke some evil words, the last I heard.
"Do you beleive now? Because although I have been satisfied in my old form. In this form I need one last......."


He trailed off and I died.

Note from the Author (me): Now this isnt my best story ever but It wasnt that fun to write, I dont like the concept of ghost stories, I like writing about stories about things that might just be out there.(Who knows maybe there is an Argoth. Maybe he's hiding under a shadow of a different type of Bigfoot.) In my next story it will be a creature that interestes me in so many different ways, cant wait for you to read it.~Imperial Epsilon
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby starfighter123 » Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:48 am

A wolf to KILL

I was in my woods, with my friend when we saw.....A big black wolf walking past slowly with its red eyes shimmering at us I told my friend to stay calm and I would get my rope round its neck and get it under control.my friend stood their calmly waiting for me to put the rope on the wolf As I approached it.....it swung its head round and bit my hand there was blood all over the wolfs face my hand was cut all over with large teeth marks they did not look like wolf teeth at all my friend screamed like mad she did not know that the wolf was behind her i shouted to her but it was to late the wolf mauled her all what was left was bones all the clothes had been eaten and the blood had been drank I tried to stay calm and not cry but it was to late I burst out crying the wolf looked at me with his big blood red eyes in a evil way and ran off.I ran off to my house and shouted on my mum there was no reply the wolf was standing over her dead body my dad was in the corner I ran to him just missing the wolf the phone was near I called 999 "hello what do you need"please get police officers here now there is a wolf trying to kill me and my dad "dont be silly little girl"IT HAS KILLED MY MUM AND BEST FRIEND HOW AM I BEING SILLY?!"ok you sound serious the police are on their way" ok bye.The police arrived and shot the wolf dead and took it away I saw a shiny egg looking object on the floor I picked it up and put it in my pocket.It hatched 3 days later into the same wolf I ran down the stairs and got my dads shotgun and shot it there was the egg lying there i shot it too and there was no more of they so called "wolves" in my life

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby kadoodlebird » Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:18 am

*Moon <3* wrote:And you don't even have to rewrite them, just copy and paste! Yeah for technology!

You're only supposed to post your OWN work, not just copying and pasting things. -.-'''
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Lady B » Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:22 pm

It doesn't say that in the rules...
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