War of Kings

[anxious ghost]

Peeps! Chapter four is FINALLY finished!!! I'll probably go back and change some things here and there at some point, but for now, the dreaded chapter is done! Now on to chapter five, which should be much better. *throws confetti*

If anyone has any constructive criticism, found a typo, or anything else, feel free to tell me.

[Ranger of the North]

Plz
don't kill Tanta or Mack

[anxious ghost]

Plz
don't kill Tanta or Mack

..... I can't make any promises... I've already decided who dies...

[Ranger of the North]

Plz
don't kill Tanta or Mack

..... I can't make any promises... I've already decided who dies...

@.@
oh no

[sparrow;]

Just read all that's been posted. Octavia is certainly an... interesting character (and she's amazing I love her <3). I'm slightly confused about what's happening right now.

[anxious ghost]

@free I'm confused about what's happening right now, lol. I can answer any questions though.
This is all like a rough draft, really; I'll go through and rewrite things once I'm finished.
I'm working on this chapter right now, so more should be up soon! And by the way, don't get too attached to Octavia........

[anxious ghost]

"But when facts are scarce, we replace them with hope." - Kritanta. Please note that this is Captain Kritanta, not Prince Kritanta. Same person, different attitudes and views o life.

[sparrow;]

*gasp* So dramatic. Does Octavia have black wings, if she's a demon? And how do the ranks work, including angel, fallen angel and everything else?

[anxious ghost]

No, Octavia doesn't have wings. She's higher than the demons, and really, no one wants Octavia to be able to fly XD but she wasn't ever an angel, and you only have wings if you're an angel/were an angel.
Ok, the ranks: Nyn is highest. The Queen. Ryn is second-in-command. Lyn is the the back up for Ryn and also just the lesser two Gods. Then it's the two honorary "Gods" which are just VERY high ranking Angels. Angels are the Gods' army. Then there's the Council, which are the peoples that keep the Royals in line. Then there are the Royals, which are, obviously, royal, lol. Then dukes/duchesses. Civilian ranks are after that and just basic, like we had in medieval times.
Fallen Angels are ones that were kicked out of Saer's army. There's no redemption, as you don't get kicked out for little things. Not all Fallen Angels are Demons though. Demons didn't even exist until Jrad broke off. The Demons are her army. They aren't even ranked at all, since they're enemies.
Hopefully that makes sense? If not, let me know and I'll try again lol.
I will be rewriting at some point, so things should make sense eventually.

[sparrow;]

Okay, that makes sense. Thanks!