--Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby hxneystorm » Mon Sep 12, 2016 2:15 pm

    woah, it's been a while since this thread has popped up! oh man, I've missed reading this so much.
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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby Piefan » Mon Sep 12, 2016 2:54 pm

Glad to hear it! There was definitely a decline in quality in the last post, but that's because I hadn't planned it to be the actual finale. There was meant to be an epilogue with them seeing Arianna off, and the proposed party.
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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby hxneystorm » Mon Sep 12, 2016 4:36 pm

    Oh, okay. I'd love to see something else happen with this, once I'm able to reread the entire thing. If you need help I'll be glad to help! I don't want to see this go dead ;w;
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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby Piefan » Tue Sep 13, 2016 2:48 am

Thanks! If you're able and willing, I'd appreciate a little advertisement where help goes. I'll try and work on writing/keeping up a semi-decent schedule in future.

My current plans for the sequel (turn away if you don't want spoilers; transparent text)
One year ago, Kris came to Thalia's Earth, seeking destruction. Arianna, with plenty aid, saved it. But she had her own agenda behind this, and with the revelation that saving each world isn't very efficient, she's joined the person she once fought so vehemently against.

Without the aid of their primary guide, Thalia and her companions are forced to find the Artifact Sextet - six objects containing an immense power.

Might be changed; it kind of has religious undertones with the Six Spirits and all. They were supposed to be folkloric stuff, but mistakes were made; now they sound like gods.
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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby hxneystorm » Tue Sep 13, 2016 9:14 am

    Wow! That sounds really cool! I'd love to read that!
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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby 20lait1 » Tue Sep 13, 2016 11:39 am

Same here! I'd love to see more of this, too.
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Re: --Planet, not a Diary! {Satire}

Postby PrizmPaws » Wed Oct 05, 2016 1:05 pm

Am I too late? Because I want to see a sequel!
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