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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby kasoogi » Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:05 pm

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3.one day a young women,lets call her vivica had a wonderful wedding.after the wedding they played hide and seek because it was one of the families silly traditions.well vivica lived at her parents scary house and you couldnt doubt that there were many unknown places in the house.well the bride decided to find a good hiding spot where no one would find her.she found a hidden door in the attic and opened it up.inside was a large treasure chest.vivica looked around to see if anyone was watching her,there wasnt.she quickly unlocked the tresure chest with the lock she found and closed it she was holding it up so it wouldnt close but suddenly she lost her grip and let go.she tried getting out but there was no way.finally an hour later no one found her so they thought she flaked and they went home.the women died of starvation and not enough air 2 days later.20 years later her sister she never met had a party at the same house.since it was a tradition they played hide and seek.she found the same door and opened it.inside was a treasure chest.thinking it was the best hiding place ever she opened it up and jumped in without looking.suddenly she felt moldy and boney.she looked down and saw what was left of her sister in the chest.she ran out but she hit the chest door and it closed in on her.neither were ever seen!

I have 3 books,and Ill re-write one story because its ALMOST EXACTLY like the 3rd story/The books are called (i dont fully know its at school)Scary Stories to tell in the dark,Scary Stories to chill your bones,MORE Scary Stories To Chill Your Bones *if you google one of these book names and also type Alvin Schwartz you can read them!*
(I cant find the site right now and i don't have my books so ill write up something like it)

Once there was this young women getting married,after the wedding,they played games.They even played old children games! When they got to hide and seek,the bride thought she had the best idea to hide ever!She had remembered a big trunk her grandfather left in the attic."No one would ever find me here!" she thought.She hurried to get in,but then "BOOM" inside she fell unconscious.The trunk lid had cracked her on the head and locked.She banged and screamed to be let out,but no one knew how long she had been screaming or crying for help.People started looking for her.After 2 days her brand-new-brides-groom had given her up for lost.More than 100 years later,a Maid who had worked in that same place lost something."Hmm,Maybe it's in here," she thought.
"AAHH!" And there lay the bride in her wedding dress,Of course she was just a skeleton by that time.


THOSE ARE MY FAVORITE STORIES EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR I only have one of the books, but I've read all of them! I love the drawings ^.^
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Jinx. » Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:13 pm

This is my version of Click Click Slide. Its called Clip Clop, Clip Clop…

I live on a really quiet street. Almost no-one lives here. Only me and my family, my friend and her family and some elderly people I don’t talk to often. No one lives here because of the legend that a skeleton ghost highwayman haunts the streets at 6:00pm every night. He kills anyone who is out at six pm. It doesn’t matter if you’re taking a walk, going for a jog or looking out the window, he will kill you. This skeleton ghost wears all black clothes, a black cape and rides a huge black horse. So that’s why everyone locks up and hides until the morning. Anyway, one day Jenny (my friend) was over at my house. She said that she had to be back home by 5:45. So we played Wii and PlayStation for a while before it started getting dark. “I should head home” Said Jenny. “OK,” I agreed, “I’ll come with you”. It was risky but she was my friend and she would do the same for me. “ HEY MUM, IM WALKING JENNY HOME” I yelled. “Alright but hurry home” she answered and so we left. On the way back Jenny saw a rosebush and decided to pick some roses for her boyfriend. She had a large handful when I said, “Ok, seriously? I think that’s enough Jenny”. “Yeah” she agreed and we kept walking. Soon after I heard a soft clip clop, clip clop of horse’s hooves. I turned around and said, “Who’s there?”. Jenny came to me and said, “Your imagining things, We should keep moving”. So we started moving when I heard it again, only much louder. Clip clop, clip clop. “Lets run” Jenny said and we ran all the way back to her house with the sounds of hooves behind us. When we reached the front door of Jenny’s house and hammered on the door. “LET US IN, LET US IN!” we cried as we bashed on the door. The hooves were getting so loud. CLIP CLOP, CLIP CLOP! “No, I cant let you in” Jenny’s mum said through the door. Suddenly I realised that there was silence. We turned to see a big black horse with a skinny man dressed in black mounted on the back of the horse. The man removed his hood and revealed the gleam of a white skull under it. He removed a knife from his teeth and shot off the horse. The next thing I knew was that Jenny was dead on the floor. I BOLTED. Seriously bolted. I was out of there faster that a motorbike. I sprinted all the way home and all I could hear was CLIP CLOP, CLIP CLOP the whole way. In 3 minutes I was bashing on the door of my house and yelling “ LET ME IN MUM!”. Thankfully my mum is nicer than Jenny’s and she let me in. I explained my story to her and she told me how lucky I am to be alive. We never heard from Jenny’s family. The moved away after The Incident. After that experience I never went out after 6:00 ever again.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Li Syaoran » Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:33 pm

thats quite good, I like the click clack story, but clip clop was really good as well, the only criticism I might have would be that no parent would ever say that to their daughter, possibly to the daughters friend, but NEVER to their daughter, they would let themm in instantly and lock the door, but it was a very good story
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Jinx. » Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:51 pm

yeah suppose thats true
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Jinx. » Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:40 pm

The girl slowly came upon this one
myspace. It had creatures in the background and the man
looked like a psycho. She started
laughing with her friend commenting on how ugly he was. Right
then, an instant message came up. It said:

SatanStalker: So how do you like my
MySpace?

XxLoVemExX: What?

XxLoVemExX: Who is this anyway?

SatanStalker: Well, you should know;
you're looking at my MySpace right now.

XxLoVemExX: How do you know?

SatanStalker: I know. I know when people look at my MySpace.

XxLoVemExX: What? That doesn't make
any sense, how?

SatanStalker: I just do.

SatanStalker: Especially when pretty girls like you visit.

SatanStalker: With very nice legs I might
add.

At the time the girl was wearing high
shorts. She started to pull them down a little bit to cover whatever she could. She and her friend started to get worried now.

XxLoVemExX: Ok whatever man you're
starting to scare the living sh*t out of me.

SatanStalker: You should be afraid.

SatanStalker: You wouldn't want an ugly
guy like me touching your legs, right? I mean that's what you just said about me with your friend a minute ago.

They were in shock.

Her friend: Holy crap man just block him
he's a f***ing psycho!

The girl: Ok holy crap, you think he's
watching us?

SatanStalker: I am.

SatanStalker: Well it wouldn't really
matter if you blocked me anyway; it wouldn't stop me
from coming to your house.

XxLoVemExX: What? My house?

SatanStalker: Yeah, you're both alone so it's not a problem.

XxLoVemExX: Ok I think Im going to
leave now because you're freaking me out.

SatanStalker: Your screen name says
love me, and trust me that won't be a problem.

SatanStalker has just signed off.

The girl and her friend were really
scared.

Girls friend: Whatever lets just go upstairs, trust me.

I doubt he's really coming. It's just a joke
from someone. They went upstairs and were having a pillow fight. All of a sudden the girls friend said she had to go to the bathroom. The girl said ok.

Ten minutes later the girl noticed that her friend was still in the bathroom and was wondering what was up. She goes and knocks but no one says anything.

She opens th door and finds her friend there on the floor dead. She started to scream but when she turned around he was there.

News the next morning reported that there was one girl dead in the bathroom; her neck sliced with blood all over
the room. Her head was nailed to the wall. Just her head.

If you do not repost this tonight
there will be three men, one in your bathroom, one in your room, and one killing your parents at that very moment. Starting tonight at 1:30am. Well what are you waiting for?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Li Syaoran » Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:58 pm

that ones good, its very spooky
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Mon Feb 07, 2011 12:45 am

I think it was already posted.... And I don't believe in those things anyways. X3 I have seen many, yet look, I'm alive and happy!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby chagups » Mon Feb 07, 2011 2:56 am

yep i agree chaos<3 i made a new rule now....
I AM BACK FOR HOPEFULLY A SHORT TIME BECASUE MY FRIEND [CHAOS<3] HAD DID SOMETHING WRONG TOO HER ACCOUNT SO SHE CANT LOGIN. SO FOR NOW ME AND HER ARE GOING TO USE THIS ACCOUNT. AND IM LETTING HER JUST SO SHE CAN KEEP UP ON HER ROLEPLAYS. I HOPE THIS IS OKAY THANK YOU VERY MUCH.~chagups
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby LupusArgentea » Mon Feb 07, 2011 2:58 am

I'm just voicing my opinion here...
If the chain mail story is scary and new, why can't we post it? I mean, if it's scary, it's still a scary story... It's not like they're doing any harm by posting it?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Mon Feb 07, 2011 3:01 am

im too tired to explain
but...
1. that story has been posted about i dont know how many times

2. there not allowed on this thread

3. not everyone likes them

4. its been reposted so many times i lost count... it gets very annoying
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