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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby goobert54321 » Sun Feb 06, 2011 1:38 am

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3.one day a young women,lets call her vivica had a wonderful wedding.after the wedding they played hide and seek because it was one of the families silly traditions.well vivica lived at her parents scary house and you couldnt doubt that there were many unknown places in the house.well the bride decided to find a good hiding spot where no one would find her.she found a hidden door in the attic and opened it up.inside was a large treasure chest.vivica looked around to see if anyone was watching her,there wasnt.she quickly unlocked the tresure chest with the lock she found and closed it she was holding it up so it wouldnt close but suddenly she lost her grip and let go.she tried getting out but there was no way.finally an hour later no one found her so they thought she flaked and they went home.the women died of starvation and not enough air 2 days later.20 years later her sister she never met had a party at the same house.since it was a tradition they played hide and seek.she found the same door and opened it.inside was a treasure chest.thinking it was the best hiding place ever she opened it up and jumped in without looking.suddenly she felt moldy and boney.she looked down and saw what was left of her sister in the chest.she ran out but she hit the chest door and it closed in on her.neither were ever seen!

I have 3 books,and Ill re-write one story because its ALMOST EXACTLY like the 3rd story/The books are called (i dont fully know its at school)Scary Stories to tell in the dark,Scary Stories to chill your bones,MORE Scary Stories To Chill Your Bones *if you google one of these book names and also type Alvin Schwartz you can read them!*
(I cant find the site right now and i don't have my books so ill write up something like it)

Once there was this young women getting married,after the wedding,they played games.They even played old children games! When they got to hide and seek,the bride thought she had the best idea to hide ever!She had remembered a big trunk her grandfather left in the attic."No one would ever find me here!" she thought.She hurried to get in,but then "BOOM" inside she fell unconscious.The trunk lid had cracked her on the head and locked.She banged and screamed to be let out,but no one knew how long she had been screaming or crying for help.People started looking for her.After 2 days her brand-new-brides-groom had given her up for lost.More than 100 years later,a Maid who had worked in that same place lost something."Hmm,Maybe it's in here," she thought.
"AAHH!" And there lay the bride in her wedding dress,Of course she was just a skeleton by that time.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby .Kestrel. » Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:24 am

goobert54321 wrote:
ps3 wrote:
3.one day a young women,lets call her vivica had a wonderful wedding.after the wedding they played hide and seek because it was one of the families silly traditions.well vivica lived at her parents scary house and you couldnt doubt that there were many unknown places in the house.well the bride decided to find a good hiding spot where no one would find her.she found a hidden door in the attic and opened it up.inside was a large treasure chest.vivica looked around to see if anyone was watching her,there wasnt.she quickly unlocked the tresure chest with the lock she found and closed it she was holding it up so it wouldnt close but suddenly she lost her grip and let go.she tried getting out but there was no way.finally an hour later no one found her so they thought she flaked and they went home.the women died of starvation and not enough air 2 days later.20 years later her sister she never met had a party at the same house.since it was a tradition they played hide and seek.she found the same door and opened it.inside was a treasure chest.thinking it was the best hiding place ever she opened it up and jumped in without looking.suddenly she felt moldy and boney.she looked down and saw what was left of her sister in the chest.she ran out but she hit the chest door and it closed in on her.neither were ever seen!

I have 3 books,and Ill re-write one story because its ALMOST EXACTLY like the 3rd story/The books are called (i dont fully know its at school)Scary Stories to tell in the dark,Scary Stories to chill your bones,MORE Scary Stories To Chill Your Bones *if you google one of these book names and also type Alvin Schwartz you can read them!*
(I cant find the site right now and i don't have my books so ill write up something like it)

Once there was this young women getting married,after the wedding,they played games.They even played old children games! When they got to hide and seek,the bride thought she had the best idea to hide ever!She had remembered a big trunk her grandfather left in the attic."No one would ever find me here!" she thought.She hurried to get in,but then "BOOM" inside she fell unconscious.The trunk lid had cracked her on the head and locked.She banged and screamed to be let out,but no one knew how long she had been screaming or crying for help.People started looking for her.After 2 days her brand-new-brides-groom had given her up for lost.More than 100 years later,a Maid who had worked in that same place lost something."Hmm,Maybe it's in here," she thought.
"AAHH!" And there lay the bride in her wedding dress,Of course she was just a skeleton by that time.



Om my gosh i read those books in 3rd grade they freaked me out! especially the song The Hearse or something like that. I still remember it...

Did you ever think as a hearse goes by that you will be the next to die?
They'll wrap you up in a big white sheet from your head down to your feet
The worms crawl in and the worms crawl out, through your stomach and out your snout
Then your eyes fall out and your teeth decay and that's the end of your perfect day.

i probably messed up a few words, but that song creeped me out sooo much when i was little! i was afraid of death back then and that song didnt help.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby goobert54321 » Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:05 am

macy132 wrote:
goobert54321 wrote:
ps3 wrote:
3.one day a young women,lets call her vivica had a wonderful wedding.after the wedding they played hide and seek because it was one of the families silly traditions.well vivica lived at her parents scary house and you couldnt doubt that there were many unknown places in the house.well the bride decided to find a good hiding spot where no one would find her.she found a hidden door in the attic and opened it up.inside was a large treasure chest.vivica looked around to see if anyone was watching her,there wasnt.she quickly unlocked the tresure chest with the lock she found and closed it she was holding it up so it wouldnt close but suddenly she lost her grip and let go.she tried getting out but there was no way.finally an hour later no one found her so they thought she flaked and they went home.the women died of starvation and not enough air 2 days later.20 years later her sister she never met had a party at the same house.since it was a tradition they played hide and seek.she found the same door and opened it.inside was a treasure chest.thinking it was the best hiding place ever she opened it up and jumped in without looking.suddenly she felt moldy and boney.she looked down and saw what was left of her sister in the chest.she ran out but she hit the chest door and it closed in on her.neither were ever seen!

I have 3 books,and Ill re-write one story because its ALMOST EXACTLY like the 3rd story/The books are called (i dont fully know its at school)Scary Stories to tell in the dark,Scary Stories to chill your bones,MORE Scary Stories To Chill Your Bones *if you google one of these book names and also type Alvin Schwartz you can read them!*
(I cant find the site right now and i don't have my books so ill write up something like it)

Once there was this young women getting married,after the wedding,they played games.They even played old children games! When they got to hide and seek,the bride thought she had the best idea to hide ever!She had remembered a big trunk her grandfather left in the attic."No one would ever find me here!" she thought.She hurried to get in,but then "BOOM" inside she fell unconscious.The trunk lid had cracked her on the head and locked.She banged and screamed to be let out,but no one knew how long she had been screaming or crying for help.People started looking for her.After 2 days her brand-new-brides-groom had given her up for lost.More than 100 years later,a Maid who had worked in that same place lost something."Hmm,Maybe it's in here," she thought.
"AAHH!" And there lay the bride in her wedding dress,Of course she was just a skeleton by that time.



Om my gosh i read those books in 3rd grade they freaked me out! especially the song The Hearse or something like that. I still remember it...

Did you ever think as a hearse goes by that you will be the next to die?
They'll wrap you up in a big white sheet from your head down to your feet
The worms crawl in and the worms crawl out, through your stomach and out your snout
Then your eyes fall out and your teeth decay and that's the end of your perfect day.

i probably messed up a few words, but that song creeped me out sooo much when i was little! i was afraid of death back then and that song didnt help.

Lol, you got it perfect.I don't like the story in the book called "wonderful sausage"a here it is:

Billy Fleece was a butcher.One night he got into a fight with his wife,Fleece had a horrible temper and he just lost it,and he killed his wife Mina.He ground her up into sausage and put her bones under a rock outside.He told the people she moved away to hide it.He smoked the sausages in his smoke house and people had loved the sausage,so Fleece began to make more,all over,puppies,kitties,children,adults,were starting to disappear.He even started raising his own hogs to have the best meat. No one suspected Billy Fleece had anything to do with it.One day Ms.Shrapoun came into the shop,a fat lady.Fleece ground her up into sausage,and Dr.Porcher,Billy Fleece's dentist,a small,plump man came into the shop and into the grinder he went.But one day Fleece made a big mistake,a fat boy came into the shop,and Fleece grabbed his arm and tried to grind him but the boy broke free and started running,Fleece ran after.When people saw this image,Fleece chasing the fat boy with a butcher knife they all put it together.No one ever saw the wonderful sausage again,No one ever saw Fleece again,some say he was fed to his hogs...Others say he was fed to his sausage grinder.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby blazer » Sun Feb 06, 2011 9:59 am

i love scary stories! :D
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby goobert54321 » Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:03 pm

chaos<3 wrote:hey we've all seen the wizard of OZ
right?
well you no they say someone killed themselves on there!

they say its a myth or a legend but its weird

No,its real.People say it was just a bird because they wanted it to be realistic.But No,there is a bird,but there is also a munchkin. The people say he killed him because one of these reasons,and he hung himself from a tree in the background and ill post a video:
A.He liked another munchkin who rejected him.
B.He didn't get the part as a munchkin.
C.Both
D.Any reason!
Ill post a video later,because im at my vavo's house and I will get total creeped out cuz its night..LOL.Im a chicken.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby goobert54321 » Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:06 pm

Exodus! wrote:Ok well, I have a few real stories I want to tell, one still scares me to this vey day and I'll post it here. I was 8 when this happened and yes it did happen.

I was at the bowling alley with my cousin. We were 8, she was just a bit older. We were sitting between the double doors to the opening.(Meaning a set of doors was infront and behind us) I decided to tell her a story of the 'bloody head'. It was my favorite story ever. "Me ti-do-te-walker. Then the dog went 'dong-di-dindle. As the dog sang a thud was heard on the roof and soon the kid stared at the chimney..." I stared at my cousin and she was getting freaked out alright. "And a bloody head came down the chimney and rolled to the boys feet and- BOO!" I jumped up making her jump. I laughed, it was fun to scare her.
But something scared us both. "Hey Exodus, did you ever hear of the haunted bowling alley?" She asked. "No."
"Well a person got killed here and they say thats why lane 1 is never used, the person was killed and stuck up that shaft. And all you can see is their feet." "Thats not true!" I would tell her. "So you wanna go see if its true?"
"Maybe.." I said but then my gaze went to the door infront of us,it led to outside.
(Thi part scares me and I never went to that bowling alley since.) We stared below the door and saw feet walking across the door, then they stopped and stayed still. We looked up and saw no one. We both started to get a bit scared then we thought the person was smaller than the door and thats why we didn't see them, so I got up and looked outside and down there was no one there and when i sat back down I saw the feet still there.
So of course me and my cousin ran screaming.

Yeah it sounds really untrue but this happened and I doubt I was seeing things. ( i could of been thoughxD)

....Creepy..and i love that story to! In my book the dog says " Colly-Molly,Kinchie-linchie,dingo-dingo.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:42 pm

goobert54321 wrote:
Exodus! wrote:Ok well, I have a few real stories I want to tell, one still scares me to this vey day and I'll post it here. I was 8 when this happened and yes it did happen.

I was at the bowling alley with my cousin. We were 8, she was just a bit older. We were sitting between the double doors to the opening.(Meaning a set of doors was infront and behind us) I decided to tell her a story of the 'bloody head'. It was my favorite story ever. "Me ti-do-te-walker. Then the dog went 'dong-di-dindle. As the dog sang a thud was heard on the roof and soon the kid stared at the chimney..." I stared at my cousin and she was getting freaked out alright. "And a bloody head came down the chimney and rolled to the boys feet and- BOO!" I jumped up making her jump. I laughed, it was fun to scare her.
But something scared us both. "Hey Exodus, did you ever hear of the haunted bowling alley?" She asked. "No."
"Well a person got killed here and they say thats why lane 1 is never used, the person was killed and stuck up that shaft. And all you can see is their feet." "Thats not true!" I would tell her. "So you wanna go see if its true?"
"Maybe.." I said but then my gaze went to the door infront of us,it led to outside.
(Thi part scares me and I never went to that bowling alley since.) We stared below the door and saw feet walking across the door, then they stopped and stayed still. We looked up and saw no one. We both started to get a bit scared then we thought the person was smaller than the door and thats why we didn't see them, so I got up and looked outside and down there was no one there and when i sat back down I saw the feet still there.
So of course me and my cousin ran screaming.

Yeah it sounds really untrue but this happened and I doubt I was seeing things. ( i could of been thoughxD)

....Creepy..and i love that story to! In my book the dog says " Colly-Molly,Kinchie-linchie,dingo-dingo.


lol yea i have that book
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Daisy May » Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:27 pm

goobert54321 wrote:
chaos<3 wrote:hey we've all seen the wizard of OZ
right?
well you no they say someone killed themselves on there!

they say its a myth or a legend but its weird

No,its real.People say it was just a bird because they wanted it to be realistic.But No,there is a bird,but there is also a munchkin. The people say he killed him because one of these reasons,and he hung himself from a tree in the background and ill post a video:
A.He liked another munchkin who rejected him.
B.He didn't get the part as a munchkin.
C.Both
D.Any reason!
Ill post a video later,because im at my vavo's house and I will get total creeped out cuz its night..LOL.Im a chicken.

As soon as I saw this I had to go search up the part and it doesn't look like a bird at all to me. Go here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r89z_-1by6U and when the scarecrow trips you will see whate looks like the munchkin hanging himself. The people making the moive did not know about it at the moment and then sold the movie, but a while after that they noticed the munchkin killing himself.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:31 pm

yea my older brother was like" ITS A STUPID BIRD YOU RETARD!" i was like "yeah right you got proof!!" haha funny moments XD
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby goobert54321 » Sun Feb 06, 2011 4:01 pm

Lol,my sister told me and my mom had always LOVED that movie and it freaked me out so i searched it up..There is a bird but there is also this.
EDIT: If i hear something like this,almost anyone will expect me to search it up,and if anyone doubts my research,they must be dumb because I spend at LEAST half of my day on tons of different sites until i find proof.
EDIT: Lol edit again!! And if anyone said anything about it,or asked a worker or anything,It's obvious they would say its fake.Why would they want people to know this?!
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