by Blackbirds » Sat Jul 23, 2016 7:57 am
@WanSham;; Your doing it right! You may want to put more details, though! (Such as some music, or a color pallet!)
Ok; I have to write a scary story for Kalon #385; can I have some feedback so far?
The wind blew through the trees, as the howls of the moves were heard from the moon. The rose garden, once the emblem of light and youth stood as a sign of pain and darkness. The blood red of the roses stood from the looming castle, where the pipe organs played. The castle, known as Castle Angel to the outsiders, but as Castle Dyst to the villagers, loomed at the mountainside, where the water turned dark and the forest obscured with mist.
An angelic woman voice could be heard from the castle could be heard every full moon, as she called out for her lost love. She sung of his trips to the ocean, and the roaring surf. She also sung of her pain and sadness, from the day he died. The woman had hair more crimson than blood; her lips were the color of roses, and her skin paler than the moon.
There have been many people who tried to rescue the wistful, angelic young woman. The rumors of her singing, beauty, and hair were turned into the legends the great kind heard. Over the next week, he gathered his strongest warriors, as they went to charge Caste Angel.
The journey to the castle was long and hard, as many of the warriors died. After another week, they reached Eurtan, the town prior to the castle. The King and his men were given rooms, and the night fell. They heard the somber voice of the angelic pyre. The King, heartbroken from her song, went to charge Castle Dyst to save her. He saddled his ivory steed, he chased through the obscured forest alone.
The horse ran when bleached wraiths came from the trees. A young girl went to him, and pulled his mantel, as the King got up. She called to him in a solicitous voice to save the princess. As he promised to her that he would. The wraiths passed for him, as he lay his eyes on the eerie castle.
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