Venus357 wrote:Image/Description: Silver tabby
Name: Undecided (need help)
Gender: Female
Clan: WindClan
Rank: Young warrior
Personality/Skills: Very fast runner, even for WindClan standards. She's a friendly and polite cat, but not particularly outgoing. Very intelligent as well.
Important Notes: I based this cat off myself. I really love the character, but I can't think of a suitable name. I was wondering if you could help me. I'm thinking of something traditional, and maybe referring to her color or swiftness.
Well, thankfully, in traditionalism, we have the ability to name her for both!
Name Suggestions: Rainfoot/Ashfoot
Name Reasoning: Rain- refers to a grey tabby (dappled), and Ash- refers to any kind of grey tabby. -foot refers to her speed.
Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Like I did in the previous review, I'll offer some more trait suggestions, as there isn't anything wrong with her, but there's not much to pick on.
She could have a bit of impatience to her - maybe she doesn't really bother talking to others because there's a lot to be done and she has no time to be outgoing and accommodating. Or she likes to go out and take a jog around the border, just as an exercise and because she likes looking at the other territories and seeing how different they are. She may be highly observant, and because she doesn't set out to make friends, she just seems like a regular cat, but talking to her for more than a few minutes shows how bright she really can be. Perhaps she's a little more curious than she should be, and has been reprimanded many times for wandering off the territory to go inspect the remains of a campfire or a dead frog on the side of the road. She may live by the phrase "fortune favors the brave", and is willing to strike out and do curious things herself because she's got things to learn, darn it, and dragging others along will slow her down.
Man, I am just rattling off today. Anyway, those are some ideas.