Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[I r o n.]

NOTE BEFORE YOU READ: These cats aren't in a Clan, but I will evantually put them in a Clan. And some, I need a suffix for them.

Name: Cootpaw
Description: A full black cat with faint white stripes, and a somewhat triangleur shape underneath his eyes.
Important Notes: Cootpaw is a swift, and excellent swimmer. Though he hasn't revealed his power to swim yet, he likes to stay aorund the water and hunt for fish, witch is the easiest of hunting for him.

Name: Grousefur
Description: Grouseface is a reddish-brown tabby cat, very faintly, black is uncluded. He was yellow-blue eyes, and is parshly deaf.
Important Notes: Heh, nothing. He does try to prove himself sometimes, but really, normally fails and humilitates himself, he is a complete mouse-brain, as well. He doesn't think before he does.

Name: Thriftfoot
Description: A very pale ginger-red cat, with light hazzy blue eyes. (blind)
Important Notes: Thriftfoot if a sweet and caring cat. She always in there to help, and adores kits. And hopes to have some of her own some day, she is very fast, and would always beat a cat in a race, and loves to help out.

For Thriftfoot, I'm not so sure if I'll stick with -foot, because she is pretty nice, I mean..

[Cuervo]

littlepaw is a young tom by the age of 12 moons. he is
what some might call, "a late bloomer" he may not be
as intelligent as most, but he has quite the personality
to make up for it. littlepaw is an apprentice of the clan.
he is a neutral tom. let's say you've just met him, if
you tip him the wrong way, you'll probably regret it,
since you'll be losing the chance to gain a great friend.
if you tip him the other way, he will be one of the best
cats you'll know. since littlepaw has no exceeding skills,
his warrior suffix will most likely be -fur or -pelt.

(im stuck on the personality. I'm not really trying to say he is bi-polar. its really hard to explain. he's basically okay with everyone, but lets say you yell at him or insult him, then he probably wont like you for the rest of his life. if you're a nice cat. then he'll like your for a long time. and um...just, its really difficult for me to explain. trust is basically the most important thing in his life.

[sweet tooth]

I just want to check this cat to see if its good, then I'll place her in a clan

Image/Description:White cat with yellow eyes.
Name:Sugarheart
Gender:She-cat
Rank:Elder
Personality/Skills:Shes sharp-tongued but caring of other cats. She likes hunting but she is very old and slow. She is curious for her age and loves talking, though her sharp tongue kind of keeps the cats away
Important Notes: Used to be Luckykit(She survived an adder attack while being inside of mother, rest of siblings didn't), then became Sugar because she became a kittypet. She got -heart because she was a clan cat at heart, and she returned to her clan. Sugarheart didn't want prefix Lucky- because it would just remind her of what happened while her mom was pregnant and how the rest of her siblings died

[Arcaii]

I love little Dove!
and yes Doveclaw was what I guessed his name would be.

As for the anthill? That's probably his second most painful accident. The first is when he knocked a bees nest from a tree. Took two other cats to get the stingers from his fur and body.

Ohhhhohohohohohoho noooo... that poor cat. Good thing he has thick fur, eh?

[Arcaii]

NOTE BEFORE YOU READ: These cats aren't in a Clan, but I will evantually put them in a Clan. And some, I need a suffix for them.

Name: Cootpaw
Description: A full black cat with faint white stripes, and a somewhat triangleur shape underneath his eyes.
Important Notes: Cootpaw is a swift, and excellent swimmer. Though he hasn't revealed his power to swim yet, he likes to stay aorund the water and hunt for fish, witch is the easiest of hunting for him.

Name: Grousefur
Description: Grouseface is a reddish-brown tabby cat, very faintly, black is uncluded. He was yellow-blue eyes, and is parshly deaf.
Important Notes: Heh, nothing. He does try to prove himself sometimes, but really, normally fails and humilitates himself, he is a complete mouse-brain, as well. He doesn't think before he does.

Name: Thriftfoot
Description: A very pale ginger-red cat, with light hazzy blue eyes. (blind)
Important Notes: Thriftfoot if a sweet and caring cat. She always in there to help, and adores kits. And hopes to have some of her own some day, she is very fast, and would always beat a cat in a race, and loves to help out.

For Thriftfoot, I'm not so sure if I'll stick with -foot, because she is pretty nice, I mean..

Sorry for the wait!

Cootpaw
Name Suggestion: Cootstream
Name Reasoning: As he's a proficient swimmer and a skilled fisher, he would undoubtedly get the -stream suffix.
Notes: I have no idea what "white stripes" means. The closest I could find was a black tabby. Coot- refers to a black cat with white markings such as a foot or a chest mark or something, not to actual stripes. I suggest you change the stripes and triangle shape to more realistic markings.


Gorsefur
Rate: 8/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: Gorse- is better suited on a bright golden cat, rather than a reddish-brown one. Other than that, his name is fine.
Alternative Name: Muntjacfur/Cypressfur. Both prefixes describe a reddish-brown cat, and his suffix stays as it is.
Notes: He can't really be a faint tabby if he has black stripes or black markings.


Thriftfoot
Rate: 10/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: Her name fits her perfectly! She may be nice, but niceness doesn't really have a suffix, and besides, she's skilled. Here, we name for skill before personality, and personality before appearance.
Alternative Name: None!
Notes: Honestly, if there was just one suffix I could add to traditionalism, it would be one for a cat who's unfailingly kind no matter what life puts them through.

[Arcaii]

littlepaw is a young tom by the age of 12 moons. he is
what some might call, "a late bloomer" he may not be
as intelligent as most, but he has quite the personality
to make up for it. littlepaw is an apprentice of the clan.
he is a neutral tom. let's say you've just met him, if
you tip him the wrong way, you'll probably regret it,
since you'll be losing the chance to gain a great friend.
if you tip him the other way, he will be one of the best
cats you'll know. since littlepaw has no exceeding skills,
his warrior suffix will most likely be -fur or -pelt.

(im stuck on the personality. I'm not really trying to say he is bi-polar. its really hard to explain. he's basically okay with everyone, but lets say you yell at him or insult him, then he probably wont like you for the rest of his life. if you're a nice cat. then he'll like your for a long time. and um...just, its really difficult for me to explain. trust is basically the most important thing in his life.

Name Suggestion: Littlefur/Littlepelt.
Name Reasoning: Honestly, you are correct. He'd do best as a -fur or -pelt (of course, if he's considered highly attractive, you can also go for -face).

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: I quite appreciate you trying to avoid using bipolarity. I certainly wouldn't constitute him as such - he just sounds like someone who's very quick to hold a grudge and very slow to forgive people. He's probably the type to judge based on surface level stuff, which earns him a lot of ire from cats who honestly don't have the time nor patience to suck up to him. Of course, given that if you're on his good side, he's intensely loyal and willing to help however he can, those that are friends with him are quick to defend him, since they know how good of a friend he can be. He's likely one of the more polarizing cats in the Clan - you love him or you hate him. And, interestingly, there's no wrong answer to that. If you hate him, you're right for it because he's stubborn and refuses to listen to you if he doesn't like you, but if you love him, then you're also accurate because he's steadfastly loyal and happy to help his friends.
That got a little long, but hopefully that helped you out some.

[Arcaii]

I just want to check this cat to see if its good, then I'll place her in a clan

Image/Description:White cat with yellow eyes.
Name:Sugarheart
Gender:She-cat
Rank:Elder
Personality/Skills:Shes sharp-tongued but caring of other cats. She likes hunting but she is very old and slow. She is curious for her age and loves talking, though her sharp tongue kind of keeps the cats away
Important Notes: Used to be Luckykit(She survived an adder attack while being inside of mother, rest of siblings didn't), then became Sugar because she became a kittypet. She got -heart because she was a clan cat at heart, and she returned to her clan. Sugarheart didn't want prefix Lucky- because it would just remind her of what happened while her mom was pregnant and how the rest of her siblings died

There's a lot to go over here, and I thoroughly apologize if I upset you along the way. This is critique, though, and quite a bit of it.

Name Rating: 4/10
Name Type: Creative
Name Reasoning: Let me just say that the name Sugarheart sounds pretty cute, but I can't support it. All three parts of her name (her two prefixes and her suffix) are unsuited to her or just don't make sense.
Firstly, Lucky-. Circumstances at birth are never really important in the grand scheme of things, which is why you don't name a brown kitten Stormy- or a black kitten Blizzard-. A cat from another Clan isn't going to know why the cat's name is Lucky-. Luckiness doesn't have a color, anyway, so it doesn't properly identify the cat in the present. It only covers one small incident in the past which doesn't matter anymore because now the cat's grown up.
Next, Sugar-. Aside from the fact that cats don't know what sugar is (nor can they taste sweetness), you'd be hard-pressed to convince me that a Clan would ever let a cat keep their kittypet name. Not only is that breaking the very first rule in the book (to reject the life of a kittypet), but chances are it doesn't even fit the cat, and besides, she had a name before, so she should probably get that back, even if she doesn't like it. To not only leave the Clan and then come back and say "I don't want my old prefix back" is absurd and would definitely lead to the leader saying "Well, that's the first step to becoming a warrior again, so you clearly don't want to be a warrior anymore".
Finally, -heart. You can't really call her intensely loyal or a true Clan cat if she leaves the Clan for the life she's supposed to refuse, and even if she does come back, she won't be regarded as loyal for a very, very long time. Besides that, -heart refers to a cat with a very strict and pronounced moral code, that which she most certainly doesn't have if she willingly abandoned the Clan.
Alternative Name: Lightpelt/Lilyfur (suffixes interchangeable). Both prefixes describe a white cat, and since she has no nameable skills, she receives the default suffixes.

Character Rating: 6/10
Character Reasoning: Honestly, I'd go back to the workshop on this one, especially her backstory.
Her history needs a lot of work - why did she leave? Why did she come back? How was she the only kitten to survive? In fact, how did her mother survive being bitten by an adder, much less her kits? What led to her deciding Clan life wasn't for her? Who did she live with? Was she close by?
Her personality isn't as bad, but there isn't much to it other than her being insulting and curious. You can definitely give her more development. Does she ever feel guilty for leaving? Does she hate kits? Is she self-centered? Does she hate rain and snow? Etc.

[mistywater]

I'm back, this time with Rainpelt's denmate!

Description: Mottled pale gray molly with short spiky fur and yellow eyes.
Name: Mottledpelt. Obviously.
Gender: Molly.
Clan: Thunder.
Rank: Elder/Best grump.
Personality/Skills: Mottledpelt is on about this and that all the time, therefore making her a master of driving others crazy. You say a casual 'Hello,' and she says 'There's a thorn in my moss! Apprentices are mousebrained these days!' etc. She doesn't talk much (snapping and moaning and whining not included) tough she rants about an annoying WindClan tom sometimes. Not very fascinating. The apprentices host contests, who'll get her to say the most, er, how to word it...unpolite word.
Important Notes: Nope!

I think I'll send three kits over quite soon. I'm still working on the lil' bundles. They'll be interesting, their mom is the liveliest molly of the Clan and their dad is a -face cat. Think you know what it means.

[I r o n.]

NOTE BEFORE YOU READ: These cats aren't in a Clan, but I will evantually put them in a Clan. And some, I need a suffix for them.

Name: Cootpaw
Description: A full black cat with faint white stripes, and a somewhat triangleur shape underneath his eyes.
Important Notes: Cootpaw is a swift, and excellent swimmer. Though he hasn't revealed his power to swim yet, he likes to stay aorund the water and hunt for fish, witch is the easiest of hunting for him.

Name: Grousefur
Description: Grouseface is a reddish-brown tabby cat, very faintly, black is uncluded. He was yellow-blue eyes, and is parshly deaf.
Important Notes: Heh, nothing. He does try to prove himself sometimes, but really, normally fails and humilitates himself, he is a complete mouse-brain, as well. He doesn't think before he does.

Name: Thriftfoot
Description: A very pale ginger-red cat, with light hazzy blue eyes. (blind)
Important Notes: Thriftfoot if a sweet and caring cat. She always in there to help, and adores kits. And hopes to have some of her own some day, she is very fast, and would always beat a cat in a race, and loves to help out.

For Thriftfoot, I'm not so sure if I'll stick with -foot, because she is pretty nice, I mean..

Sorry for the wait!

Cootpaw
Name Suggestion: Cootstream
Name Reasoning: As he's a proficient swimmer and a skilled fisher, he would undoubtedly get the -stream suffix.
Notes: I have no idea what "white stripes" means. The closest I could find was a black tabby. Coot- refers to a black cat with white markings such as a foot or a chest mark or something, not to actual stripes. I suggest you change the stripes and triangle shape to more realistic markings.


Gorsefur
Rate: 8/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: Gorse- is better suited on a bright golden cat, rather than a reddish-brown one. Other than that, his name is fine.
Alternative Name: Muntjacfur/Cypressfur. Both prefixes describe a reddish-brown cat, and his suffix stays as it is.
Notes: He can't really be a faint tabby if he has black stripes or black markings.


Thriftfoot
Rate: 10/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: Her name fits her perfectly! She may be nice, but niceness doesn't really have a suffix, and besides, she's skilled. Here, we name for skill before personality, and personality before appearance.
Alternative Name: None!
Notes: Honestly, if there was just one suffix I could add to traditionalism, it would be one for a cat who's unfailingly kind no matter what life puts them through.

It wasn't Gorse, It was Grouse, I found it and I thought it would be cool it name a cat that.

[Arcaii]

I'm back, this time with Rainpelt's denmate!

Description: Mottled pale gray molly with short spiky fur and yellow eyes.
Name: Mottledpelt. Obviously.
Gender: Molly.
Clan: Thunder.
Rank: Elder/Best grump.
Personality/Skills: Mottledpelt is on about this and that all the time, therefore making her a master of driving others crazy. You say a casual 'Hello,' and she says 'There's a thorn in my moss! Apprentices are mousebrained these days!' etc. She doesn't talk much (snapping and moaning and whining not included) tough she rants about an annoying WindClan tom sometimes. Not very fascinating. The apprentices host contests, who'll get her to say the most, er, how to word it...unpolite word.
Important Notes: Nope!

I think I'll send three kits over quite soon. I'm still working on the lil' bundles. They'll be interesting, their mom is the liveliest molly of the Clan and their dad is a -face cat. Think you know what it means.

Apologies for the wait! I'd love to see those kittens when they're ready.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Oh, if only there was a suffix for the best grump...
Her name fits her perfectly, though I will ask (as is protocol) whether she has a spotted coat pattern or has a ticked pattern. This is more for curiosity's sake, since I'm not sure if a ticked cat would count as mottled or not.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: I must just have a thing for elders. I sincerely love this gal. The fact that she's so ornery that apprentices take turns goading her into saying Elder Swears is fantastic - I actually laughed pretty loudly when I read that. The medicine cat must dread working on her.