Oh look, color! (Not sure I'll keep it in color, though.) I'm keeping the sketchiness but sticking closer to the book, haha. Speaking of, here's a link to it, whatever I've got up for now, anyway: https://www.quotev.com/story/11721634/P ... n-the-Rain
(Is this more of what you had in mind, epi? - Still square-ish and the flow might be awkward but eh, haha.)
(Edit: I didn't see the sub forum-"pages" thing, I'll post future pages there, ahaha... ^^')