C a s wrote:@ lapis, while your character forms are fine (and stormy is right, I'd prefer not to have repeated suffixes if you're fine with that, though I won't FORCE you to change it) but I would prefer you make the kits a mother. Alternatively, you could maybe swap your characters, so that the kits were in OakClan as Creamflower is always in the nursery to take care of stray kits. I know EagleClan warriors are closed, but I'd allow it if you wanted to swap them. Or you could keep them all in EagleClan, up to you!
feel free to draw my characters if you want, your art is good!OakClan
⇾ Beestar ✟ 41 moons ✟ Apprentice: ✟ ♀ ✟ Mate: Streamstar ✟ Condition: Declining ✟ Tags: Robinwind✟ Lives: ★★★★★★★★★
B e e s t a r ' s ears flattened entirely to her head. "Were they jackdaws?" she asked the medicine cat, almost urgently. "Robinwind, I've been dreaming of black birds as well. They attack me, and my kits, as if they're already born. Streamstar always saves me and looks as if he's about to say something...but I always wake up before he does."
⇾ Dappleleaf ☮ 18 moons ☮ Apprentice: ☮ ♀ ☮ Mate: N/A; Crush: Weaselstripe ☮ Condition: Healthy ☮ Tags: Weaselstripe, Riverstripe, Fallenstone
D a p p l e l e a f nodded, glancing back the way she'd come. They're smart, they'll head back. She turned back to her hunting partner. "Let's go," she mewed, padding off into the undergrowth. She didn't bother checking behind her - Riverstripe would likely split away to hunt anyway.
⇾ Jackdawpaw ☠ 7 moons ☠ Mentor: Tigerblaze ☠ ♂ ☠ Mate: N/A ☠ Condition: Healthy ☠ Tags: Ivypaw
J a c k d a w p a w dropped the herbs on the ground so he can speak before prodding the pile with his paw. "I just didn't know what to do with these," he mewed. "I'll be happy to help you store them, if you'll show me how."EagleClan
⇾ Swiftbadger ☄ 37 moons ☄ Apprentice: ☄ ♂ ☄ Mate: N/A ☄ Condition: Healthy ☄ Tags: Goldenrose, Darkpaw, Littleflower, Frostbriar, Cloverpaw
S w i f t b a d g e r settled down further to wait for the rest of the patrol, tucking his paws underneath him. "It did," he mewed. "I would like to go, I think, if only to brag about the catch the OakClan patrol saw me make. What about you, Littleflower?"
⇾ Acornspots 🌪 37 moons 🌪 Apprentice: 🌪 ♀ 🌪 Mate: N/A 🌪 Condition: Healthy 🌪 Tags: Streamspot, Stagpaw, Russetswirl
A c o r n s p o t s paused to mark the her scent on the boundary. She padded back to Russetswirl's side. "Well, I think you could do it. And like I said: I will absolutely help you train!"
⇾Quiverpaw ◎ 10 moons ◎ Mentor: Mistflower ◎ ♂ ◎ Mate: N/A ◎ Condition: Healthy ◎ Tags:
Q u i v e r p a w padded back into camp. She placed her prey in the pile, albeit still struggling with it all. Shaking out her pelt, she glanced up to the sky. Maybe I'll get to go to the Gathering! She took a smile mouse from the pile, pleased to be able to eat now that she'd hunted. She settled down near the apprentices' den, taking a large bite from the prey.
⇾Deertail ϟ 38 moons ϟ Apprentice: Darkpaw ϟ ♂ ϟ Mate: Tickfang; Crush: Foxcloud ϟ Condition: Healthy ϟ Tags: Mistflower, Foxcloud
"T h a n k you, Mistflower," Deertail nuzzled her shoulder affectionately. With that, he bounded across the clearing towards Foxcloud, his head held high. "I need to talk to you," he announced.Outside
⇾Honey ♪ 52 moons ♪ Kittypet ♪ ♀ ♪ Mate: Rockleap ♪ Condition: Healthy ♪ Tags:
-doing her thing-
(Suffixes? You mean prefixes?)