SunClan's Story [New Thread]

[Joyfeather16]

Tigerclaw frowned, "Well if Eaglestar lets me mentor you then why not start now. You need to see them to make sure it's not as bad as we are worried about." He said with concern in his eyes.

[Venatici]

{ W o l f p a w }

"But, don't you already have an apprentice? Didn't he come back?" Wolfpaw asked, dropping the critical question. She half-mindedly forgot the second part. Medicine Cat's didn't matter at the moment.

[Joyfeather16]

He frowned, "I don't know, he's half way through his training and I wasn't really his mentor. His old mentor didn't do much with him so I jumped in to help him speed up the training. Officially he wasn't named my apprentice but I took him in when his father died.

[swiftwolf]

(Ahhh you guys go so fast XD)

[Shiko Hayashi]

[ I have a plot in mind that I'd like to start. I'd figured I'd let you guys now first before I actually continue on with the plot. Anyway, I was thinking Sun clan needed something to move it along, as its pretty much centered around cats sneaking out, sneaking back in, etc. Kind of boring after the first 2 pages or so, don't you agree? So, I was thinking maybe something to do with the humans begin to scan through the Sun Clan territory, leaving poisoned prey and small smoke fires to smoke out animals and shoot them. Receiving an ominous message from star clan about total destruction, Eaglestar sends out 6 cats to go and find the tribe over the mountains where Howl and Gwyn came from. Once there, the six cats realize that there's a forest abound with prey and thousands of cats with unique skills, amazing fighting tactics, and a close relationship. However, it's just a dystopia. In reality, the cats feel trapped within the beautiful forest. Eager to escape, they agree to help under one condition. One of their kits must remain with them over the mountains. The tribe hasn't been able to reproduce due to a flower's pollen that goes throughout the air. Unable to decline and unable to accept, the 6 cats are left with the final decision that would save or destroy their clan. And they only have a week to decide it. ]

[TheCalicoTabby]

Eaglestar glanced back at the camp. Seeing nothing that needed her attention, she nodded. "Yes, that would be best." she wanted to see this for herself.

Pineclaw glanced over at Princess, his expression blank. He shrugged, looking away again. With a polite nod to Frostwing, he turned, walking away without looking back.






{Bit of a writers block for those two. ^^;}

The wind changed directions, and Lightpaw raised her head, scenting the air. She was curious as to who it was out here. Her fur bristled as she realized the scent was startlingly unfamilar; not a clan cat. Only yesterday she'd been exited to meet someone outside the clans, but after the attack on her friends she was wary. She wanted to run---but no. She couldn't. She was an apprentice, not a kit. She'd have to confront someone this close to the camp. It was in the warrior code, wasn't it? This wasn't really their territory, but they still needed to defend themselves. And if it was the cat that had hurt her friends, she wasn't letting them get away. The small apprentice stood tall, pushing through the grass.

[allynabean]

Nightfang lead Eaglestar towards the blood she had seen and soon stopped in front of a partially dried clump of crimson blood. "this is it" she told Eaglestar. "this is what i saw."

[Joyfeather16]

(I like that idea. Calico could maybe Pine run into wandering Cherryleaf?)

[Kora L. Cifer]

Honey raised her head to see the light brown and white shecat her fur bristled and she took a step back she narrowed her eyes down and late her ears flat, would she have to fight?

[TheCalicoTabby]

{I'll be back to RPing soon. I have a bit of a writers block, sorry! ^^;}

[ I have a plot in mind that I'd like to start. I'd figured I'd let you guys now first before I actually continue on with the plot. Anyway, I was thinking Sun clan needed something to move it along, as its pretty much centered around cats sneaking out, sneaking back in, etc. Kind of boring after the first 2 pages or so, don't you agree? So, I was thinking maybe something to do with the humans begin to scan through the Sun Clan territory, leaving poisoned prey and small smoke fires to smoke out animals and shoot them. Receiving an ominous message from star clan about total destruction, Eaglestar sends out 6 cats to go and find the tribe over the mountains where Howl and Gwyn came from. Once there, the six cats realize that there's a forest abound with prey and thousands of cats with unique skills, amazing fighting tactics, and a close relationship. However, it's just a dystopia. In reality, the cats feel trapped within the beautiful forest. Eager to escape, they agree to help under one condition. One of their kits must remain with them over the mountains. The tribe hasn't been able to reproduce due to a flower's pollen that goes throughout the air. Unable to decline and unable to accept, the 6 cats are left with the final decision that would save or destroy their clan. And they only have a week to decide it. ]

{Hmmm...
They're still travelling at the moment, so there is no SunClan territory yet. Everything here is temporary; they're going to start moving again after one day, RP-time. It wouldn't make sense to send cats away before they've stopped moving. I'd planned to have them start travelling again soon, possibly running into trouble on the way; twolegs, rogue cats, conflicts within the clan. There'd also be all the new mentors training their apprentices, once I have that ceremony. The plain setting with the sneaking out, like you mentioned, shouldn't last much longer. Soon they'll reach the forest, and there'd be some plots based on exploring the territory, finding a way to communicate with StarClan, that kind of thing. I also have a few more ideas to cause some conflict, though I'm not telling everyone just yet.

Maybe once that's done and everything's settled down we could do something like this, though I have a few problems with it. Or questions, rather.
Everything so far's been a journey to new territory after their home was destroyed. Do we really want to make their new home unlivable so soon?
Also, how are the cats trapped? Why can't they just leave? And why would they want one kit, how would that help them? If it's a flower's pollen in the air, wouldn't the same thing happen to the kit?
And why would the clan cats listen to them? Why do they need their help? And how is the problem of the territory and the twolegs solved at all?
Also, the 6 cats---I don't really like plots that only include a few cats. What about everyone else? Would everyone have to create new characters for the tribe? And what would all the cats left behind be doing?}