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F e l i n e wrote:
{Shiver} {Learner} {Cunning}
w h o i a m
{n a m e};; 'My name is Shiver. Call me anything else, and i'll claw you!"
{a g e};; "I've just turned 8 moons old."
{g e n d e r};; "What are you, stupid? it should be pretty obvious im a she-cat."
{r a n k};; "Learner, but i want to be lead cat one day."
i n s i d e o f m e
{c r u s h};; "Yeah, right.'
{m a t e};; "Too young for that."
{p e r s o n a l i t y};; Shiver is a very cunning little she-cat. She is clever and sly, and uses her intelligence to win battles. Her memory is very detailed and accurate, and she can remember almost everything that ever happened in her life. She is usually very reserved, rarely saying even a word. She prefers to do things by herself, her way, and is untrusting of others. She is very quiet, and doesn't like being around other cats. But don't let her shyness fool you. When angered, her retorts are sharper than claws, and she is very stubborn. If she has something to say, she wont hesitate to say it, and though she doesnt talk much, her voice is clear and commanding. She is very independent, and hates having to rely on other cats. When she is alone, she is more adventurous and carefree, and loves exploring. She isn't built to be a fighter, with her small frame and delicate paws, she's a perfect hunter, good at being quiet and very fast. But even though she is small, she is a formidable opponent who can move with surprising speed and agility. Her cleverness and stealth is her greatest weapon, and when you get her to open up, she is a loyal cat who would die for her friends. Shiver isnt the strongest cat, but what she lacks in strength she makes up for in intelligence.
{h i s t o r y};; Her mother abandoned her in forest when Shiver was 4 moons old. She had taught her how to hunt and fight as well as she could, then left her alone by a stream. Shiver nearly starved to death, but was lucky enough to catch a small mouse. After that she began to catch more, and made a small den under a rock. One day, when Shiver was 6 moons old, a fox found her, and she had to shove herself under the rock and out of its reach. It started barking really loud, and some rougues from the group found her. They chased off the fox and brought her to meet the others, and she has been living with them ever since.
w h a t i s o n t h e o u t s i d e o f m e
{a p p e a r a n c e};; Shiver is slender and lithe, and not very strong. She is small for her age, as she was the runt of her litter, but she carries an aura of comfidence and doesn't let her size bother her.Her head is in poportion, her ears and eyes are rather large and her tail is particularly long. She is flexible, and can fit into small spaces easily thanks to her petite size. Her paws are small and dainty, but hide sharp silver claws and have tough pads. She is not strong or muscular, but what she lacks in strength she makes up for in speed and agility. Her hind legs, however, are pretty powerful, which makes her an excellent jumper and climber. Shiver's pelt is pale , silvery gray, and the fur is tipped in darker gray. She has dark gray and black tabby stripes, and there is white on her paws, chest, muzzle, and tail tip. She has darker silver stripes on her back as well as black ones.
{e y e c o l o r};;Shiver's eyes are a misty gray, with flecks of green and blue. They look like real silver, and are good at seeing in the dark.
{w e i g h t};; 6-7 pounds
{h e i g h t};;A little below 9 inches
m y l o v e l i f e
{w a n t' s i n a m a t e};;"I havent really thought about it, but i guess i would like a nice, adventurous tom."
dutchgirl8 wrote:❂ Sᴜɴsᴇᴛ ❂
{Sunset}{She-cat}{Trainer}" A once in a lifetime opportunity wasted, is a oppotunity gone forever "
" The quest shall go on untill the most powerful in the world stops it "
" Thy who earns my respect will be the cat no one can deny as a great Leader "
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{What be the Name?} :: {Sunset.}
{What Gender shall you take?} :: {She-cat, Female, Fae.}
{How to express your Age?} :: {28 moons, 2 years and 4 moons.}
{So what Rank do you bare?} :: {She desires to stand by Blaze's side before this powerful group of cats as Second-in-Command, but a valuable Rank shall be earned, not wished and recieved. Just a Trainer for now.}
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{Who takes the role of Love of your Life?} :: {OOO}
{Who be the one by your Side?} :: {OOO}
{A bit of Personal Description?} :: {Sunset is considered a short-tempered, sharp she-cat who doesn't take nonsense. Yes, her heart lies in Blaze's gang of followers, and she will stay completely loyal all her life. If it was her choice, she would die to protect the group from any dangers they may face in their upcoming lives. But Sunset has a hard shell. A dark, impatient outside that can rarely be broken. Her hot-headed personality often gets the better of her, and she may find faults with you that she often comments about as offense. But Sunset's overall personality proves that her temper is a big and bad trait of hers.}
{Sunset makes her own decisions, and won't stand for useless cats. She takes her time on her actions, but sometimes can't controll them. This relates to her unusual fighting skill. Sunset follows after her father, a bold rogue with extremely strong defenses. This young she-cat is quick and sharp, with such intense consentration she can flow out of the way from direct moves with elegant ease. She is also a strong fighter, especially for a she-cat. Her skills for much farther than her father's did, and she will do whatever it takes to win a battle.}
{Sunset has a considerate side. She isn't all anger and impatience. She respects other sensible ideas, and considers them from time to time. Her softer personality is like a sweet core. The outside of her is firm and unwilling, but the inside is caring and gentle. Sunset also will do anything to care for her group-mates. Her heart is really bold and loving, so she will always stand foreward to help another cat. So she can really be a sweet she-cat when you get to know her.}
{So how was your Past?} :: {Of course, Sunset's historic past wasn't the best. Her life was full of torture, death and rage. This often gave her no other choice than to prove herself worthy of being with the braver sort. So enter her history and learn what horror and cruelty was really like.}
{Sunset was born as a kit in a huge Clan of bold, brave cats. Her mother was Dawnwhisker, a puffy light ginger she-cat with soft yellow eyes. Her father was a huge, bulky black tom with a very slim figure, known as Spidernettle. As far as Sunset ever knew at the time, her parents loved eachother very much. And her. They named her Sunnykit because of her golden tabby pelt but her slim father-like figure. Sunnykit never knew the name of the Clan. For minor days after her birth, her eyes opened and her first sight was fangs, blood, claws. She had clung to her mother's paw as she was scraped backwards into the center of bright camp, out of the dark comfort of the Nursery. She had felt claws sinking into her flanks and adobmen, and all she could so was stare into the now clouded world as pools of blood sunk into her fur. Her own blood. Then she was forced to watch, barely living, as her mother was dragged from her den and slaughtered, there and then. Nothing could be done.}
{Sunnykit and her father had left the Clan before the Clan cats got their pic of their second kill. Sunnykit had begged her father to know the story, but he had denied it for many moons. Soon, Sunnykit became Sunset, a powerful rogue. She followed after her father, Spider, and they searched for life in the forests. Sunset's father, Spider, eventually came to a point when he let the truth out. He told Sunset what had happened. "It was a story of lies and tragedy." he had told her. "Your mother and I had never got along well. We had a evening together and when we returned, we had a huge row. Only in a few moons I heard the unbareable news that she bore the kits we had shared the night we had out together. I couldn't believe it. But it was true. We had a huge fight about it, then decided to keep it a secret. A clan member, Lynxheart, was the deputy. He heard the whole thing. I don't know what happened/ We just thought the best idea was to get rid of him before he destroyed our lives. We had no idea all this would happen. The Clan discovered our secret, and you know the rest."}
{Sunset, from that point, had pushed all her goodness down and suppressed joy. Her rage exploded so many times, Spider couldn't take it any more. He attempted cold-blooded murder on his daughter, only to feel no pain doing it. He slaughtered Sunset untill she was crying in pain, but that was his big mistake. Going for the kill. Sunset forced him to a stop with shieking that Spider knew would haunt him forever if he killed her. He bent double and cleaned his daughter up. Sunset took her chance five days later, when she murdered Spider and left him once and for all. So she met Blaze, and knew her life's adventure would not stop there. Peace was not anything to be achieved or earned. It was no where.}
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{What is to be Enjoyed?} :: {Sunset, like any cat, enjoys a bit of peace and quiet. Being easily angered, Sunset takes more time off than any cat would. She is often considered lonely because of this, and will spend most of her time in her den or resting by the forest's river.}
{Sunset is a big fan of cold Weather. Don't ask why, but it keeps her calm. Her firey orange pelt strands out in the snowy depths, while rain seems to bring back her past.}
{What is to be Disliked?} :: {Sunset hates being cramped by huge crouds. It brings on her bad side, and she gets very impatient with this.}
{Shall this Strengthen you?} :: {Sunset is strangely strengthened by fire. It seems not to effect her, and her fears don't overcome her when she knows the danger of smoke and fire is near. In a way, it almost seems to summon her over, and make her want to die at the heels of her burning friend.}
{Sunset is also strengthened by the thought of what could happen if she stood forward. If she knows her Leader, Blaze, or a close friend could be harmed by her cowering back, all her power seems to gather up and shoot out all a once in full strength.}
{Shall this Weaken you?} :: {Sunset can easily be pained by the sight of a dead friend or her Leader, Blaze. It can trigger something inside her, as if all her strength is dragged out of her. She seems to loose all of her will, and feels like she wants to drop down and die beside them.}
{Sunset isn't the best swimmer. She hates to admit it, but her fears crawl up to the top when it comes to water. She has a huge fear of large waterfalls, and can't think straight when she sees one.}Δи∂ Ƴσʋя Ѳʋтɛя βɛαʋтʏ
{Overall you May Be?} :: {At first glance, Sunset seems to fit her name perfectly. Her body is slim and elegant, and her fur is a shimmering firey orange. Fur being orange, it is also a tabby pelt - darker ginger stripes cover her foreheard and back, aswell as her underfur being slightly lighter than her main fur. Sunset also has small, swift paws and thin legs for quick running, and tall, lynx-like ears. Her tail is extraudinarily long and her eyes are a beautiful emerald green like the freshest grass.}
{What pretty Fur you have?} :: {Sunset has beautiful orangery ginger fur with darker orange patterns and light, creamy ginger fur on her underbelly and tailtip. Her fur is shortly trimmed and silky soft to touch. It is very comforting like the softest moss.}
{What pretty Patterns you have?} :: {Sunset has darker orange tabby stripes over her tail, forehead and back in jagged patterns.}
{What pretty Eyes you have?} :: {Sunset's eyes are a soft but bright emerald green, almost like a sunlit sea. They reflect in water like small jewels, and have a soft glow to them that can comfort even the most angered cat.}
{May I ask your Weight?} :: {Sunset is a slim and tender she-cat, so her weight is a low 10 and a half pounds.}
{May I ask your Height?} :: {Sunset is only just over averadge in height, and is roughly 12 and a half inches, ear tips to toes when standing.}
{May I ask your Length?} :: {Sunset, again, is just over the averadge length with 1 and a half foot.}
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{The User's Name?} :: {Dutchgirl8, but feel free to call me anything related to my username. Dutch is fine.}
{Your Theme-songs?} :: {Sunset's first and main theme-song is Stand in the Rain by Superchic(k). It really explains Sunset because it shows her fear of crying and explains her past. It also shows her mind when alone, showing she feels trapped in a world that is trying to murder her. But it also explains how she does her best to stand her ground and do her best in this world, and that a voice is telling her in her head that she won't drown in the pain this world has caused her. But part of the song also mentions about wanting to be found - which means she wants a cat to realize the pain she is in. Aswell as the part that mentions she wants to lie down - it means she wishes to stop and die, give up on this huge adventure once and for all.}
{Sunset's second theme-song is 1000 Words by Sweetbox. It explains about her fear of this world and her wish to be found by a cat who she can trust with her entire life and soul.}
{May this be Farewell?} :: {Thank you very much, I can't wait to see if I get accepted! I spent ages on this form.}
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