Tough as Nails Adoption (Closed for renovations!)

[Missy]

* I have removed my entry (as it didn't win) so I can use the form for other characters I may find/adopt/make*

[Theophilus]

If anyone says this is epic, I shall get that fish and slap you myself x.x this is my worst one yet, I doubt it will be accepted.

That isn't epic. That is AMAZING, absolutely. Dude... gahhh STOP MAKING MEH JEALOUS.

[Enoch]

There is no word for that, more than epic, more than amazing,... need to make a new word for that...

Exprtamzzing!!!!

*makes note that Chooky thinks it will not be accepted, and if it is, slaps Chooky with her own fish!!*

[Missy]

GAHHHHHHH x.x

[Achi]

GAHHHHHHH x.x

*Slaps with fish*
I TOLD YOU SO! 8D

[wibeke]

-steals fish-
Ha, now that i can safely say this...
THAT IS FREAKING EPIC DUDE!
-ahem-

[Theophilus]

I would like to adopt!
Number:
Picture:
Name: Enko
Species: some form of canid. that is all we know for sure.
Personality: Enko. Say the name aloud, for it best describes the mysterious creature.

"En." A soft sound, just a whisper, that could describe the graceful polite mannerism, the charming air of the large tattooed canine. If a single syllable could describe a gentleman, it would be that. Enko will smile and smirk, dipping his head when it cannot be held high with arrogance. He's the flirt w ho would be kissing the hand of a girl, opening doors for her and winning her with a proud, all-knowing smile. He is arrogant, yes, but he pulls the trait off so perfectly, hiding it behind a cloud of sophistication, that an insult would be impossible.

"Ko." Sharp and cutting, cold and fast. Swift and mischievous, cunning but almost vicious in his ignorance of most morales. Enko has no sympathy for most, no empathy, nothing but a pride in himself.

Enko is short-tempered and impatient, although he tries to control himself when control is needed. He'll get angry easily, angry at others, angry at the world, angry at himself.

But behind the self-centered, reckless image is a deeper soul, one that has been reborn into hundreds of bodies time after time. He practices a form of canid kung-fu religiously, like in his previous lives. He is stubborn, with a strong sense of rebellion when he's on the bottom of things. However, he's hypocritical in that way - when he's not the leader, he thinks that it's unfair. When he is, it's perfectly fine that he's a dictator. A paradox, no?

His morales...? be daring. Be reckless. Don't be afraid cuz cowards, wimps, and losers die out, it's a dog eat dog world, but Enko? He's a wolf.

Enko is a holder of deep grudges, although it may not be right or thoughtful to do so - he'll hate the nice, considerate wolf who regrets that he accidentally pushed the Wolf of Shiny Runes over that one day.

He lives in the moment for the most part, not looking ahead. Who cares about consequences? It's enjoyable now, and that's all that matters, isn't it?
Likes:
Dislikes:
Background For thousands of years, the spirit of the Wolf of Shiny Runes has been passed on, for the world needs it to survive - the Rune Wolf is civilization, is humanity. We depend on him subconsciously, and without his prescense our society would collapse beneath us. We would lose our morales, our thoughts, everything that makes us human.

At the second that the physical shell of the Wolf of Shiny Runes dies, his spirit is passed into a newborn wolf pup. The pup is born with it's eyes wide open, and glowing tattoos engraved into his pelt. The Rune Wolf learns to talk and walk within days of his birth, and within a month leaves his parents.

Enko was no different than his ancestors. He was born to a wolf couple. His "parents" had heard the stories of the Wolf of Shiny Runes, and although the shining tattoos could not lie, they refused to believe that their firstborn son was that legendary creature. They hoped it was a mistake, a coincidence, begged the sky gods to take the spirit from their child.

But within ten days of his coming into the world, Enko, "the one who lives alone" was the size of a two-month old pup. He left his parents and came upon a tribe of Native people - the wolves were wolves of an island, a small subspecies not much studied by humans. He was raised by them, and worshipped, treated like a god, a king. They knew the stories of the Rune Wolf, knew of his greatness, his prowess. They pampered him and he was just milking it, enjoying the attention.

But then a day of blood, fire, and fast-running wolves came along, and his perfect world was ripped apart.

Fire. One of Enko's only fears, from a certain painful incident in the few days he spent wandering before finding his tribe. The flames were everywhere, consuming the grass, the sky, the very air he breathed. And they were pushing him - trying to push him into the flames - and the fire was on his fur, lighting nup, reflecting on the fear in his eyes and the glow of his runes - and that's when the Wolf of Shiny Runes did what none had done before:

He ran.

Ran from his fears, ran from his weakness, and just ran where his past incarnations had bowed to their fate. He found that he liked this, this life of traveling, of flirting with pretty females and hunting when he was hungry, although it was his teeth that killed the elk and deer and rabbits, not those of his servants.

Very much WIP, just posting so I'll remember to work on it.

Anyone have some critique on this now? *coughnotwibcough*

[Araviir]

EPIC! *is slapped with fish* GAHHHH!

[wibeke]

You just said i can't critique it, so i'll just say this instead;
That's amazing capri and i need you're writing skills.

[kitten5862]

I would like to adopt!
Number: 8
Picture:
Name: Kisha
Species: Moon Wolf

Personality: Kisha is always alert. She is very cautious and is always alert at the things that are happening at the moment. Kisha is very strong and also determined. She was left to fend for herself when she was at the helpless age of only 1 year old. She lived by herself for almost 8 years. It was hard but she was determined enough to make it through and teach herself how to catch fish, kill squirrels and do everything else that is a necessity to life.

Likes: Kisha loves the moon. She was born on the moon and lived on the moon for almost 8 years.She also loves her parents. Her parents had saved her from being taken by people. She also just loves snow! She likes the way it melts after is softly and slowly falls on your tongue. She like to chew on icicles when they form on the tree branches on a cold and bitter winter day. She likes her power to hypnotize others. She loves it especially when she is in trouble or danger.

Dislikes: Kisha hates humans. It all started when she was 1. Humans came to the moon and took all of the moon wolves except for her because her parents saved her from the humans.

Background/Life:

Kisha has a strong love for the moon. Some think she was actually born on the moon. This thought is really true. She was born on the moon and she never has told anyone about it. No one would ever find out unless she decided to tell them. When someone asks her if she was, she will try to do anything to get off of the subject.

When Kisha was 1 year old she lived with her parents on the moon. But then her parents left her because there was a terrible incident that happened when she turned 1. There were people in weird suits that came and started to take all of the wolves that lived on the moon back down to a planet called “Earth”. Even thought that day was really fuzzy for Kisha, she still remembers her mom and dad telling her that they loved her and wrapped her up in a soft blanket and placed her carefully nestled in a closet. They did this for her so the people couldn’t find her and take her away with the rest of them. Kisha’s parents would have done the same, but they knew that they would never fit in there. Her parents had left her and after 1 hour, Kisha cautiously sneaked out from the closet in were she was placed. She came out to find that there was no wolf and the fresh moon air was still. It was so quit Kisha started to get scared and she could even hear a cricket chirping up a storm next to a nearby pond. She knew everyone she knew and loved dearly was gone. She even caught a quick glance of one of the space ships and it was headed down to “Earth”. She had a feeling her parents were in that one and it was now gone. Kisha knew she would have to go down to this so called “Earth” and search for her parents. But at the moment she was a young, helpless little pup. She would have to find a way to survive and get stronger on the now deserted moon. Kisha set off to find a source of water and food, as she knew where to seek shelter. So she went exploring and found a good sized spring in a small forest next to the cave of where she lived in for shelter. In the spring she found small fish of which she feed off of. Kisha also knew the plants of the forest pretty well. She knew which ones were poisonous and those that were edible. She kept up with this routine for the next 5 years. She was 6 and Kisha was very strong and now was eating squirrels and other small mammals she managed to find. Kisha to the small house where she used to live. She found a beautiful beautiful necklace on the ground. It was a pretty cresant moon on a silver thread. She remembered seeing her mom wear it a lot before. But the weird thing was that the moon and tread were so beautiful and shinny and it was 5 years since her parents left the moon. It looked as if it has just gotten placed there that day. She knew her mom has treasured it so Kisha scooped it up carefully and slipped it around her neck. She continued living on the moon but when she turned 7 she knew she had to somehow make her way down to “Earth”. In the next year she was planning for her trip down the “Earth”. Kisha went exploring and found something. Something that would help her a lot. She found a spaceship. It must have been left on accident by the people. It looked like it would work fine, so Kisha cautiously stepped into the open spaceship. She looked around and saw that it had many buttons and blinking things. It was in great condition but needed some final touches and then may work. Kisha spent the next 4 days fixing it up. On the end of the 4th day she was finished and just needed to put some of her items in the storage room. She was finished and tomorrow she would be leaving the moon to go down to Earth. It was now the day she had to leave the moon. Kisha was excited but also sad, because she had to leave the moon and that is where she has lived for almost 8 years. She then decided to visit the moon once a year. It was hard to leave the moon but Kisha raced into her spaceship and flew down to Earth. It took her a day to reach earth. She landed in a big field. Kisha quickly raced out from the spaceship to make sure no one saw this happen. And just her luck there was no one in the field yet. So Kisha went back in the spaceship for another hour and then came out. She spotted some people walking dogs. Kisha growled at the people and some of them that were nearby looked up. A few of the men came racing towards her. Kisha had to act quick as she knew she was in danger. She made up her mind and darted off towards a small house she could see in the distance. She stopped running when she reached the house, as she knew she had lost the group of people. Her heart was pounding and she could hardly breathe. As soon as Kisha could breathe right, she set off to explore a forest she could see nearby. She could hear a waterfall lapping the water in a spring. Then Kisha heard odd noises coming from the left, right, behind her, and even in a tree above her. Then the creatures showed themselves. They had big, sharp teeth that were showing. They were growling at Kisha. She was startled and frightened at them. Kisha knew they were a pack of angry wolves. And she knew that they were mad because she had crossed into their pack's territory. Kisha didn't want any trouble so she tried to dart off but noticed that she was surrounded by them. Then a wolf that was almost twice the size of Kisha jumped down from the tree right above her head. He was the leader of the pack and he landed right in front of her. He studied her over and knew she was not part of his pack, and she was just a trespasser. He looked really mad and asked her why she was in their territory. He said it in a mad and mean voice. "I,I'm not from around here". Kisha stuttered. The wolf didn't know what she meant. Kisha stared at him and he hit the ground as soon as he looked into her eye. Awesome! Kisha whispered to herself. She did this to the rest of the pack till they all were asleep. That was when Kisha figured out she had a power. A power that could hypnotize others when Kisha and the other wolf stared each other in the eye. But they would have to look in the eye with the swirl on it to be hypnotized. Then Kisha saw little white things fall from the sky. It got really cold outside and the white things were even colder! Kisha didn't know what this was because she had never experienced this on the moon. Kisha didn't even know it was winter because on the moon, there was no seasons. She heard a little girl from a nearby cabin yell "Yey its snowing!" Kisha then knew this weird white stuff was really snow! She trotted up behind the cabin to listen to what they were saying. They said that it was now the first day of Winter. Kisha now knew it was now Winter and heard them say something about an icicle. Kisha noticed something that was clear, but very cold. Kisha licked it but her tongue got stuck on it! Kisha was very scared as she knew the humans were coming out soon. She clawed at the icicle, yet nothing happened. She gave it a hard tug. The icicle gave out and she was free. She ran as fast as she could to get away from the cabin. When she turned back, she saw the little girl come outside. Kisha got away just in time.

Kisha wears a blue collar. She didn't have it until it was her 3rd day on Earth. On that day she decided to go find one. She wanted one because she saw every dog wearing them. People thought she was a husky. Kisha didn't want others to think she was a wolf, or others would try to kill her. She walked around in the woods at night and went to look at the cabin. She noticed the lights were on and saw some shadows of people walking around in there. She noticed a pretty blue collar on the ground on her way to the cabin. She picked it up and it was made out of leather. There also was a small charm of a moon. On the moon charm said Kisha. Kisha was amazed that it had her name on it and a moon! SHe looked up in the cool winter sky and saw the stars were brighter then they used to be. And the moon was glowing beautifully and it was a cresent moon.

Any critigue one this form I did? ^^