Symphony Character Adoption Agency - CD + OPEN! :)

[Jericho]

Haha, I'll trample you all shortly, don't worry. xD

In fact, I'm looking for some crit on my personalities for Adelardo & Fedora at the moment. Once my form is finished, I'll get some opinion from everyone. But for now;
Username: wesleydog
Kennel that you are applying for: 78
Preferred critic: Foxtrot55
What do you wish to get out of this critique? I'd love some opinions on just the personalities that I have so far for Adelardo and Fedora. Are there any large contradictions? If so, how do you think I can fix that? Anything you think that I should add, or even remove? Be crazy harsh, Fox c:
Link to form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=1379673&start=660#p54560663
pouringrain

Haha, well I hope the one I sent you was harsh enough! XD

[-=Elita=-]

I'm SO sorry about this but I have to drop out. Just dont have the time right now to give this guy the love he deserves. May he find a better home elsewhere!

[Jericho]

Username; My username is Foxtrot55 but I
am more commonly known by my nickname, Fox.

Kennel Number; This magnificent beast resides in Kennel 197

Name; I have chosen to name this character, Dante.
Dante is a name with Latin origins and means everlasting.

Nickname; Dante is nicknamed Tay as that is the
nicest sounding short form for his name.

Age; His real age is unknown to even himself,
after all when your a tiger you don't really care to remember what year you
were born in. Based on his size, weight, and some other factors most
people believe he is approx. three years old.

Gender; He is a male.

Species; Dante is a White Bengal Tiger (Panthera tigris tigris)
which originates from India and is a currently endangered species.
White Bengal tigers are also known for having brown stripes
(as can be clearly seen on Dante's body.)
unlike their ginger counterpart which hold black ones.

Use for Character;
Just like all my other characters he will be given a special spot on my character website where his story can be read and art can be seen and admired by the many viewers who stop by. He will be made art, not only by myself but by various artists on Chickensmoothie and DeviantART. He will be loved, to say the least. He will have a good home, and will be cared for as long as I am able to care for him. On a random note, he will also be the 'guinea pig' for my animation practice, but that's more of a side job.

Personality;
Dante is what most would consider the opposite of the typical male tiger. Unlike the rest of the male tiger community, Dante does not have the extreme natural instinct to find a mate, pass down his genes, and defend his territory. In fact, Dante has no territory to call his own, mostly because of the fact that he does not care to defend it. He is a wanderer, never staying in one place for more then a month unless forced (say, he gets hurt badly or really likes the area he is currently in.). This has made his life a hard and dangerous one. He is unable to find a mate as he is not a strong fighter like the other males because of his lack of practice, and the hunter's scattering the area, laying tiger traps and killing for their fur. Because of his unique coat coloring he has had hunter track him for weeks, trying to be the first to lay claim on his beautiful striped fur. Though a wanderer, Dante is far from unsociable. Many times he has been spotted very close to the villages despite the hunters and also dangerously close to the territories of other tigers which has got him into trouble time and time again. But he always comes back, he longs to be close to other living creatures, even with the fact that something tugs his feet onward. Because his mother was killed by hunters when he was just a cub, Dante has learned how to survive on his own from a very young age. This made him stronger and quicker thinking then most tigers, giving him the boost up he needs to escape from angry and territorial male tigers.

History;

The distant rumble of a low roar rang out across the darkening landscape of the Savanna. Most of the grazing animals were settling down for the cool night, gather together their youngsters and finding a safe place to rest through the dark hours. The many night time hunters were the only ones becoming more active, they stalked the valley in search of their next meal. Tigers were not resting that night and slowly other roars echoed the first, protecting their territory and letting the other tigers know to stay away. There was one shadow coated figure which was not like the rest, not calming down for the night, not hunting, just walking... walking to an unknown destination.

Dante's eyes skimmed past the tempting flesh of the various grass eating animals around him, his eyes focusing past them to the horizon. His thick white coat was glowing an almost orange color in the fading light of the sun making him turn a fierce color like his ginger cousins. His coat is what set him apart from the rest, treasured and sought after by the many hunters searching for the perfect coat to tan and sell for profit. Hunters were one of the only things Dante really feared, almost all tigers did. After all the hunters carried black sticks of fire and dug deep holes for the tigers to fall in, usually hurting their legs badly. They bared their teeth when they were happy, happy! Showing your teeth meant you were angry or defending yourself not when you were happy. Dante feared them with everything in him.

WIP

Theme Song(s);
You'll Be In My Heart - Phil Collins
I chose this song to be his theme song because
it makes me think of what his mother might have
sung the day she was forced to leave him as a cub.

Likes;
• Being close to other living creatures
• Tiger cubs
• Gentle breezes
• Distant roars in the night

Dislikes;
• Hunters and their traps
• Aggressive male tigers
• Being hungry
sexyback

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By Foxtrot55
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Original Image - By Doll Divine
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By Raven Feather

[kafka]

Haha, I'll trample you all shortly, don't worry. xD

In fact, I'm looking for some crit on my personalities for Adelardo & Fedora at the moment. Once my form is finished, I'll get some opinion from everyone. But for now;
Username: wesleydog
Kennel that you are applying for: 78
Preferred critic: Foxtrot55
What do you wish to get out of this critique? I'd love some opinions on just the personalities that I have so far for Adelardo and Fedora. Are there any large contradictions? If so, how do you think I can fix that? Anything you think that I should add, or even remove? Be crazy harsh, Fox c:
Link to form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=1379673&start=660#p54560663
pouringrain

Haha, well I hope the one I sent you was harsh enough! XD

You're applying for 78? Aw... Good luck though c:

[Wesley]

You're applying for 78? Aw... Good luck though c:

Haha, I am. x3
The two of them and I go waaay back. I applied for their original designs and lost, so I'm out to get them this time c:

Thanks for the donations, Raven!

Might have to challenge you on that one, Queen Chrysalis. Such a beautiful pony!

Fox, I love that picture for Arrow. Good luck!

[Jericho]

Thanks Wes! I love him so much <3
I'm probably just going to make a ton of art for him until I decide on a name and stuff.

[Wesley]

Thanks Wes! I love him so much <3
I'm probably just going to make a ton of art for him until I decide on a name and stuff.

I just noticed the background on your image for him, too. I like the trees. :'D
Animation is cute too ^^
Have fun. Drawing helps you really muse for the character, so I'm sure you'll find a name soon.

[toady]

So the code drop didn't happen right

[Wesley]

So the code drop didn't happen right

It did happen, yes.
It was a small code drop, but here it is: click

[FlamingGazelle]

I would like to know why I wasn't allowed to adopt ay of the characters I applied for?
I'm not a good writer, I usually can only do like 2 paragraphs. I am a person of few words, art is where I have my niche.
Please consider these things when you judge applications in the future.
Thanks,
FlamingGazelle