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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - New Round! (o

Postby Muttz » Wed Sep 12, 2012 9:40 am

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Username:Shiba inu
Kennel Number:1
Name [of pet]:Pumpkin
Gender [of pet]:Female
Breed/Species [of pet]:Shiba inu
Personality [of pet]:Sweet,shy,attravtive,
Background/History [of pet]:
Pumpkin's mother sat by the den.She whined and yelped as she gave birth to 5 shiba mix wolf puppies.She smiled and looked down at Pumpkin.Pumpkin was her favorite pup of all.She was also the tiniest.She had dark brown markings along with light brown markings.Her mother could tell she was more of a shiba inu.Her mother,(Ciara)Spotted a brown grizzly bear.The bear was a male.Ciara then noticed her mate lying dead.Ciara teared on her favorite pup,pumpkin.Ciara coulden't get up and leave these helpless defenless new borns.Ciara sighed as stood up.Ciara howled a long errie howl.She growled and got ready to attack.The bear threw her on the ground.She tried to get back up,but the bear kept on hitting her with his big heavy paw.Soon enough,Pumpkins mother was dead.Pumpkin was too young to know what was going on.The grizzly bear swotted his paw at Pumkins 4 brothers and sisters.Soon enough they were dead.Pumpkin was too weak to move around.She needed her mother's milk.Otherwise,she would die too.The least she could do was cuddle with her dead brothers and sisters and act like she was dead too.Outside the den there was a Young mother playing with her old cub.The cub was old enough to hunt and have her own offspring if she wanted to.The old cub was brown with grey.So was the mother.They were both Timber wolves{grey wolves/canis lupus}.The two wolves were tired so they went inside the den.The mother wolf scented dead pups and immedautly started looking for them.She Finnally found them.She sniffed all of them to make sure they were dead.But one wasn't.She looked up at her and called her pup."Yes mom?" her pup responded."Jay Jay,isent she beautiful?" the mother named Sopia said.Jay Jay smiled great fully saying "yes"."I think I'll she could be my pup"Sopia said great fully.Pumpkin fed on Sopia's milk.Sopia was a secand mother to Pumpkin.When Pumkin was a few weeks old she would play with her older sister.Pumpkin was ranked as Beta Female in the pack.The 2nd mother and Jay jay had sooo much fun with each other.Pumpkin never knew she was a oraphaned.It was never mentioned in their conversations earthier.Sopia had called Pumpkin."Pumkin,I never was your real mother" tears ran down Sopia's eyes as she felt awful never telling Pumpkin that.Pumpkin gasped and warmed Sopia up."Your real mother & father were killed in a grizzly bear fight"Sopia said crying."There names Were Shadow and Ciara.Ciara was your mother and shadow was your father.So for now refere to me as Sopia.Not mom.Alright?" Sopia said.Pumpkin nodded.After that pumpkin decided that it would be right to move out of the small pack.Leaving them both behind in the harsh cold snow.Pumpkin then came across the same grizzly bear that killed her mother and father .She growled and lunged at him."I thought I killed you & your family" the grizzly bear said."Well it looks like we have a survivor" Pumkin growled and bit his chest.She was then thrown to the ground being slapped by the grizzly bear.Before she knew it she couldent feel her legs.She was left there,to die.A grey wolf then approached the bear as he tacked him to the ground.The ground was solid and it would be a hard fall if you fell on this kind of ground.The grey wolf dragged Pumkin to a cave."Your pretty small for a wolf"he said.Pumkin responded "Because I'm Shiba inu too"."Well,my named Madison" why don't you eat now.You look starving.Madison sild a whole dead carcus to her.Pumpkin ate half of the carcus and said "Thanks" to Madison.Madison smiled and hugged her.Madoson then dug the meat underground and patted it.Madison then slept with Pumpkin.Pumpkin smiled as she kissed him goodnight.The next morning,Madison asked Pumpkin to be his mate.Pumpkin said "yes" and hugged him tight.Madison smiled with pumpkin.
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Use [for pet]:
I will use her as a character.She would be my new Fursona.She will be displayed at my sig at all times.She will be my most favorite character of all<3.I would order lots and lots of art of her and make plushies of her in real life.I would never sell her.Not even for the famous UR Tiger dog.I love her to bits.And some day I will call her mine.
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This is a Huge WIP so watch your steps
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - New Round! (o

Postby neonfrozen » Wed Sep 12, 2012 9:42 am

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Kennel Number:
Ninety-Four [94]

Name [of pet]:
Feather

Gender [of pet]:
Female

Breed/Species [of pet]:
Canine/Labrador Retriever
Kingdom: Animalia
Phylum: Chordata
Class: Mammalia
Order: Carnivora
Family: Canidae
Genus: Canis
Species: C. lupus
Subspecies: C. l. familiaris


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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - New Round! (o

Postby revenmoore » Wed Sep 12, 2012 11:35 am

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Username: Captain Zoey
Kennel Number: 153
Name [of pet]: Mariana
Gender [of pet]: Female
Breed/Species [of pet]: Feline
Personality [of pet]:
Mariana is friendly, patient, and kind. She's very nurturing and someday wishes to have kits. She's a bit too easily trusting though and gets her heart broken constantly. She's very desperate in her search for love and wants to find just the right cat. Mariana is actually pretty intelligent although but lacks common sense, she doesn't think before she does or says anything. She's usually very outgoing and it's rare to find her in a bad mood. (Unless her current mate has broken up with her.) She can be a bit ditzy at times, but all-in-all she's mostly considered someone great to be around.

Background/History [of pet]:
I actually already have an entire family prepared for Mariana!:
Father: Wind||Lily||Brothers: Purity Phantom and Blizzard (half brother
She's actually the sibling of one of my fursonas, Purity.

Mariana was born to a litter of three kittens: Phantom and Purity and has no actual knowledge of her brother Blizzard. Mariana is about 3 years old and is the youngest of her siblings, Blizzard being the oldest. When she was six months old her parents abandoned her and her brothers in a way. They went back to their normal lives leave the three kits to fend for themselves, by the time they were a year old they were all preoccupied by mates/friends in their life. Purity had met a she-cat named Fright, who tricked him into thinking she was a lot nicer than she really was. Phantom eventually found out Fright's horrid past leading the traitorous Fright to kill him to keep her secret safe from Purity. Purity found out anyway and blamed himself for Phantom's death and sank into a depression. Crushed by her brother's death, and Purity's guilt she left her home behind completely.
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A slight she-cat stalked warily through the dusty and dead forest, they had been in a drought for several moons now. She wasn't sure if she even remembered what green looked like. Mariana's silvery tail drooped as she trudged on farther and farther away from her brother and the only life she had ever known. The usual charismatic Mariana would have gotten over it, would have been excited for the change, but that was far from what she was feeling now. After traveling for three days food had become rather scarce- not that she was very skilled at catching prey anyway. Purity and Phantom had always done that. She heard a small rustle in the bushes and was surprised when a gray tabby head pushed it's way through, the tom was far larger than her and crunched every dry and brittle stalk of grass in his path. He seemed surprised to see her at first, his gaze was friendly. "Hello." He said politely. "I'm Alchemy, what's your name?" Mariana just stared for a few moments. "Mariana." She finally answered. "Are you alright?" Alchemy walked a bit closer to her. "I-I-" She stammered for a few moments. "No. I'm really not."

After spilling her guts to Alchemy she had to admit she felt a bit better. It turned out he was a house cat, he'd even offered to let her stay with him. She accepted that offer in a heartbeat. Alchemy had a pretty good life she had to admit. His home was soft and plush and the food wasn't too bad. The water though-yuck! It had a sharp and metallic taste, nothing like river water or even water from puddles. She was considering staying with Alchemy permanently. If he'd have her. She really liked the cheerful tabby tom. As she thought about this Alchemy padded in through his cat-flap his sky-blue eyes turning towards her. Her heart leaped.

As the months passed and she tried to get Alchemy to notice her. She always made sure her fur was sleek as can be, and hoped her eyes looked extra sparkly that day. He still didn't notice her like she wanted. She was a nice she-cat wasn't she? Not mean, pretty enough, right? "Good morning." Alchemy purred as he padded into the kitchen where Mariana slept. "Why don't you like me?" She suddenly blurted, regretting it instantly. Alchemy stopped dead in his tracks, he just stared. He was silent for a long time before sitting down and letting out a gusty sigh. "The thing is Mariana-" He paused, seeming to think more. "There was this cat, her name was Jade, and I really liked her, we agreed that we'd be mates and have the cutest kits to ever exist." His voice wavered and he stared at the floor. "Her and her humans moved away." Mariana didn't know how to respond. She felt selfish. She hadn't bothered to think about Alchemy's own feelings. "i have to leave here." She murmured. "I need to grow and learn-" She looked at him adoringly for a few seconds. "And you need to find someone who's right for you." She licked him on the cheek before leaving Alchemy's home, and never looked back.

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(I'm sorry that's so...blah. My writing's been kind of forced recently, I can't seem to get any muse. I'm just hoping it doesn't affect this too much. D;)

After Mariana leaves Alchemy she heads farther away, and meets several cats along the way. Three of which she 'falls in love' with, but ends up getting her heart broken each time. She finally settles in with a family of humans and meets Deacon.


Use [for pet]: She's the sister of my fursona who I use in stories often, so I'll write about her a lot as well.

Other [Art, Likes, Dislikes, Mate, Age, Appearance, etc.]:
Mate: Mariana has several mates, but her final true mate will be Deacon

Likes:
- Flowers
- Romance
- Nighttime
- Stars
- Most sappy things
- Kittens


Dislikes:
- Thunderstorms
- Badgers
- Hunting



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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - New Round! (o

Postby Solanum » Wed Sep 12, 2012 6:40 pm

Just checking to make sure, since I can't see WIP posted, are you finished or still going?
The history section needs to be much more detailed. It needs to play out in a story-like way rather than a brief outline, so we know you have a feel for the character, and so I can put myself into the story to judge.
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when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - New Round! (o

Postby revenmoore » Thu Sep 13, 2012 2:38 am

Solanum wrote:Just checking to make sure, since I can't see WIP posted, are you finished or still going?
The history section needs to be much more detailed. It needs to play out in a story-like way rather than a brief outline, so we know you have a feel for the character, and so I can put myself into the story to judge.


Oh, I'm sorry! I'll keep working on that then. uvu
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - New Round! (o

Postby Ke$haWolf » Thu Sep 13, 2012 7:49 am

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Yep, you know me ^.^ Well, you can call me Raver as always <3


Name:
Azalae
Now Azalae seems like a beautiful name for this beautiful lioness. The blue or 'Azure' colours neatly put in her design in small places so it stands out against the lovely burgundy coloured fur on her. Azalae was pushed in together with the word 'Azure'. The rest, i randomly put in due to the sound as you say the word Azalae. The pronunciation of the word Azalae goes like this: Aza-Lay. Quite easy actually, a unique and well thought out name for the outstandingly mysterious, beautiful lioness
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Gender:
Female
The eyes, definatly tell you that it's a female. The smooth rich azure glowing with femininity. The colours blend in well.

Breed/Species:
Lioness
Lioness, a female word of the Lion. Lions are constantly on the prowl for mates and food. Lions live in the Savannah and they are the 2nd largest big cat after the Tiger. Lions have extremley sharp canines to peirce the skin of their prey and a spiky tongue to get the excess meat off of the bones.

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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - New Round! (o

Postby L O K I » Thu Sep 13, 2012 10:53 am

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Kennel Number
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Name
Loup, said " Loop ".
Gender
Loup Is a female, though she Is regularly mistaken for a male because of her looks and name, so sometimes she will just lie to you about her gender to save her from the embarrassment
Age
Loup Is a old pup, but not a young adult, so somewhere in the middle
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General Appearance
Loup Is not small for her age, but not big either, in the middle. Her fur is light brown with dark brown underbelly and tail and top of head. Her tail and ears are tipped with a color somewhere in between of both her colors of fur. Her eyes are red. Not a bright red, more a dull, relaxed sort of red. She is pretty dull and plain, but very unique, and the more you look at her the more you realize how beutifull she really is.
Breed/Species
Canine/Wolf
Art
Loup In the deep dark forest-KuroshitsujiLover<3
Loup Headshot-Cavae
Loup whole body-H o w l i n g

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Personality
Loup Isn't a very socializing kind of wolf, and she prefers to stick to herself. She Is shy and timid, and stays far away from all the action.She Is fairly active and fast and she is extremely smart. Loup also I'sent one to stand up for herself or others, and If In danger she will run, not fight. She can look after herself, and doesn't need a mother, though she misses her's.
Background And History
In the dense woods of Jerrilee, wolves roamed freely. Everyone was happy, all was peaceful, and there was plenty to eat and drink. Then there was the drought. Food and water went scare, and more and more wolves died by dehydration or starving to death. A pack called " Haunting Dreams " was formed by an evil brute called Haunting. Haunting Dreams thought they were the only wolves that mattered, and hogged all the remaining food for themselves, only leaving scraps for the others. They killed innocent wolves and pups so there was more food for them and sometimes even ate there own kind.

Unfortunately, this was where Loup was born.......

Loup's mother licked her newborn pups. She placed all 4 of them next to her teats and let them feed on her sweet milk. She sighed happily , but her happiness was soon shattered. The Haunting Dreams would never let her and her pups live. She slowly stood up, wincing at the pain of birth, and picked up the 4 pups by there scruffs. She headed out of the den, but it was to late, they were already here. She growled and stood over her whimpering pups. " Hah, you thought you could escape us " said a low, scary voice. She growled louder as her hackles rose and she looked around, not seeing where the voice was coming from in the black night. She slowly darted away the den and ran as fast as she could go. A heavy wolf knocked her, pinning her to the ground. The pups fell hard, 2 dying form the impact, leaving Loup and her brother. The wolves ripped into Loup's mother, killing her instantly. Loup ran to hide behind a nearby tree tree, but her brother was no where to be seen. Loup hid behind the tree, not daring to breath till the wolves were gone, and then ran as fast as her little legs could go. She ran all night, and as the sun was rising she entered a small clearing. There was fresh green grass all around, with a sparkling spring in the corner. Trees and bushes hid the clearing from the outside and small forest animals scurried up the trees and drank at the spring. Birds chirped in the tall trees, and the smell of pine filled the air. Loup collapsed on the ground in a small heap and curled up and softly cried...
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Loup opened her eyes slowly to the sound of birds chirping. She blinked a couple of times before standing up, stretching her sore muscles and bones. She walked over to the spring and drank from it before jumping in and cleaning her blood covered fur. Refreshed and no longer thirsty she swam out of the spring and shook her drenched fur. " How come no one has ever found this place before " she thought. Her tummy grumbled and she realized how hungry she was. " Where am I going to get milk now that mummy's...." she thought. She looked around and spotted something rustle in the bush. She ran over to it and stuck her head into the bushes. It was a Fae. Not a young Fae though, this Fae was old and wrinkled. " You look hungry little one, how about some milk. I used to have pups, so i have some weak milk left" said the Fae....
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It's been 2 years since my mother and kin got killed. It's also been 2 years since the drought finished. I could have gone back, but I liked It here in my clearing. The strange Fae fed me milk till i was weaned and then left. I learned how to hunt all by myself. Now I sit here all alone every day. Well, not completely alone. I talk to the birds, for I never hunt them, and we play games like hide and seek and tag.

Life is perfect

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I will use Loup everywhere and anywhere. She will be a much loved character, that will go In my character thread. She will appear In my signature regularly, because I will order lots of art of her. She will be RP'd, maybe she will get a mate and have a litter, I'll make her a best friend and much MUCH more!
Why I want Loup
Loup Is so plain, not much to look at, but the more you look at her the more interesting she becomes. I have been looking for a character like this for a very long time, and now i found her.
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After all this time, now you come to visit
me, brother? Why? To mock?

I need your help. And I wish I could trust you...
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - New Round! (o

Postby Wesley » Thu Sep 13, 2012 12:43 pm

@ Koowie - Here's a quote from our rules;
- Ahem. On the subject of taking back pets that you donated... Here's how it goes. If you at any time in the middle of the round wish to take back a character because you are still attached to them or you don't like the form(s) put in for them, if other people are trying for them, you must fill out a form for the character just like any other character you may apply for. If you wish to take it back in the middle of the round, but it has no other forms submitted for it, you must wait until the next code drop to take it back just in case any one else takes interests in the character towards the end of the round. Thank you.

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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - New Round! (o

Postby ratsy » Thu Sep 13, 2012 2:50 pm

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Name: Pyro, but feel free to change.
Gender: Female
Breed/Species: Cat
Preferences/Requirements:
This is a design I made for a canceled contest, and I tried to use her as a charrie but it didn't work out. :( Anyway, please love her. And tell me if you get her. You can rename.
Lineart/Artist/Credits:
Warrior Cat Maker was used.
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - New Round! (o

Postby SunShy » Thu Sep 13, 2012 3:22 pm

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everything in italics is said by Lonestar

Username: Ockako

Kennel Number: 193

Name:
Lonestar Have you not heard of me, the ruler of
the mighty IceClan?


Gender:
Male (tom) Can you not pick up a scent?? I'm a tom!

Breed/Species:
Cat To be more specific, I am a warrior cat

Age:
34 moons (months) I'm young for a leader, aren't I?

Personality:
I am an amazing leader. I will die to protect my clan.
I am a great hunter and fighter, and I am loyal.
I am always fair, and my intelligence is great.
I am VERY humble and fierce. I have no weakness!


Umm.. Lonestar? Yes? ... I think you might be missing stuff. Can I take over?
I guess..

Lonestar is pretty arrogant. He is smart, loyal, and a great fighter and hunter yes,
But he likes to think to highly of himself. He feels that it is weak to admit your flaws, and he hates asking for help.
He is not very humble, as you can tell! His weaknesses? He is totally soft on kits.
He adore them, and he loves to play with them. If a kit is in danger, we would die to save them.
He only recently became leader, and has lost no lives yet. But he would pull out
all his whiskers for any clan mate, even to most annoying warriors.
He is such a softie once you know him-
Silence you fool! Don't listen to her! I am extremely humble!
Lonestar-
SHUSH
..oh yeah, and he can be just a tad bit mean sometimes.
Grr...


Background/History:
Well, Lonestar scratched me pretty bad,
I better let him take over for now.
I was born in a litter of 4 kits.
My mother is- no was called Doveshine.
She was so kind and gentle. She loved us a lot.
My sisters were named Nightkit, Smokekit, and Blackkit.
My father, Cloudpelt, named me Lonekit because I was the only tom,
and I was the only one who wasn't jet black.
One day, Nightkit snuck out of the nursery into the woods.
She wanted to hunt. She came home with the biggest moth I have ever seen.
I was impressed. a quarter moon later she went out again. But this time,
the rest of us came too. We went all the way to a river, and we decided to try and catch
a fish to give our mother.I would give so much to relive that day and stop my littermates from going.
But it happened, and I have to live with it. We dabbed our tiny paws in the water, squealing. We had tones of fun!
But, what we didn't know was that part of the river was called Badger river.
Smokekit saw them first. She gave a scared squeaked, and I whipped around to see the huge, lumbering beast.
the badger swatted Smokekit and Blackkit. He went for me and Nightkit, but missed.
Me and Nightkit raced away, badger at out tails. I felt it's breath on my tail, and I prepared for the worst.
A loud yowl split the air. A huge white tom cat lunged at the badger. It was Cloudpelt!
He hissed as he smacked into it, sinking his claws in its face. The badger shock him off and raced away as fast as it could go.
He took us back to camp and the clan leader at the time, Barkstar, sent a search party for Blackkit and Smokekit.
But they were dead. My mother was frantic. She was so sad and solemn..
I felt horrible.
A moon later, my and my surviving sister became apprentices. I was determined to protect Nightpaw.
We went through our apprenticeship rapidly. We were strong young cats.
Doveshine was so proud. I felt nothing could go wrong. Life was perfect.
But, of course, disaster had to strike.
You see, Iceclan was a lone clan. We had no other clans in the area.
We didn't patrol borders as often as we should have.
A couple of rouges, cats who have no clan, came to hunt on Iceclan territory.
I was hunting with Doveshine, her new apprentice Leopardpaw,Nightpaw and her mentor Mousewing, and my mentor, Finchsong.
"What do you scent, Lonepaw?" Finchsong asked. I took a deep sniff and cried "rouges!"
The bushes in front of us rattled as 2 huge cat leaped out. "What are you two doing on our territory!"
Doveshine cried. One of the cats snarled at Nightpaw, and I leaped at him, not wanting her to be hurt.
Well, that was a dumb idea. He bit my shoulder and slammed me down. Finchsong and Mousewing rushed at him, but Doveshine got there first. She tried to bite the rouges throat, but his companion knocked him aside and sank his claws deep into her neck.
Mousewing and Finchsong fought off the rouges while Leopardpaw and Nightpaw raced to get help. I stayed by my mothers side.
"Please Doveshine.. when we get back to camp I will give you your favorite food, sparrow. And the medicine cats will fix you up.
Please! We need you! I need you! The whole clan needs you!" I kept talking to her for so long, even thought the
gentle cat's breathing had already stopped.
In the moons that passed, I was a shell. I became a warrior named Loneheart,
But I didn't care. I was distant. I was cruel. Nightpaw Had become Nightwind.
Leopardpaw became. Leopardtail. But that didn't matter.
All that mattered was that my mother was gone.
Nightwind began to ignore me. I was being to harsh.
My clan mates avoided me. Except for Leopardtail.
She cared for me. She would be the only cat the willingly hunt and patrol with me.
She was very gentle to me.
A tom called Sharpfern fell in love with her, and began to do anything for her.
I was mad. No, I wasn't just mad. I was the most jealous cat in the clan.
I changed myself. I stopped being cruel. I was helpful, not a burden.
I did it for Leopardtail. Sharpfern died of sickness, and Leopard was sad.
She didn't love him, But he was her friend.
One day I invited her to go for a walk with me.
I had gotten an apprentice named Mudpaw. Leopardtail had an apprentice named Barkpaw,
After Barkstar who was the apprentices uncle. Bu we left our apprentices at camp.
We ran around together and played. It was a cold day, filled with more snow than normal.
We grew tired and collapsed into the snow. We pressed together.
"Leopardtail" I whispered. "Yes, Loneheart?"
"I think I love you" So much for romance.
" Stupid fur ball," she purred "I love you to"
Half a moon later, our deputy, Whitewhisker,
decided to retire.
I was in utter shock when old Barkstar asked me to be his new deputy.
Of course, I accepted. I served him for seasons.
But Barkstar was getting so old. He was weak.
He was on his way to hunt alone, but a fox got him.
He was on his last life. He died.
When Cloudpelt dragged his body into camp, I felt a cold claw in my heart.
Barkstar had been leader since I was born, and now he was gone.
He mottled brown fur was stained with blood.
I mourned him.
Then, the next day, our medicine cat Snowpool called me to him.
We had to go to the Crystal Cave, the place where we dream of our dead kin.
We call the place the go to Starclan. I went with Snowpool to the bright cave, and rested on the floor, and fell asleep.
As a leader, Starclan gives you nine lives, so you can serve your clan longer.
I awoke in Starclan. I gazed at the cat spits, smelling of night. Stars flickered in their fur and eyes.
"welcome, Loneheart." A voice whispered in my head.
A dark grey and black cat walked forward.
It was Doveshine! "With this life, I give you hope. It will be their always, even in the darkest hour, hope will shine like the brightest star." Doveshine pressed her nose to my head. I felt as light as air, filled with a quiet determination. A gleaming
light flashed in my eyes. Next, Smokekit walked up to me. Her eyes showed wisdom beyond her age.
"With this life, I give you awareness. Use it to protect you clan." I remembered how she was the one who spotted the badger. She stretched up and touched her nose to my head. I felt my senses sharpen rapidly, and a flare of fear filled me. I wanted to whip around and protect my sister. Then, I felt a horrible pain and a burst of panic. I realized that was what Smokekit felt in the last moments of her to short life. Blackkit came next. "with this life, I give you a mothers love. Use it to protect your clan." I was severely unprepared for the pain that shot through me. I felt a severe agony, a fierce hatred for those how hurt the weak. The pain slowly went away.
Next, Barkstar walked up. "with this life I give you courage, you know how to use it." A bolt of fearlessness rippled through my heart.
The next 5 lives I received were from older Starclan cats I did not know.
After that, The voice in my head appeared. " I hail you by your new name, Lonestar.
May you serve your clan for countless moons to come"
That was 3 moons ago. Now, I feel peace. I know my clan would fight by my side no matter what. They would
stand by me to the death. Leopardtail is expecting my kittens. Nightwind is my deputy.
Cloudpelt has retired to the elders den, though her still goes hunting with me time to time.
I realized that this is the reward for staying strong.
If I had let disasters ruin my soul, I would be a shell of a cat.
Life moves on, even if you don't want it to.
My advice to you is to use your sadness to propel yourself forward in life. The longer you stay in the pit of
unhappiness, the harder it is to get out.



Use: My main character, stories, art,
role plays, pretty much everything.


Mother:
Doveshine


Father:
Cloudpelt

Siblings:
Blackkit
Nightwind
Smokekit

Mate:
Leopardtail

Kits:
none yet. Will be born soon

Likes:
- hunting
- fighting
- kits
- being bossy
- anything to do with serving the clan
- Leopardtail

Dislikes:
- rouges
- badgers
- foxes
- being called soft or weak
- being alone for to long

Art:
Lines by Apache~
Image

By me
Image

By starhorse
Image
Apple Cider

Other : none
*Note* this is a warrior cat based form.
If you haven't read warriors, it might be a bit confusing, sorry!

Wip ^^
I will not stop until this handsome boy is mine XD
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