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by cobieobie » Mon Oct 29, 2012 6:02 am
AnikaVocaMusic wrote:I want to join in the contest!
Username: AnikaVocaMusic
Name: Havoc
Gender: Male
Entry:
A gentle being of dark pelt wanders through the grass
Knowing that his state of calm will not last
He looks up at the glowing moon and takes a deep breath
Soon this creature, full of grace, will become one of death
The transformation starts, the colours bend and flow
Until his fur, riddled with the light, begins to glow
Then all at once it happens, something expected all day
The orange making his pelt beautiful begins to fade away
The demon inside him rises till it's fully consumed his mind
The transformation that seperates him from his kind
The orange gone, a darker colour begins to take it's place
Till his eyes open and it shines out from his face
He starts to walk slowly, everything moves out his way
He hunts and kills and causes havoc till the light of day
For when this demon consumes him, he has no choice but to obey
And he hunts and kills and causes havoc till the light of day
Other:I know some parts don't flow as much as other parts but I hope it's okay! And if the competition is finished, sorry!
I want to join in the contest!
Username: AnikaVocaMusic
Name: Kage
Gender: Male
Entry: The black creature calmly stalks the grassland. He nods a greeting at a companion as he makes his way to his favourite place. A glade, full of a sense of power and home to a deadly magic. In the center of this glade sits a large boulder, directly under the moon when it is at it's highest. The last rays of the sun were fading over the horizon as he slowly approaches it. He sniffs the air cautiously for the scent of others, others that would get hurt. The air proved nothing but still, as always, the beast of midnight pelt made a full check of the area. By the time he was done the sun had vanished completely and the sky was almost a near black. Time moved quicker in this place. He made his way to the top of the boulder then once there a change overtook him. He was frozen to the spot as slowly, slowly, a deep burning formed at his heart. It grew stronger and brighter. Then with a flash, his pelt flashed a bright orange. This beautiful shade shone brightly, for only a second, as the moon reached it's full height. The orange vanished as quickly as it had come and now a different sensation was starting, one of being overpowered. It consumed his being and he opened his eyes.
"Kage? What are you..." the female voice cut off as Kage turned, his eyes glowing a bright demonic red. "Kage..." Kage showed no emotion as he was on his feet and running towards her. It was over in a matter of seconds, but the scars of what he had just done wound haunt Kage for the rest of his days.
As the first golden rays of sunlight broke through the tree branches surrounding the glade, Kage broke out of his caged state. The first thing that registered was the scent of fresh blood and suddenly he noticed the body at his feet. Immediately he sunk to the ground.
"No... No Asis no..." he cried. He stood up and raked at the ground in his fury, leaving long furrows. "Asis I'm sorry..." he whispered one last goodbye at his mate then ran from the glade as fast as he could.
Other:
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by cobieobie » Mon Oct 29, 2012 6:26 am
AnikaVocaMusic wrote:I want to join in the contest!
Username: AnikaVocaMusic
Name: Havoc
Gender: Male
Entry:
A gentle being of dark pelt wanders through the grass
Knowing that his state of calm will not last
He looks up at the glowing moon and takes a deep breath
Soon this creature, full of grace, will become one of death
The transformation starts, the colours bend and flow
Until his fur, riddled with the light, begins to glow
Then all at once it happens, something expected all day
The orange making his pelt beautiful begins to fade away
The demon inside him rises till it's fully consumed his mind
The transformation that seperates him from his kind
The orange gone, a darker colour begins to take it's place
Till his eyes open and it shines out from his face
He starts to walk slowly, everything moves out his way
He hunts and kills and causes havoc till the light of day
For when this demon consumes him, he has no choice but to obey
And he hunts and kills and causes havoc till the light of day
Other:I know some parts don't flow as much as other parts but I hope it's okay! And if the competition is finished, sorry!
I want to join in the contest!
Username: AnikaVocaMusic
Name: Kage
Gender: Male
Entry: The black creature calmly stalks the grassland. He nods a greeting at a companion as he makes his way to his favourite place.
A glade, full of a sense of power and home to a deadly magic.
In the center of this glade sits a large boulder, directly under the moon when it is at it's highest. The last rays of the sun were fading over the horizon as he slowly approaches it.
He sniffs the air cautiously for the scent of others, others that would get hurt.
The air proved nothing but a mandatory area check was made.
By the time he was done the sun had vanished completely and the sky was almost a near black.
Time moved quicker in this place. He made his way to the top of the boulder then once there a change overtook him.
He was frozen to the spot as slowly, slowly, a deep burning formed at his heart. It grew stronger and brighter. Then with a flash, his pelt blazed a bright orange.
This beautiful shade shone brightly, for only a second, as the moon reached it's full height. The orange vanished as quickly as it had come and now a different sensation was starting, one of being overpowered.
It consumed his being and he opened his eyes.
"Kage? What are you..." the female voice cut off as Kage turned, his eyes glowing a bright demonic red. "Kage..." Kage showed no emotion as he was on his feet and running towards her.
It was over in a matter of seconds, but the scars of what he had just done wound haunt Kage for the rest of his days.
As the first golden rays of sunlight broke through the tree branches surrounding the glade, Kage broke out of his caged state.
The first thing that registered was the scent of fresh blood and suddenly he noticed the body at his feet. Immediately he sunk to the ground.
"No... No Asis no..." he cried. He stood up and raked at the ground in his fury, leaving long furrows. "Asis I'm sorry..." he whispered one last goodbye at his mate then ran from the glade as fast as he could.
Other: I really don't want to change this, so can I say it is an unrhyming poem? Because this took a long time to think of and lots of music. Yes. This is not a story, it is an unrhyming poem. After a read through I know it doesn't look or read like on but I really do not want to change it. Is this okay?
A few more edits and a question!
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by Reptile » Mon Oct 29, 2012 6:35 am
MadWolf wrote:Guys, stop quoting your form when adding another. Just leave it be. When you quote it, it makes it worse on us. We will see your edits, don't worry.
Actually, it's easier on me if they quote. ^^;
If you would like to figure out why Reptile has quit, you may PM quixoticAves
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by the timey thing » Mon Oct 29, 2012 6:43 am
Reptile wrote:MadWolf wrote:Guys, stop quoting your form when adding another. Just leave it be. When you quote it, it makes it worse on us. We will see your edits, don't worry.
Actually, it's easier on me if they quote. ^^;
o3o;
Well, it confuses the heck outta me. I mean, you'll see the edition. But okay, your contest, not mine. o3o;;
TG: sup man names dave strider and im the only cool kid youll ever meet that has a decent amount of humor and loves to talk about size comparisons
TG: not
TG: im the knight of time and live in the land of land of heat and clockwork.
TG: there isnt much to say about me since it keeps the mystery pumpin like fireworks on the fourth of july
TG: i got balls of steel a voice of flat irony and nic cage really sucks
TG: apple juice is amazing and if i havent said it before
TG: i am the coolest kid around
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by Pyrrha Nikos » Mon Oct 29, 2012 7:32 am
I want to adopt a Meio!
Username: milotic9999
Litter: 1
Number: 1
Name: WIP (wait....do I name it?)
Gender: female
Other:
I really confused on how this works so.....
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Pyrrha Nikos on Mon Oct 29, 2012 7:37 am, edited 1 time in total.
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αɴd тнe wαrrιor wнιѕperѕ вαcĸ, "I αм тнe ѕтorм"
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