"Crying Hope" (MODS DELETE-FAILED AGENCY)

[RαrєHuskíєs]

Also, Darry, I added more Art to my form :3

[~Nonexistant]

No, Darry, what you have to do is make everything yourself, not add onto my work. If other people have been doing it too, then they aren't supposed to be doing it. If they are doing it with my things, I'd like you to point them out so I can let them know to change it too. I'm asking you to please take down the things I took time to write, and write things yourself and come up with your own way to run things. It isn't only because it is against the rules that I am saying this, but also because it isn't fair to me. It is the same as art theft in a way because you are taking my hard work and pawning it off as your own work. Plagiarizing is another name for it, and it is illegal in most places as well as being against the rules here. I really want you to have the chance to run an adoption agency, but I want it to be your agency, not a copy of mine.

Yes, realize now. Yes I apolagize that it was quite close to yours but I never made a big forum like this so I still need some help and tips. I worded most of the rules myself but kept the ones that are used by everyone. I would like you to check it out again and see if you approve. The forms were already edited by me since I posted the first time.
If there are further problems, could you PM me and tell me exactly what else needs work? I kept everything set up this way because I dont really think there are many other ways to do it.
And no, no one took YOUR work but Ive seen it before and no one said anything about it.

And Ill check out your new art, rare babe^^

[Lions]

(Im hoping to adopt this pup for my sis dakota42222)

~picture of character here~

Username: Dakota42222
Kennel #: 2
Why I want this Character: I feel bad for him and love the simple design. I adore the was he looks and would love to have him
Name: Check
Age: 1 1/2
Gender: Male
Personality: He is always hyper and very active he loves to run and be outdoors. He loves to go camping and hang out with his buds. His favorite pass time must be swimming. If there is a lake near by he will be in it in two seconds flat. He is always creative and super wild. He loves to make others smile and turn a bad day into a good one.
History:
(In the view of Check)
(This is his history and my art)
~Day one~
Im super exited someone finally adopted me from the pound!!! His name was Darry and he was super nice!! He loved to play with me and rescue other animals. He would always go to a new project though and soon had no time for me. When he was talking on the phone I crawled in a ease dropped a little.
"No I wont give him to the pound, that's not an option. Richard (my former name) needs to be cared for and loved." My owner said angrily into the phone. I could not hear the other end of the conversation but I kept my ears pinned onto Darry's side of the conversation.
"He needs to be exercised and loved." He said. I could hear the sadness in his voice as he continued.
"The Crying Hope adoption agency?" Darry asked the phone.
"The wont hurt him and he will be cared for right?" He asked.
I saw a glimmer of hope in his eyes but I was filled with sadness.
Darry was giving me away. We had only been together a couple months but it felt like I had known him my whole life. I got up from under the table and ran out of the room. Darry looked bewildered the sad. He chased after me.
I ran into my large kennel and sobbed loudly.
"Richard?" I heard Darry's soft tone being used.
He crawled into the crate with me and started to pet me softly.

~Day Two~

Darry placed the last box of my things in the car and started the engine.
"Richard here boy." Darry called on the brink of tears.
I hopped in the car and sat down in the passenger seat.
He rolled the window down witch he never does unless he is very sad.
The tears rolled out of his eyes one by one as we drove out of the drive way. I looked back and whispered to myself.
"Good bye home." Tears started to come out of my eyes as Darry stopped the car and opened the door. He went to the trunk and grabbed some boxes of mine and put a leash on me. He walked me into a large building with lots of noise. I started to howl. I HATED noise. Darry tried to comfort me and pet me but I would not stop. My shoulders reached his knees and I wanted to ram into him to show him how upset I was. He pulled out the specially made ear muffler he had got me to block out thunder when it would storm. He set them on my head and tightened the strap so they would not fall off. He gave my leash to a large and mean looking man. I whimpered at the sight of him.
Darry bent down and looked me in the eyes and whispered,
"Good bye Richard." And then he left leaving me alone in this crazy world.

~Day Three~

They tried all sorts of food but I would not have it. I would starve myself and show Darry how much I hated what he did to me. My stomach grumbled but I protested the pains. I looked away as they set my dinner in the cage. The big adoption day was tomorrow and I wanted to look like a mutt so no one would want me. So I wouldn't have to go through the pains of being owned and then dumped again.

~Day Four~

I put on my meanest face as adopters started walking through the doors. But a girl caught my eye. She had a small dog with her and she walked over to my cage.
"I have been waiting for you." She said happily.
She unlocked my cage and pet me. Her touch was like silk to my fur. I wanted to go with her. A strange scene of piece told me she would not abandon me. I smiled ans she picked my up and walked over to get my boxes. Her dog was very nice. He has three legs and was blind. I felt so bad for him. But he was very fast and could go through an training course no problem. I was amazed by how happy this dog was. I walked up to him and asked,
"How are you so happy? You blind and only have three legs!" I said trying to understand his joy.
"My owner helped me through it. She helped me and rewarded me with love. Every time I would stumble she would catch me and she would set me back on my paws." He looked me in the eyes and smiled.

I knew this would be life changing this new home I was going to. And some how I knew I would be here forever.


Art: (Can be visual art and/or literary art [aka a poem/song/story]) Up there.
Other: Thanks for giving him hope!
Have a nice day

I hope I get him.

[~Nonexistant]

(Im hoping to adopt this pup for my sis dakota42222)

~picture of character here~

Username: Dakota42222
Kennel #: 2
Why I want this Character: I feel bad for him and love the simple design. I adore the was he looks and would love to have him
Name: Check
Age: 1 1/2
Gender: Male
Personality: He is always hyper and very active he loves to run and be outdoors. He loves to go camping and hang out with his buds. His favorite pass time must be swimming. If there is a lake near by he will be in it in two seconds flat. He is always creative and super wild. He loves to make others smile and turn a bad day into a good one.
History:
(In the view of Check)
(This is his history and my art)
~Day one~
Im super exited someone finally adopted me from the pound!!! His name was Darry and he was super nice!! He loved to play with me and rescue other animals. He would always go to a new project though and soon had no time for me. When he was talking on the phone I crawled in a ease dropped a little.
"No I wont give him to the pound, that's not an option. Richard (my former name) needs to be cared for and loved." My owner said angrily into the phone. I could not hear the other end of the conversation but I kept my ears pinned onto Darry's side of the conversation.
"He needs to be exercised and loved." He said. I could hear the sadness in his voice as he continued.
"The Crying Hope adoption agency?" Darry asked the phone.
"The wont hurt him and he will be cared for right?" He asked.
I saw a glimmer of hope in his eyes but I was filled with sadness.
Darry was giving me away. We had only been together a couple months but it felt like I had known him my whole life. I got up from under the table and ran out of the room. Darry looked bewildered the sad. He chased after me.
I ran into my large kennel and sobbed loudly.
"Richard?" I heard Darry's soft tone being used.
He crawled into the crate with me and started to pet me softly.

~Day Two~

Darry placed the last box of my things in the car and started the engine.
"Richard here boy." Darry called on the brink of tears.
I hopped in the car and sat down in the passenger seat.
He rolled the window down witch he never does unless he is very sad.
The tears rolled out of his eyes one by one as we drove out of the drive way. I looked back and whispered to myself.
"Good bye home." Tears started to come out of my eyes as Darry stopped the car and opened the door. He went to the trunk and grabbed some boxes of mine and put a leash on me. He walked me into a large building with lots of noise. I started to howl. I HATED noise. Darry tried to comfort me and pet me but I would not stop. My shoulders reached his knees and I wanted to ram into him to show him how upset I was. He pulled out the specially made ear muffler he had got me to block out thunder when it would storm. He set them on my head and tightened the strap so they would not fall off. He gave my leash to a large and mean looking man. I whimpered at the sight of him.
Darry bent down and looked me in the eyes and whispered,
"Good bye Richard." And then he left leaving me alone in this crazy world.

~Day Three~

They tried all sorts of food but I would not have it. I would starve myself and show Darry how much I hated what he did to me. My stomach grumbled but I protested the pains. I looked away as they set my dinner in the cage. The big adoption day was tomorrow and I wanted to look like a mutt so no one would want me. So I wouldn't have to go through the pains of being owned and then dumped again.

~Day Four~

I put on my meanest face as adopters started walking through the doors. But a girl caught my eye. She had a small dog with her and she walked over to my cage.
"I have been waiting for you." She said happily.
She unlocked my cage and pet me. Her touch was like silk to my fur. I wanted to go with her. A strange scene of piece told me she would not abandon me. I smiled ans she picked my up and walked over to get my boxes. Her dog was very nice. He has three legs and was blind. I felt so bad for him. But he was very fast and could go through an training course no problem. I was amazed by how happy this dog was. I walked up to him and asked,
"How are you so happy? You blind and only have three legs!" I said trying to understand his joy.
"My owner helped me through it. She helped me and rewarded me with love. Every time I would stumble she would catch me and she would set me back on my paws." He looked me in the eyes and smiled.

I knew this would be life changing this new home I was going to. And some how I knew I would be here forever.


Art: (Can be visual art and/or literary art [aka a poem/song/story]) Up there.
Other: Thanks for giving him hope!
Have a nice day

I hope I get him.

It says in the rules you may NOT adopt for someone else.

[Lions]

Oops sorry. If my sis post it on her account can she still have a chance? She actually filled out the form I just posted it.

Also she is coppa so she cant post on the forums. She post on my account sometimes like at adoption agencies since she cant post on her's.

[~Nonexistant]

Oops sorry. If my sis post it on her account can she still have a chance? She actually filled out the form I just posted it.

Also she is coppa so she cant post on the forums. She post on my account sometimes like at adoption agencies since she cant post on her's.

I guess so but whats your sisters username?

[Lions]

Dakota42222

[~Nonexistant]

Ill let it go because she is coppa and you said she posted it on your name but just this once.

[Lions]

Okay thanks.
So do I like have to wait for a date to come for like a best for sort of thing?
Im a little confused right now.

[WolfSpiritHowls]

Okay thanks.
So do I like have to wait for a date to come for like a best for sort of thing?
Im a little confused right now.

Yes there is a code drop date where forms will be judged and the best form wins the pet (: Good luck to dakota42222