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[RainbowBizkit <3]

Username: Rev Theory!
Zver you want: CC3114
Name: Drake
Reason you want it: Because he reminds me of a Beremise moutain dog my neighbor had that was very nice and friendly, he died after he was hit by a car in our neighborhood. He was faithful and very kind to others he was always a very good dog.
Personality: Kind: He enjoyed the company of others and loved people, even people he did not know he loved if they were nice and showed no signs of evil or bad presents.

Brave: He is very brave and will protect the people he loves from anything, And By anything I mean fire, robbers, and evil people. This Zver Is one of the strongest, he will never back down from a challenge.

Loving: Loves every person he ever meets, if they are bad then he wont love you but if you show kindness he will love you right on back.

Likes to be alone: Spends most of his time alone, he would rather be in his thoughts then with a crowd of people of Zvers.

Introduction/Story: Drake was heading outside, the rain dripped down onto his cold nose making him feel even worse. He just wanted to be alone after escaping there was nothing better he wanted to do besides sleep. His feet dragged along with him like cynder blocks, The night felt like it was getting colder so he headed deeper into the tree filled woods seeing if he could make some kind of shelter to keep for the night. Rocks were pilled along the trres in a pattern like they were in some sort of den like structure made with this, Muddy looking substance.

[Metallic Dragon]

FINNISHED!
Username: ¤legend¤
Zver you want: CC3114
Name: Titan
Reason you want it: Zvers look AWESOME. plus cc3114 fits my personallity
Personality: Aggressive, Headstrong, kind to only the ones he likes, Brave
Introduction/Story:
(Sorry for spelling and sorry for saying a whole bunch 'I' for legends story
Italics mean they were thinking)

¤legend¤'s story

Here i am, walking around a dense forest, the place i like best, moving around the trees, bushes, ivy. Left, Right, weaving through. I take in my surroundings as i move farther in the woods. I stop near a small stream and i nothice in the mud is a paw print.
Its freash i thought, and stared following the tracks curious of what it is. I make my way into a large grassy meadow. Looking around i hear moving in the tall grass and a head pokes out and stares at me. He growls stareing at me. I back up just alittle bit and the creature moves closer and i notice he has a scratch on his side. I try moving closer but he just lunges foward. I back away just alittle bit and sit down on the cold ground. I watch as the creature settles down and lays down onto the ground. i laid my head onto the ground pretending to sleep untill the creatre gets up and moves farther away then laying back down falling asleep. I move closer to him and i look at his wound. I walk back to the stream and i take off my sweater and soak it with water. Wow it was chilly just wearing a tee shirt. I walk back to the sleeping creature then i remember a post about him
Hes a zver i thought,
I carefully cleaned his wound as lightly as i can so i dont wake him then i went back to my spot and lit a small fire to warm up.
Suddenly the Zver woke up fast and was shaking.
I smiled at him and said calmly "Its warmer by the fire"
She watched as he got up and layed down by the fire. He liked his wound then laid his head onto his paws. I reached out my hand and started to pet his head but the moved his head away. I kept my hand there waiting to see if he wanted peted. Surprised he put his head under her hand as if wanted peted and layed his head back onto his paws and i started to pet him again. He fell asleep and i stoped petting him and layed down in my spot falling asleep as well.
The sun was shining by the time i wake up, The Zver was still sleeping. I get up and walk toward the stream. I looks around waonder how i can get some food for the Zver. I start to dig a large deep hole and the Zver appears. I keep digging and when im done i stand up and look around for some large sticks, I put them over the hole and i put some leaves on it. Also i throw some dirt on it as well. I start to walk back to the fire pit and turn to looks at the Zver. he was stareing at the pit trap.
"You coming?" she called to the zver. He wagged his tail then took one last look then came over.
I sit down then reach my hand to pet the zver, "Thats i pittrap i made, Animals will walk over it and fall in, we will go look later to see whats in there.
Ater and hour or so i got up and started to walk to the pit trap, The zver was at her site.
"Your alittle bigger than a great dane i think ill call you Titan. They arived at the pit trap and the sticks were broken. I look down into the trap and see two rabbits. One dead, it looks like it broke its neck, The other alive
Hmm thats werid they must have fell together she thought
i reaches down and pulls out the dead rabbit
"Here titan" i said
He fearcely grabs the rabbit and he bites my hand
"Ow!"
i pull my hand away quickly and looks at the bite.
Surprised he rasped his tounge over my hand. I smiled slightly and walked to the stream to wash it off. She came back to titan and petted his head. He still looked hungry. I reached down into the pit and grabed the alive rabbit by the neck. I looked at Titan "Still Hungry, boy?"
He started to wag his tail.
"Ok im gonna sit this rabbit onto the ground and relese it. You chase it and capture it"
I sat the rabbit on the groung and looked at titan stareing at it. I relesed it and watch as titan chases it down and catches it quite fast. I turns her head away not wanting to see him eat the rabbit
After he has finnished I ask "Titan do you wanna come home with me."
He wagged his tail and I smiled.
They set off weaving through the trees making there way to a house. I walk toward a door and look back at titan "Come on its safe dont worry" He darted over and they go into the house.
"Thank Goodness my parents still arnt home from their buessness trip or they would not let me keep you cause of my hand, Make yourself comefortable"
I got to a table and look through the mail finding the flyer about lost Zvers. I pick up the phone dialing the number.
A man Picks up "Hello, Have you seen any Zvers? "
"Yes i have its in my house i trust him"
"Be carefull their dangerous"
"I know"
"What does it look like?" he asked
"He is Brown, Black and white"
"Sounds like your talking about #CC3114"
"I like him, I call him Titan, Hes super nice"

(This part goes with Numbers. If i get Him read number 1 below if i dont read number 2)

(1 is if i get him)
1. "How nice is he to you?"
"Well he had a wound and when he was asleep i cleaned it, He bit me when i gave him food but he licked my hand, He wagges his tail to me, He allows me to pet him"
"Humm, it sounds like you two have a close bond, You should should keep #CC311.. I mean Titan.
"Really Thank you!!"
"But if he causes any trouble call us right away"
"Ok"
I hang up the phone and pet Titan, "You get to stay here this is your home now"

(2 is if i dont)
2. "Ok we will be by to pick him up"
"Aww Ok"
i hang up the phone and look at titan sadly.
"You have to go back where you came."
He started to growl at her his eyes full of anger then he stalks to a different room
An hour later a truck came and 3 men came in.
He fights the men, Attacking, biteing anyway to get away. She watches sadly as they overpower him and drag him into a crate.
"Bye titan"
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Titan's Stoary
He was running, faster than he wanted. The only thing on his mind was to get away from humans, go as far as he can. He kept going and ran into a path of a bear. He let out a fearce growl
I can take him! he thought.
The bear roared fearcely and stood on its hind legs.
He backed up alittle bit then he lunged foward and bit its hind leg.
The bear when back onto all fours and racked its large claws down his side
He let out a whimper and ran off. He made his way to a stream and bent down his head and lapped up the chilly water. His moved on walking, the scratch gave him to much pain to run. He made his way to a large meadow with tall grass. He walked into the grass to stay hidden and he layed down onto the terrain and licked his wound. He started to doze to sleep but his ears perked and he heard someone by the trees. He stood up and peaked out of the grass to see a girl looking at him. He let out a growl
Stay Away he thought
But she just took a step back. He step out of the grass hoping that that would make her go away or move away but she just came closer. He lunged foward hopefully to scare her. It worked a little bit but she just backed up like two more steps and sat down. Too tired and weekend from the bear to attack he laid down to rest. The girl layed down and fell asleep.
I cant stay this close he thought and moved alittle bit father away and layed back down and feel asleep.
(Dreaming)He was running around a lush green forest, There were no humans for miles, He felt happy, Prey everywhere, More of his kind. He could have ran forever around the forest he was in. Suddenly he fell into ice cold water. It stunded him and he thrashed trying to get out. Shivering he woke up. He looked around seeing the girl next to a fire. She smiled at him and said "Its much warmer by the fire"
So he cauthously stood up and moved toward the fire and layed down next to it. He looked at his side to look at his wound and licked at it more, it felt much better as if someone put cold water on it. He looked at the girl
I like her, he thought, shes very nice and cares.
He layed his head onto his paws and the girl reached over and petted him. He moved his head away but she kept her hand out, He put his head under her hand knowing he can trust her. He layed his head back onto his paws and fell asleep with her peting his head.
He wakes up. The fire burnt out and the girl has gone. He streches and starts to follow her scent. He finds her digging a large hole and he sits and watches. Curious he wonders what she is doing. He watches as she finnishes digging and watches as she puts large sticks onver the trap along with leaves and dirt.
What is she doing? He wondered. She started to walk away and he as still looking at it. She called to him "You Coming?"
He couldnt help to wag his tail, he took one last glance and troted over to her. They arrived to where the fire was and she sat down and started to pet his head,
"Thats a pit trap",She told him, "Animals will walk over it and fall in. We will go look later and see whats in there"
He couldnt help to let his tounge roll out. He was starving, He couldnt recall the last time he ate.
After it felt like ages, They started to go to the the pit trap.
"Your alittle bigger than a great dane i think ill call you Titan." She told him
I have a name, he thought and wagged his tail. They made it to the pit trap and the girl looked down, He looked down also, His mouth started to drowl
FOOD!!
She pulled out a dead rabbit and held it out to him
"Here Titan" she said
His mind went blank, He lashed grasping onto the rabbit pulling it away from her.
"Ow!" he heard
He droped the rabbit and looked at her, He rasped his tounge over the bite.
She smiled slightly and went to the stream.
He dung his teeth into the soft flesh of the rabbit, devoreing it in large bites.
She came back and asked, "Still hungry, boy?"
He started to wag his tail
YES! YES!
"Ok im gonna sit this rabbit onto the ground and relese it. You chase it and capture it" she said
He watched the rabbit and braced himself as if she would relese it when he was not ready. She relesed it and he started to chase it, Gaining speed till he was on the rabbits heals. He leaped on it pining down the small creature and dug his insizors into the flesh till scarlet blood ozed out of the wound, Perceing the rabbit's jaggular the creature went limp.
He cared the rabbit back and layed it down and devored it in large bites.
After he was finnished the girl askes "Titan wanna come home with me?"
A home? Really? Will a really have a home?
He waggs his tail enthusiasticly.
They Make their way to a house. he stays near the trees while The girl goes to the door. She turns to lok at him
"You coming?"
He looks around then bolts to her. They go inside.
"Make yourself comfortable"
He lays down while the girl goes to the table.
He closes his eyes and he hears the , Beep, Beep, of a phone. He dozes off while she talks on the phone not paying attention.

(Remember numbers again. 1 if i get him 2 if i dont.)
( 1 if i keep him)
He started to pay attention again,
"Really Thank you!!"
"But if he causes any trouble call us right away"
"Ok"
She hangs up the phone and pets him, We waggs his tail happilay
"You get to stay here this is your home now" she said
He waggs his tail faster
I HAVE A HOME

(2 if cant have him)
He started to pay attention again
"Ok we will be by to pick him up"
"Aww Ok"
She hangs up the phone and look at titan sadly. "You have to go back where you came."
His heart sank, He stood up and growled at her, eyes blazing with fury
I thought i had a home, i guess not
He Stalked off into a different room
After a while a truck came and 3 men came in. She watches sadly as they catch him and drag him an a crate.
They tryed to catch him,
No im not going back!!
He lashed out, attacking the men, But they caught him and put him in a wooden block.
He peacked out a hole looking at the girl sadly.
"Bye titan"
bye

Thank you thank you thank you for putting effort into your form! Though the spelling and grammar could have been improved, I could see that you put time and effort into writing out a story. Congratulations Legend! He's yours!

@Rev Theory: Sorry hun, you posted your form just as I finished judging and chose the winner(though I hadn't pressed the submit button yet) Though with even the small amount of writing that you had so far, I am sure that you'll be able to win a Zver in the near future.

[RainbowBizkit <3]

Thank you ^^ i hope to get one soon they are cute I will be trying tomorrow ^^ or when ever the new ones come out

[LostPeace]

@Metallic Dragon
Yea, sorry about spelling and grammar. Im horrible at spelling but grammer im pretty good at, when writing XD

@Rev Theory
i think youll get one soon

[Metallic Dragon]

@Legend: It's all good, I was able to read and understand what was happening, so it wasn't too bad^^

@Rev: Yep, they'll be coming out tomorrow afternoon soon after I judge the forms for #CC7332

[iratePanthera]

I'm nervous...

[MiniHorse]

Is CC7332 still available?

[Metallic Dragon]

Yes, i'll be judging forms for her tomorrow.

[MiniHorse]

Okay, thanks I'll write a form for her.
Username: MiniHorse
Zver you want: CC7332
Name: Scarlet
Reason you want it: She's really pretty, my favorite colors and combination <3 The swirls she has on her legs sort of captivate me, everything about her is just gorgeous and I would love to have her as my own.
Personality: Scarlet (I know Scarlet is red but it just suits her, don't know why XD) is a killer, she likes to charm, and then kill. Although she loves to kill, she is somewhat sweet inside. She will wonder why is she killing. Sometimes, she is able to hold herself back when she is about to kill.
Introduction/Story: Scarlet has lived her life normally, until she was captured.

Scarlet laid in her cage, pacing about. She had just been captured and thrown into a cage on an airplane. Now she was going to die. She paced her cage in frustration, she stopped once she heard another one of her species captured. She watched and listened as a male who was still fighting back, was pulled and thrown into the cage next to her. The male thrashed around and threw himself at the bars, she watched as the bars began to break. One of the people who captured her started yelling at the male, after a few moments of thrashing around, one of the people stood up with a gun. She flinched as a loud bang sounded and the male in the cage beside her fell, dead. She watched in horror and looked up, seeing the humans laughing. This was the start of her career in killing.

A few hours after she had been captured, the plane lifted into the air. Scarlet then rammed against the bars, breaking a few before the humans noticed. She continued ramming the cage, after a few seconds, the cage broke. It snapped apart and the humans watched with fear as she ripped the cage into bits. In a minute, all the humans were dead, and the plane spiraled downwards.


(Sorry for fail story, I might add more late, I did try to think of a good plot but.. I'm rubbish at stories >.<)

[Rabbitheart]

Darn, I'm reading the winner's stories and I'm getting super nervous, I don't know if mine for Zver #CC7332 could possibly compete if someone made an application like that. I'm so dang nervous now!