Pound of Love - JUDGING!! 155 kennels to adopt!

[booklover789]

edited my forum... is this a good example? or do I need to take the descriptions that the detonators made out..out

First off, DO NOT quote your form, please. It really spams up the forums. If you edited your form, that's great! However, to get proper feedback, you'll have to post with a new form requesting a judge look over it.

Just glancing at your form, I can tell you that it definitely is too short, however, I'll have to let another critique-giver give you a full critique later, as I won't have internet for the next week or so, and won't be able to help. (Sorry, SabjeBammie, but I'm on vacation!)

[SabrinaB]

I want to add: If you want a critigue, please use the correct form.

[Karma.]

I'm also going to Belgium tomorrow, with limited internet access. I shall try my best to get online, but I only have a 50/50 chance of wifi.

[SabrinaB]

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[Elix]

Kennel 1 wrote:

Username: SabjeBammie
Name: Undecided
Gender: Undecided
Species: German Shepherd (may change)
Rules to adopt: Love and use, feel free to add accessories
Credit for the lines and design: Made by SabjeBammie, ref
Here since round 1



*image here*
Basic information
Username: lizzylotte
Kennel number: 1
Why do you want this character?
I was looking for a dog that lookd very protective
And She looks so protective and perfect
Shes just the dog where i was looking for
Shes to perfect to sit in a kennel the rest of her life
Where will you use it, and what will you use it for?
I will use her to love her and as character in my story's
If you want i can send you a story about her when i get her




Character information
Name: rosie
Gender: female
Personality: rosie is very protective
She will always care for her owner
She also likes to go explorer and make new friends
But the thing She loves the most is her owner
History:
Here is rosies historische

Rosie was Born on the 9th of August in a wonderful home
With one child
The child playd with every puppy exapt rosie
The child dint like rosie the child ignord rosie
Rosie feld really lonly

One day the mother of the child walks in the room and picks rosie up
She said srry rosie
She gives rosie to a strange man
The mans smiles and walks away
Rosie barks but knowbody helpt her

The man trows her in a cage in the car
Rosie jumps up and starts braking

Finally the man stops the car and open the door
He want to get rosie out but rosie growls and barks
The man grinnikt and takes the puppie out of the car
Rosie trys to bite him

The man walks in a room full of cages with dogs and cats theye all look sad
At the last cage the man stops and trows her in
There wasnt alot of space
In the cage was a little bed
And a bowl of water and food

Rosie starts crying
I dog sais
Eeeeeey don't cry its gonna be oké
Rosie looks up and sees a medium size dog right in front of her
Rosie was very scared and starts cring again
The dog named Lilly walks to her and picks her up
Rosie dint refusd becaus She knows that She cant do anithing against such a big dog
Lilly drops her at the bed
Rosie lie down and Lilly right next to her

The next morning the man game back into the room and walks to rosies cage
Rosie was stil asleep
But the man dint care about that
He trows some food inside and walks away

A houre later r
Lilly wakes up and start likking the little puppie
Rosie opeens her eyes and sees food
She was so hungry and runs to the bowl
But She stops and staps back
Rosie sais you eat first
Lilly smiles and walks to the bowl She eat some than She walks to rosie and pick her up
Rosie was to young to eat dog food
Lilly lies down
Rosie walks to her and start drinking
Lilly told her that She lost a litter only a week ago
So there was alot of milk for rosie
When rosie was finally doen drinking She thanks Lilly
She fell asleep again

A little bit later
The man walks into rosie cage and tries to pick her up
Lilly jumps up an starts growlig at the man
The man jumps up ,closes the door and runs away
Lilly runs to rosie and start likking her fur

Rosie became really good friends with Lilly
Lilly was kinda her mother
Theye playd alot

After two years rosie was still in the shelter
She loves rosie but She hates the shelter
And the shelter owner (the man)

Until one day there was a old lady that adopted rosie and Lilly
For two years She stared with the lady
Theye had alot of fun with her grandchilderen
It was the best two years of rosie life
But the lady died and the dogs went back to the shelter

Another year in the shelter
A lady came and adopted lilly
Rosie cryd a whole week

Until there came a young lady that brought her to the adoption center
She was putted in a Nice cage with alot of space and friends
She playd every day with ber friends and the owner of the shelter
But knowbody adopted her until now

A lad cald lizzy(lotte)
Walkes to her cage and picks her up
She walks to the owner
And films in the formulier

Rosie was very scared pf lizzy becuase She dint want to trust anybody anymore
Lizzy puts a pretty pink bowl with food and a pretty blue bowl with water on the ground
Rosie was hungry She dint eat the while sic houre journey to lizzys home
She walks with a low head to the bowl and starts eating
The food was good very good
It was the best food She ever tasted

One day theye went on a walk
Rosie became the best friend of lizzy
She learnd to trust her
On the walk rosie had a really strange feeling
She felt like someone was following her
She looks at lizzy
Lizzy looks back and sais
I know i have a strange feeling to
She stops and pets rosie on her head
Rosie wants to go home becuase She thinks lizzy isnt save hier
She starts pullig on the leash
Lizzy puls on the leash and sais
Rosie stop it there is nothing !!!!!
Rosie stops and looks at the ground
Lizzy smiles and sais
I am srry don't worry there is nothing ,its oké
Rosie was still worried
After a while rosie stop worrieing and starts playing with lizzy
Theye had a lost of fun
After a long time Theye want to go home again
Lizzy takes the leash and Cals rosie
Rosie runs to her
She stops and sits down
Lizzy leashes her
Rosie stands up but at the same moment jumps a man out of the bushes and grabs lizzy
Lizzy drops the leash and starts screaming but the man holds his hand on her month
Rosie jumps on the man and bites him the man trows rosie away
But rosie wont give up She runs at him and bites in his leg
The man screams and drops lizzy lizzy runs to rosie to stop her but rosie
Jumps on the man te mand fals on the ground
Rosie looks at lizzy
One second was engough to know that rosie wants lizzy to call the police
Lizzy Cals 911
The man trys to stand up but rosie barks and shows him her teeth
The man screams
After a few minuts the police was there
The police runs to the man and arrest him
Rosie runs to lizzy
Lizzy Hugs her
A female police officier walks to lizzy
Rosie growls at her
Lizzy sais its oké rosie She will help us
Rosie laid down
The police officier asks her a few question
On one question She dint really know what to answer
The question :
How sis you survived ,the man could kill you
Lizzy looks at rosie and sais
My dog....... My dog rosie She saves me.......... She attacked.....the man
The police officier stares at her She sais
I know you are in shock but tell me what really happend
Lizzy shakes her head And sais
I already told you!!!!!
Rosie stands up ready to prof the officier that lizzy is right
The officier walks away ,She walks to the man
The man screams
THAT DOG HE ATTACKED ME
The officier is back with lizzy and sais
Your dog is really protective
You should be thankfull he saves your live
Lizzy smiles
And takes rosies leash
Theye went home
After a few days the police Cals her
Theye ask her to come to the park at 14:00 with her dog
At 13:55 She went to the park with rosie
There was a huge party at the park for rosie
Rosie gets a medal from the police officier
Abd a new collor with a silver bone with her name on it
It was a magical day
Lizzy was very proud
Rosie smels somthingsomthing She dint smel in a long time
She looks around and sees Lilly
She runs to her and lickt her l
Lilly looks at her and sais
You become a good and strong dog
Rosie whispers :i missed you so much mom
Theye spent the rest of the day in the park playing with lizzy

From that day on meets rosie Lilly every day in the park




THE HAPPY END


Likes, dislikes:
She really loves Lilly
But She also loves to bake cookies for her friends
Rosie likes to go on long walks to the park to play with her "mother" Lilly
She also likes to go swimming in the pool ,sea .....

There are a few things She really don't like
Rosie HATES the shelter
And She doesn't like to be alone
She also doest like is to be mad at someon

Extras: (optional)dunnasaya
If i don't get the pet i hope it Goes to a good home that will give her every thing She needs
I hope She will be happy in her new home and have a happy life with her new owner that wil respect her

Pm me if you want a story about rosie

Favorite ice Cream flavor:
Blueberry


Favorite song
Rolling in the deep(adele)


Favorite coulor
[color=#4080FF]blue


Favorite favorite collar
Her red collor with the silver bone

Favorite toy
The squiky cookie

Favorite treat
The healthy chickenmeat kible

Favorite shop
The pet shop (the one with all the dog cookies)

Best friend
Lizzy
Lilly

Favorite spot in the cough

The one next to lizzy with her head on lizzys lab



Srry for the bad english
Enjoi
Good luck[/color]

[yeena]

Marking and I will get a form up for that lovely German Shepherd.

[SabrinaB]

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Username: impossible;;
Name: Cay
Gender: Male
Species: Wolf
Rules to adopt: Do whatever you want with him XD
You can:
• Revamp
• Change species
• Change gender
• Change name
• Add magical powers
• Or do whatever else you feel like
Credit for the lines and design: Design by me, lines here
iwannagiba

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Username: impossible;;
Name: Pyro
Gender: Male
Species: Canine
Rules to adopt: Do whatever you want with him XD
You can:
• Revamp
• Change species
• Change gender
• Change name
• Add magical powers
• Or do whatever else you feel like
Credit for the lines and design: Lines by apple, design by ~Flame~ (originally adopted here)
iwannagiba

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Username: impossible;;
Name: Blizzard
Gender: Male
Species: Canine
Rules to adopt: Do whatever you want with him XD
You can:
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• Change gender
• Change name
• Add magical powers
• Or do whatever else you feel like
Credit for the lines and design: Lost
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Username: impossible;;
Name: Philosophy
Gender: Female
Species: Canine
Rules to adopt: Do whatever you want with her XD
You can:
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• Change gender
• Change name
• Add magical powers
• Or do whatever else you feel like
Credit for the lines and design: Design by me, lines here
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Username: impossible;;
Name: Sketchy
Gender: Genderfluid
Species: Canine
Rules to adopt: Do whatever you want with it XD
You can:
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• Change gender
• Change name
• Add magical powers
• Or do whatever else you feel like
Credit for the lines and design: Lines by apple, design by katie_monkey (originally adopted here)
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Username: impossible;;
Name: Lillian
Gender: Female
Species: Canine
Rules to adopt: Do whatever you want with her XD
You can:
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• Change gender
• Change name
• Add magical powers
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Credit for the lines and design: I got her from PFDC
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