Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0]

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Re: Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0 | Series #23 + Event]

Postby Raindrop » Thu Dec 08, 2011 2:37 am

I want a gift! 8U
Username:
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Design
Form:
Stealth, for sure. <3 I've always loved the stealth tracker lineart than all the others, although it was really hard to pick, at first.
Colour scheme:
I'd love it if her palette could be based on this moth:

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Her colours are:

- Green (Different shades of it, maybe? Refer to the colour palette's link provided below.)
- A soft shade of brown
- A sort of creamish yellow?
- Possibly black, unsure.

I found a colour palette you could work with, here. The creamish-yellow isn't provided in the colour palette, though.
Design patterns:
Still deciding on the design/patterns.
Eye colours/markings:
Accessories:
I feel accessories might ruin the 'moth' look of this tracker, so I don't really want any, but if you feel something should be added, silver studdings or this type of feather (hung behind her ear or hung around the base of her tail with a string) would be fine with me.
Alternate:
I didn't know where to place this part, so I'll put it under alternate.

I'd love it if she came along with a pair of moth antenna, just like the moth which she was based after. I'm guessing her antenna should be between her ears? I'd also really, really love to see her tail be like 'tail' of the moth above, somewhat like ribbons, with two 'tails' sort of curled to the sides and streaming behind her. I guess that sounds confusing, but I guess, for her tail, I'd like them to be the 'tails' of the moth in the picture.

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Re: Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0 | Series #23 + Event]

Postby tigress303 » Thu Dec 08, 2011 4:43 am

Tracker Dog Application
Username:tigress303
Tracker Dog you want:80#
Name you'll give it: Magnis
Reason why you want it: Big and beautiful. I love this aerial tracker's design and would be overjoyed if I got him.

Will it be used in any kind of story? Yes, most likely.

Describe its personality: He is daring and adventurous and likes to take risks. He takes much pride in his size, strength, and speed. Although he can a bit arrogant on occasions. He only respect those who can control and work with him, making it very frustrating for the tracker compound staff (who he deems "not worthy") when trying to get him to obey a simple command.

Write an introduction for your Tracker: Right here ---> viewtopic.php?f=57&t=919718
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Re: Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0 | Series #23 + Event]

Postby RaistlinAgaric » Thu Dec 08, 2011 5:37 am

I want a gift! 8U
Username: HeartofJet

Design
Form:Stealth
Colour scheme: Black and electric blue, if possible :)
Design patterns: Geometric.
Eye colours/markings: White eyes, marking electric blue.
Accessories: Two stud ears on the left ear.
Alternate: Um....I am not sure what to put here.....so...Thanks! :)

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Re: Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0 | Series #23 + Event]

Postby west , » Thu Dec 08, 2011 5:54 am

Sorry, but I have to take out my form DX I will not have time to finish it in time for the deadline as I'm going to Olympia tomorrow and have no time to finish it tonight. I'm really sad as I loved this tracker :c Sorry.


Tracker Dog Application

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Username:
SilverHorse
Tracker Dog you want:
Number Eighty / #80
Name you'll give it:
Acer. Ace for short.
Acer means sharp, keep and eager in Latin.
Why did you give him this name?:
I gave him this name because just looking at him makes me think of these words. He seems to be based of a streamlined idea and he just looks so big and powerful, I personally think this name suits him perfectly.
Reason why you want it:
Where do I begin...
Well, for starters, I absolutely love his colours. The black, yellow and silver blend perfectly together, and as they are my favourite colours, that just makes me love him even more!
Next, his looks. I love his huge wings, and his size. I love big dogs, horses, and basically every big animal. Trackers are no different. Bigger is better! He looks so majestic and handsome, and I really like how his yellow markings stand out from everything else, but the silver and blacks give it a lovely effect aswell, going back to the streamlined thing.
I have applied for quite afew trackers, and so far, have been unsuccessful. Most of the time, I go for normal or wild trackers, but today I thought I'd have a go at an Ariel Tracker. Considering they are probably one of the most popular trackers, I never thought I'd have a chance, but I saw this big guy and knew I had to at least have a go.

Will it be used in any kind of story?:
Of Course he will be!
Describe its personality:

Keen & Eager
Acer is Keen and Eager. He will give anything a go and will try his best at it. This tracker will never give up too easily and he adores trying new things. He is determined and ambitious, so he wants to be the best as he can be and better. Acer will do almost anything that seems exciting or fun, and will not back down from a challenge, no matter how difficult.

Excitable and Lively
Acer is almost full of energy and when he is not sleeping or eating, he is on his feet. Or off his feet. Acer loves to fly about and he can survive at high altitudes, even though there isn't much oxygen, Acer was 'built to accompany skydivers, stunt pilots and dare devils' he is able to pick out oxygen from the air. He gets very excitable and he is very active and athletic. He loves running and, of course, flying.

Strong but Stubborn
Acer is strong, and he is stubborn. He likes to get his own way, which is why he needs a strong, experienced owner who can controll him and take charge. Ace is stronger than he thinks, so he can get carried away sometimes, so he needs a firm hand that can care for him properly.

Obedient
Though he's stubborn and likes to get his own way, Acer can be very obedient at times. He just needs to be tempted with afew of his favourite treats and the promise of excitement. He loves taking chances and risks, especially when his owner or handler is right beside him. Acer is very well trained and, though young, he is very experienced.


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⊰ Somewhere behind the rider you've вᴇcoмᴇ,
the hours of ᴘᴙʌcтɪcᴇ you've put in, the coaches that have ᴘυsнᴇᴅ yoυ,
the fences you've нɪт, the bones you've вᴙoκᴇɴ, the hard falls you've тʌκᴇɴ,
the loɴɢ ᴅɪsтʌɴcᴇ , the sнoᴙт ᴅɪsтʌɴcᴇ, the cнɪᴘ, the sтᴙɪᴅᴇs,
the ᴇqυɪтʌтɪoɴ, the sᴡᴇʌт, the тᴇʌᴙs, the вlooᴅ, the вlɪsтᴇᴙs,
the ᴙɪᴘᴘᴇᴅ jᴇʌɴs, the ᴡool jʌcκᴇтs on 100 degree sυммᴇᴙ ᴅʌys,
the lʌмᴇ horse, the cᴙʌzy horse, the "ʌᴙᴇ yoυ sᴇᴙɪoυs?" horse, and ᴇvᴇᴙyтнɪɴɢ in between...
soмᴇᴡнᴇᴙᴇ behind all this is the little girl who fᴇll ɪɴ lovᴇ with the нoᴙsᴇ,
the sᴘoᴙт, and the ɪᴅᴇʌ and ɴᴇvᴇᴙ looκᴇᴅ вʌcκ. ⊱

Ride for her.


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Re: Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0 | Series #23 + Event]

Postby That Weird Dragon » Thu Dec 08, 2011 2:25 pm

Tracker Dog Aplication

Username: Allyssia_banter
Tracker Dog you want: 79
Name you'll give it: River Song
Name means: To me this name means the melodic sounds that a river makes
Reason for name: The glow of the moon on its surface at night and the beautiful song that it sings as it passes over loose stoned on the banks and the wind that passes over the face of it during day and at night, the beauty it holds, the song of a river, river's song, River Song...

Reason why you want it:
Main Reason (Little detail):
OK, so I didn't really want to go for another Tracker, I though it was hopeless and that with every try I go through I would loose the Tracker I wanted. I thought that to save myself I would try and stay with my little boy Caedo. I then thought I would like to ONLY look at the new lot of Trackers, I swore I would not go for one I knew it was impossible and that I would never win against the others who wanted Trackers as well as I did, but after looking at the new lot, I almost died. Taking my breath away was this STUNNING female Tracker, sure she is a normal but I almost cried at her sight. I then knew that with even know hope of getting her I would try anyway

Detailing why I would not go for another Tracker Dog:
I was lost in my world, I am going through a heap at home at the moment and I didn't want to loose something I wanted. Having my life torn right now and knowing I failed school, my mother had a baby after almost dying 8 years ago having her last child stressed me out, I am lost for the one I have feelings for and for no reason I am also in a fair depression that has been going on for months. I didn't want to cause myself more pain, I felt like if I lost something I would lose my will and that I would have nothing to go for, I am feeling very discoraged and usless, my writing has actually been fairly bad lately and I am struggling to focus on my job, I currently work at Skate Salvage and I am having a hard time keeping my head right.

Of course I don't think any of this will help get the Tracker infact it will probably make me more likely not...

Detailing why I did actually go for another Tracker Dog:
Seeing this girl was like seeing my lost hopes and dreams, seeing me again but without any of my troubles. Looking at me with what I wanted to be and how I imagined my life. I didn't know what to do when I saw her but try and get her, the glow, the shape and personality the, the... Well just everything, she is just everything I need to help me get my life back together, I thought that if I had something I could work for I would have better luck in succeeding to get my life back on track and me happy again. My mother just had the baby and I was also going to dedicate 79 to the baby, to hi, to my new born brother.. I know these are lame reasons but they are true.......


Will it be used in any kind of story? YES!

Describe its personality:

79 is a quiet Tracker tending to keep to herself. She is smart able to figure things out before a normal dog or human would. She never barks unless she is warning her companion of danger. She is observant so she can figure the best routes and places to go. She is distant and prefers to be alone than in a crowd, she loves to get affection though even if it seams she does not and will happily return it all, she is also thoughtful, stopping before doing something and thinking of the negatives and the positives of the actions she will take. Gentle is another of her personality traits and that she is, if she comes past an injured animal she will help it even if it endangers herself. The trait of willing to please is also a strong characteristic making her obediant and very loyal, as she marks others to know she will listen, but get on her bad side and be warned, she can be nasty, she has been known to attack various creatures for angering her and trust me this is not an easy task. Getting 79 angry requires months of persistant attention and staying in her face. But to do this is asking for your death, Once 79 is angry she will kill you instantly.

Story: (This is more of a newspaper article if that is ok)
The Old Gazette 2011

On July 15th 1950 sixteen year old Megan Eckersley disappeared with no trace, until recently with improved science. Scientist Nicole Swan says 'This teen was not taken against her will it seams, evidence shows that she willingly when with an unknown creature', two weeks ago they discovered a glowing purple particle in the dirt that was collected fifty years ago. DNA testing found that a 'Mad' scientist was creating strange canine creatures for those worthy. But apparently number 79 escaped the laboratory in an unknown frenzy. Owner Nex an alien creature pleaded innocent to charges saying that no creature was of any harm and those that were, were immediately destroyed within the laboratory. The creature that escaped was among the docile ones she creates. 'Number 79 would never hurt anyone, sure she had no eyes but she was able to create images in her mind from the other senses she has' Nex said. Showing a picture of the creature that escaped she also handed the files on the creature as well. It was obvious that the creature was innocent. 'Nex never creates dangerous Trackers' adds one of Nex's associates.


Tracker Files



SUMMARY:
Silent canine
Minds steps
Never barks unless warning handler
Observant
Very clever
Markings glow at will making easier to spot in a darker area
When glow dimmed, iss next to impossible to spot at night
Making her nocturnal Tracker
May seem distant, but loves affection as much as any dog
Will return this affection too


ABILITIES
Can be invisible at night
Create glow from purple markings


SPEED
Unknown

DIET
Canine food
Animal meat


HABITAT
Tracker number 79 loves the bush.
Is more active at night needing a nocturnal human companion


HEIGHT
3'2 at the shoulder

WEIGHT
13 KG Fairly light for a creature her size

STRENGTHS
Strong hind legs
Great hearing
Smart
Excellent Tracker


WARNINGS
No warnings needed as this Tracker is a docile creature.
She would not harm a fly.
She is gentle and caring and very sweet
Megan Eckersley's Last Diary Entry
July 15 1950

What is that ominous glowing in the distance?
I can't quiet see it, but it looks purple.
I need to go and find what it is.
It seams to pull me in closer.

It disappeared, I have no idea where it went.
It was there one second and the next it was gone.
Is this even possible?
I don't think this is it's not even logical.
A purple glow disappeared without a trace.


SECRET COMPANION FILES

Name:
Megan Eckersley
Age:
432 Looks 16
Gender:
Female
Species:
Immortal Angel
Apparent Abilities:
Flight
Telepathic speach
Shield
Speed:
Unknown
Diet:
Unknown
Habitat:
Night Guardian
Height:
Aprox. 5'7
Weight:
Aprox. 32 kg
Warnings:
Not seen for fifty years, thought to be dead



(PS. I hope you do not mind the picture, I was not wanting the glowing markings to do that and I hope you don't mind the editing, I only wanted to use it for the form and I will delete it after...)
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Re: Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0 | Series #23 + Event]

Postby Aiki » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:35 pm

Tracker Dog Application
Username:
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Tracker Dog you want:
# 79
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Name you'll give it:
Midnight

Reason why you want it:

-*General*-

When I first looked over the series I wasn’t actually going to go for one, I decided I might give it a miss this series, that was until I dreamt about this one literally. It was a bit weird at first but something about her personality jumped out at me. She reminded me of myself being very quiet (Though Nix may not say that is entirely true) I find myself rather quiet and un-sociable. She stood out and I knew I had to try!

-*Appearance*-

I must say her appearance is spectacular! The way the colours blend together, at first glance she looks very intimidating. I love how it’s a simple design but looks like a very interesting piece of art.
The way the purple and violet blends into the black, is extraordinary! The glowing marks I must say complete her look! The colours, design and just her are just awe inspiring!
I must say I may be obsessed with her colours she just― gorgeous doesn’t even cover it!

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TOP SECRET!
Status: Free
Species: Tracker Dog
Notes:
Midnight is a very silent canine. She minds her steps and never barks unless she's warning her handler. She's observant and very clever. Her markings glow at will, making her easier to spot in a darker area. When this glow is dimmed, she's next to impossible to spot at night, making her a nocturnal Tracker. Even though she may seem distant, she loves affection as much as any dog and will return this affection too.



Additional Information
Name: Midnight
Gender: Female
Age: 1 ½ years
Species: Tracker Dog
Sub-species: Normal
Height: 25 inches
Weight: 54lbs
Coat: Short and smooth
Theme Song Marry the Night: Lady GaGa



Will it be used in any kind of story?

I would most definitely use her in a story! I will use her more around Chicken Smoothie, I have ditched most of my stories I’ve written so far because they’ve ended up going in the opposite direction I wanted them to. I have started 2 stories and Midnight would be perfect for them, ones a Transformer fan-fiction and I’m currently starting an Angel Fan-fiction. The main story she would be in would be the Angel where a young girl (May-Rose Kylar), an average 16 year old teenager who is physic, and has most of the Angel abilities.
Adam Perez may look as normal as any other 17 year old boy but he doesn’t go to school, he doesn’t watch T.V… he has one mission, to hunt and destroy the Angels. When Adam receives the text of an address of an Angel sighting he doesn’t hesitate. He does everything right but when he sees May-Rose he doesn’t know what to do… she looks like an angel, she has the right energy but she has no Halo, the centre and heart of an Angel.
May-Rose and Adam are caught in a War where both sides want May-Rose captured, and Adam won’t let them. May-Rose is the Key to destroying the horrid life sucking angels from the Earth but will she be able to?
Midnight accompanies them both while trying to find the one person who can help them, usually called on to help plan or protect May-Rose, this Tracker enjoys travelling and receiving the praise and love after a job well done.

-*Adam’s View*-

“Well what’s there to say? Midnight just seemed to be the one most suited to the job, Trackers in my opinion are really hard to get but I’m not surprised that May-Rose got her hands on one. Out of the three she was the most suited to the job, we needed one who wasn’t loud and one who could work efficiently during the night. The other two were great I must say but an Aerial cooped up inside or an Aquatic without water just seemed cruel.
When we saw Seventy-Nine it was quiet a scare we had visited at night and she blended into the dark shadows the only indication she was there was when she allowed herself to glow. We knew this one was the one”

Describe its personality:

Midnight is very optimistic, loves and cares for her Handlers as if they were family. One quiet and serious little tracker known not to bark unless warning, she’s very smart and observant noticing the smallest things no human could see or hear the lightest sound far away in the distance.
At first glance her dark appearance may seem very intimidating, but once you meet this lovely creature your heart will melt instantly, she may seem distant but she loves affection as much as any other canine, and will return this affection ten-fold.
She likes how her handlers work mainly at night travelling across country after country trying to find a safe place to stay, without the eyes watching. Her ability to make her markings glow is very helpful when in pitch black night; it helps also when she can dim her markings to sneak up on the enemy.

Key
Black- May-Rose
Purple- Midnight


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I was flying, even in my sleep I laughed to myself in awe. It was such an amazing feeling to be weightless and free. I was rising out of my body and into the air just above, spreading my wings out felt like a wondrous stretch after sitting for too long, there full length spreading the height of myself both ways. Adam was asleep, lying on his back with his right arm under his head; Midnight was awake listening intently to something in the distance. I stayed there floating for a while taking in their auras, Adams a peaceful blue with golden flecks. Midnight was hard to read, her aura was purple but her glowing markings were covering most of the other colours making it hard to distinguish. I wanted to stay here like this but I couldn’t ― I had something I needed to do. Floating through the apartments felt like walking through water, soaring higher and faster I finally burst through the roof, it was late afternoon the sun was just setting. I spun around a few times feeling the warm sun on my wings and my arms before gliding slowly down. A then I saw them. A couple leaning against our hotel rooms window. The guy seemed to be in his 30’s the woman late 20’s, both were wearing tan trousers and a black shirt or a plaid t-shirt and they had a camera. They were trying to get pictures of us, but I could feel their frustration, they had hoped to get here earlier with the light and it was too dark now to see through the window. He was taking pictures trying to aim it between the curtains while she tried the door.
In a dizzying rush I flashed back to my body.
I awoke with a jerk feeling the itchy sheets tangled around my body. I was in our room; it felt like the afternoon. Relief swam through my tense body and I exhaled. It was only a dream. I had been flying, the warmth of the dying sun outside―
Midnight and I tensed as we both heard a shuffling noise outside. My heart felt as though it had sunken to my stomach. Hardly daring to even breathe I slowly moved my head to look at the window while Midnight was dimming her markings; even with the late sunlight she was invisible in the shadows. The curtains were open the slightest crack, the man was peering into a camera which was flat against our window, the woman slowly walked away then the door knob was turning. I was thankful that Adam had locked it, he thought if it was unlocked we could get out quicker.
So it wasn’t a dream; it was real. Could they see us? My pulse drumming in my ears Midnight was already at the door growling listening intently to their movements. Darkness envelope us as I pushed back my covers and darted towards Adam shaking his arm, “Adam!, Adam wake up!”
“Mm?” he stirred lifting his head off his arm “What is it?”
“There was a couple trying to get in, the guy was trying to take photos”
He was up and moving in a second grabbing a bag from under his bed shoving on a pair of blue jeans and a fitted black shirt, “When? Explain. Just now?”
“Yes, he was looking in through the curtains then a car came and the both left” I explained feeling suddenly cold.
Adam thought for a moment before shoving out gear into out bags and giving orders. “Midnight, there’s a small window you can fit through, I need you to circle the perimeter and see what’s going on” Midnight barked once before squeezing through the window and vanishing. “May… Get dressed then you’re going to tell me everything. I’ll pack the rest up you stay hidden” then he was scuttling around in the shadows grabbing everything that what we might need.
“Okay” I said as I grabbed my clothes and headed for the bathroom.

I wonder how they had found us. We had only just crossed into Albuquerque, it took them nearly a month to locate us the last time. I concentrated on dimming my marks even further until I was the same colour as the shadows. I snuck around the trees listening for the couple who were trailing us. Rounding the corner I saw them at first green little substances but getting closer I could see them, A tall man and a short and stubby woman, both looking inconspicuous as if they had just met on a walk.
“Yes, I’m sure its them, I didn’t get a look at them but I sensed her angel this morning” the man said into a small hand held device “Yes in the old rental hotel, we wait for your command sir” and with that he shoved the device in his pocket and pulled out a hand gun from the car and put it in its holster under his waist band.
I stood only a few paces away from them the streetlights were dead, and they weren’t paying attention, they get stupider each time I could see Adams and May-Rose’s figures against the window trying to look around for a way to get out. The woman also noticed this and grabbed her riffle from the back seat, the man nodded and handed her the silencer. I knew that she was going to shoot, I didn’t wait I focused on my marks making them glow to their brightest and growled.
“What on bloody Earth is that!” the woman screamed aiming the gun on me, the man was frozen still to the spot. “That’s no angel creature! Mark! What do I do?!” the woman screamed as the man started to grab his gun but I beat him to it I pounced and pushed him into the cars door. He obviously hit his head as he slumped down unconscious. The woman didn’t wait she trailed the gun on me and the gun went off barely hearing it with the silencer. I dodged most of the bullets some grazing my skin but not anything fatal.
Trailing the gun on me she lifted the man barely into the car before running around her side and jumping in the car and speeding off. I was about to leave when the same riffle came out of the window and shot 2 bullets straight at the window and a figure fell to the ground.


I emerged from the bathroom to see Adam watching Midnight closely; she was attacking them both like a mad dog. She had just knocked the man out when Adam turned around and bumped into me
“Oh good now I need you to tell me everything any small detail welcome…go” he said as he grabbed my bag and handed it to me.
“Well, I was dreaming I was flying, well… No I was flying and I saw them just standing outside our room” I explained right up to where I darted across to bed and woke him up. He nodded silently deep in thought.
“Okay now we just got to figure a way out of here, surely they have someone watching the doors” he mumbled as he swore under his breath. He was pacing the room and making me dizzy.
“The bathroom windows big enough for us to fit through, you can probably kick out the screen―”
We both jumped as the phone rang, Adam quickly picked it up and walked into the bathroom. He came out shortly smiling, “It was room service, wanting to know about dinner arrangements. I’m going to go get some cheap takeout food and hopefully they will think we aren’t leaving as quickly” he quickly looked out the window and showed the woman trying to lift the unconscious man into the car “Here take this, not that you will be using it I just feel better if you had it” he said as he handed me his hand gun.
“Adam I can’t―”
“I’ll be really quick. Stay safe” he said as he ducked outside and into the small reception next door.
I watched silently as the car sped away Midnight was glowing as brightly as the sun I hadn’t realised I was holding my breath until I let out a shaky breath I stood frozen thinking about the realisation I was a half-angel. I didn’t want to admit it so I pushed it away.
I was watching the car moving when the window shattered and a sharp pain hit my chest pushing back against the coffee table. I lay on the ground feeling a warm liquid spread across my chest and finding it hard to breath. I must have passed out after that from the pain; the cool black enveloping me was all I remembered.

I bolted back towards the room, fear dreading that I was too late. I got back the same time as Adam; he was carrying some Maccas bag and a coffee. He instantly bolted inside at the sight of the shattered glass.
May-Rose was lying on the ground covered in glass, she was bleeding. Adam was trying to find where she was shot, it looked as if she had been shot just under her ribcage, and he was ripping his white shirt into strips and covering the wound carefully trying to stop the bleeding.

I stood outside watching the car and May-Rose as Adam loaded the car up with our stuff, I was hoping that she wasn’t hurt fatally but she was lying there looking as fragile as a piece of paper her face was pale and her breathing was laboured. We got in the car as Adam put the address into the Gps. Mexico
May-Rose whimpered as we hit a road bump she was so cold I gently lay beside her trying warm her up. I fell asleep wishing we had woken up to a better night, and hoping she was okay.


I remember being picked up and gently placed in the backseat. I was so cold. I tried asking why but only my voice was replaced by air escaping my lungs. I was shivering, i couldnt open my eyes to see where we were, i was faintly aware that the GPS was giving directions. "Turn left after taking third exit on roundabout" he hit a road bump and a sharp pain in my chest made me gasp out in pain

"Im sorry May, We're stopping somewhere soon where i can dress your wounds properly, im so sorry, i should never have left you alone" Adams sounded as if he hated himself, he tried to take another turn without causing me pain. I was starting to shake from the shock. A soft body started to gently lay beside me and licked the tears off my face, Midnight. She was so warm, and i was like ice. She lay next to me trying to warm me up. I fell asleep with her next to me and the thoughts Good Girl, your such a good girl and once again the cool black abyse enveloped me again
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Re: Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0 | Series #23 + Event]

Postby Tyki-Pon » Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:45 pm

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Accessories: a spiked black leather collar and two matching bracelets one on each foreleg.
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Re: Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0 | Series #23 + Event]

Postby Clive » Sun Dec 11, 2011 2:10 am

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Tracker Dog Application
Username: Aviator
Tracker Dog you want: ID:#80
Name you'll give it: Truman (T-ru-man)
Meaning: The loyal one

Reason why you want it:
There are many reasons why want this handsome guy, but let"s start with the most important reasons.
When i read myself trough the adoptables from the Series #23 was he the only one that i really like.
I personally like the Aerial trackers most,they remind so much of pilots and aviators.
They are impressive, their wings fascinate so much, but that"s not all. Aerials are really impressive and elegant tracker dogs but though and strong at the same time!
Now, the reason that almost everyone has (no wonder :D) his design.
I personally it"s simple but effective, the colors look really great together, i love that, especially the yellow light sources on his wings, it"s such a sweet touch on his great design.

Will it be used in any kind of story? Definately.
I would love to use him in some short stories with my OCs, im planning on using him more around Chickensmoothie, when i get my tablet i will start to make some art/sketches with him too, so you will see him often around the forums.
He would be also perfect for my pilot team "Skyhunters".
You will hear more about them in my introduction for #80

Describe its personality:
(Hyper)active
This tracker dog loves to run and fly around.
It"s always a challenge for itself to make him calm.

Strong
Not only his body activities is full with strength. Truman is emotinal strong too.
His codex says: The life is hard, but you must be harder.

Loyal
Truman will always be loyal to his handlers, even they passed away,
his Loyalty never dies. He learned that loyalty and confidence is most important thing for being a good partner.


Adventurelover
Truman enjoys adventures, his heart is full of glee when he goes out with his handler
on thrilling adventures or dramatic missions.

Serious
Actually is Truman a friendly companion, but he knows when something is wrong,
he doesn"t have the time to act playful or anything like that.

Brave
Truman is afraid of nothing, he is always open for
tasks even when some of them could end deadly.

Protective
He is always ready to defend his beloved ones, no matter in which situation.

Information about the handler:

Name: Gwendolyn Ford
Nickname: Gwen
Gender: Female
Age: 19 years
Hair color: Ginger
Eye color: Chestnut

Write an introduction for your Tracker:
Who we have here? Asked Nex with a lil smile.
Truman the aerial tracker dog, professor.
James,please tell me the Identification number.
0080 short #80.
Let"see....
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Name: Truman
Age: 2 years and 2 months
Species: Tracker Dog
Sub-Species: Aerial
Height: 115cm
Weight: 80lbs
Coat: Smooth,short


Interessting, come here Nathan,let me take a look at you.

Hm...wing span is perfect,his teeth are alright, so darling, let me test your strength.James, would you be so nice and could you bring me a piece of metal?
Right away Professor!
Thank you James, so Nathan, try to bend this piece of metal with your front paws.
Truman bends the metal with ease.
What a strength,stunning, he is very well trained James, so, he is a healthy young Tracker,ready for the kennels, were he hopefully finds a good partner or rather handler with a loving new home.

2 days later

The wind blew gently trough the tree tops,it just stopped to rain,the grass halms were glistening in the morning sun.
An aircraft was landing on the outside of the kennel.
"Doppelganger" was written on the blue polish of the plane.
You could hear the noises of the airscrew miles away.
With ease the pilot landed her aircraft on the runway.
Nex looked out of her window,she saw the aircraft landing in the near of her laboratory and the kennel.
James,look! I guess a handler just landed!,said Nex in excitement.

A young woman walked down the stairs which were under the entrance of the plane.
She put out of her bag a map.
Hm... so, either im right here or i got lost again.
Oh! Im really right,puuuh, i thought i took the wrong map again.
Hm...what a pretty place here, i like that.

James, follow me, we have to go to the kennel and prepare some things.
Yes, mam i mean Professor!

The girl walks slowly along the path which leads directly to the kennel.
After a a few minutes of walking , the young girl reached the kennel,were some tracker dogs were waiting for a new home and a handler.
Nex greeted: Hello, welcome to the Tracker dog kennel. My name is Prof.Nex and this is my assistant James.
My name is Gwendolyn Ford, nice to meet you Professor.
So, what can i do for you Mrs.Ford?
You know, im a sky detective, i solve murder mysteries for a small amount of money you know, but it"s a little bit difficult to solve some cases, because i"m colorblind, so it"s hard for me too see the difference from a bloody spot or coffee splotch, and so it"s harder to find evidences or clues, as same as in rescue missions or treasure hunt orders.
I heard that your Tracker dog creations are very famous for their succesful works.

Interessting, so you are here to adopt one? Asked Nex with a curious expression.
Yes indeed.
Well then,follow me.

They entered the kennel.
The clima here was very comfortable, it seemed so inviting and warm.

That"s incredible, so many choices!
Nex smiled.
Gwen looked around, it was a really hard decision for her, Tracker Dogs are not only famous for their success, they are loyal and sometimes playful fellas, fact is, they are awesome companions.
Everyone would be a perfect partner for her, but she is only allowed to choose one.
But than she spooted a Tracker dog , it was Truman.
She couldn"t see his beauty(markings) with her eyes, but she felt that he was something special.

Professor?
Yes,darling?
Could i take a look on the Tracker with the ID, wait a second....#80?
Of course, James would you please bring the Aerial Tracker Truman?
Truman....that"s an unusal name,strange, it seems that i like it.
Yes, give me a few minutes. The assistant run trough the floors with hurry.
Only a few minutes later, James come back with #80 also known as Truman.

Gwen was amazed by his sight.
Wow, that"s a large one. Come here buddy.
With curiousity the young Tracker walked towards Gwen.
At first he smelled at her hands, than his muzzle went to her hair.
That tickles, please stop.
He stopped.
What a discipline, he is truly amazing.Thought Gwen to herself.
You know Mrs.Ford, Nathan demands a strong owner, who can take care of him, his known for his strength and size.
Do you think you can handle him?

Im always open for challenges, and i"m sure, that he is the Tracker that i"m looking for.
Truman is something special, i know that im colorblind and that could be a problem in a few missions but im sure, that we both can make it.


A few months later

It was a warm summer day. The sun shone bright like a shooting star.
Gwen and Trumanwere sitting on a small hill, enjoying the day.
The wind blew gently trough Gwen"s ginger hair and Nathan"s sleak fur.
What a beautiful day, perfect for some flights, don"t you agree Truman?
Truman barked approvingly.
She stroke gently along his head.
Did you know that you are a wonderful friend?
Alright, let"s see what we have to do today.
Gwen took a list out of her bag.
Hm...today we have to find a lost locket, than a key....what"s written here? Ah, a teddy bear.
God, that sounds boring.Wait, theres more. Hey,hey,hey! That sounds interessting, a treasure hunt!

Truman jumped on, he ran directly to Gwendolyn"s plane "Doppelganger".
You are truly a wonderful friend,Truman.
Gwendolyn ran as fast as she could to keep up with Truman.
A new adventure was waiting for them.
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Re: Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0 | Series #23 + Event]

Postby RainbowBizkit <3 » Sun Dec 11, 2011 3:55 am

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Tracker Dog Application
Username:
Tracker Dog you want: 80
Name you'll give it: Malace
Reason why you want it:
His personality is awesomely amazing, I love how he likes being around daredevils and stuntmen and women it gave me so many ideas for a story. His markings are unbelievable I couldn't take my eyes off him for at least 5 Minutes.

Will it be used in any kind of story?
Describe its personality: WIP
~Cocky~

~Confident~

~Bold~

~Outgoing~


~Strong~

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Write an introduction for your Tracker:
The wheels began turning faster and faster as the plane sped down the run way, picking up enough speed until it casually lifted into the air with ease and grace. Eli smiled patting his tracker companion as he held a para-suit in front of him
"Ready for the big jump today Malace?" Malace said nothing, he just stared straight ahead not even bothering to swing his head around to look at his handler. The "Big Jump" was always just the leap out of the plane to fall to the ground slowly, Malace kept his gaze straight he was excited as always but knew something could always go wrong. WIP
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Re: Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0 | Series #23 + Event]

Postby ↫mars↬ » Sun Dec 11, 2011 4:12 am

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Username:
Batman.

Tracker Dog you want:
Number Seventy-Nine (79)

Name you'll give it:
Vextra

Reason why you want it:
When one is silent, and observes, many conclusions may be made about one's character. Vextra's character is quiet, cunning, and stealthy. When she sees something or someone that acts suspicious or seems that they will endanger someone, she immediately reacts. She protects all people, and her partner above all else. When I think of this, I see someone who is loyal, regardless of species, Tracker or human. I value loyalty above all else in a friend, or partner. This is why I have chosen her as my partner, and friend. I also see one who is observant, one who is smart, someone who can make accurate decisions under pressure, a valuable asset for myself, and to the people who need protecting. When lives are in the balance, level-headdedness, is by far a talent that needs to be used for the good of the people.

Will it be used in any kind of story?
She is her own story, forever changing, reshaping, continuing. As long as she is mine, she will have a story.

Describe its personality:
~Loyal~
When standing in the middle of destruction, one's thoughts may be on themselves, worrying about their welfare. Vextra is the opposite. When in danger, she thinks of her partner, humans who can not defend themselves, and innocent victims. She would put her life on the line to protect humans, and above all else her partner. When her loyalty is questioned, she gets furious. She lashes out at the person who questioned her, blindly destroying them, until told to stop. When this happens, she is immediately sorry, and wishes to be forgiven.
~Quiet~
No one but her partner has heard her bark before. She refuses to make a sound when she's on a stealth mission. She walks lightly on her paws and avoids places that would comprise her location to the enemy.
~Withdrawn~
Only opening up to her partner can be good and bad for a partner in crime. If she only truly trusts her partner, then they could do anything. If she trusted more, then they could do more. Vextra trusts her partner to give her the attention she deserves, and no one else has to be responsible for it.

Write an introduction for your Tracker:
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Night. Perfect. Under the shroud of darkness, a figure on four legs dashed from behind building to building. A soft glow followed the figure, a human, standing upright and holding a flashlight that was dimmed. They scuttled to a stop right in front of an executive building with fancy writing that read: Work for Hire. It made no sense to the average person of the city. People walked by it, ignoring the strange sounds from within, and figured that it was just a prank by some dumb kids. This wasn't entirely false. It was a run-down, unkempt place with rotten wood and dirty windows. The sign was nothing more than a piece of wood with white paint. The street lamp was flickering and eventually went out as the two walked up to the make-shift door which consisted of a plank sat upright. The human figure rapped on the door three times with his knuckles and twice with his palm. The door opened slightly as two peering eyes looked out, faintly outlining a small and wrinkled face which was shrouded by a thin vail.
"What do you seek?"
The raspy voice asked, eyeing the stranger.
"The peace and well being of the Work."
He answered. The small figure gingerly let them in, shuffling out of the way. Slowly, the couple walked in, making sure that the floor would not collapse underneath them, for it creaked and groaned under such weight. The small figure led them down a hall and to the right, hobbling along on two stubby legs. When they entered the room, a small, oval, table sat in the center of the room with ten children sitting around it. A single light hung from the ceiling, illuminating the dark and damp space with its flickering light. The children couldn't be more than sixteen at most, the youngest being twelve. The tallest one stood from his seat and looked at them closely,
"Who are you?"
The figure by the door stepped into the light. He couldn't be more than fifteen himself, but he was tall, dark haired, and had handsome features.
"A guy seeking a Work, is that so much to ask."
A girl giggled next to the guy who was standing, and stood shakily as well,
"That's not easy, no its not!"
The boy nodded, agreeing with the girl standing next to him,
"Loco's right. You got somethin' to hide, Trainer?"
"No, nothin' important."
He answered, walking closer. He sat in an empty seat, and motioned for his four-legged friend to follow. Stepping into the glow of the light bulb, a Tracker stood, her purple markings faintly glowing about her. The boy merely glanced at her and returned his attention to the boy at hand.
"What's your name, and what's your business. We don't got many spaces left."
"My name is my business, but I want to show you what we can achieve."
He answered, eyeing the people around the table, to his left and to his right. He had taken the only chair left around the table, so many eyes were upon him, judging his every movement. The boy chattered with Loco to his right and finally said,
"We don't like Trackers, their government's stuff. We don't like the government."
The Trainer frowned, that's not what he wanted to hear.
"We've been through a lot, mind you, and If you won't try us out, I'll just have to go to the Nabbers, but that's alright, ain't it?"
Shocked gasps and muffled voices whispered around the table until the boy said angrily,
"Enough! We gots to see what yous can do, before you can get somethin' from us. Ain't that right Comrades?"
Shouts like, 'Here, here!' and 'You got that right!' came from around the table. Obviously there were many different levels of intellect here. Luckily, the boy was cunning and smart,he wasn't going to leave without a Work.

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