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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Astraela » Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:15 pm

I would love to adopt!
Number: 14
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Name: Jemma
Species: wolf
Personality: Jemma is a very quiet wolf around strangers or new wolfs, but when she's close with someone she is very loving, friendly, loves to have a good time, loyal friend and she has very fast reflexes and is strong willed. when necessary, she can take charge and put others in their place, jemma can be very protective and will stop at nothing to protect things and others she loves. she very rarely gets angry, but when she does you better get out of her way.

Likes: light yellow and white, flowers, nature, deer meat, kind and shy wolves, even numbers, new life, spring

Dislikes: spiders, red, scary things, mean, pushy, arrogant wolves,odd numbers, deaths, winter,

song:anything but ordinary by avril lavigne


Background (Optional, but it gives you a better shot. 2500 words maximum, 100 words minimum. We value quality over quantity, you can have five pages and still say absolutely nothing.)
the begining
jemma was born into a little but extremely strong wolf pack. theses wolves were different, the had strange birthmarks telling stories from there futures, they are also very loving towards one another and teach everything that the next generation will need to know.
until a bigger pack formed and they were bound by time to each other instead of loyalty. this pack had smeared dark spots and wanted to kill jemmas pack........ and they succedded...........

after the war

jemma was the only one left, and she knew she had to live, there was something pushing her, revenge? life? she didn't know and she didn't care. so she ran away, away from the sadness, and sorrow and past life and loved ones.she learned what she needed to live, eat, fight and win, jemma was a very fast learner so she taught herself and improved old tricks


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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby InsomniacFox » Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:32 pm

I would like to adopt!
Number: 5
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Don't know how to put it up... -_-'
Name: LarkSpring or Saire, haven't decided
Species: Maned Wolf
Personality: A tricky lil' devil, this feisty female will trick you out of your at the strangest of times, yet she knows how to be serious and proper at the neediest of times. She is a total tomboy, haning out with all the males in her pack and has no idea how to behave like a female, which unerves her mother, RoseVale [or Raen] to no end. She normally plays around and makes fun of others, and likes to be the top wolf, earning her little friends. She's very cunning and sly, yet has a little-used caring side.
Likes: Playing around, getting dirty, insulting others, being the top wolf, tricks, nature, males.
Dislikes: Females, being sad, her mothe rannoyind her to act more feminine, being clean, humans.
Background: Born into a small pack of wolves [of which I don't have a name for yet], she grew up with her two brothers, StormGust [or Thrye] and BirchThicket [or Braik], and learned all she knew from them, as she was the youngest. Her father had disappeared before their birth, so her and her borthers did not know him. She always likes pranking the other wolves, with the help of her brothers of course, and always liked to be on top of everything, and knowing all that was going on. Getting older, she got smarter and faster, making her tricks better. One day she wants to be Alpha or Beta though, so she doesn't trick her elders that other anymore.
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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Tiikeria » Sun Sep 26, 2010 5:36 am


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|I would like to adopt!|

|Number|
Three (3)

|Name|
Atirasic
(Combination of Portuguese and Italian words for "Assassin")

|Species|
Eurasian Wolf
(Canis lupis lupis)

|Personality|
I am the assassin they all fear. I can make the most courageous and stoic of Lords beg. I can be cold, cruel, and calculating. I am silent, a ghost; I appear when needed and vanish when my job is done. This is not me. This is my facade.

I am a product of my past; a history full of pain and sadness, fear and bloodshed, tears and loneliness. My greatest achievements are my greatest failures. So ingrained in my ways, I feel I will never be free. I am the reluctant murderer.

|Likes|
Thunderstorms - In a time when most creatures seek shelter, I sit alone. I watch the flashes in the grey sky and wonder why the the heavens are upset. I feel a kindred to them; both of us can take a life, but we can also restore it.

Sunrise - Sunrise means I have lived another night; it means I have another chance for freedom. It also reminds me, despite the pain in the world, there is still beauty to be found.

Hunting - The only part of killing I enjoy. The rush of chasing down prey is one that never gets old, no matter if I’m chasing a rabbit, or my target.

|Dislikes|
Leopards - They are nothing more than haughty beasts, unfit for any use. They would much rather have others do the work for them, as they laze about. I fear a world run by leopards. I refuse to be a slave to a beast such as them. I would rather die.

|Song|
Iridescent by Linkin Park

|Background|
At least, that is what they see. That is what they want me to be. I am an assassin, with no side in this war. I come, I kill, I am paid, I move on. Simple. I have been paid in food, shelter, and even a mate. A mate I miss. But I cannot go back. I must keep moving. I have a calling to fulfil.

I never wanted to become this. A monster, good only for taking the lives of those who may not even deserve it. I take the word of those who hire me, and ask no questions other than what will help me kill them. The only time in which I do not feel like the murderer I am is during the sunrise. Beauty, though difficult to find in this world, still exists. It is something that keeps me going.

“You! Wolf!”

A cry breaks me from my revarie. I bow my head, before turning, giving the creature a dark look, my features stoic, as I have trained them to be. I watch as the leopard approaches, head held high. Insufferable beasts, leopards were. Just my luck one would want to talk to me.

“I am a messanger to the Great and Powerful Lord Eyktan,” the leopard rumbles in it’s deep, growling voice, “I am seeking a wolf by the name of Atirasic. Have you heard of this wolf?”

“I have,” I speak softly, my eyes displaying my disdain for the haughty leopard before me.

“Do you know where I can find him, then, wolf? This is an urgent matter,” the leopard gave me a look, one I could easily read: “I-am-better-than-your-worthless-self.” Have I yet mentioned how much I hated leopards?

“You already have, leopard,” I stood, proud and tall, inwardly reveling in the startled expression the beast now wore.

The leopard gathered himself quickly, “My apologies, Atirasic. I merely assumed a wolf of your...occupation...wouldn’t sit out in the open like this.”

“I take my chances, leopard. Death does not frighten me. Now, I believe your Lord is awaiting us. Shall you do your duty properly, now?”

I brushed past the beast, catching his angry scowl and smiling to myself. Maybe leopards weren’t all bad.

We traveled North, arriving at the leopards’ den by sundown. I ignored my companion for most of the journey, much to the beast’s annoyance. As we walked through the camp, I could feel hostile looks burning my skin; it was no secret that the leopards hated wolves, especially after the mass killing of most of the army. However, I pretended to not notice the glares, instead following the messenger to Eyktan’s own den.

The Lord sat, his most loyal generals, seated around a claw drawn map, battle plans I assumed. I stayed standing and silent as the messenger bowed his head and murmured, “My Lord Eyktan, I come bearing good.”

The Lord turned, regarding the messenger for a moment, then looking up at myself. The cold eyes stared into my own; I could almost feel my heart freeze. His gaze returned to the bowing servant after a moment, looking pleased.

“You have done well, Sykio. Matulis, make sure he recieves extra meat as a reward for his excellent performance.”

“As you wish, My Lord,” the leopard to the left of the Lord growled, leading the messenger and the generals away, leaving me with Eyktan, and the beast I could only assume was the infamous General Skaarn.

“I have been looking forward to meeting you; the one most Lords fear. For good reason, as I have learned. You do excellent work,” Eyktan started, giving me the same breezily pleased look he had given the messenger. Skaarn eyed me with disdain. I stayed silent.

“You do not speak much,” the Lord observed. I nodded my head slightly, “May I ask why?”

“Why waste words when I have nothing to say?” I replied, my voice and features stoic. Emotion was dangerous.

“Smart wolf,” Eyktan remarked to the general beside him, “Possibly the first I’ve met. Now, let us get down to business. Have you ever killed a Lord, Assassin Atirasic?”

“Minor lords, yes,” I replied quietly, watching the duo’s movements.

“Excellent. How much do you know about the Lord of the Cheetahs, then?”

I furrowed my brows, thinking, coming up with a name, “Togo?” The leopard Lord looked even more pleased.

“Indeed. You see, I have deemed him a traitor, along with all the cheetahs under his command. My army set out to exterminate this problem a few moons ago, but Togo escaped, badly injured. I want you to find him and take care of him.”

“What do I recieve in return?” I asked, eyeing the lord.

“Pack lands. A safe place for you, and your mate, to live, under my protection. There is an alpha-less pack living there. It’s yours if you complete your mission.”

I considered the offer. I could finally have a home with the mate I missed dearly. We wouldn’t be hunted for my crimes. We could finally raise a family.

“I accept.”

“Good...you shall leave at sunrise.”

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I ran, my tongue lolling from my mouth, the sounds of snarling and roaring behind me. I had been tricked. I was a fool. Now I had condemned an innocent male to die by the claws of a brutal beast.

Let me backtrack.

I had left at sunrise, tracking the wounded cheetah through the grasslands and forest, spending days following a looping scent. Togo must have known Eyktan would send someone after him, so, he attempted to throw off the trail. However, I was used to this type of tracking, most of my targets used it.

It had been three suns when I discovered him.

He sat, looking old and tired, wounds covering his once proud body. He watched me approach, his eyes informing me of his acceptance to his fate.

“You’ve come to kill me, haven’t you, wolf?” his words were matter-of-fact, throwing me off. Most of my targets begged for mercy. I wasn’t used to this.

“I indeed have been sent, Lord Togo. You must pay for your crimes.”

“I have committed no crimes against Eyktan. To others, I shall agree, but against Eyktan, I committed no crime other than trusting him.”

I cocked my head, watching the cheetah return my gaze.

“I assume Eyktan told you I am a traitor. Lies. I did everything he ordered flawlessly. In his mind he has deemed all beasts besides his precious leopards unworthy of living. He has done it to the wolves, and now the cheetahs. I should have listened to that tigress earlier...” the last part of his statement was directed at himself, but I didn’t mind, I was mulling over the Lord’s other words. It made sense with everything I had heard of Eyktan.

“You may even be next, wolf. Eyktan keeps no promises, unless they are to himself.”

“Ignore his lies, assassin. Kill him,” a growling, rough, angry voice joined us, making me turn. Skaarn stepped through the brush, watching me with a hard glare, “Kill him like you were ordered to do.”

I looked at the cheetah, before looking back at Skaarn. I didn’t know how many innocent lives I had taken before, but I refused to add one more to the count, “No.”

Togo’s head snapped to look at me, wise eyes startled; Skaarn snarled, baring his teeth, “Do not defy Eyktan, wolf.”

“I refuse to kill an innocent. He has done nothing.”

“That is not for you to decide. Now, kill him, before I kill you for treason,” Skaarn growled, his claws digging into the soil below; I stood tall.

“No.”

The next thing I knew a roar split through the air, Skaarn leaping forward. I braced for the tackle.

It never came.

Instead, Skaarn was intercepted by the injured Lord of the Cheetahs, the two breaking into an all out fight. I stood, unsure of what to do; I could not go back to Eyktan, as he obviously meant for me to be killed. I backed away, stopping when Togo looked at me, fury in his eyes.

“Go, wolf! Run from here! Find the Lord of the Zionds, help him. Tell him Togo sent you, as his dying wish. Go!”

I turned and ran.

Thus leading to my current predicament. I ran until my legs gave out, collapsing in the tall grasses that bordered the forest. I could no longer hear the fight. I knew the cheetah lord stood no chance. The lord had given his life for me, now it was time for me to repay his favor. I had to find the Ziond Lord.

I looked up, watching the sunrise. I had survived another night.

|Characters Mentioned|
Eyktan - Lord of the Leopards
Skaarn - Leopard General, and second-in-command
Togo - Lord of the Cheetahs
Ja'Mai - Lord of the Zionds
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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Atwood » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:29 am

As a heads-up, this round will be ending and the forms gathered up in about five hours from now. :3
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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Micki. » Sun Sep 26, 2010 11:34 am

"I've been standin' around preying for God to do me a favor for hundreds of years and He ain't been listening."

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I would like to adopt!
Number:
Number three (3).
"Nothing to say."
Picture:
Image above form.
"Yeah, that's me. I'm so sexy, aren't I? Don't lie, I know you think so."
Name:
Apollo Navi
"That's my name, don't wear it out."
Namesake:
Apollo- The Greek god of the sun, music, art, creativity, etc. Since he was born in Greece and his mother believed in the Greek gods in addition to the Navi gods, it makes since he was named after one of the Greek gods.
Navi- All wolves that are purebloods of the race Navi have Navi somewhere in their name and most of them find it a source of pride. I named the race this because it means float, fly, and to swim in Latin and they normally love water, they're normally so graceful they seem to float, and the original Navis could fly. The race has nothing to do with Romans, they've been around since the dawn of time.
"Got a problem with my name?"
Nickname(s):
Apollo, Pollo, and occasionally Navi.
"Apollo to you, got it?"
Age:
1397 years old.
"I'm old I know, it comes with the job."
DoB (Date of Birth):
Unknown (it's unclear whether or not he even remembers his own birthday).
"I do too remember my birthday! I'm not quite that old, yet..."
Origin:
Mother's side-
His mother was from a group of pureblood Navi wolves living in Greece.
Father's side-
His father was born to a line of the three original Navi bloodlines. His tribe lived in Greece, actually quite close to Mt. Olympus.
"I'm proud of my linage and nothing you can say will change that."
Patronus:
October Keli Navi
"She's a great protector."
Mate:
October Keli Navi
"We are not mates! We have never had pups, so we cannot be considered mates."
Pups:
None, yet. Heavily considering it. ;P
"I'm not heavily considering it. Pups aren't for me."
Gender:
Male
"In case you couldn't tell."
Species:
Astrum Navi Wolf
"Born a Navi wolf and brought back as an astrum after dieing."
Theme Song(s):
"I Don't Care-" Apocalyptica ft. Adam Goniter
"Barely Breathing-" Duncan Sheik
"These two songs describe me pretty well. One's my normal side and one's my soft side. How soft that side is, I don't know."
Personality: Smart, sly, and very clever. He is a smart-a** and he's very sarcastic. He is a natural born leader, it took a while to shine through. But once it did it shone bright. Apollo shows other leadership skills as well. Some of these other skills are bravery, quickness of mind as well as body/fast reflexes, and fighting skills. Apollo normally doesn't plan ahead, instead he does things as he goes. He often acts on whims, making him both exciting and unpredictable, which also helps him with the ladies.

Apollo is adventurous and curious, but he's become very cautious since his first life. He's nocturnal and since his first life he has become a loner, preferring to travel alone (with the exception of October). He is secretive and kills silently. Apollo can be cold and cruel. He is greatly feared across the lands, but no one has seen him and lived (other than October and his only friend). They merely know he was there by his calling card; a paw print in the blood of the dead and a pitch fork carved into their neck.

"I am not a smart-a**, nor am I a born leader. Everything that I am is because of my past. A past of pain, a past no one would envy."
Likes-
- Latin
- Greek and Roman society/beliefs/stories/ect.
- Egyptian and Cherokee civilization/beliefs/stories/ect.
- Studying cuneiform and Egyptian hieroglyphics
"Just some civilizations and stuff like that that I like."
- Cold
- Dead silence
- Sunset and sunrise
- Stars, night, the moon, etc.
- Storms and rain (are the exception to his fear/dislike of water)
- The beach (but not the water itself, more of the view and feeling)
- Running, mainly racing (because he normally wins and it feeds his ego)
"Some conditions that I like and a few other things."
- Poseidon, Apollo, and Athena
- Music, art, artistic things/people/animals
"Just stuff/gods I like."
Dislikes-
- Felines
- Most water
- Zeus and Hermes
- Bright light and screechy/loud noises
"A few things I dislike."
Fears-
- Bodies of water as well as large amounts of water
- Being returned to human form by the Gods
- Death and the unknown
- Loving and letting go
- Love itself
"I am not scared of love, water, or death. Especially not death, I welcome the day that I am to die."
Habits-
- Twitching ears and tail in a certain patterns when nervous, scared/upset, or angry.
- Pawing the ground when nervous or waiting
- Going and leaving without a sound
"Some of my habits."
History:
He was a normal Navi wolf living in Greece during the time of The Great War...until he was summoned by the Gods and Goddesses.
"I would hardly call my life that of a normal wolf, even for a Navi wolf living in Greece during The Great War."

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"I'm sure it will be fantastic with your super artistic skills." *snorts*

My Story
(A few of the several chapters I'm working on and the main ideas of them)
Born in Blood- His birth story.
"What shall we Name them?"- Simply their names.
The Great War- His father tells him what is going on between the felines and the Navi wolves.
Fun on the Ice- Apollo and his siblings play on the ice.
Icicle Pup- Apollo falls into the ice.
"To become truly great..."- Apollo's father trains him to become a warrior.
Scarred for Life- His accident proves to scare him for life.
Parade- Apollo goes to a parade.
Summoned- Summoned by the Gods.
"I Believe..."- Apollo believes in the gods.
A New Life- His new life as a human
Olympics- Apollo competes in the Olympics.
Showing me the Falls- October shows Apollo the water falls.
'Tis the Season- Winter comes back around and he reveals to October his true identity and his fear of water.
Falling Down, Down, Down (in Love)- Apollo falls in love.
Another Summoning- He is again summoned by the Gods.
"But you said Always!"- He comes back to the tribe and his father is dieing.
"Thank the Gods."- His father wants him to thank the Gods, not hate them.
"...True to your Name."- Apollo becomes 'true to his name.' Not the name Apollo, but more like true to his fathers name, meaning he proves he is as brave as his father.
Revenge- His journey to find the leader of the underworld's rejects, his father's murder.
The Assassin is Born- Apollo kills the leader of the underworld's rejects.
The Demon Inside- Apollo becomes a murder, reluctant to give in to his 'demon,' but having no choice.

Born in Blood

It was June 11 ("Ha! I told you I remembered my birthday!"), a warm sunny day in Greece. Nothing particularly special about the day, until a sudden storm came. The original tribe of Navi living in Greece were at war with a clan of leopard-like cats. The cats had just attacked the camp and my father slipped out of the den to protect the rest of us. He was the leading warrior, the one the felines were ordered to attack.

As the battle neared an end an ear-shattering cry rang out. It was one of the cats. My father crawled into the den, his pelt stained with blood. A large cat followed. They hissed and growled at each other as my father stood in between the over-grown cat and us.

"Leave."
"Who do you think you are?"
"I am a Navi wolf, the warrior that kills you."
" I don't believe this."
"As soon as you make a move I'll snap your neck."
"Well, then I should make the move that will do the most damage, shouldn't I?"


The feline lunged at my mother and slashed at her back, sinking his teeth into her neck. There was a terrible shriek from my mother and a loud hiss as my father did just as he said, snap the cat's neck. He stood, blood dripping from his jaws and tears falling from his eyes. And I was the only pup who watched our mother's murder.

Born in blood, I was destine to become an assassin; silent as the night and quick as a bullet.

"What shall we Name them?"

My father laid down beside my mother's dieing body before realizing my eyes were wide open. I was born with my eyes and ears already open. He put a paw around me and moved me closer to him. "It's alright little one. I am here for you, always." Arkin walked into the den and saw the damage done. Her howl told the others that something disastrous had happened in our den. Arkin emerged carrying me and the two of my siblings that hadn't been crushed by the feline's weight when he'd launched himself onto my mother and my nursing siblings. Another wolf carried out my four dead siblings.

When my father emerged carrying my mother on his back the surviving members of the tribe gasped. Her body was almost completely limp, but her chest heaved up and down. Her breathing was loud and uneven and her eyes filled with pain. He placed her in the center of the camp and laid down beside her. My siblings and I were also laid down next to her. She groomed us gently, glade to see her pups before she died.

"What shall we name them?" My father asked, grooming my mother's neck wounds. "Lotus, Zeth, and..." My mother looked down at me, at a lose for names. "Apollo. He will be the strongest and the brightest of them all, you watch." My father licked my mother's muzzle. "Apollo Navi," She repeated. "Perfect." She smiled as she closed her eyes. Her breathing stopped and everyone fell silent and my father cried.

The Great War

Seven months later...

"Son, it is time you know the truth...why your mother died."

My father led me into our den. "Your siblings do not need the same explanation because they did not see your mother's murder." I nodded, this was his way of telling me not to tell them. "You see, we are in the middle of a war; between the underworld's rejects. They are a large clan of evil cats that have died once, but they were rejected by the underworld because they were not vicious enough, nor had they seen enough pain. And so these rejects formed a clan, deciding they would gain their entrance to the underworld...even if it means fighting their way there." My father checked for comprehension. I was sitting in front of him, listening intently and waiting to get to the part about my mother's death.

"These felines were planning on taking the underworld over from Hades and releasing all of the underworld's horrid monsters to plaque earth. As guardian of the animals and friend to the Gods, we could not allow them to do this." He sighed, obviously deep in thought. "So we stood in their way, like real warriors!" My father laughed. "So we stood in their way like a rock stands in a ship's way. We remained reluctant as they threatened us. Then I met with their leader. After talking with him he refused to give up his wish to take over the underworld. And so I declared war on the underworld's rejects."

I rolled onto my back and pawed the air as I yelled, "Yeah, that's right, take that you over-grown cats!" My father chuckled, grinning down at me. I didn't understand the seriousness of the matter like I would later. "And so now I am the target of the underworld's rejects. The night of your mother's murder the tribe was sleeping. All of us were here, in camp. It was a black night, no moon or stars in sight. A few wolves were patrolling the camp when the underworld's rejects ambushed us. I left the den, as you well remember, to protect those who couldn't fight. The felines were ordered to kill me, which several tried. But thanks to several loyal warriors, they were not successful. I noticed a feline creeping towards our den, so I raced into the den to protect you. And then the feline attacked your mother. I snapped his neck before he killed her, but I was only seconds too late."

I'd fallen silent as I listened to the vague description of that night. I remembered, in great detail, the parts that I'd seen myself.

"And now you know why your mother's death occurred. But, because of her death we have all become more violent towards the felines as well as more cautious."

Fun on the Ice

A few days later...

I was with my siblings. The lake near camp was frozen over and Zeth decided it'd be fun to slide on the cold ice. Lotus and I decided to tag along. Zeth was the oldest, but he didn't show leadership. None of us really were the leading type. He was the wise one, I was the curious one, and Lotus was the follower. As the three of us trotted along, our legs buried up to our stomachs, more snow started falling.

Our trot turned into a race, which I won. I'd always been the fastest of the three of us. I skidded onto the ice, my claws leaving jagged scratches. Zeth and Lotus soon joined me sliding in a sitting position. We laughed as we stood, our claws acting as skates. The three of us started tugging and nipping ears and tails, even legs. I ran on the ice, laughing as Zeth and Lotus chased me. The two of them tackled me and Lotus started tugging on my front leg. Zeth pulled on my back leg, the two of them doing a fair job of playing tug of war with me.

Zeth then switched targets and attacked Lotus. I jumped on Zeth and tugged at his tail, getting back at him for using me to play tug of war. The three of us were soon pulling on each others' paws and nipping tails. It was hard to tell who was biting who. I managed to break free of my siblings and I ran, full-speed, ahead. Lotus was the first of the two to get back on her feet, but Zeth soon passed her.

Icicle Pup

I was so busy trying to stay away from them that I didn't notice the ice thinning. I turned sharply and slipped on a patch of newly fallen snow. The ice cracked. I fell into the freezing water, it felt as though a thousand knifes were stabbing my sides. My sides heaved and it reminded me of my mother struggling to breath after being attacked by a feline. At that moment I wished my father had had the time to teach us how to swim.

My siblings must have gone for help because the last thing I remember before it went black was a loud splash.

When I came to my father was laying next to me, looking down with worried eyes. A few wolves were surrounding us. Apparently it was rare for a pup of my age to survive a fall through the ice because their worried faces turned to looks of relief after noticing I was awake. "We were so worried about you," My father washed his warm tongue over my head. "Promise me you'll be more careful, I need you here to take over when I'm gone."

"To become truly great..."

A month later...

"To become truly great, you must gain the element of fear over your enemies." My father explained, looking down at my brother and I. We'd both decided we wanted to be a warrior like my father, my sister had chosen to learn the herbs. An equally important job my father had said, but Zeth and I had merely laughed saying that fighting was more important. "If your enemies fear you, then they are less likely to challenge you. However, it is also wise to hide your true strength; leaving open the chance for them to underestimate you so you will have the upper hand...if only for a few minutes."

Scarred for Life

A year later...

"You've grown into such a fine young male."

~♥~ MAJOR WIP, I didn't want to miss the code drop.
Sorry for any spelling or grammar mistakes, they're most likely typos.
The last two chapters I started typing are both incomplete.
Also please note that astrums and Navi wolves are beings of my creation. ~♥~
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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Atwood » Sun Sep 26, 2010 2:11 pm

The forms are now being collected for evaluation; as usual, if you make any edits past this point, be sure to repost your form so the edits don't get missed. :3 Remember that edits only count if they are submitted within the collection period or shortly after it has ended.
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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Sapphirescript » Sun Sep 26, 2010 2:36 pm

Tasha999 wrote:I would like to adopt!
Number: 7
Picture: Image
Name: Sapphire
Species: Anthro Main coon cat
Personality: Sapphire's personality can't be explained perfectly. The life she lived made her the character she is. The warm bright outside she has only hides her cold heart. As she grew up being hated by her familey she grew up thinking there is no such thing as love. Her younger sister was her only light and made her smile but when she left Sapphire was alone. Her mind only thinks shes beautiful when she is dressed in little clothing with makeup and her hair done. She hates herself and refuses to look in mirror if she hasn't done this. Her abusive father tore her lcothes up so she could only wear scraps but in public he seems to be so caring. She learned easily from her father that she needed a mask over her when she is in public. So to everybody around her she will always be happy...

Likes: Her makeup is her life. If she lost any of it its like losing a family member. She always wears as much as she can to look her prettiest. Her shortie shorts are another favorite of hers. She loves the way they feel on her. The ribbon on her tail was given to her by her grandmother who said as long as she wore it she would stay with her. And her hair brush, its a blue ceramic hair brush with ake jewels glued on the back in the shape of a heart. It has baby soft bristles they smooth out her hair easily. It was a present when she was born and she uses it every day.

Dislikes: Her tank top, it reminds her of the night her father attacked her and ripped her clothes. But the rest of her shirts are still being sown back together so she wears the tank top just to cover. The ribbon in her hair was a gift from her father for her tenth birthday. She isn't allowed to go out without wearing it so she tries to froget its there. Her pierced ears are painfull memories. Her father made her get them pierced because he said she would be beautiful with them. She was taken as a toddler to the shop without her mothers consent and she got them pierced. Every time she looks at them she can rememeber how much it hurt.

Background: I chose not to fill this I hope you understand.
A picture you drew: /


Edited.

Is this to much of an edit? This is as much that I'm doing.
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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Atwood » Sun Sep 26, 2010 2:42 pm

The form isn't quite in-depth enough to qualify, so you should expand on it more. ;3 There's still another half hour before the collection closes, so you have a bit of time to add on to it if you choose to.
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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Sapphirescript » Sun Sep 26, 2010 3:11 pm

EDITED
I added a few more paragraphs.
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Re: Tough as Nails Adoption (Get a high quality character!)

Postby Astraela » Sun Sep 26, 2010 3:24 pm

laredo wrote:I would love to adopt!
Number: 14
Picture: Image
Name: Jemma
Species: wolf
Personality: Jemma is a very quiet wolf around strangers or new wolfs, but when she's close with someone she is very loving, friendly, loves to have a good time, loyal friend and she has very fast reflexes and is strong willed. when necessary, she can take charge and put others in their place, jemma can be very protective and will stop at nothing to protect things and others she loves. she very rarely gets angry, but when she does you better get out of her way.

Likes: light yellow and white, flowers, nature, deer meat, kind and shy wolves, even numbers, new life, spring

Dislikes: spiders, red, scary things, mean, pushy, arrogant wolves,odd numbers, deaths, winter,

song:anything but ordinary by avril lavigne


Background (Optional, but it gives you a better shot. 2500 words maximum, 100 words minimum. We value quality over quantity, you can have five pages and still say absolutely nothing.)
the begining
jemma was born into a little but extremely strong wolf pack. theses wolves were different, the had strange birthmarks telling stories from there futures, they are also very loving towards one another and teach everything that the next generation will need to know.
until a bigger pack formed and they were bound by time to each other instead of loyalty. this pack had smeared dark spots and wanted to kill jemmas pack........ and they succedded...........

after the war

jemma was the only one left, and she knew she had to live, there was something pushing her, revenge? life? she didn't know and she didn't care. so she ran away, away from the sadness, and sorrow and past life and loved ones.she learned what she needed to live, eat, fight and win, jemma was a very fast learner so she taught herself and improved old tricks


A picture you drew: OPTIONAL! This will only get you extra credit. You still have to write the rest of the form. COLORED IN LINEART IS NOT ACCEPTABLE. IT HAS TO BE ART YOU DREW FROM SCRATCH.
quick hand drawn sketch..Image


would mine qualify for collection?
I used to be laredo
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