Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

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_Series 20_ Through the lab we venture....

Postby Not me nope » Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:45 am

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Alive or dead? That's for you to decide. Clinically, this Tracker is alive and well. He's resistant against infections or disease and the bone plates on its back are natural. The ribcage around its middle can be moved like wings to gain a more intimidating appearance, though he cannot fly. His hearing equals that of other Trackers. Perhaps its biggest feature is the second mouth. This mouth "opens" when he moves his neck, and even though it may seem hollow inside, inside is simply another strip of skin that covers the muscles and bone. He has some control over this mouth, but it's all for show.


Username:
Becca~ash

Tracker Dog you want:
The unique male in #65

:The basics :
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Name:
Darah Iga Rakasa . Or better known as Darigasa . His nickname is Dari .
All three parts of his name come from the basic words 'blood, ribs, monster' All translated into Indonesian. I simply fell in love with the idea of having what he looks like placed in the name. I searched for ages trying to find the best suited one and just had to use these three words. Simple yet effective/ I hope you like the name just as much as I do.



Reason why you want it:
Its a once in a life time opportunity too go for a tracker I fell in love with in an instance. I've been waiting for ages for the perfect tracker to go for. This is just epic. The green and red. And it’s a monster! I'm obsessed with them and I always spook my sister out by saying they live in cupboards the fact it’s an average tracker is great, they are my favourite; I also notice the differences such as the shorter tongue and longer tail, which is one of the few things that stand out from this tracker. Since it’s so strong built it gave me many Ideas on how it became to this state.
Perhaps because it’s the last series by you Nex, this tracker seems much more important than any others. Its different to usual trackers, many say another tracker will come along soon, but they won't be the same and never will.

When I saw him,
I knew this what it,
A unique figure,
A perfect fit.

The gritty teeth,
that charmed his smile,
I knew I would love that,
for more than a while!

The distant love,
that broke us apart,
was what I thought
would never depart.

My running pal,
my true and only freind,
the only one,
who I can depend.

It made me tingle,
It made me grin,
the way its ribcage
was just epic win!

all in all,
this monsters great,
forever and ever,
my BFF mate.



Theme song :
. These four walls. Goodbye Pluto .

Will it be used in any kind of story?
Oh defiantly. He will be accompanying Becca and Vert in an on going battle to receive a friendly harm-free environment/ I am always trying to think of new problems he can face and slowly accomplish; but I am always drawing him.

Describe its personality :
Co-ordinated and committed these are just two of the many words that describe this monster. He appears to be nasty, harsh and uncontrollable but really he is just doing his job. Dari is confused often at why when he is just doing his job, people shout at him. He is loyal and loves to show off. This is one of his few downsides; he can often be terribly unpredictable. His loyalty shows his affection towards humans, even though this tracker is believed to have few feelings, and is just there for its job. Becca believes this is wrong, and knows that somewhere in each of these trackers heart they have the emotion of love. And Dari defiantly is not an exception.

Dari is not all fun and games nor a goody two shoes. He is very vain and whatever the matter, will try and show off in the best way he can. You can't stop him doing this but he often freaks people out, usually around Halloween, just to see there faces. This is very unprofessional but I guess it’s good to have a bit of fun. Most run off screaming, unless they know Dari themselves.


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Daring. He is daring and will take the highest of risks, believing nothing could become worse. He works hard and will not leave a job undone. Dari will take whatever comes his way to complete his job respectably. Sometimes he does stand confused, though he will go for whatever may be in his way to complete his job and get on with life. He never thinks before he acts, but this was just an accident not able to change.

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Appreciation. Dari appreciates everything that is done for him and makes sure he works his pay. Sometimes he works to hard and harms himself. Although appreciation is a good thing, and this tracker respects it, it often lets him down as he works to hard and just gives way. This can be a problem when threatening opponents since he works to hard, becomes tired and just runs out of breath. This rarely ever happens, perhaps less than once a year. But it’s terrifying for him when it does happen, he just won't forgive himself.

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Respect, as mentioned in the last two paragraphs, this tracker shows respect to his peer and well, everyone else who he trusts. He knows sometimes things are harder than they seem and gives the person several chances before helping them. After waiting he will push slowly forward and help as best as he can. He won't go over board but why helping people he will always have time to strut a bit showing off himself. His head held high his chest puffed out and he is ready to go marching down the cobbled roads.

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Indecisive. Dari is indecisive about a lot of things, as his brain jumbles up and he hates choices. It confuses him and he hates making the wrong decision. Upon making the right decision, it helps gain him confidence and he may begin to help himself overcome his phobia of not choosing. But as soon as he makes that wrong decision, poof, it’s back to the start and once again he is as indecisive and scared as before. How embarrassing is it to have the phobia? Very. Dari hates it and when someone asks him a question he will very cleverly start a new, unexpected conversation, why he is so unexpected.

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Greedy. Oh such a sin. He is greedy with love but nothing more nothing less. He agrees to what he has for many things, but love and care is not enough for him. Dari expects lots from friends and 'family'. He expects to be loved and watched at by many, either good or bad he doesn't care, as long as they are paying enough attention to him. But that’s impossible, however much attention he wants more. Well, I can't go on forever.

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Apprehensive, don't take this wrong. Just like greedy, it only applies to new tasks. He is extremely worried about choices as mentioned before and can get very apprehensive when he knows someone is going to ask something, but many things ring through his head, are they going to ask a choice question? Will they just rant about something? Or won't they say anything? It’s all a mystery. Mysteries and choices make Dari apprehensive.

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Showy. Not sure if this is even a word, but if it were, it’s written all over Dari. He is always strutting his stuff and making sure he is seen. He will do his job skilfully and well, but take time to make sure he is ready and clean before action. He will be very lucky at the end of his tasks if he manages to pull them off every time. Showing off at the end he doesn't give it his all and does it slower than he could to say basically 'it’s easy i'm so hard to beat'. But he isn't all show.

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Attention. He loves the stuff. It is very well linked to all the other definitions of him, if you look back past the other paragraphs. This is my conclusion point, without a doubt he will be up and out showing off.


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Likes ::
-|warm baths
Who doesn't love a loving warm bath with lots of bubbles? A cold bath just isn't right, and this tracker surprisingly love to be clean and fresh whenever its possible, no doubt since if he is always showing off, he needs to be fresh and tidy.:3

-| Attention
"Look at me! Look look look!" If it could speak instead of strut, it would be saying those words almost 24/7. He adores attention and sucking it all in to his memory. I know this may sound weird, but he only reason he does so is because he believes his better than all other trackers which to say the least is not fair. He should know he is equal but no he just doesn't.

-|Love and affection
Who doesn't? It’s so warming inside to know you’re loved, and often, rarely, brings out the understated gentle sweet side of him where he will be glad with what he has and take everything in he like to know. He isn't modest but he won't rant on what would be best for him .

-| Completing his job properly
Without a complete job he feels weak and thinks that people won't like anymore. He will get muddled and apprehensive about it and won't sleep properly. He will feel that without that job being done he will get less attention and the town may be in danger. What would he do if anyone gets caught to be ill or injured because of him?

-|Night time
Especially with Vert. Verts light will help his ''eyesight'' a tad more. The dark effects humans’ sight and so it’s easy to tag on targets and track them down without them realising. He doesn't understand why humans are scared in the dark, can they not see as well? It’s just the same area .

-|People being scared and worried around him
Sometimes. It makes him feel like his job is completed and full. When upon having done his duty, he begins to worry when people are still scared, yet he feels this is his job, to scare people off. Though not all the time can it be helpful, he is a mutant, an unwanted being on this planet. Artificially made and structured .


Dislikes ::
-|Lack of care
With lack of care, you obviously aren’t getting enough attention. Dari hates it to pieces, it’s a simple thing to do and get right. So why not get drowned in it? Pft He doesn't know, he’s tired of waiting for care in a way, but that’s just greed, he has plenty of care right in front of him.

-| People saying name wrong
It gets so annoying especially when someone doesn't know Dari's name and just uses 'Tracker #65' He hates that name and doesn't feel as unique.

-|Cold/muggy weather
It really is not the best weather especially for an average tracker. His 'eyesight'' gets muddled up and confuses him greatly, sometimes even the simplest things like colours get mixed up in his head. It’s not good, it messes up him greatly but he is strong and pretends not to care.

-|People not scared of him (Other than known 'friends')
What’s the point of his job when people don't recognise him for whose should be and what he is supposed to be doing? So basically what the point if he doesn't fright people off?

-|Being different.
Sometimes he likes this because of the attention but often he feels left out when amung other normal trackers. Especially having a small tongue and large tail .


Write an introduction for your Tracker :
A faint buzzing noise hummed in my ears as I watched the clouds float by. The sun hid between the darker clouds, waiting for the moment to just peep out again and blind me. I sighed, the first time in weeks I’d had any rest. Closing my eyes I instantly awoke to slobber down my PJ’s and a morning wag of the tail. I grinned; I knew that couldn’t have been real...
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"Right, series 20 on the way, we need tracker 65 in lab 3 for extra testing. All other trackers complete and ready for kennels?" Spoke a tall man clothed in white with leather gloves reaching to his elbows. A female quickly turned to address the man smiling; you could tell she was proud. "Everything is in order and we are ready to send them off, how long do you think #65 will be?"
"I don't know Nex. I really don't. I guess I could stay here while you take them down, it wouldn't hurt. Nex walked out from the room as the man turned back to me. “Be right back." I sighed, this always happened. They thought I was asleep but I could hear perfectly well." He left the room, leaving the almost built tracker in critical danger. As steam began to fill the room and a strong metallic smell, I felt a pounding to my head. It was life fifteen tons dragging me down. My head went weak and collapsed upon my side within that time I felt a burning sensation at my skin. An explosion was heard as I blacked out, a slurred vision of people running around their hearts pounding with fear and worry.



:Tests:
Hearing :: Average. Not effected by re-created ears.
Sight :: ---
Taste :: Average.
Touch :: Avarage.
Strength :: Strong.
Pain :: Nothing. Not effected by bones/ribcage.
Stamina :: Weak. He has not yet passed yet it will not effect his job.
NOTES::
Purposely created mouth to add to the job. It was no problem when the tank exploaded, It simply made its job much easier. A ribcage, who wouldn't be scared?

~::Job::
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:: To guard any important weakly protected places. such as where becca lives. Usually stands and scares off any unknown beings from the neighbour hood to make sure it’s a safe community. The mouth usually does it but if not mainly the ribcage and size. Criminals don't expect such a beast to be guarding such a small town. As it lives close by to the woods it also roams them with Vert at night.
Dari loves his job as its easy and he loves concentrating hard on one thing, that way, he won't have choices.
But it’s not all that simple. Working with Vert means Vert needs an equal job to do as him. You can't just let the criminal get away! We have to catch him. Neither Vert nor Dari are fast runners, but they have their ways. Vert hides behind a nearby hideout and waits for the criminal to run, prepared to corner them. Once cornered, they both snarl, scaring the even more. Many often faint being so scared, but if they don’t Dari will clear that problem up by walking forward with its neck mouth wide open, they are sure then to freak out and faint.

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All I want is nothing more,
To see you knocking at my door,
'Cause if I could see your face once more,
I would die a happy man I'm sure.

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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

Postby jarvis » Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:54 am

Nex, can you open the customs? I want one before the project is over.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

Postby DoctorDraca » Mon Sep 05, 2011 8:11 am

Rue wrote:Nex, can you open the customs? I want one before the project is over.

I can, but I won't. I really have no time for customs.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

Postby jarvis » Mon Sep 05, 2011 8:16 am

Awww... :(

Oh well. I don't think I'll apply for one, although I do love #66.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

Postby DoctorDraca » Mon Sep 05, 2011 8:54 am

Just as a reminder, this isn't the end of the Trackers. This will continue, simply without me. You'll get a chance to find a Tracker you'll like eventually.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

Postby Angua » Mon Sep 05, 2011 10:13 am

But series 20 is a very special one, I think ^^
I can understand that so many of us are after one of this special Trackers and it´s a special reason for apply this time. A bit like your final work.
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

Postby Niko » Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:31 am

Hello, it's Ember's brother here and I would like to thank you for honouring her here and bringing her so much joy while she was alive, Nex is such an incredible person who is responsible for the joy of many as well as my beloved sister, her tracker was dear to her, her virtual companion that could do no wrong, Nex, I'm touched that you have done this for her and thankyou x
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

Postby L0vey_D0vey_ » Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:57 am

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[b]Tracker Dog Application Series 20[/b]
Username:kitkat2610
Tracker Dog you want:#62
gender:female
Name you'll give it:aura
Reason why you want it: I have never had a tracker dog before and I waited for just the right one before I got one.they are adorable and I really like her appearanceI really love the way tracker dogs behave and act there very unique!.I love tracker dogs!

Will it be used in any kind of story?most likely,I love to write stories so she will probably have a story or two about her.I might even make a Tracker dog rp if thats ok!
Describe its personality: aura is a curious dog she's happy and kind and ready to lend a paw when needed she's an excellent pal.
Write an introduction for your Tracker:aura is always learning new things she loves play and she dares to go were no one else has gone.but she also likes to curl up in front of the fire place to snuggle up.She thought of these things as she sat waiting for the unknown...(sorry if the introduction is wrong I can fix it!)

here is a small story beginning I wrote for her:
I sat there among the others hoping to be adopted. All the people wanted the others,I could see why.One was very large and had extra arms while another was half mechanic,They showed off by prancing or wrestling.The humans stood awed by them, memorized by there talents.There eyes skimmed passed me and went straight to the them.I tried to show off as well making myself silent and lightly bumped them from behind them or collecting energy and making my markings glow brighter but all I did was scare them or they thought it was a joke.I finally tried to wrestle like the others I was doing great and the humans started to notice me when the largest tracker dog pinned me down and they all laughed and watched him.I finally gave up and sat in a corner.I heard a gasp and felt the movement of a girl coming up. she sat down and gently stroked me right between the ears just were I liked it.I suddenly jumped up and started collecting energy and my markings glowed brightly,If I could just convince her to adopt me I would be the happiest tracker dog alive! She sat there starring jaw open wide eyed awed by all the things I was showing her. She finally stood up and said"Aura..that is your name and you belong with me."I was so happy my wild appearance and skills scarred most but not her! she was amazed! I walked over to here and liked her hand,I could tell this was the start of a wonderful friendship!...(Soooo Sorry that wasn't my best writing I can do WAY better I just wanted to sample my writing on her.)
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

Postby winter. » Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:21 am

TRACKER DOG APPLICATION SERIES 20


USERNAME
. sapphire~blossom .

TRACKER
Number Sixty-Five.

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" Alive or dead? That's for you to decide. Clinically, this Tracker is alive and well. He's resistant against infections or disease and the bone plates on its back are natural. The ribcage around its middle can be moved like wings to gain a more intimidating appearance, though he cannot fly. His hearing equals that of other Trackers. Perhaps its biggest feature is the second mouth. This mouth "opens" when he moves his neck, and even though it may seem hollow inside, inside is simply another strip of skin that covers the muscles and bone. He has some control over this mouth, but it's all for show. " ~ Nex T'aar

TRACKER'S NAME
Styx.
His name is derived from the River Styx, which in Greek mythology acts as the barrier between Earth and the Underworld. I chose this name for him, because when I look at Styx, I think 'undead'.


GENDER
Male.


Reason why you want it:

Will it be used in any kind of story?
Describe its personality:

Write an introduction for your Tracker:
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whose woods these are I think I know
his house is in the village though
he will not see me stopping here
to watch his woods fill up with snow

the woods are lovely, dark and deep
but I have promises to keep
and miles to go before I sleep
and miles to go before I sleep


c h a r a c t e r s

i'm a lonely teenager who spends all her time on the internet
but you can just call me winter
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Re: Tracker Dogs V2.0 [Series 20]

Postby Bluestar222 » Tue Sep 06, 2011 7:24 am

Tracker Dog Application Series 20
Username: Bluestar222
Tracker Dog you want: tracker dog #62
Name you'll give it: Rayya
Reason why you want it: I have never had a tracker dog before and would really like to own one, they are creative, fun, and unique.

Will it be used in any kind of story? Problably an rp, maybe a story :D
Describe its personality: She is calm, sly, and creative
Write an introduction for your Tracker: Rayya was walking around the woods with her mate, Alair, trying to find something to do. she felt tired, and she could tell she was tired because her markings were losing its glow. WIP WIP WIP
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