the land of faerres { Sih likes shiny things }

[coffees]

- Gonna drop out :3 Because befor I go for one I want to learn how to make a correct form ^^ Hope you don't mind -

[icyfish19]

Jinaro
Pining away in the darkness,
Wanted by no one she thinks,
Lonely and suffering from heartbreak,
She is not alone
Laurel rides away, her heart pounding. The men who killed her family are quickly approaching. Oh no.. I'll never make it off this tiny road! she thinks. Suddenly, she sees a small trail. In fact, it's almost too small to notice. Yanking her reigns to the side with crazy speed, she plunges down the path, and enters a wondrous moonlit city. It appears to be empty, so she dismounts, ties her horse to a tree, and saunters down the road. At first, she thinks it's a trick of the shadows, but as she approaches, she can see thin orange stripes, barely visible in the night's darkness. CRACK! She jumps, then realizes she has only stepped on a twig. Still, it's enough to scare to creature, and it scampers into the corner. Laurel climbs up on top of the structure, and whispers to the animal,
"Shh... it's okay, I won't hurt you."
The creature merely whimpers, and cries out, almost sounding human. But then, composing herself, she says
"I am Jinaro, and I am about to leave Vinara. What do you want with a heartbroken Faerre?"
"My name is Laurel, and I wish to help you. Why are you leaving Vinara, Jinaro?"
[color=#FF00FF]"My brother was found dead, by the creek, this morning. Being my only friend left in the world, I could not stand it. Without my twin, I have no one. That's how I found myself here, on the Altar, alone.[/color]"
"Wait, if you're a Faerre, and this is the Altar, then shouldn't there be people waiting to come befriend you?"
"Maybe for other Faerres, but not I. No one came. No one loves me. No one wants to be my friend." (at that point, Jinaro bursts into tears, leaving Laurel heartbroken.)
"Well, it seems like we are the same, Jinaro. My family was mudered, so I, too, have no one. Perhaps you would come with me?"
(Jinaro's ears perk up, but she still remains depressed.) "How do I know you wouldn't just abandon me? Everyone else would."
"Aw, you poor thing. Don't cry. Come here." (Laurel scoops up Jinaro, and sets her in her lap. Slowly, Jinaro starts to settle down. Stroking Jinaro's ears, Laurel continues.) "Listen, if you want someone to be your friend, you have to cheer up a little. Now I know, it's hard. Believe me, I've been through this too, but I think we need each other. Would you like some food? I don't have much, but I hope it helps." (Laurel removes a small package from her bag and unwraps it. Silently, she removes two apple slices and a block of cheese. Licking her lips, Jinaro stares at the food.)
"I bet you haven't eaten all day Jinaro, now I tell you what. Come with me, and you can tell me all about this brother of yours and about your life here in Vinara."
"Oh that's sounds great!"
Jinaro is finally cheering up. Her tail is wagging, her amber eyes sparkling, she really is a beautiful Faerre. But then, out of nowhere, there comes a man. He tells Laurel, that he wants to interview this Faerre. Laurel sits back down, still clutching Jinaro, and hopes that Jinaro will stay with her...

TO HOPEFULLY BE CONTINUED......

[Taiyo]

Guys ^^'' it is against the rule to write in the Faerre's POV, you CAN'T control the faerre on the Altar!

[broodingtulip]

I might try out for the beautiful Jinaro soon. <3 her!

[coffees]

Guys ^^'' it is against the rule to write in the Faerre's POV, you CAN'T control the faerre on the Altar!

I'm sorry. Did I do it wrong? x3 This is kind of new to me. Please point out what i did and I'll fix it :3

[broodingtulip]

{I shall be using Esmeralda again, yet not as bold}

Esmeralda sat down, yet again, at the altar. She watched as a commoner came out. She look depressed, sad. She soon realized how much she wanted Jinaro. She soon walked up to Jinaro.

"Hello, Jinaro. My name is Esmeralda. You lost someone, didn't you? I know how it feels. I lost my siblings in a cold town in Korea. I didn't think I could go on, but I did." her voice gentle, she sat down on her knees.

"As much as you want them to come back, they won't, as they never left. Sometimes I hear my sisters calm voice, determined to survive. Sometimes I hear my brother's voice, teasing me. And I hear the youngest of us, my other sister, squeaking, complaining. I know they never left, they stay here to giude us. They stay in our hearts and our minds. I'm sure that he never left you, and is wanting you to move on." Esmeralda sighed.

"I wish my siblings were with me again. Sometimes I ask myself what they did, what I did, to deserve it. But then I think, I'm not only hurting myself by not moving on, I hurt them as well. They want me to, and I want them happy. I'm sure that he was close to you, and if you truly loved him, you would move on. Wouldn't you?" Esmeralda's calm voice trailed off. "I am sure that he wants the best for you. Just remember, he will always be with you, no matter what." Esmeralda got up.

"I wish you the best of luck. Just remember that he never left, and he never will." Esmeralda looked back one more time before sitting back down, a single tear slowly running down her cheek. She quickly rubbed it away. "He will always be with you, as well as I." she whispered the words to herself. She waited for Jinaro to choose, and pulled her hair into a loose ponytail as she always did.

[Taiyo]

Guys ^^'' it is against the rule to write in the Faerre's POV, you CAN'T control the faerre on the Altar!

I'm sorry. Did I do it wrong? x3 This is kind of new to me. Please point out what i did and I'll fix it :3

That's ok, I understand X'3 that's why I didn't penalize you yet. xD
Treat it like a RP Radium, think of Jinaro as 'my' character right now, I've written what she's doing and right now you can 'respond' to it. Your character can come up and talk to her, but you won't be able to write what Jinaro does or reacts. You throw out your woo and you wait until the 11th of April to see who Jinaro will choose :'3

If you still need more help, try searching through the archives and check out other people's posts :'3 oh! check the 'best forms' section too X'3
good luck!

[*Blackberry*]

Hey Tai :3 Need any help?

Grins mischievously

[nio]

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j i n a r o

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We enjoy warmth because we have been cold.
We appreciate light because we have been in darkness.
By the same token, we can experience joy because we have known sadness.

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As I gazed across the altar I felt a sting in my heart. My brow furrowed in sadness, and a feeling crept through me of deep heartbrake. The sight of the broken faerre set off the depression in me. I sighed, knowing only each other could save us from this world. I took the small faerre in a warm embrace and I started to sing a song, softely at first. My voice becoming stronger. I changed some of the lyrics slightly, so it would fit.

"Symphony of silver tears,
Sing to me and sooth the ring in my ears,
Overcast these gloomy nights wear on,
But I'm holding fast because it's darkest just before the dawn.

I sang my princess fast asleep,
'Cause she was my dream come true,
Oh deer faerre, believe me, I loved you.

But now those lonely lullabies,
Just dampen my tired eyes,
Because I can't forget you.
Because I can't forget you.

I'll dissolve when the rain pours in,
When the nightmares take me,
I will scream with the howling wind,
'Cause it's a bitter world and I'd rather dream.

Dizzy love turned a star lily pink,
And hung above our lids too flushed to blink,
But icy blue froze the fairytale cold,
Though I treasured you and you sparkled with someone to hold.

I sang my princess fast asleep,
'Cause she was my dream come true,
Oh dear faerre, believe me, I loved you.

But now those lonely lullabies,
Just dampen my tired eyes,
Because I can't forget you.
Because I can't forget you.

I'll dissolve when the rain pours in,
When the nightmares take me,
I will scream with the howling wind,
'Cause it's a bitter world and I'd rather dream.

I'll dissolve when the rain pours in,
When the nightmares take me,
I will scream with the howling wind,
'Cause it's a bitter world and I'd rather dream.
And I'd rather dream.

Dear faerre, I'll never forget you.
Dear faerre, I'll never forget you.
Dear faerre, remember me?
I'll never forget you.
Dear faerre, remember me?
I'll never forget you.
Dear faerre, remember me?
I'll never forget you. "

I closed my eyes, then opened them again.Through the tears I stared at the beautiful faerre in my comforting arms. I sighed, and opened my mouth to speak.
"I lost somecat very dear to me once. I still haven't got over it. I know I should, but it's so hard to. Losing someone can feel like losing your life. Especially when they ment the world to you." A tear ran down my cheek as I remembered my dear kitty. "I know how it feels, dear Jinaro." I murmured in her ear. "It's horrible, it's heartbraking, it's life ruining. Though all through all these things, no one realising that they haven't been lost." I took a deep breath. "They will always be in your heart, always inyour memory. When you pass, you realise, that they'll be there, waiting. They'll wait all your life, and watch over you, until you come and join them." I sighed. "No one is lost forever."

I closed my eyes. "But if you think that you should die right here and now, you should know that they would be so disspointed that you didn't life your life. Don't waste your life grieving. Remeber them, keep them in your heart, but life your life. Appreciate every second, every day, every year you life. Live up to them, make them proud." I ended my short speech with a supressed sob. I looked away and wiped the tears from my eyes.

"If you come with me, we can live up to our lost ones. Together. We'll have the time of our lives. Together, we can fight the power of depression and greif!" I gazed at her with a new blazing expression. Then I remembered something. "Oh! I have something for you." I handed her The Queen Plush and smiled. "Like it? I bought it to cheer you up."
WIPWIPWIPWIP

[SpartanAmethyst]

That's you can build a bridge of light,
that's what turns the wrongs all right,
that's when you can't give up the fight.
That's when love turns nighttime into daylight,
that's when loneliness goes away,
that's why you gotta be strong tonight.
Cause only love can build us a bridge of light.

Synthesis watched the Altar from a distance. Jinaro's plight struck close to his own heart because he had been there so many times before. His long, reptilian-like tail flicked, the fire-colored fan of hair on the end of his tail seeming to flicker like a real flame. He stared at her for a long moment, feeling pity for the Faerre. Forgetting his own nervous, shy ways he approached her, slowly and calmly. Her heat signature came ever closer, the sightless stallion carefully picking his way up the steps with difficulty. Finally he came to stand beside her, staring at he small form in wonder.

"Why does one as beautiful as yourself cry?" He asked, using the fan in his tail to wipe away a tear. He looked down at her sadly, the raptor 'feathers' on his neck lying flat. "I should be the one crying," he murmured. After a long moment the stallion laid down beside her and pulled her close, resting his head over her body in a comforting hug. "You should never have to know pain," he said. "You're too beautiful to have to deal with that." Synthesis picked up his head and looked down at her, the Faerre laying between his slightly splayed forelegs.

"If you'll let me," he said. "I can help you. I want to make sure you never have to go through what I have. I want to take you back to my companion's home; it's a beautiful place set in the Colorado wilderness with so much to do and see, and I want to show you it all. Instead of tears you can watch the river turn silver and grey with the fish in the summer, the trees in the fall, the snow and ice in winter, and the wildflowers in spring. And it's your choice whether you want to be social with the rest of Amethyst's companions, or if we want to escape to a solitary portion of the property." Synthesis grew quiet as the Faerre looked up at him. "The only thing you have to promise me is that there will be no more tears. You aren't the one losing anything here; they are. They're missing out on the most beautiful, sweet and loving Faerre ever to walk the land.?

Synthesis smiled then, the first time in a very long time. "Will you come with me? Come home?"