Symphony Character Adoption Agency - CD + OPEN! :)

[joji]

dropping out for this character c:

[Wesley]

Since most people seem in favor of the extended round with no application limit, would you guys like that to be this round or next round? (:

[ojoku]

I say next round uvu

[zelos]

definitely next round, because i may or may not have my eyes on a few kennels (and maybe some in the fillers) and i don't have time to give an app my attention right now uwu

[Novi]

next round, please! ; v ; I barely have enough time to dedicate to my form as it is, and I think having it this round would be a bit too much for me.

[amavi.]

Next round, please! And is there a decided date for the code-drop yet?

[▸Atlas.]

Next round, please<3

Username: Dovepawlover
Kennel that you are applying for: 142
Preferred critic: Just anyone who has the time is fine c:
What do you wish to get out of this critique?: Any misspellings or errors in the form currently? I've proofread a few times, but I often miss the mistakes xD Also, how does it look so far? Anything I should change?
Link to form: Still a WIP c:

Thank you! <3

iwouldlikesomecritiquethisround

[Momto3kids]

Next round, please!
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"United We Stand: Divided We Fall!"

To Talia's Home form! There is a lot to see here! As you can see I am trying out for the lovely sparkle dog, Talia! And here will be where my form lies. This form is still a wip, and if I do not get this finished by the code-drop, if possible (if not ignore) than could you still include my form? I worked hard on it and I am not sure if I have time to finish it. Since I am going to make forms for the other two I am trying out for, then this may not get finished. But it is almost done, but I would like to at least half finish the other two too. So lets get on with the form!
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The Brave Fashionesta

This art came with her, Am I allowed to use it in my form? Sorry, I am new to this.
Though lineart credit to Tris! Or at least for this art piece.

Username: Momto3kids. And a happy hello to you! I am going to try out for 3 characters this round! I just want to say a very good luck to all who have tried out for kennels and previous winners, it makes me happy to see amazing charas go to loving homes! As you can see I am fairly new, and this is my first time trying out for something like this! Oh and sorry my form is mixed up and funky so sorry!
Kennel Number: 139, The wonderful Sparkle Dog, Talia!

Use: This will be my first Character ever, not counting ones from adoptable oekaki If I win her!! I would like to order art of her, possibly write stories of her! I may even make some art of her myself! I would like to use her for lots of things, this is my first time trying out for something like this! So I would most likely even use her for roleplays if allowed. And the splendid art that comes with her, I may not be able to help showing it off! Wow its so pretty, one last thing I would do is she will be best friends with one of my charas if I get another one and I will all and all stare at her design!

Name: I would like to keep her already wonderful name, Talia! I enjoy that name and find it about as graceful as she looks! It just sounds so magical! I don't know about you, but Talia in my opinion is an uncommon name!
Gender: A female I only see her as that! Plus I believe Talia is a more feminine name.
Species and/or specific breed: She is a sparkle dog, I would like to keep that about her. It seems suiting and I like it! Very unique and different!
Personality: Talia is a girly little fellow. She is obsessed with anything girly. She has a sweet personality. Always trying to help out everyone. She will never let you down. She is actually sometimes very fierce and lashes out at her whim. She has a confusing personality as others put it. Some say she is a glamour queen others say she is fierce and brave. She is very intelligent and aims to please everyone, she will always try to help others out with pep talk. She does not like to express her feeling often. And tries to hide her emotions. One thing is, despite how she may look and how she may seem she is not a social butterfly and is introverted. She is shy but will talk if others want her too. She is a mixed up sort of wolf. She attempts to help others out and to be the absoulute best she can be. She believes thats all that matters in life. And if you don't suceed try, try, again! She stutters a bit, and is very self conscious about it! She is a bit over dramatic and a little but of a cry baby but still is a strong individual. Or at least she tries. She is uncertain and worriesome most of the time. She is very insecure. She does have a colorful personality though and tries to let it shine through. She tries hard and hopes to suceed someday. She works her hardest and sometimes ends up overworking herself. And sometimes beats herself up (not literally) if she does the wrong thing. And now after the experiance of her brother leaving she has become a little less soft and a little more hard. Though yet she still maintains a nice, kind, willing personality. The only reason why she is so quiet and shy because she is afraid. And another thing she is very reserved and quiet and is a bit mysterious at times! She will repeat herself at times and stands up for what she believes in and no one is going to stand in her way to stop her from doing it. She is a bit of a bookworm, right when she was introduced to a good book she never put it down. Though raised in a forest there was barely any book she finally got a hold of one and cannot stop reading it. She is like a quiet writer as well. She writes quietly though there is not much paper or pencils in the forest (if any at all) so she scratches out writing pieces and drawings with her claws on boulders. She just likes to be left alone. She is a little rebellious. This is just some of her personality. She is a bit of a diva when it comes to fashion and will always want clean, shiny bracelets. And she is a major germaphobe. She will wash her fur 24\7 at least 3 times a day. She keeps her fur as shiny and beautiful as can be most of the time.

History/Background:
Okay This is going to be from me, Talia's Point of view in life. I hope you don't mind!
Well O-o-okay! Here we are! I was raised in a dense forest! I d-d-don't know why! I was so frightened there! It was scary! And much too quiet! I had a family yes, but my parents passed away, and I was left with a brother. I forget his name, really. Its been so long before we parted unfortunately. I feel so bad. I don't want to tell this story really *weeps quietly* Oh how we used to roll around and play in the sun! Having fun. So anyways, I was sitting in the forest, waiting for my brother to come home from getting some food. He eventually came. With a piece of beef jerky in his jaws. I looked at it. The meal looked small. I began to worry what he may say next.
"Listen, sis, I know--- you know I love you, but I just can't! Food sources are low and you need to fend for yourself, I am sorry!" He dropped the beef jerky and trotted off. I hoped no one would try to dig into my past now. It was sad. Depressing. It felt as though the bright nature of all my colors was drained. My cheeryness. Drained. All gone. I sighed. I did not even feel the need to eat anymore.
why I silently mouthed to myself. Why so abruptly? Why so soon? Why so sadly did he have to go. *weeps some more* So then feeling sorry for myself I hid under a log. And thats where I live from this day on. Not much of a history and as said I don't want anyone to pry into my past, thank you. But *sigh* if I must. So then I waited in the silence. Drenched in the quiet. I waited for a day for when my brother would come back...
*sob*
He never did come or return. I hoped so, waiting every day. I mean why? Why today? I could tell I was dramatic but I could not help it at all. I just could not! Who could? I cried for a bit, but lets just say the experiance hardened me. Made me a little harsh. I felt sick. I whispered the words, barely auditable "I-I-I A-a-am sorry!" The words were as soft as a warm breeze floating by. Except it was not as cheerful! I hoped it would be but it was not. A rough past, eh? Well thats not all. I had to fend for myself. Fighting off creatures some wolves some human. Some poachers. I just barely managed to escape them all. Barely I almost lost a leg. And I had a small scratch on my flank. Today I would hunt. I was so hungry, I had not eaten for a week real food. I had to eat grass half the week. So I got some meat. I stole it from another poor wolf. I felt so bad. I shared it with them. When I asked them there name, they were gone. Weird. I thought. I think it was just an illusion though. I did not see them after that. It looked strangely enough like my father. I sighed. Now I really was going crazy. So I continued my long trek.Then I saw it. A wolf. A wolf with simalar markings and colors than me.
It was
my brother.
I gasped, that must have scared him, because he ran. And then I thought it was just my imagination. But there was a carcass where he was before sitting. I padded lightly toward it. Holding my breath I peeked at it. Yuck, deer. My brother vowed that we would not eat animals like that. I only ate meet from a meat shop miles away. He lied. Now I knew.
(cliffhanger because the story is a little long)

Likes/dislikes/art, etc. (optional):
Likes:

✔ The Ocean
✔ Rainbows
✔ Art
✔ Love
✔ Parties
✔ Fun
✔ Food
✔ Eating
✔ Rain
✔ Others
Dislikes:

✘ Cold
✘ Wood
✘ Winter
✘ Snow
✘ The Dark
✘ Night
✘ Stargazing (Anything that does with night)
✘ Peace
✘ Quiet
✘ Lonelieness
Quirks\Habits:
★ As said, Talia stutters on occasion
★ Talia cries a lot
★ Talia is a bit of a tattle tail
★ Talia bites her claws when nervous
★ Talia often shifts from foot to foot when nervous as well

Story:

I was walking in a large field. Roses and daisies and cool air ruffling my dark fur. I was quite happy today. It had been years since my brother abandoned me. And for once I felt happy! Cheerful, almost. I ran, tounge lolling out. Then a regular timber wolf yelled at me "Get out of the forest! You don't belong here!" He yelled. "Alpha Male, I presume!" I snarled, showing white rows of teeth. The other wolf glared at me, yellow eyes boring through my fur. I shivered, though it was not cold. I was scared. I was not in the mood to fight at all. I was not a great fighter. I may be brave but I am not a good fighter. I sighed softly. The wolf chased me. I ran, rain softly pelted me as I ran. I could run forever. If that meant I would not get attacked. So I ran along the field. Until I was lost. I heard the wolf yelp and run away. I wondered why. Pondering I looked Up.
Then I knew...
Then I saw..
It was not a living breathing thing, it was a feeling.
I feeling of being lost.
An empty, cold feeling. The feeling that only came up once and awhile.
I trotted along the fields for hours, looking back. Tirelessly running. I fell asleep eventually. There was not much else I could do. Eventually I was home. I curled up and rested happily. Though it seemed it was not over. Something uneasy swept over me. Something bad. I knew it. I felt it in my bones. As though it were carved there for centuries. But it just dawned on me. I was being watched. By someone, I could not be sure. I believed in my heart that it was the timber wolf. But in my mind, I thought it was my brother. And deep within, I hoped it was my brother. I looked. My whole body trembled.I was entirely afraid. Scared. Deep inside I screamed for help. Drama welled up inside of me. Only to see it was a mouse. I breathed a deep sigh of relief. All it was was a bit of drama is all! I laughed hard. And continued my trot. It was a long trek, really. I worried I would never get home. I remembered how life used to be. Tears stung my eyes lightly. It had been a while since I saw my brother, lying to me. Telling me fake lies that I knew would never be fulfilled. He promised me, I REMEMBER he said one day, we could be together again, brother and sister, me and you. It was all fake lies. FAKE! I flicked my midnight blue tail, like a switch. My ears flattened. Then I relaxed and fell asleep again and was a little happy

Now I was laying there. I heard shouts and cries of wolves. I saw my family. Laying there. Motionless. I suddenly reconized this as a dream. It had to be, as I was seeing before my eyes the exact same things that happened to my parents. In a panic wolves shoved. I was down. Then I felt a wolf pick me up in there teeth. My brother. He picked me up and ran. Ran a distance and set me down once we were safe.
"Its okay, your safe with me." He gently said. I listened to his words. But now the words were sharp as iron.
Then the scenery flashed before me. And I saw now. recent. My brother saying to me as he retreated "Don't worry, sis! We will be back together before you know it." But instead of me saying okay in this dream I growled. "Liar!" I snarled. "LIAR!" I yelled, louder this time. I had changed the story entirely. And I knew.
I totally knew.
"What do ya' mean, sis?" Asked my brother. I just weeped in response. He stared at me, as if I was insane. Though no, that was not true. It was a dream. I woke up ubruptly. Wow, that was very odd. I saw a shadow. I silloutte only. I ran to it. Then ran back sadly. What was wrong with me? Was I that worried? My brother could fend for himself I knew! But was it true? Was my shreds of thought true? Or was I just convincing myself! I was, I knew that. And it was unfortunate. I had done some brave things but never have I did something like this.
I was going to see my brother...
butthetruthisthatimissyou
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All other art is by Shimo Okami, Striped Panther, Brisa, foreign.potato, IDrunk, jessicahongphan all art came with Talia
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[Momto3kids]

Nevermind, trying out next code drop

[Momto3kids]

Trying out next codedrop Nevermind.