The Land of Syegaria {Closed}

[RainbowBizkit <3]

Name of Serenche:Fire
Personality: Brave, strong and Loyal loves to help anyone in need speicaly when there life is endangered
History:Fire began to run hunters began to shoot at him his eyes widen as he turned around and ran for his life his heart pounded inside his chest as hunting dogs began to follow him. The hunters gun shots and dogs barking grew louder and louder in his ears scared he ran faster and fast until one more bullet was fired and everything seemed to stop. Fire yelled as he woke from his horrible dream. "Wow no more mouse before bed" he grumbled staggering to his feet thinking about what the dream meant. He didnt understand why but he felt that, that dream was going to happen soon, not now but soon. He lapped at the water in the pond and began thinking about his parents he had never known them because they had abandoned him away from all the other Syegaria in the land he paused a mintue and then said aloud "Maybe they wanted me to die" he said looking down at his reflection in the water. The trees made a crashing noise and a Syegaria hopped out "Who didnt want you?" She said curious "who...who are you?" he asked "Im Flare i was hunting when i heard your voice and wanted to see what you were saying" She said glancing up at him. "Nosy much?" he grumbled walking away, She followed "Whats your name how are you when do you sleep?" He glanced over his shoulder "Leave now or be chased out" Fire said boldly "But i just" "NOW!" he growled quickly turning around. She jumped alittle and turned around she begin to run out of his territory he just watched her as she went. END
Which Cage?:4
Other:I hope i win thanks for your time :3

[Not me nope]

xDDDD

I said its so hard NOT TO MINIMOD~<3


I love everyones forms so far

[TheSilverfeather]

Alright Dark, you can name him whatever you want ;3

Yush, I suppose it is hard to not minimod... You feel you have a sense of control as you can do it

[HappyPuppy]

I have edited my second post, the form for adoption.
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=58&t=412884&p=10123883#p10123883

Thank you,
HappyPuppy

[TheSilverfeather]

Great job, HappyPuppy ;3

[HappyPuppy]

Thank you so much!

[RainbowBizkit <3]

Hi um im Snow and i'm new to this thread i was hoping to see if my form was ok so far? if its not i can change it and im kinda new to this so smack me if you must xDD i must say i am a jokester at times xDD

[IzzyBee]

Hi um im Snow and i'm new to this thread i was hoping to see if my form was ok so far? if its not i can change it and im kinda new to this so smack me if you must xDD i must say i am a jokester at times xDD

Hey, and your form looks like you did fine! It looks good so far, but you might want to add a bit more by editing it..If you want a better chance..

[RainbowBizkit <3]

Thank you :3 its a work in progress i need to add more Puncuation and grammar to thank you for your opion i will change those things and i am adding alot more story before Feb. 12th :3

[IzzyBee]

Thank you :3 its a work in progress i need to add more Puncuation and grammar to thank you for your opion i will change those things and i am adding alot more story before Feb. 12th :3

No problem, and alrighty, just be sure to stay up to date! And yeah good luck to everyone going out this round!