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Re: The Agency

Postby purrsain » Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:51 am

purrsain wrote:Pet's ID Tag:kennel#114
Name You'd Choose for It:Daisy
Gender:female
Reason You Want It:because I think she is very lovley and adorable and I love her to death already.
History/Background/Other:I was taking the trash out into the dumpster when all of a sudden I hear a faint meow coming from the back of the dumpster. I pushed the dumpster as hard as I could until I could see a little tiny kitten shivering,wet,and muddy, I held my hand out to the kitten and she gently rubbed agianst my hand. I gently picked her up and took her back to my apartment, once I got there I got a couple blankets and wrapped the little kitten in them until she warmed up.She fit in perfectly with my other cats.
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

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Re: The Agency -CODE DROP-

Postby amato » Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:51 am

Tripp wrote:
Cho! wrote:
Agency, Did I receive my adoption? Its here; viewtopic.php?f=10&t=150745&p=6734225&hilit=catta#p6734225
You must have missed it. :(
sorry that was my fault, could have sworn i had everyone, i'll correct it in a bit


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Re: The Agency -CODE DROP-

Postby Skyebreeze » Sun Oct 03, 2010 5:20 am

I had one for him too, here --> viewtopic.php?f=10&t=150745&p=6631512&hilit=maki#p6631512

(Sorry if you got it already, but I saw that Cho!'s had been missed and we're going for the same character.)
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Re: The Agency -CODE DROP-

Postby Tripp » Sun Oct 03, 2010 7:20 am

alright, I'm gonna have my boyfriend read over them so that way i have an outside opinion :3
i dont get on as often, bear with me
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Re: The Agency -CODE DROP-

Postby Janet10433 » Sun Oct 03, 2010 8:24 am

Pet's ID Tag:7
Name You'd Choose for It:Lulu
Gender:female
Reason You Want It:Animals should be cared for
History/Background/Other:Once in a field far away lay a tiger... it's name was Lulu. I loved to sing and pounce on the corn that grew in it's field. It was still young and had 3 siblings, all who were grown up.
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

Pet's ID Tag:9
Name You'd Choose for It:Mimi(can I rename it Chocolate?)
Gender:female
Reason You Want It:Animals are defenseless and need people to take care of them.
History/Background/Other:Mimi lived in the Dyuri pack, an ancient pack of wolves known for their prowess and speed. They love to run, use their cleverness, play tag, eat cheese, and read.
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Re: The Agency -CODE DROP-

Postby mokapi » Sun Oct 03, 2010 8:25 am

Tripp wrote:alright, I'm gonna have my boyfriend read over them so that way i have an outside opinion :3


Did you notice mine and Raini's comments? Just wondering P:
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Re: The Agency -CODE DROP-

Postby Tripp » Sun Oct 03, 2010 8:27 am

mokapi wrote:@Tripp: Not sure if I should PM you these questions, but- for Melantha, can her name be changed? Also, would it be alright for me to only use her in quad form? I've never been a fan of human/not completely animal anthros.

yeah thats fine, if you want me to edit her ref and such if you get her, just tell me :3

Raini-my apolagize, if you want i can taken the character back, please forgive me.
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Re: The Agency -CODE DROP-

Postby June Bug » Sun Oct 03, 2010 8:27 am

Janet10433 wrote:Pet's ID Tag:7
Name You'd Choose for It:Lulu
Gender:female
Reason You Want It:Animals should be cared for
History/Background/Other:Once in a field far away lay a tiger... it's name was Lulu. I loved to sing and pounce on the corn that grew in it's field. It was still young and had 3 siblings, all who were grown up.
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

Pet's ID Tag:9
Name You'd Choose for It:Mimi(can I rename it Chocolate?)
Gender:female
Reason You Want It:Animals are defenseless and need people to take care of them.
History/Background/Other:Mimi lived in the Dyuri pack, an ancient pack of wolves known for their prowess and speed. They love to run, use their cleverness, play tag, eat cheese, and read.
I understand that by adopting this creature I take full responsibility for it.

You may only have one form per round, please choose just one. Also, You'll need to write more in the history/background section.
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Re: The Agency -CODE DROP-

Postby mokapi » Sun Oct 03, 2010 8:31 am

Tripp wrote:
mokapi wrote:@Tripp: Not sure if I should PM you these questions, but- for Melantha, can her name be changed? Also, would it be alright for me to only use her in quad form? I've never been a fan of human/not completely animal anthros.

yeah thats fine, if you want me to edit her ref and such if you get her, just tell me :3

Raini-my apolagize, if you want i can taken the character back, please forgive me.


Oh, alright, awesome! 8D

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Re: The Agency -CODE DROP-

Postby Lirrie » Sun Oct 03, 2010 8:34 am

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Pet's ID Tag: 97

Name You'd Choose for It: Ozari

Gender: Female

Reason You Want It:

Omg, Is all I can say. She captured and kept my attention, causeing story lines to form in my mind. I had too keep coming back as I was captured. She will have a forever home with me. I will make sure to make or get art of her. She will have her own story which will be a lengthened version of her adoption story. She will have her own page on my canine site and I will find an rp for her. I can honestly say she will recieve all the love I can give. I have a great idea for her life before she died as well and Ill be asking the donater if I can use it. I will be showing her personallities and such before and after death as they will be important to my story. X3


History/Background/Other:


Name: Ozari
Age: Ageless but was 5 Months old when she died
Breed: White German Shepard Puppy
Secondary Breed: Zombie Dog
Birth Date: September 3, 1988
Death Date: Febuary 3, 1989
Rising Date: October 30, 1989

Breed History:

wikipedia.com wrote:
In German Shepherd Dogs the recessive gene for white coat hair was cast in the breed gene pool by the late 19th and early 20th century breeding program that developed and expanded the German Shepherd Dog breed in Germany. A white herding dog named Greif was the grandfather of Horand von Grafrath, the dog acknowledged as the foundation of all contemporary German Shepherd Dog bloodlines.

Information provided in early books on the German Shepherd Dog make mention of Greif and other white German herding dogs, with upright ears and a general body description that resembles modern German Shepherd Dogs, shown in Europe as early as 1882. The early 20th century German Shepherd breeding program extensively line bred and inbred "color coat" dogs that carried Greif's recessive gene for "white coats" to refine and expand the population of early German Shepherd Dogs. White coats were made a disqualification in the German Shepherd Dog Club of Germany breed standard in 1933 after the breed club came under the control of the German Nazi party that took over all aspects of German society in February 1933 when Hitler declared a state of emergency. The German breed standard remained unchanged as German breeders repopulated the breed in the years after the conclusion of WWII.


Apearance Before Death:

Ozari had been a pretty puppy, pure white in color with blue eyes. She stood half as tall as she would if she had been full grown, Her tail was fluffy and full, always wagging it often knocked things off the table. Her eyes where always bright and intelligent even at the moment of her death.

Appearance after Death:

After she rises again, Ozari is a gruesome site. Her eyes are now pure white and stare into you. She is covered in blood and the fur of her chin is missing. Her right ear is beginning to rot. Her tail and fur is matted and her body is covered in scratches. Her right eye is no longer there.

Theme Songs Before Death:

When I Look At You- Miley Cirus: This song is a mixture of her love for her human, and her humans love for her. It tells a great deal about her loyalty towards her master and how much they loved each other.

Innocence by Avril Lavigne: This song tells of how innocent Ozari was before she killed. It tells of her happiness and loving heart and everything that was Ozari. With a loving soul she was as innocent as they come and that is what this song shows.

Theme Songs After Death:

Even in Death by Evanescence: This song tells of her owners greif over the death of Ozari. It also tells of how Ozari was willing to come back to life to assuage that greif, long after her body is in the ground. The song is the very essence that their love would live on even after the body is gone.

My Last Breath by Evanescence: This song describes the moment of Ozari's untimely demise and what she was thinking at the time. The saddness she's felling, and how much she'll miss her master and this world. Her grief is shown greatly in this song. This song shows what word cannot express.


Personality Before Death:

Before she died Ozari was a very playful pup with alot of love to give. Her eyes would always shine with intense intelligence and a passion for life. She loved her owner and would always wait for her at the bus stop for when she would get home. She was the soul of the family, and a true member of the family. As it was she did sometime get in trouble for chewing on things or other mischievous puppy behaviors. She was a hyperactive puppy with lots of energy.

Personality After Death/Rising:

She still loves her owner but has calmed a bit because she can no longer feel as much. Protective she would be a perfect guardian if not for her little problem. Ozari becomes vicious at night and if not pinned up may attack other animals. Still the mischievous puppy she was in the daytime her dark secret is hidden from her young owner. She is still as intelligent as she was when she was alive but her eyes no longer shine with it.


Likes Before Death:

Fetch: Ozari used to love to lay fetch with her owner before she died, and even after it was one of her favorite games. It helped her build her muscles and made her stronger. It essentially helped her grow.

Play: Ozari loved to play, humans animals it made no difference to her. The friendly little dog didn't care who her playmate was as long as she could play. The games didn't matter to her either.

Love: Ozari loved to receive love and kindness from her owner and though she has died she still loves it. She also loves giving it and is a very loving member of the family.

Likes After Death:

Day: Unlike others of her kind she revels in the daylight, night bring blood and anger. She perfer the day to night as it brings: happiness, peace and tranquility.

Love: Ozari loved to receive love and kindness from her owner and though she has died she still loves it. She also loves giving it and is a very loving member of the family.

To Protect: No that she has died Ozari loves to protect, its one of her favorite things to do




Story:

It is said that if a dog loves its master enough then it can return to life even when it has already passed into the netherworld. I know of one such dog, her love for her owner was so powerfull the even death couldn't stop it. Her name was Ozari and this is her tale...

-Ozari's POV-

I was born on the Sandy Oaks farm, a small farm in the outskirts of Texas. My mum was pure white and graceful to boot but I would find that out later. My first memory of her was her licking me as I suckled, I couldn't see her but i knew she looked like me and my brothers and sisters. Our father must have also been white, otherwise a few of us or maybe all would not have been white. Those months of my life where some of my most, social with my family. But how was I to know I may never see them again?

When my owner chose me, my mom was so proud that I had found a home. My new owner was a little girl, and she was rather smitten with me. Instead of putting me in the cage they had brought with them, she carried me in her lap. The car ride was horrible, and by the time I got to my new home I was rather sick. I never wanted to go through that again and vowed to be the best dog I could be.

You never know how much time you will have until its gone and for me it was 3 months. Who knew what was going to happen, and that it would change our life forever. I sure didn't, I didn't even see this coming or I may have been able to prevent it. We weren't physic though and it isn't till tragedy strikes that you know about it.

That day was humid, almost hot with a nice breeze blowing through. It was a kind of day that was perfect to play in, my owner Mary had been clambering to get outside all day. Finally we were being allowed, she grabbed the frisbee and I let out an excited bark. We were going to play fetch! We ran out the front door and she immediately began tossing the frisbee. Each toss led us closer to the dangerous road that lie beyond the property, but we didn't know and where having to much fun to notice.

The next toss tossed it into the road, and like the naive pup i was I ran after it. I didn't see the dark shadow coming down the road until it was to late. It hit me like a ton of bricks and I went flying, my body arching throught the air along with my body. The pain was immense and a loud yelp escaped me. I hit the ground rolling then lay still, my word full of pain, but all I could think about was Mary. Had she seen me hit? I know she had because I could hear her screaming.

Cold hands picked me up off the pavement, and I yept in pain as they came in contact with my injuries. I knew instinctively that the wounds I had been dealt where life threatening. I knew I was going to die but all I could think about was Mary. Suddenly I felt her hands around me, she knew as well and as we shared this parting moment I felt closer to her then ever. I'd never really leave her, even after my body faded I would remain. Of course I'd miss playing with Mary, and feeling the first snow fall on my face.

I'd been told winter was cold but I'd never get to experience it. Mary would be sad as well and I didn't want to do that to her. Even now I felt her salty tears falling of my face, and mingling with the blood already there. 'I'll never leave you.' as I took the last breathe I'd ever take in my mortal body.


-Mary's POV-

I cried as I buried Ozari, I could still feel her blood staining my hands. My mom had wanted dad to bury her but I insisted on being the one to do it. As I patted the dirt down I sank to my knees in greif, I couldn't believe she was gone. The best friend I had ever had and I would never forget her, even now I felt her with me. Our love would never die, she would remain in my heart forever. I couldn't forget a friend who had helped me grow a little.

As I placed the marker over her grave I vowed never to get another pet. Ozari would be my first and my last, as the grief still ran too deep. It was my fault she had died, if I had watched where I was throwing that fisbee she would still be here. As weeks passed I still couldn't forget, and I began to go into a depression that I couldn't came out of. My parents took me to a therapist who suggested they get me another dog. When I screamed at him we left and they never took me back.

The day of Halloween I didn't know what was going to happen but I felt the electrical charge in the air. Today was a magical day, anything could happen. As I dressed for trick or treat, I didnt realize what would be waiting for me when I got back, or how it would change my life, forever.

-Ozari's POV-

I awoke from what felt like a deep sleep, and felt my self suffocating. Dirt covered me and I frantically scraped at the dirt around me trying to escape the prison i had been trapped in. Finally I broke through and breathed in fresh air. I didn't notice my lower jaw had no fur or muscle, nor did I notice most of my right ear missing. I did notice I couldn't see out of my right eyes and was confused why.

At the moment though I was more concerned with Mary. Where was she and why was I alone and outside? Why had I been buried in dirt? Then it all came back to me, the game of frisbee and the horrible accident it had caused. I had died yet here I was, alive again and breathing. I didn't know why or how this had happened but I hoped it was for the best. I walked up to the door and began scratching it but nobody came.

I laid down on the front mat, prepared to wait till Mary got home. For whatever reason I had been givin a second chance, I would make the most of it.




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Main Sources:

Breed History: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_Shepherd_Dog

Pics:

Fetch: http://wzus1.search-results.com/r?t=a&d ... FTango.htm


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I hope this is enough to show i really do want her, and if i dont get her Ill know I at least tried. X3 Good luck to everyone who is going for a pet. If I do get her I will extend and finish her story.
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