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[Sapphirescript]

Code drop?

Kennel Number: 36
Name: Scorch
Gender: Male
Species: Hyena
What do you plan to use this adoption for:
History:
Background:
Other: WIP, and I'm dropping my previous form.

No
Not enough info

Kennel Number: 2
Name: Valda
Gender: Male
Species
What do you plan to use this adoption for:
History:
Background:
Other:


Kennel Number: 3
Name: Maro
Gender: male
Species
What do you plan to use this adoption for:
History:
Background:
Other:

WIP

No
Not enough info

Kennel Number:1

Name: Barrango Ash

Gender: Male

Species: Old Carosel Horse

What do you plan to use this adoption for: He will be a well-cared for character who will live on my character website. I adore the design.

History: Barrango was once part of an circus carosel, but in this new world there is no need for such trivial objects. People rarley venture outside the comforting doors of their house, and the rest of the world has fallen to the wayside.

Background:

One, Two
They're coming four you
Three, Four
Better lock your door
Five, Six
Get a crucifix
Seven, Eight
They stay out late
Nine, Ten
Never sleep again...

In the empty lot, a stiff breeze blew. The small grasses ruffled, and the machenery of times past shifted gently, bringing with it a chorus of rusty creaks. The old carosle was no acception. There was only one horse still attached and upright, one standing among the fallen, one alive among the dead, and it was clear that even this poor boy had seen better days.

In the glory of his days he would have been a beautyful thing. His metal structure rendered him the apperance of being in a fearsome, wrathful gallop, forever carrying his rider in s straight path. He was a steely grey, under the coat of rust he now donned, with a flaming red mane and tail. His head was thrown back, his tail held high like a flag in the wind.


Other: His name is actually an old English company which used to produce beautyful, beautyful carosels.

Still MAJOR WIP

No
I see hope in the form but I don't know anything about the character. Add some personality and it might be good =).

Kennel Number:
13
Name:
Vince
Gender:
Male
Species
German Shepard
What do you plan to use this adoption for:
History:
Background:
Other:
WIP


Kennel Number:
14
Name:
Dusk
Gender:
Female - Filly
Species
Horse - Mustang
What do you plan to use this adoption for:
History:
Background:
Other:
WIP

No
Not enough info

Kennel Number: 28
Name: Zelia
Gender: Female
Species Wolf
What do you plan to use this adoption for: As one of my beloved characters. She is very beautiful and I love her desing. I love everthing about her.
History: Isn't background the same as history.?
Background: She was born in the forest with her mother and her sister and brother. On day when they were out and about playing around as usuale, they heard leaves crunching. She was still pretty young at this age, and though nothing of it so resumded playing with her brother and sister. While her was allert and went to go check out the noise she heard. In a minute they heard there moms warning call and ran of to the den as they were tought. They waited and waited and waited. But she didn't come. After about a day or two, they wondered from the den to search for there mother, but just being pups they got lost in the dark forest. They easily got distracted and wander off. They got seperated from each, not long after they set out to their mother.
It was a nice a nice day and Jackie decided to take a walk through forest this after noon. As she was walking along enjoying the beautiful forests, wildlife and beautiful trees. When she heard a wimpering noise. She seachered for about ten minutes and found a little pup with wings. She was lying on the ground she looked famished, dehydrated, and slitly scrached up. But she new she get her back to health. And up and playing again. So she picked her up and brought her home.
Ever since they have best of friends and never left each other sides. <3
Other: Do you mind if I give her a little glowing necklace that looks like this? (see attachment) Its just the necklace nothing eles. If you don't want me too give her the necklace than thats ok, I will respect that. :D

No
You can't post it twice or else it disqualifies the form. Sorry
By the way, Background is about where they came from or stuff about their family, talk about their personality a bit as well.
History is their journey to where they are now and showing who they meet on the way. And to explain who they meet goes in background.

Kennel Number: 28
Name: Zelia
Gender: Female
Species Wolf
What do you plan to use this adoption for: As one of my beloved characters. She is very beautiful and I love her desing. I love everthing about her.
History: Isn't background the same as history.?
Background: She was born in the forest with her mother and her sister and brother. One day when they were out and about playing around as usuale, they heard leaves crunching. She was still pretty young at this age, and though nothing of it so resumded playing with her brother and sister. While her mom was allert and went to go check out the noise she heard. In a minute they heard there moms warning call and ran of to the den as they were tought. They waited and waited and waited. But she didn't come. After about a day or two, they wondered from the den to search for there mother, but just being pups they got lost in the dark forest. They easily got distracted and wander off. They got seperated from each, not long after they set out to find their mother.
It was a nice day and Jackie decided to take a walk through forest this after noon. As she was walking along enjoying the beautiful forests, wildlife and beautiful trees. When she heard a wimpering noise. She seachered for about ten minutes and found a little pup with wings. She was lying on the ground she looked famished, dehydrated, and slitly scrached up. But she new she get her back to health in know time. And up and playing again. So she picked her up and brought her home.
Ever since they have best of friends and never left each other sides. <3
Other: Do you mind if I give her a necklace with a feather on it.?

Kennel Number: 15
Name: Toxic, Tox for short (naming him after his designer ^_^ )
Gender: Male
Species Akita Inu
What do you plan to use this adoption for: Using him as one of my charrys. I need a male charry, and I love his desing. Its really unique
History: I think history Is the same as background right.?
Background: He was just a little pup when he was put in a kennel for adoption. He didn't remeber anything, how he go there, what had happened, nothing. He was just scarded and wondered what would be come of him. All he could do was sit there and wait. While the other dogs barked and snarled, and yapped. When he saw this young lady walk in with a smile on her face, greating each pup kindly, as walked by each cage. She could tell they were well taken care of. When she came accross this little pup with an arrow starting from his face going down his back. "Now what's this little pups name?" She said staring into the pups eyes. "Toxic, Tox for short." Said the dog guiding her through the Kennels. As she stared at the pup for a few more seconds she said " I'll take him." With a huge smile accross her face. As the dog unlocked the cage with the key around her neck and gently liffed the pup out of the cage by the scruff. And set him on the ground. He's all your said the dog. As she brought the the little pup to the front desk the dog with the key handed her some papers to fill out. And that day she went home with her knew friend.~
Other: Nope not that I can think of. :D

No
I would like something about him, all I know is that he was put for adoption and somebody adopted him...


Um... yea sorry guys, I'm not trying to be strict, but all I want to know is stuff about the character.

You have a better chance of winning if you work on personality more then history.

Added the donated to the front.

Good luck next time peoples 8U.

[Jackie.]

On the front page you should put that "you can't post the form twice or you get disculified" (spelling?) So people will know what there doing wrong and what there doing right. You should also add personality to the form if you want to hear there personlity if I had know you wanted to see that I would have been more than happy to give there personality.
Just sayin. *_*
Also I dint think you added mt snaily...

[Papyrsatyr]

On the front page you should put that "you can't post the form twice or you get disculified" (spelling?) So people will know what there doing wrong and what there doing right. You should also add personality to the form if you want to hear there personlity if I had know you wanted to see that I would have been more than happy to give there personality.
Just sayin. *_*
Also I dint think you added mt snaily...

It's general rule nowadays in adoption places. It clutters the board and is a bit spammish. Next time you know better that's all. Anyway for the personality many people add it into forms even when it's not present, besides a history and a background can be just as effective as explaining a personalty without having to restate yourself with a personality area all in itself.

I may be rambling a bit but I'm half asleep while typing this. @_@;

[Jackie.]

Oh well ok. I just though it would be better to the personality in the form, so people wouldn't forget it or anything. Since most form have personality in them. But that's ok I can live with out it. I'll just remember next time. Thanks though. ^_^

[peppersdots]

Username: peppersdots
Name: Ricoh (change it if you feel like it)
Gender: Male
Breed: Stray cat
Preferences: If unwanted, please return here or to me.
Lineart: Lines
Other Please give him a loving home!

[vaquero]

Kennel Number:12
Name: Mirage
Gender: Female
Species Wold
What do you plan to use this adoption for:I need a new OC, one that I'll use for a while :3 I love this design so much
History: Mirage was abandoned when she was only a pup. She has always loved her owner, Nightmare, because when she was lost in the forest, Nightmare stumbled upon her and they have been best friends ever since. Mirage was abandoned because she was considered a shame to the pack. She wasn't able to hunt well because she is colorblind, as well as partially deaf in her right ear. Hence her caption, "Imperfection Is Beautiful."
Background:Unknown
Other:Nope

[JerseyGoddess55]

Username:
JerseyGoddess55
Name:
StarGazer(changable)
Gender:
Stallion(changable)
Breed:
Mustang Horse(changeable)
Preferences:
-Keep his design
-Can add harmless accessories
-Can change name, breed, and gender
-Must stay horse but can have other animal forms
Lineart:
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?t=335247
Other

[AnnaerbR]

Kennel Number:42
Name:Kuta
Gender:Male
Species: Maned wolf/German Shepard!!!!!!
What do you plan to use this adoption for: Take care of him love him feed him be there for him!!!
History:He was owned by a Women named Claireysa then she died and he came here
Background:IDC I Just Want Him!!!!
Personality:He is a sweet fun loving dog who wants/needs a good home he loves the snow hates fire and likes to howl. His favorite toy is th tug of war rope! his Favorite song is Native American Drums and flutes he loves to cuddle and watch movies with you.. he is a lovable kind sweet and brave dog.. but hes scared of weenier dogs he just wants a someone to cuddle with and hes a BIG Baby (you said u wanted to know more about the character so i added a personality )
Other:]Please Let Me Have Him He Is Amazing I Will Take Care Of Him i promiseplease? *wines*

[incadence.]

Kennel Number:16
Name:Sunnie
Gender:Male
SpeciesWold
What do you plan to use this adoption for:I shall put it in my siggy, and use it for charries for roleplaying :3

History:He grew up in a wealthy family, his mother was well loved, and cared for. Her name was Crystal.for a month she was lost then one day when she walked home pregnant and scrawny, soon they found out she was pregnant with a wolf, she was still loved, but her puppies was hated, and drowned. Her mother Crystal cared nothing about them. Sunnie and Drizzle were the only pups that survived. They were allowed to stay, but was treated unfairly. Drizzle died soon after, killed by her mother, claiming to have stepped on him. When her mother gave birth to a new set of pure breed litter, Sunnie ran away, sick of the lack of attention and abuse. He survived a year straying around the street., eating scraps. Until the pound took him in. He was later adopted after a week.

Background:His mother's names who was Crystal, was treated like an angel from the very start and always told she was the best. Everyone adored her, she has never been hit or scolded, she also was very elegant and obedient. Her master was Sir Arnold Rebakineer, who was very wealthy and lived in a very grand house with servants and maids. He was also loved by the locals. Sunnie's father was a loner, named Shatter, who lived at the forest a few miles away from Sir Arnold's house.

Personality:A timid young wold, quick acting and easily aggressive, but under the tough looking layer, he is soft and adores cuddles and kisses. He wishes to be pampered, like his mother and looked after well, like his dog side. Though his wolf side makes him very jumpy and active, sometimes staying up at night. He enjoys hunting but hates killing, going through drowning has changed him. He will protect his loved ones fiercely, and is excellent at shepherding. He is very intelligent and usually knows whats going on, and will do what he thinks is right, no matter what you say to him. When he makes up his mind there is no changing him. He has a giant soft spot for puppies, cubs, babies and children, he is one hundred percent reliable with children, and wont touch a hair on it. He hates being locked up or abused and will hurt himself trying to escape. He is very persistent and needs love.

Other:I adore the markings and fell in love with Sunnie at first sight. I also love wolds.
His father:
His mother: <- i tried to get their colors as much as possible but kinda failed XD

[AnnaerbR]

Kennel Number:6
Name:Tsuku but im Changing it to Arrow
Gender:Male
Species:Wolf/Canine/Wild Dog
What do you plan to use this adoption for:To take care of and be nice to and not to take any credit for
History:Arrow was burned on the nose when he was little by random EVIL kids and now hes a little jumpy and hyper and lets just say a bit aggresive
Background:WHITE
Other:I HOPE I GET HIM