Pound of Love - JUDGING!! 155 kennels to adopt!

[luminescent,]

(Are you allowing drawn art to be put up as a donation?)

[violentPrince]

Username: thundercrash
Link to form: xXx
How harsh should we be? As harsh as you want
Who do you want to look at your form? Anyone
critimizor

[SabrinaB]

(Are you allowing drawn art to be put up as a donation?)

You mean traditional art or digital?
I allow both, but if it's traditional and grey please add what colors it has

I'll try to send critiques soon, but currently I'm working on a critique on another thread

[booklover789]

Username: thundercrash
Link to form: xXx
How harsh should we be? As harsh as you want
Who do you want to look at your form? Anyone
critimizor

Username: shadow9119
Link to form: Here c:
How harsh should we be? As harsh as you want ^^
Who do you want to look at your form? Anyone, I don't mind :3
critimizor

I'll look over both your forms and PM you shortly.

[SabrinaB]

Thanks booklover!
@ the 2 who requested the critique: let me know if you want me to look at them too.

[shortstop]

If you want you could look at it too, I'd appreciate any feedback c:

[booklover789]

Username:
booklover789

Link to form:
viewtopic.php?f=58&t=2269742&p=72509835#p72509835

(Please note that the history is not done, and her personality will probably be changed at a later date.)

I'd just like general information on my form, excluding the history (seriously, you don't even have to read it, because it's not finished yet so I know it's not the best).

How harsh should we be?
As harsh as you want. I would like to improve!

Who do you want to look at your form?
Any judge or subjudge.

critimizor

[Karma.]

I'm still here to critique, so if anybody wants a second opinion or anything at all then just post here or PM me personally.

[irina]

ello! I'm ironicwOrLd.

his beautiful girl is in kennel 2.

just really love to color combination of her and I have been looking for a feline character for some time now, and she looks like the perfect one! I absolutely love the extra body parts, such as the horns and hair. The piercings just adds more beauty to her.

will probably be using her in several RPs on CS, and if it is okay with the owner, I might take her onto DA, she will be one of my 3 main characters. She will also be going on my character site~

er name is Fai (Pronounced Fay) I decided to give her this name because I think it would suit her personality quite well, when I think of the name "Fai" I would think of a sweet quiet girl who just wants to Fade away./list]




he is female ♀




ai is a sweet quiet girl who loves to go to the beach. It is very hard for her to make friends. She always tries to put her best effort into everything she does. Fai likes to play by the rules, she hardly ever takes risks. Fay is sometimes bullied because she is different from others, but many people appreciate Fai for who she is. Fai is a naturist, she loves caring for the environment, planting tree's, and helping other learn about how important it is.

ai is a very clean person, she hates being surrounded by messes and filthiness. She is also a very creative girl, she sometimes has these really crazy ideas that won't work, but she still tries because she likes to have a good time. Fai isn't very active, she sometimes just likes to throw a tennis ball at a wall, but that's mostly it. Her face usually shows no expression, Fai likes to keep most of her emotions to herself, especially when she is getting a lot of attention, many people don't know what she is going threw, and are to afaid to dig deeper...




ai used to be like everyone else, popular and social able. This ended when her parents divorced, she decided to go with her mom to a smaller town and left her aggressive dad. When she got to her new home, everything became different. She eventually made some close friends and hangout with them at cafés and restaurants. For most of the time, Fai would stay home or go to the beach a few blocks away from her house alone. She loves to stay away from people. Sometimes Fai would sit on her bed and look at the pictures of her little sister, and then she would think of her dad, the man who murdered his own daughter. Fai would always tear up and cry when she thought of her sister, the tears would melt away into anger when she thought of her dad.

he remembers the time her dad threw her against the wall, she was really young at the time, she can barely remember. Her mom was crying when Fai's younger sister was killed. At that moment her mom took Fai by the hand and led her to their car, she would never forget that day. All the screaming and terror, Fai never wants to see her dad ever again in her life.




- Being alone
- Getting her mind cleared
- Going to the beach
- Swimming
- Helping the environment
- Classical music




- Pollution
- Bullying
- Talking about her past
- Scary video games
- Heavy metal




Head shot by me


lines by Sellie, color by me

lines by Nynecho, color by me

dolorislaran

[violentPrince]

Thanks booklover!
@ the 2 who requested the critique: let me know if you want me to look at them too.

yes please ^>^